Fiction: the storm

cherry13 · 01-03-2011, 06:11 PM

this is my first shot at a story so here it goes
----------------------------It was a dark night when it happened. I was laying awake in bed listening to the awful sound of my parents fighting about where they should send me off to.they hated me because of two gifts that were also curses. one i could shapeshift,two i could read minds. the curses were that whenever i shapeshifted id have 1 hr before it became permanent you can only guess the mindreading curse. "JANICE GET DOWN HERE THIS INSTANCE!"

cherry13 · 01-03-2011, 06:13 PM

i heard my mom yell
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ill write more later if its any good

bottomb · 01-03-2011, 06:31 PM

I like it!! keep going

cherry13 · 01-03-2011, 06:46 PM

2 part:
i walked downstairs to find a man with my parents. ''this is bruno, hes one of your kind'' my mom snapped. ''so''. ''your going to go with him to wolf canyon where youll be pushed in'' my mom said with a smirk. ''wont that kill me''. ''thats the plan''. i knew they hated me but this much was new to me. suddenly i felt fur growing ''im leaving'' i said with a bit of bark in my voice. i then ran. transforming into a dog was hard work. i rarely got it right. i knew where to go. the wolf canyon.

bottomb · 01-03-2011, 06:53 PM

love it!! amazing powers

cherry13 · 01-03-2011, 06:57 PM

2 part con.
no one ever came out of there alive. suddenly i knew i had five min. before it became permanent. i found a dark alley and transformed back, it was cold. i noticed a small fire and went to it. ''well, well a little lost girl'' someone laughed. ''im 15 and im not lost'' i shouted. ''15? get her boys'' i gasped as two men grabbed me from behind. the man stepped out from behind a dumpster. i read his mind and intantly began fighting for my virginty.

bottomb · 01-03-2011, 07:10 PM

I hope he paid for his thoughts....

cherry13 · 01-03-2011, 07:26 PM

3 part
i kicked a strong blow to his groin when he cam near. ''i wont let you rape me''. ''listen up kid, i dunno how you knew that but i was gonna let you go but know i think ill kill you when im done'' he snarled vicously. ''hold her down ass up'' he told the two men holding me down. i struggled hard but in the end i was held down. i gasped as he started to spank me hard, ''cry, you worthless bitch and itll all end'' he said. suddenly he ripped my pants down and hit harder and harder.

cherry13 · 01-03-2011, 08:13 PM

i let out a scream when my panties were forced down. it was at a very high pitch sudenly he was screaming '' i cant hear'' the other guys were dead. ''did i-i do this?'' i took his knife and ran. i knew just one thing, i belonged in exile at wolf canyon. my heart beat was fast as i ran. faster i thought. the cliffs edge was nearing and with one last breath i jumped........

bottomb · 01-03-2011, 08:15 PM

sweeet! turned into a ....

cherry13 · 01-03-2011, 08:33 PM

as i fell i sang a song a sad but beautiful song. my arms became white wings. i tried to transform back but a voice spoke ''you have passed your body shall die but your spirit will become a new bieng'' as the voice spoke white feathers sprouted. ''you will fly by night and sleep by day'' i gasped as i became a snowy owl.''your powers are now taken away as they were nothing more than crutches on your journey'' i flew to a small cave now i knew nothing of my past.''soon they shall return''.
to be continued

01-03-2011, 06:11 PM	#1
cherry13 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 15	the storm this is my first shot at a story so here it goes ----------------------------It was a dark night when it happened. I was laying awake in bed listening to the awful sound of my parents fighting about where they should send me off to.they hated me because of two gifts that were also curses. one i could shapeshift,two i could read minds. the curses were that whenever i shapeshifted id have 1 hr before it became permanent you can only guess the mindreading curse. "JANICE GET DOWN HERE THIS INSTANCE!" __________________ i know im a beyblade fan so plz dont send me rude pm's about it

01-03-2011, 06:13 PM	#2
cherry13 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 15	i heard my mom yell ------------------------------------ ill write more later if its any good __________________ i know im a beyblade fan so plz dont send me rude pm's about it

