Fiction: Completely Controlled

Nakedwriter · 10-06-2013, 08:38 PM

Lilly Smith was naked infront of her mirror, sizing hserself up. Her B cup breasts were firm and perky. She felt them as she looked from the side, her small frame and flat stomach made her firm and chest seem that much larger, but as all 17 year old girls, she only saw flaws in her picturesque body.

She kept feeling up and.down her front untill she realized it was 10 minutes till school started. She quickly slid on a matching set of pink panties and a bra, and then slid on a skirt and a sweatshirt. Lilly drove to school, speeding as she did so. Then she quickly ran to class and got in right before the bell rang. "Cutting it close Ms. Smith, dont do it again."

Lilly nodded, then sat down. She tried to focus, but soon she found herself feeling her breasts under her sweatshirt. Whe she looked up, four kids were watching her. So Lilly quickly rose her hand and went to the bathroom.

Upon arrival, her whole body felt on fire. She slid out of her sweatshirt while in the stall, but fealt no difference. Next came her jeans and panies followed by her bra. She then felt her vagina on fire with arousal, so she slid her finger in, moaning. She closed her eyes, hopimg to releive the burning sensation in her vagina, but masterbation only intensified her actions.

Soon before climax, she opened her eyes. Her clothes were nowhere to be found. She suddenly had a voice in her head compelled her to go to the gym on the other side of the school. Obediently, yet hesitently, she looked out the stall. Seeing it cleared, she stepped out.

The burning along her vagins lesened, almost connected to her vaginal pain. Every step to the gym lessendd pain, and every step away did the opposite. She slowly walked into the hall, her arms across her chest, her feet on the cold floors. She could see into classrooms through the window in the door, and they could see her if they looked at her. She almost began masterbating when she heard someone walk in the hallway. She couldnt hide in the girls restroom, for skme reason. So she ran into the Janitors closet to gather her thoughts.

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most stories focus on the dominates in mind control, and altgough this will eventually, the first segments will be of the submissive

1) She is compelled to go through the lobby, the highest risk for running into teachers/students (6/6) but high chance of hiding in time (5/6)

2) She goes around the school, lowest risk of running into a student/teacher (2/6), but little places to hide. (0/6)

3)She goes through the courtyard, medium chances at both. (4/6) (3/6)

Results will be tied and Ill role the dice based on these odds

hotchic · 10-06-2013, 10:14 PM

i vote for 1... like the story so far

william81 · 10-07-2013, 12:14 AM

3 is my vote......................................

Nakedwriter · 10-07-2013, 08:39 PM

Due to a A-C split, Ill vote C and see what happens.

I roll a 1 and a 6

______________

Lilly smith didnt know what overcame her, but her internal instinct told her to go to the courtyard. It had the lowest amount of people with the most amount of places to hide. She takes a peek outside the door, and saw no one

Despite being controlled mentally, the ever present fear of being caught loomed in the back of her mind. Her foot stepped back out on the cold Floor tiles, a constant reminder that this was real. Lilly walked down the hall, past classrooms each with a teacher teaching class. Her nipples were hard and she even began to sweat out of concentration of making as little noise as possible.

With each step she also gained a mixture of confidence and blind excitement. She lowered her hand covering her breasts, and next she relaxed her hand covering her pussy. The cool air of the school explored every curve and crevace of her beautiful body, sending her into a euphoria of pleasures.

Due to the rising emotions, she stopped suddenly and looked at a poster on the wall. Seeing a rope, she instead saw a way,to force her to be vunerable. She quietly walked over to the board and got onto her tip toes. She tore the rope off the board as quietly as possible.

With her new prize, she ran to the bathrooms closest to the courtyard. Paige hurriedly tied her hands behind her bsck utalizing the mirror and techniques she had learned from watching BDSM porn online. Happy with her work, she continued on her journey. Now unable to hold her pussy, her juices occassionally dripped down her legs as she walked. Then she got into the courtyard.

Suddenly the bell rang, and despite her love for exhibitionism, she wasnt about to be caught nude kn school. She dove behind a bush and hid. Her hear raced, pounding through her left breast. She would masterbate had her hands not been bound. Then suddenly, as the students finished heading to their class, someone walked around the bush.

[____________

1) It is a male in the grade with her (Senior)
2) It is a female in the grade below (Junior)

a) he/she takes part in her adventure
B) he/she hinders her adventure

daredevildaretaker · 10-08-2013, 12:45 AM

i vote for 2 and a

Mrslutman · 10-08-2013, 12:50 AM

My vote goes to 2/A. I'm really enjoying the story so far.

Locked Puppy · 10-10-2013, 06:04 PM

I vote 2/a as well..

