06-26-2011, 01:48 AM | #1 |
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Falling in Love with A Straight Boy
Hey everyone this is my first story so lemme know what you think! It's mainly fiction but there's tiny parts of non fiction, I'll let you know when they come along. Anyways, here's the characters to start with:
Tanner (Me :P) Age: 15 Height: 6 foot Weight: 160 Body: Average/Athletic Six pack?: No Hair: Brown, short Eyes: Blue Body Hair: Blonde leg/arm hair, shaved thighs and pubes Sexuality: Gay (not out) Garrett (Non fiction) Age: 15 Height: 6 foot Weight: 165 Body: Athletic Six pack?: Yes Hair: Brown, short Eyes: Blue Body Hair: Very minimal legs, none on arms, shaved pubes Sexuality: Straight??? And here we go. Chapter 1 - The Approach Non fiction: I wasn't very popular at my school. Just a sophomore who hung out with the nerdy kids. It wasn't that I couldn't be popular, I mean I was funny and nice, but I was also very shy. However, one day, with a little motivation from a friend on getdare (Dylan ) I decided to be more outgoing and make new friends. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing wrong with the nerds (if you can even call 'em that) but I didn't have much in common with them. I decided I would try hanging out with the "popular" group of kids, one of which I had a crush on. His name was Garrett, and boy was he amazing. Not only was he cute, but he just had this way about him that was so sexy. Everything from his small to the way he talked to me made me love him. Obviously this made him the person I was most scared to get to know. I had two classes with him, and we both talked and had a good time in them, but we never talked much outside of class. I was determined to change that. The first few days trying to fit in with my new group of friends was tough. One kid, named Dominic, didn't like me much and kept trying to get me to go away. (Ironically he late became one of my better friends) However, most of the guys and girls in the group were pretty accepting of me. I quickly made friends with a few of the guys, but like that hot girl that most guys are scared to approach, I just couldn't get my nerves up to talk to Garrett more. Fortunately that changed when basketball started. Me and Garrett were on the JV team and quickly bonded. It seemed like everything I said would make Garrett laugh his sexy laugh. I couldn't help but stare at his nearly hairless legs during stretches and get a good look at his when he bent over. Finally, I asked him if he wanted to hang out at my place after practice. To my relief he said yes! Of course, I didn't really have anything to worry about, to him it was just two friends chilling on a Friday. But to me, it was so much more.... When Garrett got over it was already 9 PM and my parents had gone upstairs to bed early (lucky me!). I showed Garrett where my room was and told him I was gunna go get some pizza and I'd be right back. When I returned to me room I was shocked to see Garrett sitting in my chair, completely naked, stroking his at least 7 inches of hot dick! He was rock hard and just smiled at me as he giggled a little... To be continued... By the way, this is all non fiction so far. After this it becomes fiction. Also, I know there is no dialogue yet, I was just setting the scene. The story will be more in depth after this. And finally, comments and constructive criticism are appreciated! Thanks everyone.
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06-26-2011, 02:26 AM | #2 |
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Wow a sudden start. Great! Love to hear more.
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06-26-2011, 02:34 AM | #3 |
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WOW if this is really non fiction your certainly one lucky person
It's a great start for a first story so well done!!!! Ill defo be reading more
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06-26-2011, 05:22 AM | #4 |
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I agree with J.M.N I would kill (not literally) to be in that position (and others throughout the night :P )
Will and am waiting on the edge of my seat.
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06-26-2011, 08:26 AM | #5 |
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I love this story so far, great job and good luck.
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06-26-2011, 12:09 PM | #6 |
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When the fuck did Tannybaby start writing? XD.
Damn dude, that was actually not half bad at all. Too bad for me there probably won't be many surprises in this story ;] Good luck and happp Garrett-lovin' <3 -Dylsterr
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06-26-2011, 02:13 PM | #7 |
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Wow thanks for all the comments you guys! Didn't expect so many. :P I will be posting up a new chapter tonight, or tomorrow depending on how much time I have. By the way, for this chapter I'm going to write the non-fiction version of what really happened after this, and then I will write the fiction (much more interesting ). After that it will all be fiction unless I say otherwise.
