Rick [Fiction]

[kenshi46]

The past does not only decide the future. It makes the future. History, makes the future.

Rick was about to find out.

It was a normal day in 13 year old Rick's life. He got up, brushed his teeth, got dressed and browsed the internet until 8 AM, the time the bus passed at.

What Rick browsed on the internet? Lots of things. He checked out gaming, sports and like any boy erotic stuff. This was his favorites list.

• Gamespot
• Soccer
• Tennis
• Hockey
• Football
• Getdare
• Youporn

Rick had never been worried of someone looking at his favorites list.

He should have.

You see one day when Rick left to school his step sister went into his room and explored it. She had actually entered to get a pair of boxers from Rick's drawer to do a dare.

As she walked in she saw his computer and decided to go check what Rick had been doing lately.

His latest history was basically porn and getdare. Ashley had been a member on getdare for a long time so finding out her brother was on it too came to a big surprise.

She went to see the latest account logged in. It was ''Dare_Me_Sexy''. Ashley was in shock.

You see, a few weeks back Ashley had played a game of TORD online with a member named ''Dare_Me_Sexy'', i which both of them had refused to show their faces but were forced to strip naked.

Her own step brother had seen her nude and didn't even know it.

***

Rick got home and opened the door from a long day of school. He went towards his room and then went to his step sister's room to ask her how her day had been.

When he got there, the door was wide open, and Ashley was nude, legs wide open on her bed. At the moment she was fingering herself. Her body was a wonderland, in other words, gorgeous. Her breasts were perfectly sized and she was nor to fat nor to skinny.

''Shit, sorry I thought you heard me get inside'' said Rick.
''I did''
''And you didn't put any clothes on?''

Rick was very confused but at the same time his step sister's body had seemed so familiar.

''Turn around, I know you want to. Anyways it's not like you haven't seen them before.'' she said.

Rick was very confused at this point. He asked Ashley what she was talking about and she explained.

He was very surprised by what she said. He got up.

''I'm gonna go take my shower'' said Rick.
''Ok''

He got up and went to his room. Rick and Ashley's rooms were right beside eachother and the bathroom was across the hallway. Ashley was still nude looking outside her door.

Rick soon after crossed the hallway to go in the shower, nude. Ashley was very happy about this.

Rick showering when Ashley entered the washroom, Rick hadn't heard. Ashley got in the shower behind Rick and then started stroking his dick gently. At first he liked it so much he didn't ask himself any questions but then he realized what was happening.

''What the hell?''
''Come on brother, you know you find me sexy. Why resist?''

Rick was very confused of what he should do. The horny side of Rick won though. He turned around and slid his finger into Ashley's pussy.

She moaned with pleasure which confirmed the fact that Rick new what he was doing. For what seemed like forever she moaned and moaned. Suddenly she cummed in his hand.

''You're good, now it's my turn'' said Ashley with a grin on her face.
''Let's see if you're in the right league'' replied Rick who at this point was extremly cocky.

Ashley got on her knees and grabbed Rick's well sized dick with her two hands. She then started giving him a blowjob and before she knew it her face was covered in Rick's cum.

''Let me help you clean yourself'' said Rick.

He licked his cum off of his step sister's face. Both of their tongues met and before they knew it they were making out. They went on for around an hour and were then so exhausted that they layed down in the shower.

Both of them fell asleep. Suddenly someone entered the house.

[Trystaan]

It certainly has potential, I would say don't rush it. Take your time and add detail it will make it a much betetr read.

Thanks.

[bungie1]

very very good, contenue please

[kenshi46]

The person entered the house and slowly went towards Rick's room.

''Hello, is anyone home?'' said the person.

It's to those words that Ashley woke up, naked with her step brother. She could recognize the voice but was so tired she just couldn't identify it.

She realized what was happening and quickly woke up her brother. What should she do?

She was naked with her own step brother in the bathroom with no potential clothes they could wear. She knew that the person was now outside the bathroom because she heard.

''Who's in the shower?''
''I am'' said Ashley.
''Can I come in?''
''No''
''Ah come on Ashley, I wont bite''

The door opened and Ashley was now completly revealed to the boy. This boy was one of Rick's friends from school. The boy got closer but Ashley pushed him away onto her bed.

Once both of them on the bed, she stripped the boy using her teeth, then she began giving the boy a blowjob.

''Your good, real good'' said the boy.
''I know'' said Ashley.

Then she lost her virginity to the boy. Mean while, Rick was watching the whole scene. He had such a boner he wanted to throw himself and get some action too. But he didn't.

Then Ashley saw Rick and said she needed to use the bathroom to go join him. Once inside, both of them started making out again. Being seperated had made them want eachother so much more.

Suddenly the door opened, it was Rick's friend.

''I knew something wasn't right. Well atleast we'll be having fun'' he said.

[interesting]

I hope this doesn't turn into another blackmail story.

The story is rushed. The plot is presentable (at least they're step brother and sister, and therefore not related). Can't say anything about the characters because I don't feel I really know them, other than both go on GD.

You pack way too much information into a single scene and not enough detail. The encounter with the 'friend' was not realistic. Is the girl a nympho? Just inquiring.

If you like short and to the point, without meat on the bones, then this is a good story.

[nightmare09]

go on please i will like to see what happeneds

[nightmare09]

go on please i will like to see what happeneds