Fiction: A Week at Lake Cherokee

crew · 07-20-2011, 05:12 PM

Okay, this is my first story. I don't use grammer good(just kidding

). I only have the first three chapters done, so I decided to start to publish. All characters are modeled after people I know.

The Great List of Main Characters

Main Character(as told by) Fabian, 14/M
Body: 5' 6'', 135lbs, Really tan, 4/6 inches, kinda short black hair
Life: Parents own two lake houses, Secretly Bi-Curious, In a relationship with jessica, has a crush on Marcus

Marcus, 13/m
Body: 5'0'', 80lbs, Irish White, 2/3.5 inches, Blind as a bat, buzzed brown hair
Life: Fabian's Best Friend, Secretly Gay, In a relationship with Sierra, hilarious, but kinda dorky

Sierra, 14/F
Body: 5'3'', A lil skinny, 32B, athletic, very, very purdy, very very tan, long straight dark brown hair
Life: Not the sharpest knife in the drawer, Secretly Lesbian, In a relationship with Marcus

Jessica, 14/F
Body: 5'5'', average, 34C, very, very, very purrrrdy, tan, usually ponytailed blonde hair
Life: Secretly Bi, in a relationship with Fabian, has a crush on Sierra, makes good food

jeff10145 · 07-20-2011, 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by crew

Okay, this is my first story. I don't use grammer good(just kidding

). I only have the first three chapters done, so I decided to start to publish. All characters are modeled after people I know.

The Great List of Main Characters

Main Character(as told by) Fabian, 14/M
Body: 5' 6'', 135lbs, Really tan, 4/6 inches, kinda short black hair
Life: Parents own two lake houses, Secretly Bi-Curious, In a relationship with Reagan, has a crush on Marcus

Marcus, 13/m
Body: 5'0'', 80lbs, Irish White, 2/3.5 inches, Blind as a bat, buzzed brown hair
Life: Fabian's Best Friend, Secretly Gay, In a relationship with Sierra, hilarious, but kinda dorky

Sierra, 14/F
Body: 5'3'', A lil skinny, 32B, athletic, very, very purdy, very very tan, dark brown hair
Life: Not the sharpest knife in the drawer, Secretly Lesbian, In a relationship with Marcus

Jessica, 14/F
Body: 5'5'', average, 34C, very, very, very purrrrdy, tan, blonde hair
Life: Secretly Bi, in a relationship with Fabian, has a crush on Sierra, makes good food

so far i love the characters i cant wait to see what the storyline is and how it will all play out.

crew · 07-20-2011, 05:23 PM

I forgot to mention...These are the characters for the first few chapters. More'll be in it l8r.

jeff10145 · 07-20-2011, 05:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by crew

I forgot to mention...These are the characters for the first few chapters. More'll be in it l8r.

when are you going to start posting the story?

crew · 07-20-2011, 06:59 PM

Chapter One

I was dreaming of a world full of Brunettes, Brownies, and Bunnies when I heard the music. That terrible music. Well, normally it's my favorite song, but when it messes with my dreams, it isn't the melodious sound it is later in the day.
"There's only 2 ways out of here. You'll be too late, you'll be trapped here forever," Yep. That's beautiful lasers by Lupe Fiasco for whoever knew. Nice Job. Have a cookie.
I took my "wake up drugs" (Three sour skittles) and jumped out of bed. I took one of my pillows and threw it at my best friend, Marcus, who was in the bed at the other side of the room. Then I remembered I was naked. Pumped with adrenaline, I sprinted over to the dresser and put on a pair of grey boxer briefs. I looked back and saw him laughing.
"What? Put on your glasses! No one shall know about this!," I yelled. I threw a shoe at him, narrowly missing his head. "Nice ass!" he said before going back into hysterics.
I put on some basketball shorts and a shirt and hustled downstairs to breakfast. Marcus and the girls came down one by one. I started asking people what they wanted on their eggs as the groggily poured cheerios and made toast for themselves.
"So what's on the schedule today Jess?" I asked before giving my girlfriend a kiss.
"Well, Sierra and I are going to the spa at the mall and go shopping after that. Your mom and dad are probably going to go golfing. They said we could have this cabin if we cleaned it and bought everything ourselves." She replied in her cute little voice.
"We'll go to the gym. We should get groceries and s'mores stuff after you guys go shopping,"
"Sounds good, I'll text you when we're at Hollister. The gym is on floor 1 and the spa is floor 3, so we'll meet up when we're done at the spa. We'll get you a new swimsuit. That little speedo won't work anymore,"
"I thought you liked it!"
"We'll some jokes are only funny the first time. Let's hurry up. If we get there early enough, we can eat somewhere later,"
"Okay 'Mom', I said sarcastically, "Now, go get dressed!"
Back up in our room, Marcus was getting dressed.
"I never thought you'd be the one to sleep naked. How'd you start?"
I was shocked at his question. I've always had a small crush on him, but never thought he'd talk about anything edgy with me. I didn't want to tell him the real reason, so I lied.
"Ummm, It was really hot one night, so I just slept in the least I could,"
"I have a lot lately, but not when other people are around," He was so comfortable talking about it. It was weird, I felt so...horny. Then he said the one thing that changed the whole trip...
"Hey, can I ask you something?"
TO BE CONTINUED!!!
How was chapter one? Any questions? Also, thank me for this if you like Lupe Fiasco. he's my favorite.