Thanks again for your interest guys.
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06-26-2011, 03:52 PM | #8 |
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Looking forward to it
Also I would like to know why a straight guy got the courage to go naked in your room, the short non-fic story to that would be nice aswell xD
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06-26-2011, 04:17 PM | #9 |
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Wow I bet you were surprised! The story is great & I liked the fact that that chapter was so long! Keep it up!
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Next chapter is in the works right now!
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Ok, so as promised before I give the fiction part of this story I will tell you what actually happened. Basically, at this point I asked him why he would be naked in my room when anyone could walk in. He said he was just messing around and we went on to have a fairly normal night (with lots of (straight) porn watching). But the fiction is much more fun...
Chapter 2 - Skinny Dipping "Holy shit!" I said staring at his dick. "You like it? I know it's kinda small..." Man I hope he's kidding! He smiled at me again... damnit I love this kid! "Yeah it's so small I bet I can fit it in my mouth!" What am I saying??? I didn't even mean to say that shit! Luckily he started busting up laughing. I think I heard him mutter "We'll see about that," but I'm sure my mind was playing tricks on me. He stroked his dick a couple more times as he stared into my eyes, perfectly serious now, then he pulled his shorts back up. Damn no boxers! I love when guys go commando. He stood up as he moaned sexually, almost like a porn star. I'm starting to think he knows that turns me on like hell. "So I think I'll save that part of the night for later," he said as he winked at me. Is he really saying this? Damn if he's not kidding I'm going to be in heaven and beyond tonight! "Haha, yeah whatever that means," I said winking back. He stayed shirtless and walked past me, brushing my dick with his hand as he did so. Was that on purpose? "Hey lets go swim bro, I wanna see your pool." "Alright cool," I said. "Lemme just get my swimsuit on." "Nah you don't need it," he said. I look at him kinda puzzled. He continued, "I would feel uncomfortable being the only one naked." I almost fainted right there. Skinny dipping with a hot guy was one of my biggest fantasies! Shit if this is a dream I better not wake up any time soon. "Oh, right," I managed to stutter in my nervousness. "C'mon!" Damnit he winked at me again. If he keeps this up I will need to call 911 for having a boner for more than 4 hours. I ran after him as he went outside. Without hesitation he pulled his clothes off and jumped into the deep end. The pool must've been freezing, it was November and less than 50 degrees out! "Man you gotta get in here it's freezing!" he called out. The water could've been frozen or boiling for all I cared. I had to jump in. I took my shirt off, then my shorts, and finally, and quite nervously, my boxers. None of my friends, including Garrett, had seen me naked before. "Don't worry, I'm a grower," I said. This time I winked at him. He laughed and splashed me as I leaped into the pool heading straight for him slick naked body. "If you wanna touch this you gotta catch me!" He yelled, probably too loud since my parents were upstairs in the house. "And why would I want to touch you," I asked, prodding him to tell me he's gay. "Cuz I turn straight guys gay and lesbian girls straight, baby." That's probably true actually. And damn he's so cute when he calls me baby! Suddenly he dove down under the water. It was too dark for me to see him, but suddenly I felt his hand running across my thigh, then another hand on my ass. "Oops, sorry," he said as he came up for air, giggling boyishly, obviously not sorry for what he did. "You like what you felt baby?" I asked. "Maybe," he winked back. Then he went up the stairs out of the pool, giving me a great view of his ass. "C'mon I'm freezing dude, we can do this again tomorrow." I was a little sad it all ended so fast, but I figured he had more in store for me back inside. And boy, I didn't know how right I was!
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06-26-2011, 11:05 PM | #12 |
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Great story. I think that you started really well, I like the pace, and just yay!
Wonderful job my man!
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06-26-2011, 11:16 PM | #13 |
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Thanks nuditydudity, and thanks to everyone else who has commented. I'm always open to constrictive criticism so lemme know what can be improved.
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06-27-2011, 06:25 AM | #14 |
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Wow. Ur damn lucky.
Great story and really nice pace. Can't wait for more.
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