Fiction: Combined effort story

Mr Very Daring · 02-06-2010, 05:47 PM

I came up with this idea then couldn't start it.
Basically it's a free for all add on story, thought of by me for those that want to write a story but can't do it by themselves, for various reasons.
Rules:
Limit character numbers
Not arguing over story direction
Keep ages and country vague
Stick to original storyline
No story ending unless consulting stories main contributors
Try to expand previous poster's idea but if stuck make your own

This idea may be copied but please see how this one turns out first

I'll will post first post very soon comments on my idea please post here http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=38931

Mr Very Daring · 02-07-2010, 04:25 AM

Here it goes

part 1

(please title story posts so people know it is one)

Characters:
Ross ( first person speaker)- shy, quiet, smart, average weight but small male(not being vane this is for story purposes) quite fit.
Jane- Ross’ younger sister- curly blond, mid-intelligence, quite shy
Amy- Jane’s bff, loud, very outgoing, not shy at all and fit as.
NOTE: their ages are left to individual readers taste (but they are in school) the same with their personality and appearance
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V=f X lambda, so V= 20 times
Bang!
I tore myself away from my enthralling physics homework to investigate the source of these sound waves I heard.
Jane: nice one Amy you broke my mum’s fav glass bowl
Amy: Not my fault
I entered the room
Ross: What was that?
Jane left for a shovel
Amy: The glass bowl
Ross: ahh, bad luck- mum loves it
Amy: and we love each other (she said in a sexy, seductive tone) - don’t deny knowing it, I’ve seen your tent when I am around and you’ve seen my hard nipples
Ross: when!
Amy: Now and when we go swimming.
Ross looks very embarrassed
Amy: it’s ok I feel the same way
Ross: not it’s not I feel stupid now and awkward, because you don’t do dating
Amy: doesn’t mean we can’t have fun (fantasising look on her face)
They move in for a kiss but before they got within reaching distance Jane walks in. They were both cursing her in their heads. But Amy was sleeping over from Friday to Monday because both our parents were at a business meeting- so there is still time.
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The may idea for the sleepover isn't the 3 playing tord or sex, it's Amy and Ross tord secretly around Jane without her knowing or finding out.
Please comment good or bad or post the next part.

02-06-2010, 05:47 PM	#1
Mr Very Daring getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 255	Combined effort story I came up with this idea then couldn't start it. Basically it's a free for all add on story, thought of by me for those that want to write a story but can't do it by themselves, for various reasons. Rules: Limit character numbers Not arguing over story direction Keep ages and country vague Stick to original storyline No story ending unless consulting stories main contributors Try to expand previous poster's idea but if stuck make your own This idea may be copied but please see how this one turns out first I'll will post first post very soon comments on my idea please post here http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=38931 Last edited by Mr Very Daring; 02-07-2010 at 03:50 AM.

02-07-2010, 04:25 AM	#2
Mr Very Daring getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 255	Here it goes part 1 (please title story posts so people know it is one) Characters: Ross ( first person speaker)- shy, quiet, smart, average weight but small male(not being vane this is for story purposes) quite fit. Jane- Ross’ younger sister- curly blond, mid-intelligence, quite shy Amy- Jane’s bff, loud, very outgoing, not shy at all and fit as. NOTE: their ages are left to individual readers taste (but they are in school) the same with their personality and appearance -------------------------------------------------------------------------- V=f X lambda, so V= 20 times Bang! I tore myself away from my enthralling physics homework to investigate the source of these sound waves I heard. Jane: nice one Amy you broke my mum’s fav glass bowl Amy: Not my fault I entered the room Ross: What was that? Jane left for a shovel Amy: The glass bowl Ross: ahh, bad luck- mum loves it Amy: and we love each other (she said in a sexy, seductive tone) - don’t deny knowing it, I’ve seen your tent when I am around and you’ve seen my hard nipples Ross: when! Amy: Now and when we go swimming. Ross looks very embarrassed Amy: it’s ok I feel the same way Ross: not it’s not I feel stupid now and awkward, because you don’t do dating Amy: doesn’t mean we can’t have fun (fantasising look on her face) They move in for a kiss but before they got within reaching distance Jane walks in. They were both cursing her in their heads. But Amy was sleeping over from Friday to Monday because both our parents were at a business meeting- so there is still time. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- The may idea for the sleepover isn't the 3 playing tord or sex, it's Amy and Ross tord secretly around Jane without her knowing or finding out. Please comment good or bad or post the next part. Last edited by Mr Very Daring; 02-08-2010 at 03:45 PM.