jeff10145 · 07-20-2011, 07:16 PM

i think its and interesting start and i like it so far chapter 2 plz lol i will defently follow this one to its end.

crew · 07-20-2011, 07:26 PM

Let's all keep our fingers crossed that I can get this up ASAP!

tordmaster · 07-21-2011, 06:08 AM

that was great! but i just wanna know one thing, you said that Fabian was in a relationship with reagan? but then you said jess was in a relationship with Fabian... so who's reagan?

crew · 07-21-2011, 04:16 PM

she was gonna be in, and jessica and i werent. i just changed it. thanks for telling me.

getwet · 07-23-2011, 11:18 AM

Nice start to your story. I cannot wait for the next chapter. So, which character best describes you? Is it based off true events?

gogreen · 08-01-2011, 02:49 PM

thiss is goodd

DDD

07-20-2011, 05:12 PM	#1
crew Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: USA!! USA!! Posts: 83	A Week at Lake Cherokee Okay, this is my first story. I don't use grammer good(just kidding). I only have the first three chapters done, so I decided to start to publish. All characters are modeled after people I know. The Great List of Main Characters Main Character(as told by) Fabian, 14/M Body: 5' 6'', 135lbs, Really tan, 4/6 inches, kinda short black hair Life: Parents own two lake houses, Secretly Bi-Curious, In a relationship with jessica, has a crush on Marcus Marcus, 13/m Body: 5'0'', 80lbs, Irish White, 2/3.5 inches, Blind as a bat, buzzed brown hair Life: Fabian's Best Friend, Secretly Gay, In a relationship with Sierra, hilarious, but kinda dorky Sierra, 14/F Body: 5'3'', A lil skinny, 32B, athletic, very, very purdy, very very tan, long straight dark brown hair Life: Not the sharpest knife in the drawer, Secretly Lesbian, In a relationship with Marcus Jessica, 14/F Body: 5'5'', average, 34C, very, very, very purrrrdy, tan, usually ponytailed blonde hair Life: Secretly Bi, in a relationship with Fabian, has a crush on Sierra, makes good food Last edited by crew; 07-21-2011 at 04:11 PM.

07-20-2011, 05:23 PM	#3
crew Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: USA!! USA!! Posts: 83	I forgot to mention...These are the characters for the first few chapters. More'll be in it l8r. __________________ \|15\| male\| bi-curious\| Likes-underwear, masturbating, nudity, public, no underwear, sleeping and shower dares, dice dares, school dares, and excersize dares I don't like but will do- cum, Bear Grylls Cocktails, and watching porn Hates-edging, anal, scat, illegal, money, pain, permanent, and bondage

