[Fiction] Persuading the girl next door (Chapter 1)

[SwitchDylan]

OK so I've decided to start writing. I hope that this post doesnt get me in trouble with the laws and if it does I would hope the staff would tell me so i could remove it.

Anyway. I do an awful lot of writing and this is one piece I have always adored.

This is chapter one of three of the story. Providing how things go I will release the other chapters if people are interested. ( I just don't wanna be making a fool out of myself.

Anyway. Enjoy:


Chapter One

Looking back I was very naive but I just assumed my life was normal. I was good at getting people to do what I wanted and, at that age, never thought about it.

When I wanted to play with other kids they would play the games I wanted. Of course their games were also fun so it wasn't like we always did what I wanted. But, if I really wanted something, then that was what we did.

There was a girl next door named Kim and she was two years older than me. We used to play together and if I wanted to play army instead of dolls then she did it. And when I got curious about girls being different we played doctor.

When I hit eleven my I started noticing girls more including Kim. She was already thirteen by then so there was something to notice. I took her out to our clubhouse and asked her about her boobs. I was so used to getting my way that it never occurred to me to be shy about it. Kim was reluctant but talked about her first bra and how she was up to a B cup now.

Didn't it feel different with that extra weight bouncing around up front? She said she was used to it now. I reached out to feel that weight and, for the first time, she resisted, blocking my hands and backing away.

I was surprised at her reaction. I may not have consciously realized my ability at that age but I had learned how to get what I wanted. I concentrated and gave her a "push" and she relaxed and stepped forward dropping her hands to her side.

I used both hands to cup her breasts, feeling the weight through her Tee shirt and bra. She wasn't huge but they were still a handful and I was amazed that she wasn't constantly aware of them hanging out there.

As I felt her up I noticed my penis getting hard in my pants. I had only vague ideas about sex; there was no internet or porn in my house. I had recently learned that when I got hard it felt good to touch it. I thought about taking it out to stroke but I didn't want to stop touching her boobs.

It suddenly occurred to me that her hands were not busy and I could have her take out my hard on and play with it. I told her what to do and again she resisted. I pushed again and her eyes got a distant look as she unzipped my fly and reached into my shorts to pull me out.

I had to tell her what to do as she was totally clueless. I had her try different touches figuring out what felt good. Eventually we reinvented the age old grip stroking up and down. That felt better than anything I had ever been able to do with my own hands.

By this point I wanted to see more of her boobs so I pulled her tee shirt up to see her white bra and started feeling that. I was touching skin around the bra and that felt wonderful.

I reached around to try and undo her bra. I had no experience with this and the distraction from what her hands were doing made it even more difficult. I had just figured out where the hook was when the most wonderful sensation started in my penis and spread to the rest of my body. I was aware that my penis was spurting and felt my hips tense and jerk and I zoned out overcome by the feeling.

Eventually my penis got too sensitive for she had continued stroking and I had to tell her to stop. Her hands were covered in sticky goop and my penis was starting to relax back to its normal state.

I was still taking all this in when I heard Kim's mother call her in. I pulled her shirt back down, looked her straight in the eye and told her to not tell anyone, pushing as I said it. I used my shirt to wipe her hands and told her to go home and wash them before anyone could see. She walked away and I put my sticky penis back in my pants. At home I changed shirts and wondered about what had happened.

I had never heard the word orgasm but I knew what felt good. At school the next day I told Kim to meet me at the clubhouse and I pushed to make sure she would do it.

Arriving home I dumped my school stuff, grabbed a towel, and headed out to the clubhouse. Kim was waiting there for me as I had told her. Like any kid with a new toy I wanted to play again so I pushed my pants to my ankles, sat down on a chair, and told her to do me like she did the day before.

Kneeling in front of me she took my shaft in her hand and started stoking. It was better because she already knew what to do right from the start. As I sat there watching her hand stroke up and down I thought to myself that this was the best thing in the world.

Between the tensions I had built up thinking about this and the feeling of her soft hand stroking me it wasn’t very long before I started feeling like I had the previous day. I got the towel ready to catch my spurts and held it in place as she stroked me to the second cum of my life. I sat back relaxing in the wonderful after feeling finally telling her to stop.

