[Fiction] Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot !!!

[firenight]

can u countie the story

[ShinyDemon]

Just to keep you up to date, I haven't forgotten this story. I have been concentrating more on "Sisters Sleepover - The Sequel", as this story is my main project.

As for "The Sub Plot", I am aiming to complete this story by Christmas... there is sadly not too much more to come on this for now, as it was only ever intended to be a short story leading off from the main plot. At some point in the future I may decide to return to this one, so you can expect some sort of 'cliffhanger'.
Hopefully the next part of this one will be up in the next week or so.

[zeddicus]

just don't pressure yourself, this is still a hobby not a job.
We are already glad to know you're continuing both of your fantastic stories.

greets zeddi

[phillis]

please continue

[ShinyDemon]

As promised, although slightly later than scheduled, the latest update to "Sister's Sleepover - The Sub Plot".

Happy New Year to all readers...

The Story Continues...

Simon and Chris, both feeling hot, satisfied but with the taste and remains of their friends cum still in their mouths, returned to their seats. Lauren and Jane knew what they had to do, and they were both already wet with anticipation and from events that had already happened this afternoon.

The two girls returned to the centre of the room holding each others hand, like a scene from a low budget lesbian porn film, but a million times better. The girls were both naked, horny and had perfect bodies, however the thing that put this scene in a different league to the cheap porno were the emotions that Jane and Lauren displayed. Love ? Possibly. Innocence ? Not likely. Lust ? Most definately. More than any of these was the look that only two true friends can exchange - a look that says 'I'm here for you', and 'it will be alright'.
Jane and Lauren exchanged a passionate kiss and then, eyes locked onto each other, lowered themselves onto the carpet. They kissed again, and touched each others bodies as they did this. Lauren, who was on top of Jane, sat up straddling Jane, pussies nearly but not quite touching. She looked around the room and saw the four naked onlookers staring back at her. Jack and Dave, having longer to recover, already had full-sized erections, and were gently stroking them. Even Chris and Simon, who had only just cum, already had semi-hard ons.

Lauren manouvered herself so that she had turned around, and wiggled backwards so that her slit was now above Jane's face. Jane lent forward and kissed Lauren on her moist pussy lips. Even though Lauren was half expecting this, it still took her by surprise and she gasped slightly at her friends contact. Lauren lent forward and positioned her own mouth close to her friends vagina, and returned the kiss. From the view that he had, Simon admired the way that the two girls brests pressed against each other's torso.

The girls continued to kiss each other's pussies, first just quick pecks, but over the course of a few minutes these developed into longer, more passionate kisses. Again, as time went on, the boys could see the occasional glimpse of tongue as it darted in and out of each other.

As great as this was to watch, from the chairs that the guys were sitting in, the view was limited, and each guy was wishing that they could see more.

Lauren, although concentrating on her friends crotch, had a feeling - almost like a sixth sense - that something wasn't right. She drew her attention away from her friend for a few seconds, and turned her head in the direction of the boys. She could see them straining, leaning over to try and get the best possible views whilst each of them were pumping their dicks. It was quite a sight, and would have normally had her in hysterics, however she was so horny she would have done anything.

"Come closer." She said to the boys, although she could hardly get the words out as Jane had thrust her tongue deep inside her at this particular point.

"Come closer." she said again, with a sense of urgency in her voice. With this she leant forward again and began to lick the length of her friends slit.

The group of lads did not wait around to be told a third time. They moved down next to the girls, kneeling two each side of the naked, gyrating bodies. Lauren slid her arms underneath Jane, and with one swift motion rolled ninety degrees towards Chris and Simon. This meant that the girls were now lying on their sides, but the guys had a 'birds eye view' of the action. Lauren and Jane had their arms around each other, and were each pulling the other one closer. Their tongues continued pleasuring their friend whilst the boys watched and continued masturbating.

This continued for a few minutes, with only some squelching sounds broked by gasping and heavy breathing. The relative silence was broken by Lauren who again took a short timeout long enough to say to the guys, "Cum on us."

"Cum on us", she repeated, just to make sure that the boys heard her request, but they already had, and each had increased the speed at which they were rubbing themselves.

Jane too had heard Lauren, and this request had turned her on even more. She had blacked out the reality of the situation and was fixated on her best friend's pussy, but those few words had brought reality back to her - here she was naked, with her tongue inside her best friends pussy, and with her friend's tongue inside her. Her brother and three of his friends were also naked, watching them whilst wanking themselves off, and she was about to get covered in up to four loads of cum. She felt the inside of her pussy spasm at the thought of this, squeezing around her friends tongue. She felt an explosion of an orgasm erupt inside her, and felt it inch by inch as it filled her body like air inflates a balloon. Eventually it reached a point where she could not contain the pleasure any more and she let out a scream as her friend continued to orally pleasure her.

The scream caught Simon by surprise - he had not heard his sister scream since she was a little girl, and a scream like that would normally have him running to help her, but in this situation is caused his own orgasm to erupt, all over his sister and Lauren's bodies. He was the first, but as both David and Jack saw the two girls getting covered in cum, it prompted their own natural reaction and each of them shot their own hot jizz over the two girls.