07-20-2011, 06:59 PM	#5
crew Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: USA!! USA!! Posts: 83	Chapter One I was dreaming of a world full of Brunettes, Brownies, and Bunnies when I heard the music. That terrible music. Well, normally it's my favorite song, but when it messes with my dreams, it isn't the melodious sound it is later in the day. "There's only 2 ways out of here. You'll be too late, you'll be trapped here forever," Yep. That's beautiful lasers by Lupe Fiasco for whoever knew. Nice Job. Have a cookie. I took my "wake up drugs" (Three sour skittles) and jumped out of bed. I took one of my pillows and threw it at my best friend, Marcus, who was in the bed at the other side of the room. Then I remembered I was naked. Pumped with adrenaline, I sprinted over to the dresser and put on a pair of grey boxer briefs. I looked back and saw him laughing. "What? Put on your glasses! No one shall know about this!," I yelled. I threw a shoe at him, narrowly missing his head. "Nice ass!" he said before going back into hysterics. I put on some basketball shorts and a shirt and hustled downstairs to breakfast. Marcus and the girls came down one by one. I started asking people what they wanted on their eggs as the groggily poured cheerios and made toast for themselves. "So what's on the schedule today Jess?" I asked before giving my girlfriend a kiss. "Well, Sierra and I are going to the spa at the mall and go shopping after that. Your mom and dad are probably going to go golfing. They said we could have this cabin if we cleaned it and bought everything ourselves." She replied in her cute little voice. "We'll go to the gym. We should get groceries and s'mores stuff after you guys go shopping," "Sounds good, I'll text you when we're at Hollister. The gym is on floor 1 and the spa is floor 3, so we'll meet up when we're done at the spa. We'll get you a new swimsuit. That little speedo won't work anymore," "I thought you liked it!" "We'll some jokes are only funny the first time. Let's hurry up. If we get there early enough, we can eat somewhere later," "Okay 'Mom', I said sarcastically, "Now, go get dressed!" Back up in our room, Marcus was getting dressed. "I never thought you'd be the one to sleep naked. How'd you start?" I was shocked at his question. I've always had a small crush on him, but never thought he'd talk about anything edgy with me. I didn't want to tell him the real reason, so I lied. "Ummm, It was really hot one night, so I just slept in the least I could," "I have a lot lately, but not when other people are around," He was so comfortable talking about it. It was weird, I felt so...horny. Then he said the one thing that changed the whole trip... "Hey, can I ask you something?" TO BE CONTINUED!!! How was chapter one? Any questions? Also, thank me for this if you like Lupe Fiasco. he's my favorite. __________________ \|15\| male\| bi-curious\| Likes-underwear, masturbating, nudity, public, no underwear, sleeping and shower dares, dice dares, school dares, and excersize dares I don't like but will do- cum, Bear Grylls Cocktails, and watching porn Hates-edging, anal, scat, illegal, money, pain, permanent, and bondage

07-20-2011, 07:16 PM	#6
jeff10145 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: us Posts: 206 Blog Entries: 5	interesting i think its and interesting start and i like it so far chapter 2 plz lol i will defently follow this one to its end. __________________ Likes: Humiliation, Control/TPE, Tease and Denial (edging) a little anal, mild pain, chastity, maybe a little public Pet play, degradation, teasing (meaning fun name calling Etc),Nipple play, bondage, gags, whips and crops Dislikes: cum play, too much anal, toothpaste, corner time, writing line or essays Limits: extreme pain, scat, family too public (hidden is fine), Blood, Permanent Damage Messy (some is okay)

07-20-2011, 07:26 PM	#7
crew Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: USA!! USA!! Posts: 83	Let's all keep our fingers crossed that I can get this up ASAP! __________________ \|15\| male\| bi-curious\| Likes-underwear, masturbating, nudity, public, no underwear, sleeping and shower dares, dice dares, school dares, and excersize dares I don't like but will do- cum, Bear Grylls Cocktails, and watching porn Hates-edging, anal, scat, illegal, money, pain, permanent, and bondage Last edited by crew; 07-20-2011 at 10:22 PM.

07-21-2011, 06:08 AM	#8
tordmaster Junior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 25	one question.. that was great! but i just wanna know one thing, you said that Fabian was in a relationship with reagan? but then you said jess was in a relationship with Fabian... so who's reagan?

07-21-2011, 04:16 PM	#9
crew Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: USA!! USA!! Posts: 83	she was gonna be in, and jessica and i werent. i just changed it. thanks for telling me. __________________ \|15\| male\| bi-curious\| Likes-underwear, masturbating, nudity, public, no underwear, sleeping and shower dares, dice dares, school dares, and excersize dares I don't like but will do- cum, Bear Grylls Cocktails, and watching porn Hates-edging, anal, scat, illegal, money, pain, permanent, and bondage

07-23-2011, 11:18 AM	#10
getwet Junior Member Join Date: May 2011 Location: ohio Posts: 5	Nice start to your story. I cannot wait for the next chapter. So, which character best describes you? Is it based off true events? __________________ 24m - bi Likes: I LOVE getting wet/muddy/gunged in my clothes and socks and shoes. I also like wedgies (need buddies and slaves), the idea of nudity and nudism, some pain like from slapping and pegs. Limits: Most public, family, bodily fluids, diapers, anal, cross-dressing.

08-01-2011, 02:49 PM	#11
gogreen Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 21	thiss is goodd DDD