Step Brother [FICTION]

over the rainbow · 11-20-2007, 09:17 PM

Honestly, I thought the worst thing about my mom remarrying was the fact I'd have to get used to a new family. I never dreamed that my step brother-older than me by 1 year, making him 16- would take advantage of me.
The night it started, I was in my room, getting my pajamas on. We had moved in about a week ago, and I was already comfortable in my new room. The door was locked to prevent anyone from walking in, but I hadn't thought of checking my closet.
"Oh, nice body." Came John's voice, as he pushed the closet door open. It had been ajar, with only a crack of visibility.
I turned, and looked at him with disgust, glad my baggy sweats covered the curves he'd already seen.
"Why look at me like that? I know something you don't know I know, and unless you want everyone in your new school to think you're a slut...I'll be seeing a whole lot of you naked."
"What?" I gaped at him, not sure what to do.
"That newborn baby girl isn't really your mother's, is it? No...it's yours. You had sex when you were 14."
I gulped. "What do you want me to do? Fuck you too?"
"No." He replied softly, coming closer to me. "Not yet. You'll be my slave."
"For how long?!" I breathed hard, bit my lip, tried not to cry. "Indefinitely."
As he started toward the door, he let his hand lazily brush accross my breasts. Then he was out the door and gone.
I lay on my bed, tears rolling down my cheeks.
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This is my first story on here. Comments would be nice.

I'd also like suggestions, if you could? PM them to me. Thank you.

molten man · 11-20-2007, 09:45 PM

Writing is nice!! Keep it going.

How could the baby pass of as the mothers??

HSsportsstar 1 · 11-20-2007, 09:52 PM

thats good keep on writing

anayguy · 11-21-2007, 12:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by molten man

Writing is nice!! Keep it going.

How could the baby pass of as the mothers??

that is a good cliffhanger there

JMOB · 11-25-2007, 12:43 PM

Great start of a story, it is a real cliffhanger. I like it and hope to see more soon. so in other words, WRITE MOAR!

molten man · 11-25-2007, 10:35 PM

Hey, The break is too much. Please continue!!

Pikachu · 11-26-2007, 02:49 AM

i like i like alot hopefully its a bit different from other stories and maybe this time for once the slave can lose they always seem to win for some strange reason

btw i like the baby thing

DareByrd · 11-26-2007, 06:32 PM

wow this is sort of new in a FEMALE getting dominated way most of the stories on here are bout guys

molten man · 11-26-2007, 07:59 PM

It sure is most!! Most of em!!

iii · 11-27-2007, 04:30 PM

this story is MEAN/AND SAD

xxxMichellexxx · 11-27-2007, 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by iii

this story is MEAN/AND SAD

and is very good

Simple_me · 11-27-2007, 09:22 PM

"indefinetly" isnt actually a period of time...

x.Emma.x · 11-20-2008, 10:28 AM

Ugh...this was going to be phenomenal. I really wish you would have finished it!

11-20-2007, 09:17 PM	#1
over the rainbow Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 5	Step Brother [FICTION] Honestly, I thought the worst thing about my mom remarrying was the fact I'd have to get used to a new family. I never dreamed that my step brother-older than me by 1 year, making him 16- would take advantage of me. The night it started, I was in my room, getting my pajamas on. We had moved in about a week ago, and I was already comfortable in my new room. The door was locked to prevent anyone from walking in, but I hadn't thought of checking my closet. "Oh, nice body." Came John's voice, as he pushed the closet door open. It had been ajar, with only a crack of visibility. I turned, and looked at him with disgust, glad my baggy sweats covered the curves he'd already seen. "Why look at me like that? I know something you don't know I know, and unless you want everyone in your new school to think you're a slut...I'll be seeing a whole lot of you naked." "What?" I gaped at him, not sure what to do. "That newborn baby girl isn't really your mother's, is it? No...it's yours. You had sex when you were 14." I gulped. "What do you want me to do? Fuck you too?" "No." He replied softly, coming closer to me. "Not yet. You'll be my slave." "For how long?!" I breathed hard, bit my lip, tried not to cry. "Indefinitely." As he started toward the door, he let his hand lazily brush accross my breasts. Then he was out the door and gone. I lay on my bed, tears rolling down my cheeks. ------------------------------------------------ This is my first story on here. Comments would be nice. I'd also like suggestions, if you could? PM them to me. Thank you.

11-20-2007, 09:45 PM	#2
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Writing is nice!! Keep it going. How could the baby pass of as the mothers?? __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-25-2007, 10:35 PM	#6
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Hey, The break is too much. Please continue!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-26-2007, 02:49 AM	#7
Pikachu Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 897 Blog Entries: 4	i like i like alot hopefully its a bit different from other stories and maybe this time for once the slave can lose they always seem to win for some strange reason btw i like the baby thing __________________

11-26-2007, 06:32 PM	#8
DareByrd getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 341	wow this is sort of new in a FEMALE getting dominated way most of the stories on here are bout guys __________________ 26/m/sub Gay Kik me at dkb1992 Likes: orgasm denial, hypno, rules, dares, games of chance, occasionally chastity. Very open minded otherwise Limits: public, friends and family, blackmail, feminization, illegal, permanent damage, messy, scat

11-20-2007, 09:52 PM	#3
HSsportsstar 1 Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: in my house Posts: 115	thats good keep on writing

11-25-2007, 12:43 PM	#5
JMOB Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: up your bum Posts: 48	Great start of a story, it is a real cliffhanger. I like it and hope to see more soon. so in other words, WRITE MOAR!

11-26-2007, 07:59 PM	#9
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	It sure is most!! Most of em!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-27-2007, 04:30 PM	#10
iii Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 25	this story is MEAN/AND SAD

11-27-2007, 09:22 PM	#12
Simple_me Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 110	"indefinetly" isnt actually a period of time... __________________ Oh shutup. Nobody believes in you anyway.

11-20-2008, 10:28 AM	#13
x.Emma.x Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: UK Posts: 223	Ugh...this was going to be phenomenal. I really wish you would have finished it! __________________ Luv George Sampson sooo much!!! George Sampson & Eoghan Quigg are fittt!! 18/F mistress from England! Xx Looking to mistress any guys or girls that are together. So I'd dare two guys, two girls, or one guy and one girl. If there's two of you and you're interested, let me know! I'd LUVV to mistress you!