[Fiction] Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot !!!

[ShinyDemon]

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Ok guys and girls - since the last update on "Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - The Story Continues", I have been working on a little sub plot. This is now ready, and the only question was to whether to include this in the main story or as a standalone story.

After a lot of thinking time, I felt that the main story already has a lot of characters, and to include more at this point may detract from the main plot. So I offer this - "Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot". The link is as follows...

http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=28060

Whilst this is a stand-alone story, it may help if you read "Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - The Story Continues" as it has the build up to this.

I should also mention that some of the characters were inspired by bazman, a fan of the stories. Whilst I don't normally take requests for characters, this fitted in with what I was planning.

Enjoy...

[ShinyDemon]

Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot

Simon could not believe his luck, finding the DVD poking out of the ‘Video-Me Booth’ that had an image of two girls undressing each other.
The excitement on the bus ride home was obvious, although to observers it would look as though the group of teenage boys had just bought the latest chart CD. There were four boys huddled around, with one tightly gripping his latest acquisition.

It was just a few stops until the bus arrived at Simon’s street, and the boys left the bus at speed.

“The house should be empty, so we can watch this on the big television” Simon said as the group walked hastily towards his house.

“Cool !” his friends Chris, Jack and Dave all said in unison.

The four of them were already beginning to become aroused at the prospect of what they were about to see – it could, of course, all be a horrible ploy. However the group had used the ‘Video-Me’ booth a few times, and knew that the image for the DVD cover was taken during the recording session, so they were all hopeful.

They had reached Simon’s house, and Simon put his key in the door. As they entered the large house, Simon hushed the group… silence. That was what he had been expecting, but just to make sure, he called out, “Anyone in ?”
The only response was pure silence, confirming his hopes and expectations.

The lads kicked off their shoes and rushed into the living room.

Simon’s dad was fairly well off, and liked life’s little luxuries. This was immediately apparent from the living room. The plush leather sofa and chairs included two recliners that faced a huge plasma television which was mounted on the wall.
Beneath the television was a selection of the latest and best branded hi-fi and video equipment.
Simon claimed one of the recliners and immediately adjusted it to a comfortable, laid back position. He reached for the remotes, and the entertainment system sprang to life with clicks, whirrs and a few LEDs.

He gave the DVD to Chris, and told him to put it in the machine – this was the first time that he had let the precious item leave his tightly gripped hands, but in his home he felt it was safe to do so.

Jack took the other recliner, whilst Chris and Dave sat in the other seats.

The ‘Video-Me’ logo appeared on the screen, followed by a short pause that seemed much longer than it actually was.
Finally an image from inside the booth appeared, with two girls wearing clown masks. The music started playing “Hit Me Baby” by Britney Spears, and the girls started singing, and although you couldn’t see their faces due to the ‘Happy’ and ‘Sad’ clown masks, they didn’t seem too enthusiastic. Their singing was pretty awful however the group of boys didn’t mind at all, as the girls began to take off their clothes !
This, of course, was what they had been hoping for, but it was actually happening. This was amazing, watching two girls – strangers – stripping off their clothes.
As the first song was finishing, both girls stood there wearing nothing but their underwear. The ‘happy’ clown was wearing a black bra and brief set, whilst the ‘sad’ clown was wearing a jade-green bra and thong. Both girls had amazing bodies.

The second song began to play, and this was one by Tatu. At this point, the sad clown turned towards the happy clown and reached around her, unfastening her bra and allowing it to fall to the ground. The happy clown’s boobs were now on full display, and this pleased the group of lads who were glued to the screen. Each of them were now fully aroused, although their erections were hindered by each of their clothing.
Sad clown had taken a step back, and was now slowly lowering happy clown’s briefs, revealing a well groomed pubic area. The briefs were just passing the knees, continuing their downward motion when all of a sudden the living room door swung open, startling the lads.