DARE me!

Memories for Life · 10-11-2013, 07:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nakedwriter

...With her new prize, she ran to the bathrooms closest to the courtyard. Paige hurriedly tied her hands behind her bsck utalizing the mirror and techniques she had learned from watching BDSM porn online. ...

A minor issue with continuity. Who's Paige?

HHHobo · 10-11-2013, 06:47 PM

It has to be 2/A.

onix · 10-17-2013, 02:00 AM

my vote will be 2/a as well

BIGTENCountry12 · 10-17-2013, 12:14 PM

I vote 2&B. Just to add excitement

Nakedwriter · 10-23-2013, 09:13 PM

Lilly balled up in fear. Her knees touched her chest, but due to her hands being tied, she couldnt fully hide from this invader.

A girl, who appeared to be slightly younger than Paige, got on her knees to help paige. "Its okay, who did this to you." She spoke, pointing to Lillys bindings.

lilly blushed, "Me." After recieving a strange look, she told the new girl her adventure so far. When she finished, the girl was dumbfounded at how ridicukous it had been so far. "Whats your name?" Lilly asked

After several moments, the girl responded, "Paige." After several more moments, she untied Lillys bindings. "I wanna join you, Lilly." She said, neother knew how she knew Lillys name. This would be explained later as the same reason Lilly had begun her journy. Paige began placing her fingers at the hymn of her skirt, but she was stopped by Lilly speaking.

"Let me." She said, slipping her fingers under the elastic. Then after a pause she ripped down Paiges skirt and panties underneath. Paige flinched at the sudden cold air on her lower extremities, but Lilly contiued by pulling up her shirt, revealing a girl equally endowed as herself. Then Lilly pulled off the girls last shred of clothing, leaving them both bare and speechless.

To be continued in part B of this segment of the story. Sorry, I have a test 2marrow

Nakedwriter · 10-28-2013, 09:05 PM

Lilly smiled, and continued on her adventure. Only this time she had an aid along her tretcherous adventure to the gym. Her intense urge to go to the gym increased, but the pain decreased with every step. She confidently strutted through the rest of the courtyard, her back stiff with pride. She was leading a pack now, and she had to present herself as such.

Paige followed Lily, admiring her round fit ass. Although Paige had as just an attractive body, she felt dull in comparison to Lily. She never once thought if turning back. The temptation was too much for her to bare. She had to continue on their adventure.

When rounding a corner, Lily stooped Paige with her arm. "Shhh." She said, worried.

Paige couldnt hear anything but the sound of her hear beating.

Lilly lead them into a nearby supply closet, and shut the door quickly and quietly, pressing their bodies against one another . Lillys breasts were pressing against Paiges back. Suddenly Paige spun around, and their lips met. Paige looked away, blushing, as did Lilly. Then when the coast was clear, they began to nove out.

~~

No voting, just offer suggestions to future installments

Misa · 10-29-2013, 02:36 AM

Great story so far, that meeting in the closet could develop into some form of a relationship, thinking that could be a good mid point in the whole story.

And on their way to the gym I think someone should see them from a classroom window and be able to take a photo of them, but they don't know this yet, that could be used how ever in the story later, to embarrass them or blackmail, etc.

Nakedwriter · 10-30-2013, 08:16 PM

Lilly walked onward, sweat dripping from every pore imaginable. They were only four doors untill they were in the gym lobby. It was normally a short distance, but being naked made it as if every step was a mile to cross. Upon glancing at a window, she noticed a classroom was empty, and she couldnt resist the urge. "Follow me." She said, leading Paige into a Chemistry room.

In a desk she saw what she wanted. "Paige, are you kinky?"

Paige nodded, not knowing what was going to happen. Then lilly tied her arms and legs to desks to where her legs were wide open. Next she poured Babyoil all over Paige, and rubbed it. Paige only responded with mild groans and her nipples becoming hard.

Lilly took pictures of the erotic sight, then set it up her phone to record her. Lilly began to lick Paige. Paige pulled on the restraints, liftimg her off the floor. Neither knew why they started, or why they filmed it, but both were doing it without hesitation, almost like orders.