01-03-2011, 06:31 PM	#3
bottomb getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 304	I like it!! keep going __________________ Likes- cbt, orgasm denial, pain, humiliation Dislikes- scat, pee, anal, messy Anytime someone sends me a private message with a number, I must edge that many times. 2-10 42 mwm

01-03-2011, 06:46 PM	#4
cherry13 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 15	2 part: i walked downstairs to find a man with my parents. ''this is bruno, hes one of your kind'' my mom snapped. ''so''. ''your going to go with him to wolf canyon where youll be pushed in'' my mom said with a smirk. ''wont that kill me''. ''thats the plan''. i knew they hated me but this much was new to me. suddenly i felt fur growing ''im leaving'' i said with a bit of bark in my voice. i then ran. transforming into a dog was hard work. i rarely got it right. i knew where to go. the wolf canyon. __________________ i know im a beyblade fan so plz dont send me rude pm's about it

01-03-2011, 06:53 PM	#5
bottomb getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 304	love it!! amazing powers __________________ Likes- cbt, orgasm denial, pain, humiliation Dislikes- scat, pee, anal, messy Anytime someone sends me a private message with a number, I must edge that many times. 2-10 42 mwm

01-03-2011, 06:57 PM	#6
cherry13 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 15	2 part con. no one ever came out of there alive. suddenly i knew i had five min. before it became permanent. i found a dark alley and transformed back, it was cold. i noticed a small fire and went to it. ''well, well a little lost girl'' someone laughed. ''im 15 and im not lost'' i shouted. ''15? get her boys'' i gasped as two men grabbed me from behind. the man stepped out from behind a dumpster. i read his mind and intantly began fighting for my virginty. __________________ i know im a beyblade fan so plz dont send me rude pm's about it

01-03-2011, 07:10 PM	#7
bottomb getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 304	I hope he paid for his thoughts.... __________________ Likes- cbt, orgasm denial, pain, humiliation Dislikes- scat, pee, anal, messy Anytime someone sends me a private message with a number, I must edge that many times. 2-10 42 mwm

01-03-2011, 07:26 PM	#8
cherry13 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 15	3 part i kicked a strong blow to his groin when he cam near. ''i wont let you rape me''. ''listen up kid, i dunno how you knew that but i was gonna let you go but know i think ill kill you when im done'' he snarled vicously. ''hold her down ass up'' he told the two men holding me down. i struggled hard but in the end i was held down. i gasped as he started to spank me hard, ''cry, you worthless bitch and itll all end'' he said. suddenly he ripped my pants down and hit harder and harder. __________________ i know im a beyblade fan so plz dont send me rude pm's about it

01-03-2011, 08:13 PM	#9
cherry13 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 15	i let out a scream when my panties were forced down. it was at a very high pitch sudenly he was screaming '' i cant hear'' the other guys were dead. ''did i-i do this?'' i took his knife and ran. i knew just one thing, i belonged in exile at wolf canyon. my heart beat was fast as i ran. faster i thought. the cliffs edge was nearing and with one last breath i jumped........ __________________ i know im a beyblade fan so plz dont send me rude pm's about it

01-03-2011, 08:15 PM	#10
bottomb getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 304	sweeet! turned into a .... __________________ Likes- cbt, orgasm denial, pain, humiliation Dislikes- scat, pee, anal, messy Anytime someone sends me a private message with a number, I must edge that many times. 2-10 42 mwm

01-03-2011, 08:33 PM	#11
cherry13 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 15	as i fell i sang a song a sad but beautiful song. my arms became white wings. i tried to transform back but a voice spoke ''you have passed your body shall die but your spirit will become a new bieng'' as the voice spoke white feathers sprouted. ''you will fly by night and sleep by day'' i gasped as i became a snowy owl.''your powers are now taken away as they were nothing more than crutches on your journey'' i flew to a small cave now i knew nothing of my past.''soon they shall return''. to be continued __________________ i know im a beyblade fan so plz dont send me rude pm's about it