Looking at Kim my eyes were again drawn to her boobs and I remembered I had not gotten beyond her bra before. I beckoned her forward and pulled her shirt up and over her head. This time I was able to figure out the clasp on her bra and I slipped it off her shoulders and stared at her bare breasts.

They were firm with no sag at all. Her nipples were larger than mine and pink with a lighter pink area surrounding them. My hands moved forward to cup each one as if drawn to them. They were the perfect combination of soft and firm and I could not get enough of touching them. I held, rubbed, squeezed, and poked at her tits exploring the newness of the experience.

In spite of having cum I was soon hard again but I continued to work my hands over her body. It occurred to me to kiss her as I had seen men kiss women and I pulled her forward by the shoulders and placed my lips on hers. I was ignorant of the part tongues played in kissing so it wasn’t as exciting as it might have been.

I felt an urge to kiss those nipples. That led to licking and then sucking. Her nipples hardened in response to my mouth and she moaned. I wondered if that would feel as good to me as to her and had her lick and suck on my nipples. It was pleasant but nothing special. Feeling her nipples brush against my erection was a nice surprise.


Exactly where the thought came from I could not say. Maybe it is hardwired into every boy but I was captivated with the thought of her lips on the tip of my penis. I had Kim move down and repeat what she had done to my chest on the tip of my glans. It felt very nice and soon she was taking more into her mouth and it felt still better.

At this point it occurred to me that I had stopped telling her what to do. I hadn’t told her out loud to suck my nipples or my hard on, simply thought it. My first thought was that she was just really good at anticipating my needs. But what were the odds that she would think to suck me down there at exactly the same time I did?

I began actively thinking of what I wanted her to do, taking me deeper, tonguing the tip, sucking up and down more quickly. She did exactly as I wished and I stopped wondering how and surrendered to what she was doing. It was addictive having her do exactly what felt best and I was soon feeling close. I started to reach for the towel but realized I didn’t want her to stop so I could catch the mess. As I finally came I remember feeling the need for her to suck the cum out of me and swallow every drop and that is what she did. She continued to suck and swallow as I came down from my orgasm. I didn’t have to tell her to stop as she slowed down and held my shrinking dick in her mouth. Finally she released it and sat back waiting patiently.

Wow! I had thought that getting a hand job was the greatest thing in the world. Getting sucked off was ten times better. As I calmed down I thought more about how she was doing what I wanted without my even asking. Remembering how she had moaned when I sucked her nipples I wondered how that had made her feel. She spontaneously began telling me how embarrassed she had felt but how the feel of my mouth had made her tingle inside and that she had started to like what I was doing.

I thought that interesting and resumed fondling and sucking on her breasts. I sucked the left nipple until it was hard and then switched to the right. I kept alternating and soon she was moaning. Wondering if she could cum like I did prompted her to explain that she had heard that bad girls fingered themselves down there but she didn’t know how to do it. I put my hand up her skirt on her panties and began gently rubbing starting at the bottom and working my way up. When I neared the top she groaned and said that felt like the spot. I continued to rub that spot and resumed licking and sucking her nips.

I wanted her to cum and that probably helped as much as my clumsy rubbing. She began panting and I continued until her hips jerked and her head went back. I recognized the same reaction that happened when I had cum and gradually slowed my rubbing of her pussy. Damn! This was fun.

Despite having cum twice I was hard again. I allowed her a few minutes to recover, enjoying stroking the naked skin of her chest, arms, and back as I waited. Soon she was back where I desired, sucking up and down my shaft. I relaxed back reveling in the sensations she was giving me.

She sucked me non stop, using only her mouth, for nearly fifteen minutes. This was longer than I had lasted the previous times. I was learning that each cum took longer which meant I got to enjoy it more. I finally spurted into her eagerly sucking mouth and she swallowed doing better than the previous time.

She gradually slowed and stopped holding my prick in her mouth as it softened and shrunk to normal size. I figured I was done for the day but we would repeat this tomorrow. She let go of my penis and spoke saying that she was supposed to go shopping with her mother tomorrow and would not be able to play.

It was getting late and I had homework, dinner, and TV shows waiting for me. I had her get dressed but before she left I had her kiss me again only this time we used tongues. I could see how it made kissing more interesting. She ran off to her house and I returned to mine.