10-06-2013, 08:38 PM	#1
Nakedwriter Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 45	Completely Controlled Lilly Smith was naked infront of her mirror, sizing hserself up. Her B cup breasts were firm and perky. She felt them as she looked from the side, her small frame and flat stomach made her firm and chest seem that much larger, but as all 17 year old girls, she only saw flaws in her picturesque body. She kept feeling up and.down her front untill she realized it was 10 minutes till school started. She quickly slid on a matching set of pink panties and a bra, and then slid on a skirt and a sweatshirt. Lilly drove to school, speeding as she did so. Then she quickly ran to class and got in right before the bell rang. "Cutting it close Ms. Smith, dont do it again." Lilly nodded, then sat down. She tried to focus, but soon she found herself feeling her breasts under her sweatshirt. Whe she looked up, four kids were watching her. So Lilly quickly rose her hand and went to the bathroom. Upon arrival, her whole body felt on fire. She slid out of her sweatshirt while in the stall, but fealt no difference. Next came her jeans and panies followed by her bra. She then felt her vagina on fire with arousal, so she slid her finger in, moaning. She closed her eyes, hopimg to releive the burning sensation in her vagina, but masterbation only intensified her actions. Soon before climax, she opened her eyes. Her clothes were nowhere to be found. She suddenly had a voice in her head compelled her to go to the gym on the other side of the school. Obediently, yet hesitently, she looked out the stall. Seeing it cleared, she stepped out. The burning along her vagins lesened, almost connected to her vaginal pain. Every step to the gym lessendd pain, and every step away did the opposite. She slowly walked into the hall, her arms across her chest, her feet on the cold floors. She could see into classrooms through the window in the door, and they could see her if they looked at her. She almost began masterbating when she heard someone walk in the hallway. She couldnt hide in the girls restroom, for skme reason. So she ran into the Janitors closet to gather her thoughts. ____ most stories focus on the dominates in mind control, and altgough this will eventually, the first segments will be of the submissive 1) She is compelled to go through the lobby, the highest risk for running into teachers/students (6/6) but high chance of hiding in time (5/6) 2) She goes around the school, lowest risk of running into a student/teacher (2/6), but little places to hide. (0/6) 3)She goes through the courtyard, medium chances at both. (4/6) (3/6) Results will be tied and Ill role the dice based on these odds

10-08-2013, 12:50 AM	#6
Mrslutman Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Mizugakure no Sato Posts: 194 Blog Entries: 6	My vote goes to 2/A. I'm really enjoying the story so far. __________________ 22/Male/Canada/Bisexual/Switch leaning towards submissive~ I'm a bondage slut who loves being on the edge _______________________ Dare to-do list PM dares! ____________________ Likes & Limits

10-10-2013, 06:04 PM	#7
Locked Puppy getDare Devil Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: in a cage (Leipzig, Saxony, Germany) Posts: 1,298 Blog Entries: 11	I vote 2/a as well.. DARE me! __________________ (the puppy / it / it) - m - pan - germany proud to be Simi's pet Unofficial getDare Minecraft-Server likes - limits - toys -- pm dares Randomly Locked in Chastity (locked or not: no orgasms for this pup) kik: LockedPuppy

10-17-2013, 12:14 PM	#11
BIGTENCountry12 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: On my knees Posts: 232 Blog Entries: 2	controlling I vote 2&B. Just to add excitement __________________ Likes:nudity / hidden public / hidden outdoors / masturbation/non-messy food / light pain / light CBT / anal / toys (house hold, few sex) / light bondage / toilet control/ anal/ bi comfortable / humiliation/ outdoors / masturbation / open for new likes DISLIKES; illegal / permanent / anything I cant explain / not sure what else but will inform before i do anything'

10-29-2013, 02:36 AM	#14
Misa getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 304 Blog Entries: 2	Great story so far, that meeting in the closet could develop into some form of a relationship, thinking that could be a good mid point in the whole story. And on their way to the gym I think someone should see them from a classroom window and be able to take a photo of them, but they don't know this yet, that could be used how ever in the story later, to embarrass them or blackmail, etc. __________________ Male / Switch(leaning sub) / Bi / 29 / UK Always love chatting to people, throw me a pm <3 Check out my ad! Likes / Limits PM Dares

10-06-2013, 10:14 PM	#2
hotchic Baby Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1	i vote for 1... like the story so far

10-07-2013, 12:14 AM	#3
william81 Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Australia Posts: 7	3 is my vote......................................

