05-07-2010, 02:47 PM | #1 | |
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Should I continue?
I was going to try to post it on another site and this site, and I was wondering if I should continue or not.
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05-07-2010, 02:53 PM | #2 |
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The characters are well set up. I can picture what they look like. Keep going. I would love to see what adventure these girls get themselves into.
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05-07-2010, 03:00 PM | #3 |
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Ooh (grrr- not) first response-
In short- no one here should be able to tell you whether to continue or not- ultimately, if you have ideas and you enjoy- you should keep writing even if no one says so- the only person whose opinion matters is you. In long- your introduction already shows far better grasp of english and narrative than most, and the fact you've even written a 'prologue' is encouraging- there are hints in what you've written that you've planned further ahead and that you've considered the characters in more depth than "so and said- let's play truth or dare," "blah blah sexual stuff blah blah who cares...." The only thing I might even add is that, unless it's integral to the plot, making an entire story 18+ excludes a lot of people from reading it who might otherwise enjoy it. If you have the patience, writing alternative chapters to those with 18+ content might allow more people to enjoy your story. In any case- personally I like what you've written and think you should keep going- but what I think doesn't really matter at the end of the day....
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05-07-2010, 03:20 PM | #4 |
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SOunds like it could be really good. I'd certainly like to hear more!
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05-07-2010, 06:52 PM | #5 |
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It seems promising to me.
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05-07-2010, 11:43 PM | #6 |
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I'd say most definately continue - the start is excellent, and if you keep this up it will be very well received by the readers.
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05-08-2010, 01:12 PM | #7 |
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This sounds like it will be good, I don't usually read the stories here but this intrigues me.
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