Fiction: An innocence lost... - Page 6

Raptor9458 · 03-06-2011, 01:10 PM

Excellent.

I too, must admit to getting a bit "overexcited" at points.

Daring nemder · 03-06-2011, 03:53 PM

Amazing story I hope in the future you'll have more to share with us. Thank you so much for writing this one and writing it so well

me_ · 03-07-2011, 03:45 AM

lyn, this was a wonderful story! enjoyed the fun fact too

nerdboy · 03-07-2011, 03:52 AM

Again.. Awesome chapter.. It was a pity that the story eventually has to end..

You have the talent! Please write more stories when you come up with ideas, or real life experience

pleasure4ladies · 03-11-2011, 07:59 AM

This was an amazing read! I enjoyed not only the content of the story, but your writing style is excellent. I hope you will post more stories like this. If you need any help with coming up with non-fiction, please let me know. I'll be only too happy to help! ;-)

lilysmaster · 03-11-2011, 08:03 AM

Very good story, I hope to read of another Lyn adventure.

archie21 · 03-11-2011, 08:29 AM

Excellent.. straight direct nothing to think about other than what was happening to you... loved it.

Hunanic · 03-11-2011, 08:23 PM

This story is absolutely amazing! Keep it up!

Lyn · 03-16-2011, 07:21 PM

Thanks, everyone for everything

it means a lot to me

I may write in the future, but no promises

danrob88 · 03-17-2011, 07:00 PM

Thank you very much for sharing your tale with us all. I must say, reading this turned me on quite a lot hehe

And as it is a non-fiction story too only adds to the excitement

Once again thank you very much. Your tale was brilliantly written.

TUXhatMAN · 03-21-2011, 08:00 AM

Thankyou very much for writing this, it really turned me on! I hope to read more stories by you as this would be one of the best stories I have read!.

TUXhatMAN

Lyn · 04-06-2011, 09:04 PM

Oh my godd!!!

someone just pointed out to me that this story was somehow labled "fiction"

Could a mod please change it to "Non Fiction" ??

It would be much appreciated. thank you!

Vinnie · 09-05-2011, 05:22 AM

Very nice story

TheDoodler · 01-03-2012, 07:11 PM

Wow, the best story I've read on the whole site! The fun fact made it even better

You should definitely write some more if you have the time

03-11-2011, 07:59 AM	#80
pleasure4ladies Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Texas Posts: 8	This was an amazing read! I enjoyed not only the content of the story, but your writing style is excellent. I hope you will post more stories like this. If you need any help with coming up with non-fiction, please let me know. I'll be only too happy to help! ;-) __________________ I'm hear for the ladies; hope it's reciprocal! 33/male/straight/Texas (USA) pm me to ask me for my msn or yahoo Loves: Dice Dares, Sex of all kinds with females, Wedgies, Cum, Forced Orgasms, Risky stuff, TorD Parties Likes: Self Bondage, Some Anal Dislikes(will still do though) : Messy, Edging, Nipple torture Limit: Public, Friends/Family, No Gay Stuff, Day Long + Dares, Pain, Poo, Blood, Permanent

03-11-2011, 08:03 AM	#81
lilysmaster getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: In that there hole in the ground Posts: 439 Blog Entries: 8	Very good story, I hope to read of another Lyn adventure. __________________ *Tumblr - Ad - Fetlife* getDare Radio Thread Are you a story writer? Do you need someone to edit your stories? gD Editing Services Thread or PM me.

03-11-2011, 08:29 AM	#82
archie21 getDare Succubus Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: uk Posts: 1,763	Excellent.. straight direct nothing to think about other than what was happening to you... loved it. __________________ [COLOR=Magenta]You could say no but whats the point in being on a dare site if you say no all the time...... If you don't put up a limits list, expect to be pushed on everything.

03-16-2011, 07:21 PM	#84
Lyn getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: USA Posts: 251	Thanks, everyone for everything it means a lot to me I may write in the future, but no promises __________________ 19/f/USA Likes: awkward/embarrassing, being turned on, light bondage, masturbating, ice, some (really really light) pain Limits (wont do): pics, anal, public (if involving complete nudity), nothing disgusting

03-17-2011, 07:00 PM	#85
danrob88 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 264	Thank you very much for sharing your tale with us all. I must say, reading this turned me on quite a lot hehe And as it is a non-fiction story too only adds to the excitement Once again thank you very much. Your tale was brilliantly written. __________________ Male/24/Australia/Straight Likes Masturbation, Ice, Small pain, Object insertion, Porn, Master/Slave Dislikes but will do for dare Semi Public, Large pain, Cum drinking, Humiliation Will not do Scat, Pee, Full public, Family/Friend involvment (Not including my getDare friends of course), Blood/Cutting Looking for a Slave girl to play Truth or Dare with PM me for details Checkout my story here http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=70381

03-06-2011, 01:10 PM	#76
Raptor9458 Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 531	Excellent. I too, must admit to getting a bit "overexcited" at points.

03-06-2011, 03:53 PM	#77
Daring nemder getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 478	Amazing story I hope in the future you'll have more to share with us. Thank you so much for writing this one and writing it so well

03-07-2011, 03:45 AM	#78
me_ Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 8	lyn, this was a wonderful story! enjoyed the fun fact too

03-07-2011, 03:52 AM	#79
nerdboy Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Australia Posts: 146	Again.. Awesome chapter.. It was a pity that the story eventually has to end.. You have the talent! Please write more stories when you come up with ideas, or real life experience

03-11-2011, 08:23 PM	#83
Hunanic Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: USA Posts: 100	This story is absolutely amazing! Keep it up!

03-21-2011, 08:00 AM	#86
TUXhatMAN Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 121	Thankyou very much for writing this, it really turned me on! I hope to read more stories by you as this would be one of the best stories I have read!. TUXhatMAN __________________ Likes: messy, semi-public, Humiliation, nudity,Self bondage,outdoors. Dislikes: Pee, pain, ice, illegal Limits:family/friends, blood, scat, permanant, dangerous, severe pain, pics with face.

04-06-2011, 09:04 PM	#87
Lyn getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: USA Posts: 251	Oh my godd!!! someone just pointed out to me that this story was somehow labled "fiction" Could a mod please change it to "Non Fiction" ?? It would be much appreciated. thank you! __________________ 19/f/USA Likes: awkward/embarrassing, being turned on, light bondage, masturbating, ice, some (really really light) pain Limits (wont do): pics, anal, public (if involving complete nudity), nothing disgusting

09-05-2011, 05:22 AM	#88
Vinnie getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: US Posts: 420 Blog Entries: 9	Very nice story __________________ y

01-03-2012, 07:11 PM	#89
TheDoodler Baby Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: England Posts: 1	Wow, the best story I've read on the whole site! The fun fact made it even better You should definitely write some more if you have the time