My Poetry

MasterWriterUK · 11-03-2009, 04:36 PM

Violent Hands

Passive
Aggressive,
Music,
The rhythm pause:
As treacle: off a spoon.

Excessive
Force,
Anger,
Hate full teeth:
Clenched fists grin wildly.

Beaten
Senseless,
Peace,
Love is ironic:
Stained: with blood.

Life
Support,
Heart,
Police are escort:
As modern day: Valkyries.

RiskyVenture · 11-03-2009, 04:54 PM

Reminds me of one of my all time favorites:

Quote:

fire... burning... agony...
sultry shivers of a dark essence
why am i tortured with this nihilistic existence?
bitter... darkness... despair.

11-03-2009, 04:36 PM	#1
MasterWriterUK Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: In the middle of a metaphorical haystack. Posts: 3	My Poetry Violent Hands Passive Aggressive, Music, The rhythm pause: As treacle: off a spoon. Excessive Force, Anger, Hate full teeth: Clenched fists grin wildly. Beaten Senseless, Peace, Love is ironic: Stained: with blood. Life Support, Heart, Police are escort: As modern day: Valkyries.