“Boo !” shouted out Jane, Simon’s younger sister. She had a huge smile on her face, knowing that she would have probably scaring the shit out of her brother, and her plan had obviously worked. Simon looked shit-scared, partly from the shock of his sister scaring him, but also from the fact of what she had caught him and his friends watching. His eyes glanced at the screen, naturally causing Jane to also glance out of curiosity.
Her mouth widened as she saw what was on the television screen. Simon scrambled with the remote to switch off the DVD, but in his haste he only succeeded in pausing the image on the screen.

“Simon !” Jane said with a shocked tone in her voice. She stepped back, at which point Lauren, Chris’s younger sister (and Jane’s best friend) also appeared. She too was laughing at their ‘plan’ to scare Simon, but also stopped when she saw the screen.

“What the fuck… is… this ?” Jane said, with pauses between the words.

“We found it… at the mall…” Simon replied in all honesty, although he was ashamed his younger sister had caught him watching something like this. “Someone left it in the ‘Video-Me’ booth.”

There was a long pause, then Jane broke the silence.

“Someone actually did this in the booth at the arcade ? Shit, that takes some guts… and then to leave it there… what are they – stupid or just plain forgetful ?”

“Or exhibitionists ?” Lauren offered.

“Just don’t tell dad… please ?” Simon pleaded with his sister.

“I won’t – so long as you let us watch it with you guys. I’m curious to know how far this goes !” Jane replied.
The lads looked at each other, and none of them had any problems with a couple of girls who wanted to watch this ‘home-made porn’ with them – in fact they probably all were quite excited by the fact. The girls sat on the floor, and Simon restarted the DVD.

The black briefs fell to the floor, and then happy clown proceeded to strip sad clown until she was also naked. The two naked girls then slowly and unenthusiastically danced until the end of the song.

The third and final song began to play, at which point the two girls on the screen began to touch and rub each others bodies, which was extremely erotic to watch for both the boys and the two girls. For around three and a half minutes, the girls caressed each other until the music stopped, and a message appeared: “A ‘Video-Me’ Production”.

The DVD whirred to a stop, and the group remained silent – taking in what they had just watched.

Jane was the first to speak. “Wow !” was all she could manage.

“That was awesome dude !” David said to Simon.

Slowly conversations resumed, everyone agreeing how hot the show was.

“Would you two ever do something like that ?” Jack asked, looking towards Jane and Lauren.

“Not on video.” was Jane’s response.

“But… you would… if it wasn’t on video ?” Jack continued.

The two girls looked at each other. Although they had seen each other whilst changing on several occasions, it had all been totally innocent.

“Perhaps.” Jane said. “Why ?”

“Well, that DVD was hot, but I think that you two could do it a lot better. What would it take to find out ?”

The two girls whispered something to each other, and came up with a deal...

TO BE CONTINUED...

[Popcorn]

Wow
like it
=]
x

[myself21]

Awesome!
I hope jane and simon hook up. =]

[Raging Rob]

Wow ShinyDemon you even have managed to start an amazing sub-plot!

[Hunterman36]

WOW You absolutely have to continue

[ShinyDemon]

Thank you for the comments so far - I was interested to see the response to this sub-plot, and it seems fairly well received. Although ratings are a little lower than I had hoped for (around 3.75 from 4 or 5 votes), that was only the introduction and not a lot happened. I'm hoping that this next chapter will get a few things up (so to speak !!).

THE SUB-PLOT CONTINUES

“Ok – we’ll do it on our terms. Firstly, we want all four of you to take off all of your clothes… now.”

The four boys did not have any concerns with that at all, and had seen each other changing after sports and swimming on numerous occasions. They were also all pleased with their bodies – each of them had well toned bodies, and a dick that was at least average size. They each stood up and began stripping. The girls watched, eagerly taking in what they were seeing. Neither of them had seen a boy naked before, and now they were about to see four of them !
They sat there, wide-eyed as the boys took off their shirts, revealing their naked torsos, then continued to slide their jeans and trousers down and off. Without even stopping, they took off their socks, then slid their underwear down and off and chucked it into a pile on the floor.
The four boys stood there naked and aroused. Simon and Chris now felt slightly self-conscious and uneasy that they were standing here like this in front of their sisters, however the imminent strip show that they were soon to receive provided more than enough motivation to disperse any concerns. The two girls stared in amazement at the sight that they were presented with – four large penises, fully erect and all leaking pre-cum.

