Fiction: Story Request!

ASlaveKindaGuy · 10-13-2013, 07:50 AM

Hello! I have an idea for a story, but I suck at writing!
I would appreciate it if somebody could attempt to write this!
Also, there's no truth or dare in it.

Story: Me and my family (preferably I'm a guy) are going on a cruise. As a punishment for bad behavior, he takes out all my clothes from my suit case without me knowing. He also invites my ex girlfriend to the cruise... And that's all I've got. Also, there are other passengers that are clothed normally.

Think you can write it?
Put a link to it in a response/comment to this post.
Thanks!

Memories for Life · 10-14-2013, 02:54 AM

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Originally Posted by ASlaveKindaGuy

... (preferably I'm a guy) are going on a cruise. As a punishment for bad behavior, he takes out all my clothes from my suit case without me knowing. He also invites my ex girlfriend to the cruise... And that's all I've got. Also, there are other passengers that are clothed normally....

You're not a guy but you prefer to be one???

Who is "he"???

"He" invites your ex? Cruises aren't cheap - it seems extreme to think someone would pay big money for minor embarrassment! Plus, why take the clothes out of the suitcase - just take the entire suitcase!

Kitten · 10-29-2013, 03:48 AM

Have you thought any more about where you want to take this story, and what happens next? Is there a moral, how does it end?

ASlaveKindaGuy · 10-30-2013, 08:15 PM

Yes. Here's basically the whole thing
We go on a week long cruise optional nudist cruise and parents take away clothes. (I'm a guy) meet a nice girl and soon play truth or dare. She ends up making me a slave, and has fun with me. then I get introduced to her friend, and they both control me and own me. After a week, We leave the cruise. If you want to keep up the story, they find out they live in the same neighborhood so they can keep engaging in sexual activity.
Notes:
1. parents know about the slavery and are ok with it
2. Some bondage
3. We are like, 21 so it's legal to have sex and stuff
4. A link to the story here so I can find it
I am a horrible writer, so that's why I need your help

10-13-2013, 07:50 AM	#1
ASlaveKindaGuy Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: America Posts: 28	Story Request! Hello! I have an idea for a story, but I suck at writing! I would appreciate it if somebody could attempt to write this! Also, there's no truth or dare in it. Story: Me and my family (preferably I'm a guy) are going on a cruise. As a punishment for bad behavior, he takes out all my clothes from my suit case without me knowing. He also invites my ex girlfriend to the cruise... And that's all I've got. Also, there are other passengers that are clothed normally. Think you can write it? Put a link to it in a response/comment to this post. Thanks!

10-29-2013, 03:48 AM	#3
Kitten The One & Only Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Gehenna Posts: 1,216 Blog Entries: 2	Have you thought any more about where you want to take this story, and what happens next? Is there a moral, how does it end?

10-30-2013, 08:15 PM	#4
ASlaveKindaGuy Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: America Posts: 28	Yes. Here's basically the whole thing We go on a week long cruise optional nudist cruise and parents take away clothes. (I'm a guy) meet a nice girl and soon play truth or dare. She ends up making me a slave, and has fun with me. then I get introduced to her friend, and they both control me and own me. After a week, We leave the cruise. If you want to keep up the story, they find out they live in the same neighborhood so they can keep engaging in sexual activity. Notes: 1. parents know about the slavery and are ok with it 2. Some bondage 3. We are like, 21 so it's legal to have sex and stuff 4. A link to the story here so I can find it I am a horrible writer, so that's why I need your help