Non-Fiction: the weekend that changed my life forever

gregghokanson · 09-21-2009, 10:31 AM

This happened to me when I was 16 years old. One weekend my parents left for three days leaving my older sister (18) in charge. My sister and I did not always get along well right after my parents left I was in my room looking at my secret stash of playboys when my sisters barges in I was scared to death that she would tell my parents and that I would be grounded forever. So I begged her not to tell “I will do anything if you don’t tell on me” I pleaded. She got an evil grin on her face and said “anything?”. “yes anything” I replied. She said “ok you have to do exactly what I tell you all weekend long no exceptions”. I agreed because I really didn’t have any other option. The evil grin got even bigger when I said I would do it. “ok first I want you to take all clothes from your bedroom to my room and put them in the closet.” she ordered. So I did and just as I finished moving them she walked into the room and said “ you forgot some” she was referring to the ones I had on. I looked at her in disbelief that she wanted me to do that but she just looked back at me waving the phone threatening to call our parents. So I slowly started to take off my clothes then put then in the closet with the rest. “that’s better, oh yeah you are not allowed to cover yourself up at any point no matter what do you understand” she proclaimed. I lowered my head and mumbled “yes, maam”. a couple hours went by and I was on the coach watching TV with my sister. Then the door bell rang it startled me then my sister says “ oh could you get that please Gregg” I knew she wasn’t going to hesitate to call our parents so I got up and walked towards the door. I first opened the door just a crack and found out it was 5 of my sisters classmates. I then felt the door ripped out of my hands leaving me totally exposed to 5 of the hottest seniors in my school. My sister had grabbed the door and pulled it wide open. “ oh hi come on in girls don’t mind Gregg he is being punished right now.” my sister said. “you weren’t lying when you said he was naked” one of the girls announces to my sister. Another one of the girls was carrying two shopping bags from Wal-Mart. “come on Gregg lets go upstairs and get you ready” my sister declared. So we all made our way upstairs where they took me into the bathroom. I was told to stand in the bath tub then they took shaving crème and some razors out of one of the Wal-Mart bags and three of them started shaving all my hair from the neck down.

gregghokanson · 09-21-2009, 11:24 AM

hi i want to know what you guys think before i continue the story so please reply

ohne_id · 09-21-2009, 12:02 PM

Hi Gregg, great story so far. Please continue writing it!

ShinyDemon · 09-21-2009, 12:04 PM

The story itself has potential, however it's quite difficult to read due to the formatting. It would certainly help to include paragraphs to make it easier on the eye.

Caliboy · 09-21-2009, 01:39 PM

Pretty good so far, but i would separate it into different paragraphs. Makes it easiler to read.

ewitch · 09-21-2009, 02:04 PM

Is this all realy non-fiction?

gregghokanson · 09-21-2009, 03:31 PM

ok thanks everyone for the input so far i will take some time to paragraph my next entry and yes this is a true story

gregghokanson · 09-21-2009, 04:47 PM

next after i had been shaved i was taken to my sisters room. I was told to sit on the bed so i did, meanwhile all the girls rummaged through my sisters drawers picking out an outfit for me to wear. my outfit would consist of a pink thong, bikini bottom, c-cup bra(stuffed), pink tank top, and a short jean skirt.

sorry out of time

monkeysrock · 09-22-2009, 02:31 AM

More!! Its really good start

BillM · 09-24-2009, 03:47 PM

Did they shave your pubes?