[TheDevilishCavalier]

It's good, I quite like it. It's good quality writing too! I enjoyed reading this, thanks!

[dickface]

This is a brilliant story! so sexy and so hot, and most importantly extremelly well written. please write more asap!

[SwitchDylan]

Thank you I will relase Chapter 2 in perhaps a week

[Dareholic]

Good job, can't wait until next chapter is up.

[SwitchDylan]

Chapter Two (of three)

The next day at school I started thinking about how I could push Kim into doing what I wanted, sometimes with out even saying it. Could I do that with others? I tried a few simple things, pushing someone to put their pencil down, or close their book. It didn’t work very well but as I kept trying people started doing these things. They didn’t seem to realize what was being done to them, simply thinking they had absent mindedly done something dumb.

I was also thinking about the loss of my afternoon play time with Kim. It never occurred to me that I could have tried with another girl; At that point I was fixated on Kim and did not want anyone else.

By the end of the day I had learned how to get people to do innocuous things, scratching their ear, shuffling their feet, simply by thinking and giving them a “push”. I didn’t try anything that would be obvious as I was worried about being caught. Of course a teacher would never have figured out I was doing anything but at that age I believed teachers had some mysterious method of finding these things out.

After school I played by myself in too much of a bad mood to go looking for friends. My prick was hard thinking about what I would be doing if Kim was home and finally, in desperation, I took it out and began stroking it as she had. It was nothing compared to her hands, much less her lips, but I quickly shot a load into a tissue. After that I was able to concentrate on homework and the rest of the evening.

The next day I continued to practice controlling people. At lunch I sat with one of the guys from my class and pushed him to tell me what he knew about sex. He didn’t know much and I wasn’t sure if I believed it all. He did talk about putting a penis inside a girls pussy and that was how babies were made. I thought about that and the idea of Kim being pregnant and decided not to risk it. I was pretty happy with what we were doing and didn’t feel any need to try that.

Walking home from school was hard because I was hard. Anticipating my afternoon with Kim had my dick making a tent in my pants and me looking forward to releasing it. I dumped my books and headed out to the playhouse. She was not there and for a moment I envisioned a repeat of yesterday but then she came bouncing in and stood there waiting.

This time I took my pants and underwear completely off before sitting down. She kneeled between my legs and started sucking. I was breathing hard in a minute and spurting into her mouth in two. I had her keep going and I thought that as I had missed yesterday I deserved a second cum. I only partially softened but soon she had me completely hard again and was sucking up and down vigorously.

At this point I was more relaxed and enjoying the look of her lips going up and down my wet shaft. Her cheeks were caved in from the suction she was applying and I could feel drool running down my balls. Her eyes were closed and she worked me up and down with a patient determination.

After five minutes I was starting to feel really good and knew that if she kept up this pace I would be cumming again. I had her slow down to prolong the feeling. In spite of the slower pace the sensations she was giving me became so strong it was all I could do to resist. My hips started to move trying to get her to stroke faster and I had to fight to control them.

When I could stand it no longer I had her resume the rapid up and down sucking. In three strokes I began spasm into her lips. After the last spurt she sucked hard on the head and my whole body jerked from the sensation. She gave a final swallow and than sat back waiting.

I lay there panting as if I had been the one working instead of having it done for me. Eventually I calmed down and thought about how I had cum two times in a row. I was learning new things each day.

Yesterday and today I had been planning what I wanted to do the next time we were together. I had her start undressing and sat back to enjoy the show. She didn't stop until she was entirely nude and then I had her lay on the floor.

I moved forward to kneel next to her and stared down at her body. Her breasts had flattened out and didn't look as big. Her pussy had changed since the last time I had seen it years ago. She had hare down there and the lips were fuller and darker.

She looked up at me and spoke for the first time, saying please don't fuck me. I told her I was not going to fuck her but would make her feel good like I had previously. She relaxed and said OK. Leaning over I kissed her on the lips while my hand began rubbing her boobs.

I kissed my way down to her nipples and began to suck and lick them. My hand slid down across her belly and cupped her mound. I know, I should have stroked up and down her thighs but what did I know about foreplay? The last time I had done this she still had her panties on and it was certainly more exciting to feel her naked pussy.

