Sam's Adventures (fiction)

[americanpie]

The main characters are Sam and Ashley. Sam is a freshmen in high school that plays on the school football team and Ashley is a Junior on the high school cheerleading team.

One day while Sam was at basketball practices the cheerleading squad walked in because they had practice when the freshmen basketball team's practice was over. Sam being the captain of the freshmen basketball team went over to ask the cheerleading captain, Ashley, why they were here. When Sam walked over to Ashely, Ashley began to hit on him. Next thing he knew it Ashley was coming over to his tonight at 9. Sam was turned on especially by Ashley's mini skirt. Whenever Sam fell or got "knocked over" he would stare at Ashley, in hopes to look up her skirt.

At night when Ashely came over she brought a huge bag. Sam was curious what was in it. When he asked Ashely said "its for me to know and for you to find out." Since Sam's parents were gone they just went into the living room. There Ashley began to talk...
"Sam i was wondering, do you wanna play truth or dare."
Sam was suddenly turned on and excitedly said "yes"
From there everything went "out of hand"
To Sam's surprise Ashley's first dare for him was to take off all his clothes. Sam, being the crazy boy he is, gladly did it. When it was Ashley's turn he dared her to give him a handjob and she gladly did it. After a while Ashley got Sam to do some pretty crazy things, like feel her up, run around the house naked, etc. What Sam didn't know was that Ashley had hid a small camera in the corner of the room when she came in. So everything that Sam had done had been recorded.

Since Ashley was a very evil person, she said that Sam had to do whatever she wanted him to do or else the whole school would know about what he has done.

more to come.
let me know what you think

[americanpie]

Since Ashley hadn't revelaed what was in her bag, she thought it was time. She emptied out her bag and revealed an array of different clothing articles. They ranged from g-strings to bikinis to mini skirts. Ashley said that his first task was to get dressed in a mini skirt and a tank top with a bikini underneeth and meet her at her house tomorow morning. With that she left him with the clothign he had to wear.

The next morning when he arrived, Ashley realized that he had a huge bulge under the skirt, also she realized that she forgot to tell him to wear a wig and make up. Because of this Ashley brought him upstairs. While upstairs Ashley gave him a blonde wig and put make up on him, and shaved his whole body (legs, arms, pubic hairs, head, etc.) Then she gave him a glass of water with a tablet in it and made him drink it. He was very defiant about drinking it. She had to shove it down his throat. Then he realized what it was... to his horror it was a female hormone tablet. Suddenly he saw his bulge dissapear and his voice was now high pitched.

They then got in Ashley's hot pink mustang convertible and headed to the nearby pool. The pool wasn't to crowded but to Sam's horror his ex and some of his best friends were at the pool. When they got there they went straight to the girls changing room where they got undressed. Sam stared blanklessly at all teh girls undressing and quickly got another bulge and Ashley forced another female hormone tablet down his throat.

THen they headed straight to the pool. Ashley walked Sam right to his friends and his ex. There they talked and talked. Then they finnaly got in the pool. And within seconds Sam was left with his bestfriend Chris. Sam did not know how amazingly sexy Ashley had made him look. And while Sam and Chris were alone in the corner of the pool.... Chris began to feel Sam up. Sam also had huge pecs, which looked like boobs. CHris quickly shoved his hands into Sam's bikini top and started to feel his tits. Then Chris whispered into Sam's ear...
"its your turn" and CHris grabbed sam's freshly shaven hand and shoved it in his pants and quickly Sam grasped Chris' nice hard dick.

Then Ashley swam over and saw that Sam's bulge was coming back... and quickly gave him another female hormone tablet.

More to come

[americanpie]

Then Ashley yanked Sam away and they quickly left, because Ashley didn't want anyone to know that it was actually Sam.

Once they got home Ashley gave Sam a new task.
Ashely said that Sam now had to join the Varsity Cheerleading team at their high school, since he used to do gymanstics and Ashley felt like torchering him. Sadly, Sam had no choice and had to agree. Sam now had to go to all the practices and everything, Sam had no idea what lied ahead of him. Sam was about to lose his life.

The next day was Sam's first cheerleading practice and Sam had to wear a mini skirt with spankies underneth it and a tank top. Because Ashley was forcing him to do cheerlreading he had to quit Basketball. Sam's first cheerleading practice was horrible.

Sam and Ashley walked into the GYm together dressed and changed and ready to go. Sam had to carry female hormone tablets in case he suddenly got a boner which was very likely. The only reason Sam didn't fight back about joining the cheerleading squad was because he got to feel all the girls on the squad and they were HOT. Since it was Sam's first day Ashley told him to show all the girls what he can do, but of course to them he looked like a girl. When Sam went to do a back handspring when he was in the air his skirt flew off and he was standing there in his spankies. All the girls started alughing and he quickly ran to grab his skirt an dput it back on before a bulge appeared.

Though Sam had a rough start the girl's eventually accepted him and they started to hang out much more often. The hard thing for sam was balancing being a girl and a guy at the same time, because during school he was a guy but outside of that he was a cheerleader named Sandra.

[coolio5]

good start, but it seems a little rushed
try adding more detail, and slowing down

you put up 3 posts rather quickly, try putting all that time into one post, and adding more detail

but an interesting start, and im looking forward to more

[Officelover]

Okay (Being the critic I am) What the heck was that?

You do realize it doesn't work like that right?

Overall:

Plot: D
Grammar: B
Vocabulary: C+

Overall, I didn't particularly care for this story so far. Kepp trying though. It has potential.

[Coyote]

Originally Posted by Officelover

Okay (Being the critic I am) What the heck was that?

You do realize it doesn't work like that right?

Overall:

Plot: D
Grammar: B
Vocabulary: C+

Overall, I didn't particularly care for this story so far. Kepp trying though. It has potential.

i do have to agree with this. it is usually the type of story i like but i strongly disliked it. th\he posts were half an hour apart and should have been combined. The football player is captain of the basketball team who does gymnastics???it was not descriptive and did seem rushed so overall

D orD+

[ty_la]

that plays on the school football team and Ashley is a Junior on the high school cheerleading team.

One day while Sam was at basketball practices

^ Lmfao ? What? So the football player decides to chill at basketball practice? What is this? " This happened! then this happened! but guess what?! After THIS happening THIS started to happen!" come oonnnn . those 3 entrys could've make like... 18 REAL ones?

[rpUral]

She gives him hormone tablets that work immediately, and has him show up for cheerleading practice; He's supposed to be a football player (don't they tend to be a bit bigger than the average cheerleader?) and yet none of the rest of the girls notice that he's this big bulky guy in a skirt? And the part that you can't buy is that he's at basketbal practice.

It's just a story. The author can have him be where he wants him to be.

[Coyote]

Originally Posted by Davros

It's fiction... where anything can happen

xD

he didn;t chill at the practice he was captain of the freshman basketball team