09-21-2009, 10:31 AM	#1
gregghokanson Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Bozeman Montana Posts: 6	the weekend that changed my life forever This happened to me when I was 16 years old. One weekend my parents left for three days leaving my older sister (18) in charge. My sister and I did not always get along well right after my parents left I was in my room looking at my secret stash of playboys when my sisters barges in I was scared to death that she would tell my parents and that I would be grounded forever. So I begged her not to tell “I will do anything if you don’t tell on me” I pleaded. She got an evil grin on her face and said “anything?”. “yes anything” I replied. She said “ok you have to do exactly what I tell you all weekend long no exceptions”. I agreed because I really didn’t have any other option. The evil grin got even bigger when I said I would do it. “ok first I want you to take all clothes from your bedroom to my room and put them in the closet.” she ordered. So I did and just as I finished moving them she walked into the room and said “ you forgot some” she was referring to the ones I had on. I looked at her in disbelief that she wanted me to do that but she just looked back at me waving the phone threatening to call our parents. So I slowly started to take off my clothes then put then in the closet with the rest. “that’s better, oh yeah you are not allowed to cover yourself up at any point no matter what do you understand” she proclaimed. I lowered my head and mumbled “yes, maam”. a couple hours went by and I was on the coach watching TV with my sister. Then the door bell rang it startled me then my sister says “ oh could you get that please Gregg” I knew she wasn’t going to hesitate to call our parents so I got up and walked towards the door. I first opened the door just a crack and found out it was 5 of my sisters classmates. I then felt the door ripped out of my hands leaving me totally exposed to 5 of the hottest seniors in my school. My sister had grabbed the door and pulled it wide open. “ oh hi come on in girls don’t mind Gregg he is being punished right now.” my sister said. “you weren’t lying when you said he was naked” one of the girls announces to my sister. Another one of the girls was carrying two shopping bags from Wal-Mart. “come on Gregg lets go upstairs and get you ready” my sister declared. So we all made our way upstairs where they took me into the bathroom. I was told to stand in the bath tub then they took shaving crème and some razors out of one of the Wal-Mart bags and three of them started shaving all my hair from the neck down.

09-21-2009, 11:24 AM	#2
gregghokanson Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Bozeman Montana Posts: 6	please reply hi i want to know what you guys think before i continue the story so please reply

09-21-2009, 12:02 PM	#3
ohne_id Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Germany Posts: 196	Hi Gregg, great story so far. Please continue writing it! __________________ 30 male from Germany Limits: public, messy, crossdressing, pee/poo, cum eating, illegal

09-21-2009, 12:04 PM	#4
ShinyDemon getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 277	The story itself has potential, however it's quite difficult to read due to the formatting. It would certainly help to include paragraphs to make it easier on the eye. __________________ Check out my stories... Sister's Sleepover - T or D - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11496 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=28060 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Sub Plot - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=31635 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Trilogy Concludes - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=107154 - IN PROGRESS

09-21-2009, 01:39 PM	#5
Caliboy Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: St. Petersburg, FL Posts: 45	Pretty good so far, but i would separate it into different paragraphs. Makes it easiler to read. __________________ Im actually not from California, but from Florida. But my nickname is Cali cuz of my last name. I was on a baseball team and there were two people with the same name, myself and another person. So people started calling me by my last name, and eventually it became Cali. Just explaining the username.

09-21-2009, 02:04 PM	#6
ewitch Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: UK - London Posts: 600 Blog Entries: 1	Is this all realy non-fiction?

09-21-2009, 03:31 PM	#7
gregghokanson Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Bozeman Montana Posts: 6	thanks ok thanks everyone for the input so far i will take some time to paragraph my next entry and yes this is a true story

09-21-2009, 04:47 PM	#8
gregghokanson Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Bozeman Montana Posts: 6	here is a little more next after i had been shaved i was taken to my sisters room. I was told to sit on the bed so i did, meanwhile all the girls rummaged through my sisters drawers picking out an outfit for me to wear. my outfit would consist of a pink thong, bikini bottom, c-cup bra(stuffed), pink tank top, and a short jean skirt. sorry out of time

09-22-2009, 02:31 AM	#9
monkeysrock getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: London, UK Posts: 276	More!! Its really good start __________________ Now there's a guy who really knows where his towel is! http://www.humansexmap.com/showmap.p...f6ea2.75805559

09-24-2009, 03:47 PM	#10
BillM Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 66	Did they shave your pubes?