Jane told the guys to take a seat and enjoy the first part of the show. The boys sat back down in their chairs, and each was now slowly and unconsciously touching themselves.

Jane and Lauren stood up and faced the boys. Before they began, they had already removed their socks and shoes. Without the music, it felt a little strange, but they both stood their swaying, and then began to remove their own clothing.

Jane began by grasping the bottom of her Nike vest, and pulled it up and over her head in one smooth action, revealing a white sports bra, and very well maintained torso. Lauren watched her, then slowly undid the buttons on her own shirt and slid it off. Lauren was wearing a black, lacy bra.
Jane continued by pulling down her slacks, to a round of whistles by the boys, leaving her in a white thong and sports bra. Again Lauren watched, before undoing the button on her jeans, lowering the zipper and slowly letting the jeans fall to the ground. She stepped out of them, and stood there in just her bra and matching panties.

Jane looked at the guys, who were still unconsciously touching their large, erect dicks, and motivated by their reaction began to slip off her sports bra. Simon stopped her by saying, “In the video, the girls remove each other’s underwear.”
Without the need for further prompting, she nodded to Lauren, who went over and slowly pulled Jane’s sports bra over her head, and tossed it towards her brother.
She then prompted Jane to stand face on to the guys, as she maneuvered herself so that she was standing behind her. Slowly, very slowly, she pulled Jane’s thong down, past her well trimmed pubic hair, down past the soft skin on her thighs and further down until they were around her ankles. Lauren lifted Jane’s feet one at a time, allowing her to step out of the thong, which Lauren then threw to Jack who eagerly caught them and quickly inhaled the musty aroma from the crotch region.

Now naked, it was Jane who positioned Lauren in front of the horny teenagers. Stepping behind her, Jane unfastened the clasp of Laurens bra, but rather than letting it fall off quickly, she slid her hands around to the front, inside the bra, and cupped Lauren’s breasts. The shoulder straps fell down by themselves, and the bra slowly fell to the floor. Jane continued to hold Lauren’s breasts for a few more seconds before removing them, allowing the boys the full view to the soft, white orbs.
Jane slid her hands down Laurens sides, causing her to shudder and tiny goose-bumps appeared on her arms, which Jane thought was kind of cute.
As her fingers reached the hem of Lauren’s panties, her fingers slid inside, but continued their downward motion, slowly lowering the panties with them.
Lauren preferred the smooth feel of a hair free crotch, and had shaved that very morning. The boys stared in amazement as the naked, hairless pussy became on show.
Jane bent down, picked up both Lauren’s bra and knickers, and chucked them at Simon.

The atmosphere in the room was now electric, as the four naked teenage boys ogled the beautiful bodies of the two naked girls.

Jane and Lauren absorbed the attention that they were getting like a sponge soaks up water. The boys were hungry for more and, sensing this, Jane told them that if they wanted the show to continue, it was time for their next condition…

TO BE CONTINUED…

[rahamn]

I think this has more potential than the original story. Please keep going.

[ShinyDemon]

Thank you so much for your comments and ratings - I was beginning to feel as though readers were disappointed by this story, and I nearly laid this one to rest, but both hits and ratings are going up !
I'm pleased to say that this story will continue, although updates will be between 'Sisters Sleepover - The Sequel'.

[insane44]

please finish both of them they're both amazing stories

[Hunterman36]

I can't say it any better than wow so amazing great job I can't wait to read more

[Kage]

Dear god, no! I do not wish for you to stop this sub plot. It is interesting and I'm eagerly waiting for more.

[ShinyDemon]

The Story Continues...

Jane and Lauren absorbed the attention that they were getting like a sponge soaks up water. The boys were hungry for more and, sensing this, Jane told them that if they wanted the show to continue, it was time for their next condition…

“I seem to remember that the next part of the video was the two girls fondling each other.” Jane said. “If you want to see us doing that, a couple of you are going to have to show us how it’s done.”
“David, Jack – why don’t you come and give us all a show.”