The girls continued to pleasure each other - Jane's orgasm was still causing twinges throughout her body. Lauren felt the hot cum splattering on her body, her friends tongue thrusting inside her and the twitches in her friend's vagina. The combination of these fufilled so many of her fantasies, and triggered the biggest orgasm she had ever experienced. Her whole body tensed as the orgasm posessed her body, sending electrical pulses from deep inside her to her extremities. She felt one blob of cum trickle down her cheek and to the edge of her mouth, with just a drop passing her lips, but enough to give her a taste of one of the boys - she wasn't sure which ! As the orgasm continued, she pulled her friend even closer, and felt some more cum that had dripped between their bodies now rubbing between them.

After time, Lauren's orgasm subsided, and both girls were exhausted, hot and dripping with a mixture of sweat and cum.

They both rolled over onto their backs and lay face up, looking at the boys. The lads all also looked content, exhausted and spent... all except Chris who was still pumping away at his dick as he had not yet cum a second time. Even though this could have been a signal for ridicule or embarrasement from his mates at a different time, what they had shared this afternoon created a mutual calm and appreciation for their friend. Jane reached up and took Chris's dick in her own hand and began pumping it herself. With his three friends, his sister Lauren and Jane all watching him, and with Jane's hand rubbing him, it was not long until he too shot his load over the two girls. Now the whole group had a contented look upon their faces.

A silence filled the air - along with the stench of cum and sweat - for what probably seemed longer than it was. The cum on the girls bodies was begining to dry, although some of it had dripped onto the carpet, and Simon made a mental note to clean it before anyone else noticed it.

Before the silence could become awkward, Jane said, "If you guys will excuse us, Lauren and I need to go wash." The guys all just smiled and nodded. Lauren and Jane got up and left the room, both still naked and not bothering to take their clothes up with them.

The guys heard the girls go up the stairs, and heard the bathroom door close and lock. They heard the shower come on, at which point Jack reached across and grabbed his clothes. "Dudes, I wish I had a sister like that !" This could have been directed at either Chris or Simon, but both just nodded.

"Just remember, this stays between us !" Simon said, concerned of what would happen if any of this got out, but especially the fact that they had fooled around with each other. Of course, the fact that they had all been involved meant that each of them had the same concers, so intergrity could be assured. Both David and Chris began getting dressed to - Simon decided not to as he would need a shower as soon as the girls had finished.

As the guys dressed, Simon tidied the living room, and got a bowl of warm soapy water to clean the cum from the carpet. The fact he was now naked in front of his clothed mates didn't bother him any more.

"We'll have to do this again some time real soon." said David hopefully as the group made their way to the door. Each of them hoped so, but whether it would or not only time would tell. Simon showed them out, being careful not to get in view of the open door.

As they said their goodbyes, Chris said to Simon, "Be good with my sister, and send her straight home afterwards !"

He was, of course, referring to the deal that the girls had made with Simon in order to get him to suck Chris's cock - that each of them would in turn suck him off. Simon had actually forgotten about this, and looking back at the way the events developed this afternoon would have glady done this now without any incentive. But a deal is a deal, although he doubted he could muster the energy to collect the debt today.

Simon closed the door and returned to the living room to pick up the clothes...


TO BE CONTINUED...

[firenight]

sweet can't wait for more

[simondare]

fuck!

please dont take too long to add more!

as I have said before I`m simon AND my cousin IS CHRIS!

I have showed him this story and I saw him get real hard in his pants....
and I KNOW he thinks my sister is hot..

so fiction may become non-fiction?

[NatGetsHighOnCoffee]

wow! this is good

[stevie2]

I wonder if this story will inspire any bukkake dares? People seemed to like the idea when bukkake was discussed a while ago but I don't think anyone actually tried it!

[tahira993]

Do all of you secretly want to spray hot cum in your sweet sister's mouth?

[truth]

damn best one yet like wow

[Raging Rob]

Great addition ShinyDemon!

[Billy123]

I love this story, please add more!

[ShinyDemon]

IMPORTANT MESSAGE FROM SHINY DEMON...

Thank you for all the positive responses to the new chapter.

Although this story will be continuing, I am moving later this month and, as part of that, my current internet connection will be switched off at some point this week.

I am hoping to get a new one at the new place as soon as possible, (probably around end of Jan) but until then there will unfortunately not be any updates - hopefully you can understand that it is not possible to write updates at an internet cafe !!

I will endevour to get one more update in either this or my other current story, but just in case I'm disconnected before then, please bear with me and keep sending the messages... I'll read them all when I'm back online and reply to them all !!!
Sorry for the temporary disruption of service... normal service will resume as soon as possible, but until then take the opportunity to catch up on some of the other excellent stories on here.

[midnightkisses]

Originally Posted by ShinyDemon

IMPORTANT MESSAGE FROM SHINY DEMON...

Thank you for all the positive responses to the new chapter.

Although this story will be continuing, I am moving later this month and, as part of that, my current internet connection will be switched off at some point this week.

I am hoping to get a new one at the new place as soon as possible, (probably around end of Jan) but until then there will unfortunately not be any updates - hopefully you can understand that it is not possible to write updates at an internet cafe !!

I will endevour to get one more update in either this or my other current story, but just in case I'm disconnected before then, please bear with me and keep sending the messages... I'll read them all when I'm back online and reply to them all !!!
Sorry for the temporary disruption of service... normal service will resume as soon as possible, but until then take the opportunity to catch up on some of the other excellent stories on here.

fully understand.... could i suggest writing it in a word program (such as MSword) so when the connection is back up again you could post say 3 or more chapters, that is if you didn't already think of that, must say loving your work tho