complete the story

TillyII · 02-15-2009, 10:47 PM

Ok I'm going to start a story and the next person will finish it. Then they will start a story and the next person will finish and and so on. Must be 5 lines.

Ok

My family just left for vaction and they left me with a baby sitter that is 18. My sister leaves her cum covered panties and dildo on the bed and my family leaves. My naughty babysitter notices and decides to make me her slave. She grabs my sisters cum soaked dildo and panties and brings me to my sisters room. She tells me I have to do as she says for the weeks.... continue..

wicked · 04-27-2009, 12:21 PM

I don't see the motivation. I would like to continue, but sorry, it's no good, and it's rushed.

Try again? Insert coin.

BettyBoop · 04-27-2009, 12:27 PM

Rushed and surreal. I wouldn't add anything to this tbh. I like these ideas but I think this one seemed very unrealistic.

HeadHunter_t · 04-27-2009, 12:39 PM

i agree with betty it is very rushed

masterddk · 04-27-2009, 01:23 PM

Maybe you should have started like this.....

My family just left for two weeks on vacation and left me at home with my 21 year old house sitter. She is pretty with long dark hair and brown eyes, she is a bit of a geek though with her glasses and boring clothes. She babysits me sometimes when my parents are out. I hate it because she is always strict with me, worse than my parents sometimes. I'm not looking forward to two weeks with her except maybe I'll get a glipse of her coming out of the shower and she is getting to use my sisters bedroom while she's gone which is right next to mine. I can hear everything that goes on, thats why I know my sister has a vibrator. I have been threatening her that i'd tell mom if she wasn't nice to me.

To Be Continued......

wicked · 04-27-2009, 04:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HeadHunter_t

i agree with betty it is very rushed

hey! that's what I said...

BettyBoop · 04-28-2009, 11:50 AM

I was thinking that too wicked, I was saying what you were saying.

02-15-2009, 10:47 PM	#1
TillyII Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 29	complete the story Ok I'm going to start a story and the next person will finish it. Then they will start a story and the next person will finish and and so on. Must be 5 lines. Ok My family just left for vaction and they left me with a baby sitter that is 18. My sister leaves her cum covered panties and dildo on the bed and my family leaves. My naughty babysitter notices and decides to make me her slave. She grabs my sisters cum soaked dildo and panties and brings me to my sisters room. She tells me I have to do as she says for the weeks.... continue..

04-27-2009, 12:27 PM	#3
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	Rushed and surreal. I wouldn't add anything to this tbh. I like these ideas but I think this one seemed very unrealistic. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

04-27-2009, 12:39 PM	#4
HeadHunter_t Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: south africa Posts: 223	hello i agree with betty it is very rushed __________________ 24 m from south Africa.

04-27-2009, 01:23 PM	#5
masterddk getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: uk Posts: 342	Maybe you should have started like this..... My family just left for two weeks on vacation and left me at home with my 21 year old house sitter. She is pretty with long dark hair and brown eyes, she is a bit of a geek though with her glasses and boring clothes. She babysits me sometimes when my parents are out. I hate it because she is always strict with me, worse than my parents sometimes. I'm not looking forward to two weeks with her except maybe I'll get a glipse of her coming out of the shower and she is getting to use my sisters bedroom while she's gone which is right next to mine. I can hear everything that goes on, thats why I know my sister has a vibrator. I have been threatening her that i'd tell mom if she wasn't nice to me. To Be Continued...... __________________ All dares posted are for 18+ and for reading enjoyment Anyone who may partake is at their own risk Likes->obedience,orgasm control,tasks and dares Firm but fair. I respect others limits. Always happy to meet new people DDK

04-28-2009, 11:50 AM	#7
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	I was thinking that too wicked, I was saying what you were saying. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

04-27-2009, 12:21 PM	#2
wicked getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 287	I don't see the motivation. I would like to continue, but sorry, it's no good, and it's rushed. Try again? Insert coin.