10-07-2013, 08:39 PM	#4
Nakedwriter Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 45	Due to a A-C split, Ill vote C and see what happens. I roll a 1 and a 6 ______________ Lilly smith didnt know what overcame her, but her internal instinct told her to go to the courtyard. It had the lowest amount of people with the most amount of places to hide. She takes a peek outside the door, and saw no one Despite being controlled mentally, the ever present fear of being caught loomed in the back of her mind. Her foot stepped back out on the cold Floor tiles, a constant reminder that this was real. Lilly walked down the hall, past classrooms each with a teacher teaching class. Her nipples were hard and she even began to sweat out of concentration of making as little noise as possible. With each step she also gained a mixture of confidence and blind excitement. She lowered her hand covering her breasts, and next she relaxed her hand covering her pussy. The cool air of the school explored every curve and crevace of her beautiful body, sending her into a euphoria of pleasures. Due to the rising emotions, she stopped suddenly and looked at a poster on the wall. Seeing a rope, she instead saw a way,to force her to be vunerable. She quietly walked over to the board and got onto her tip toes. She tore the rope off the board as quietly as possible. With her new prize, she ran to the bathrooms closest to the courtyard. Paige hurriedly tied her hands behind her bsck utalizing the mirror and techniques she had learned from watching BDSM porn online. Happy with her work, she continued on her journey. Now unable to hold her pussy, her juices occassionally dripped down her legs as she walked. Then she got into the courtyard. Suddenly the bell rang, and despite her love for exhibitionism, she wasnt about to be caught nude kn school. She dove behind a bush and hid. Her hear raced, pounding through her left breast. She would masterbate had her hands not been bound. Then suddenly, as the students finished heading to their class, someone walked around the bush. [____________ 1) It is a male in the grade with her (Senior) 2) It is a female in the grade below (Junior) a) he/she takes part in her adventure B) he/she hinders her adventure

10-08-2013, 12:45 AM	#5
daredevildaretaker Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 29	i vote for 2 and a

10-11-2013, 06:47 PM	#9
HHHobo Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Chicago Posts: 78	It has to be 2/A.

10-17-2013, 02:00 AM	#10
onix Member Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: UK Posts: 31	my vote will be 2/a as well

10-23-2013, 09:13 PM	#12
Nakedwriter Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 45	Lilly balled up in fear. Her knees touched her chest, but due to her hands being tied, she couldnt fully hide from this invader. A girl, who appeared to be slightly younger than Paige, got on her knees to help paige. "Its okay, who did this to you." She spoke, pointing to Lillys bindings. lilly blushed, "Me." After recieving a strange look, she told the new girl her adventure so far. When she finished, the girl was dumbfounded at how ridicukous it had been so far. "Whats your name?" Lilly asked After several moments, the girl responded, "Paige." After several more moments, she untied Lillys bindings. "I wanna join you, Lilly." She said, neother knew how she knew Lillys name. This would be explained later as the same reason Lilly had begun her journy. Paige began placing her fingers at the hymn of her skirt, but she was stopped by Lilly speaking. "Let me." She said, slipping her fingers under the elastic. Then after a pause she ripped down Paiges skirt and panties underneath. Paige flinched at the sudden cold air on her lower extremities, but Lilly contiued by pulling up her shirt, revealing a girl equally endowed as herself. Then Lilly pulled off the girls last shred of clothing, leaving them both bare and speechless. To be continued in part B of this segment of the story. Sorry, I have a test 2marrow

10-28-2013, 09:05 PM	#13
Nakedwriter Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 45	Lilly smiled, and continued on her adventure. Only this time she had an aid along her tretcherous adventure to the gym. Her intense urge to go to the gym increased, but the pain decreased with every step. She confidently strutted through the rest of the courtyard, her back stiff with pride. She was leading a pack now, and she had to present herself as such. Paige followed Lily, admiring her round fit ass. Although Paige had as just an attractive body, she felt dull in comparison to Lily. She never once thought if turning back. The temptation was too much for her to bare. She had to continue on their adventure. When rounding a corner, Lily stooped Paige with her arm. "Shhh." She said, worried. Paige couldnt hear anything but the sound of her hear beating. Lilly lead them into a nearby supply closet, and shut the door quickly and quietly, pressing their bodies against one another . Lillys breasts were pressing against Paiges back. Suddenly Paige spun around, and their lips met. Paige looked away, blushing, as did Lilly. Then when the coast was clear, they began to nove out. ~~ No voting, just offer suggestions to future installments

10-30-2013, 08:16 PM	#15
Nakedwriter Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 45	Lilly walked onward, sweat dripping from every pore imaginable. They were only four doors untill they were in the gym lobby. It was normally a short distance, but being naked made it as if every step was a mile to cross. Upon glancing at a window, she noticed a classroom was empty, and she couldnt resist the urge. "Follow me." She said, leading Paige into a Chemistry room. In a desk she saw what she wanted. "Paige, are you kinky?" Paige nodded, not knowing what was going to happen. Then lilly tied her arms and legs to desks to where her legs were wide open. Next she poured Babyoil all over Paige, and rubbed it. Paige only responded with mild groans and her nipples becoming hard. Lilly took pictures of the erotic sight, then set it up her phone to record her. Lilly began to lick Paige. Paige pulled on the restraints, liftimg her off the floor. Neither knew why they started, or why they filmed it, but both were doing it without hesitation, almost like orders.