I continued to nuzzle and suck on her tits as my hand began to explore her slit. Without the panties there was much more to feel and explore. There were outer lips, inner lips, now getting slippery, and down below an opening. Was this where a penis went to make babies? She tensed up when I slid a finger into her opening but then relaxed as I worked just the tip inside her. I would have to study this more but for now I wanted her to cum.

Remembering the “spot”, I worked my way back up her slit until I found a bump. She inhaled sharply when I touched it and I began rubbing it gently with my slippery fingers. Kim began to breath faster and after a minute began moving her hips in response to my stimulation. Her movements grew more violent and eventually she arched upward, moaned, and then relaxed. I slowed and then stopped my fingering and sat up to look at her.

I felt a strong sense of pride ad being able to make her cum like that. If it felt anything like what she did for me then I knew she must be feeling pretty good right now. I was going to wait a few minutes and then have her suck me because I was hard again.

But then I wondered if she could cum twice like I had. I started rubbing up and down her slit again and when my fingers were wet again I moved them to her clit. She responded quickly and in just a few minutes of rubbing her hips were moving again. I was enjoying looking at her pussy as I rubbed it. The inner lips were bigger and darker and she glistened with wetness. In less than two minutes she was cumming again.

It took me longer to cum each time until I finally had to take a break to recover but she seemed to take less time! Could she cum again? I wet my thumb and put it on her clit and began rubbing it in circular motions. She responded immediately. I was shocked when I felt her hand reach out and grab my erection. I had not even been thinking of her doing that. She began stroking up and down with her hand as I continued to rub her bump.

Stretching my index finger down I inserted just the tip into her hole and she came again! I began stroking my index finger in and out of her opening while my thumb continued to rub her clit and she came two more times. Then it was all too much for me and I shot off. She aimed my cum onto her chest and, as her hips churned, as we both came.

Finally I stopped rubbing her and lay down next to her. I think she could have continued but I lay there not wanting to move. Eventually she got up, found thee towel from two days ago and began cleaning herself. Kim dressed and then came over to me, kissed my on the lips, and then left.

What was weird was that I was not pushing her to do any of this. Having her active cooperation was new but I wasn’t complaining. I used the same towel to wipe the tip of my penis, got dressed and went home. I dumped the towel in the laundry. All through dinner and the evening I wondered what would be next.

[dickface]

this story is soo good, it turns me on so much! please continue as soon as you can.

[masters_kitten]

More pleeeeease im begging here x

[Dareholic]

Good story, keep it up.

[SwitchDylan]

Chapter 3 - The Final chapter

During school the next day I continued to practice my ability. At lunch I sat with another older boy and again pushed him to tell me more about sex. He seemed more sure of himself. His parents had the talk with him and had given him a booklet that explained more.

Perhaps because I was young, or because of what Kim and I were already doing together, I didn’t feel in a rush to fuck. I could not see how it could feel better than being sucked off and the risk of pregnancy was another reason to be cautious. Someday I would try sticking my penis in her but there was no rush.

After school I grabbed a clean towel and headed out to the clubhouse in the back yard. I was shocked to find Kim waiting there already naked. I was already hard anticipating our afternoon together but the sight of her bare body made my shaft swell more and throb.

Again she spoke without any prompting from me. Can I ask a favor, she said. Sure, I replied thinking that perhaps she wanted me to stop doing something.
She mumbled a bit and seemed to be having trouble saying it and I finally told her to just say it.

“Could you use your mouth on me down there?” she said pointing to her pussy. She went on to explain how good it had felt when I fingered her and how she noticed that I really liked it when she sucked on me and she wondered how it would feel if I did it to her but if I didn’t want to then it would be OK but I had been so nice to her.

I said “Yes, I would”, just to try to stop her babbling. She went on to say how she always heard that boys would be mean and I had made her feel good and didn’t hurt her or say mean things and how she appreciated that I had not taken her virginity.

I started undressing until I was as naked as she was and then moved forward to put my arms around her and kiss her lips. This finally stopped her talking as she responded holding me tight as our tongues danced in each other’s mouths. I caressed her nude back running my hands down and grabbing her ass with my hands and she moaned into our kiss.