Dave and Jack both sat there looking at each other, their friends and the girls. Whilst they were both keen to see more of the girls doing stuff to each other, neither wanted to take part in the action – at least not with other guys.
Both Simon and Chris urged them on, wanting to take things to the next level. Reluctantly, both Dave and Jack stood up in front of the group.
The girls took the opportunity to study the guys again. Standing up, their erect dicks sprung outward, away from their bodies. Lauren loved the way that their penises bobbed slightly as the blood pumped through them. She also noticed the glistening of precum that had formed at both of the boys slits.
This was also noticed by both Simon and Chris who, upon checking, also both had fluids coating the tops of their cocks. Neither were gay, but both now admired their friend’s bodies, and were getting turned on watching them.

“Ok, what do you want us to do ?” Dave asked the girls.

Jane replied, “Well, that depends on what you want us to do next. If, as in the video, you want us to touch each other, then that is what we want to see you two doing. The more you do, the more we’ll do.”

Dave made the first move by grabbing Jack’s dick and almost immediately started pumping it, taking Jack by surprise.
Jane stopped them, however, by saying “Come on, that’s not very romantic – but if that’s all you want us two to do by all means, carry on. It would be better if you faced each other and… ‘made out’.”

The boys took Jane’s advice – not because they particularly wanted to ‘make out’, but the thought of watching these two hot girls repeating this afterwards spurned them on.
The boys turned and faced each other, giving the audience a side-on view of their erect cocks. Both Jack and Dave began by gently stroking each others chests, then moved in and… kissed ! Simon and Chris looked shocked at seeing their best friends do this, but understood their motives behind doing so – although both were wondering if they would be as committed to go this far.
The two boys continued to kiss, their lips locked together and tongues in each others mouths. Their hands wandered all over each others bodies, and when they reached the others buttocks they pulled each other closer, causing their dicks to meet as they were pressed together.
The kissing continued, but they allowed their bodies to part just enough to allow their hands to move around and stroke each others dicks. Slowly, and in unison, they began a pumping action.
The guy’s lips never parted as they continued to pump each other. Without any warning, Jack erupted a jet of warm, white semen over David’s pubic region, with a second spurt hitting him on the thigh. Seconds later, David reciprocated by cumming onto Jack, hitting him just below his belly button, with the warm sperm dripping into his pubic hair.
It was only when they were both spent that their lips parted, and they looked down at their bodies, smiling at the splatter effect they both now wore. Only when glancing up and at the rest of the group were they brought back to reality, and they were now both very embarrassed.
Everyone was amazed at what they had just seen, and was equally turned on. As Dave and Jack returned to their seats, Jane and Lauren were quick to replace them in front of the crowd.

“I must say, you took that further than I thought you would, and you were both amazingly erotic. And now, your reward.” Jane said.
With that, and without any prompting required, both girls stood facing each other, their contours almost touching.
As with the boys, Jane and Lauren began by caressing each others bodies, starting with the breasts.
Although not required, the girls spent much longer with each stage of their performance, as they moved in closer and began kissing each other.
Again, they rubbed their hands over the other’s body, and pulled their partner close as they continued to stroke their smooth skin.
As their hands reached the others sexual region, they allowed first one finger, then two to slide into their friends body.
They stimulated their friend’s clit, causing each girl to breath heavily. Their bodies were getting warm and they began to sweat as they continued the show.

The boys were so turned on by all this, and even Dave and Jack who had just come were now fully erect again.

The girls continued until they both broke away, sweating, breathing heavily and gasping for air.

Each girl removed their fingers from the other, and brought them to their noses, smelling the sexual satisfaction of their friend.

Exhausted, the girls turned to the group of lads again, and this time, Lauren spoke.

“Ok boys… your turn !” she said with a satisfied smile.


TO BE CONTINUED…

[Hunterman36]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it love it love it please please please continue

[simondare]

fuck yeah!

as I`m simon also I BEG you to continue!

PLEASE!!! ( PS my sis IS also called Jane! - coincidence? yeah - btu FUCKING hot! )

PLEASE MORE!