Moving my hands to her hips I pushed her backwards until she was sitting on the chair. Sliding my hands to her knees I spread them and knelt between her thighs. My hands slid back up her legs, hips, and sides and then to her tits all without breaking the kiss. Her nipples were so hard they felt like little rocks and she broke our kiss and panted when I rubbed them.

Pulling her hips forward I went from kneeling to sitting in front of her. With her legs spread on either side of me her pussy lips spread and gazing at it I wondered why I hadn’t thought to do this before. The sight and smell were overwhelming and I leaned in and gave her a lick right up the middle of her opening. Kim flinched a little from my touch but then settled back down as I continued to lick.

I had no real idea what might feel good for her so I slowly worked my way around licking with various amounts of pressure. When I got to her little pleasure button she groaned and said “Oh yes!”. I focused on it and began using my lips and tongue to explore every crevice of it. Remembering how she had reacted to my finger in her opening I brought my right hand under my chin and rubbed down her slit until I found her opening. She was slippery wet and the tip of my finger slid inside and she moaned again.

I, of course, wanted to explore her cavity. About an inch in there was an obstruction. How would my penis fit in such a shallow hole? Eventually I found a small opening in the obstruction. My finger was slippery enough that I could slip into this opening though I felt the skin stretch around it.

About this time Kim grabbed my head and began pulling my lips against her button. I knew how good it felt when she sucked my shaft so I wondered if it would feel as good for her. Sealing my lips around her nub I gently sucked. She pulled my head closer so I think she liked it. I increased my sucking, stroked my index finger in and out of her and rubbed my tongue across her button.

Her hips began to churn making it hard to keep up what I was doing. She made a small whimpering sound and then clinched every muscle before collapsing back into the chair. Pulling my finger out of her caused a shiver to run through her body.

I sat back and gazed up at her feeling good that I had been able to give her such pleasure. I liked Kim and wanted her to feel good. It was also exciting to suck her and make her cum. I was still rock hard and noticed that I had been dripping fluid from the end of my penis onto the floor. I knew she would need some time to recover but I wanted my turn soon.

She finally sat up and looked down at me. Taking the towel she wiped my face and then kissed me on the lips. As soon as she broke the kiss I asked her to suck me and I sat while she kneeled between my legs.

She went right into long strokes and sucking and I didn’t last more than a minute before jetting onto her tongue. She sucked and swallowed until I was done and asked if I would “do her again?”. As exciting as making Kim cum was I wanted to cum again. This one had been so quick I hardly got to enjoy it. I wondered if we could do each other at the same time.

I had Kim lie down on the floor and then lay down next to her in the opposite direction. Rolling over her I applied my mouth to her pussy and began kissing and licking her. After a little while she seemed to get the idea and took hold of my cock and pulled it to her mouth. I moved my hips closer and felt her warm mouth engulf the head.

We were both awkward at first. It was difficult to concentrate on doing her with the distraction of her doing me. Gradually we became more skilled at sucking while being sucked. At this point I was sucking her button while prodding her opening with my middle finger. I started flicking my tongue across her button and she stopped sucking me. Holding me with one hand she began panting and moaning. This was exciting but I was disappointed that she had stopped sucking me.

I understood why she was distracted and continued to stimulate her hoping that after she came she would resume. Kim came, bucking against my face, and then reached down to push my head away. I gave her a moment and then pushed my cock against her mouth. She took it inside and began sucking and soon it was feeling good.

I resumed licking her pussy and in less than a minute was sucking her clit again. Again she stopped and came. When her hips stopped bucking she went back to sucking me. Again I sucked her till she came and again she resumed sucking. This time I allowed her to continue until I felt myself spasm and shoot my seed into her waiting mouth. She continued to suck and swallow and after the last spurt we both collapsed.

Eventually we recovered, cleaned up the best we could and got dressed again. Kim kissed me and said “That was wonderful!”. Then she left.

As she walked away I realized I had not pushed her once. It was definitely hotter having her as a willing, no active participant. I was definitely thinking about what was next. Tomorrow was Saturday so we had the entire day to play around. How many times could we make each other cum in a day?







Should I write more stories?

[Dareholic]

Nice story.

Keep writing.

[Daresonly]

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[Jonfron]

So. Freaking. Hot. Man oh man that is sexy.

[dickface]

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[krone6]

I'd be happy to see a 4th chapter.