My theory

wicked · 05-25-2009, 08:39 PM

I've noticed that some stories that go unfinished after sexual things happen.
You know, like 'The stopwatch' for example. The main character stopped time, stripped some girls and had sex with them. it ended after that.

'The best english lesson ever'. it ended after the main character played truth or dare in the middle of the school library! They saw each other naked rather fast, and the next part two other girls came into the story, played truth or dare, they got naked.

'The babysitter' ended with everyone naked, and fell asleep. Two fell asleep nude on each other.

My point is, it sounds like these are stories were merely just fantasies. Fantasies that were turned into stories. After the fantasies were over, the writers completely lost interest and never finished

Who agrees with me?

Lolly · 05-25-2009, 08:53 PM

I agrees
But then sometimes the author just disappears for awhile for unknown reasons.
Then they reappear later on to finish the story. But isn't that very unlikely to happen?

interesting · 05-25-2009, 09:13 PM

I agree. And I disagree. Every situation is different. You would have to check every story to see if there is actually a pattern, and you'd have to check with each writer.

People sometimes lose interest in the stories they are writing too.

Here's my take on the situation: a story is worth finishing all the time; it is even more important to finish it when you have readers committed to it, if only for their sake; I strive to take all my stories to their logical end.

Komodo Jones · 05-26-2009, 07:11 AM

Along with that fact, and I've only read one of the stories you've listed above sometimes writers have very long breaks or writer's block. For example my story seems unfinished but I have been totally busy with schoolwork and writing a story for someobdy else, and I still do plan to continue my story. Along the same line as interesting said, you would have to check EVERY story and check with EVERY author.

Officelover · 05-26-2009, 07:58 AM

What about my story?

Yeah, with a few exceptions, I've noticed this in many stories, as well.

LilAngel · 05-29-2009, 02:12 AM

Yes, I've noticed this a bit too. However.... for example, mines. Yes, I have stopped writing it a bit, but that's because of school work, music practice, etc. I do plan on finishing it.

I also have another theory. After the sex part, normally this would be one of the hardest part to write right, mainly because fantasies may only fit yourself. Then, if they don't get enough replies and comments, the writer loses inspiration, or motivation.

Budlightkiller558 · 06-02-2009, 12:05 PM

I am writing a story right now and I am going to wait till I finish the story so that I know it is waiting.

BettyBoop · 06-02-2009, 03:37 PM

I've noticed this happen a few times. Though there are still a few stories out there that aren't. I've seen a suggestion for that "Completed Stories" sections.
Is that possible, because it would be excellent.

jess_i_kka · 06-03-2009, 03:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LilAngel

I also have another theory. After the sex part, normally this would be one of the hardest part to write right, mainly because fantasies may only fit yourself. Then, if they don't get enough replies and comments, the writer loses inspiration, or motivation.

I have another theory. If the story is part of a sexual fantasy after the sex part you usually cum and there is no reason to finish.

chubbsman7 · 06-06-2009, 07:54 PM

True that, I stopped my first story because...

1. I don't like it.

2. It got gay.

Just because people liked it doesn't mean the auther is always going to like it. In this case this was the case.

Komodo Jones · 06-06-2009, 09:26 PM

Very true what Lil' Angel said, because of a lot of authors and myself included really want feedback but we usually don't get enough. That's why Molten Man is so awesome! I have only gotten feedback from three users and it's been positive. And no offense but I find jess_i_kka's idea a little weird. I would actually be surprised if someone stopped it because they came. That's almost like saying I've thought about my slave sexually, came to the thought of her and now I'm never going to think about her again. Although, she may be right I don't really know as I'm still a novice author, as I have only written two chapters of my first story. But I think out of common courtesy it would be nice if the person said they were going to discontinue the story or go on a hiatus. For example daredaredare is writing a sequel to his popular story "John's Slavery" but he clearly said up front that it is a teaser and may not be completed. A main theory I have as to why people stop their stories is that they run out of ideas and don't know where to go from where they stopped. Instead of racking their brains looking for where to go they just give up.

Tony12 · 06-07-2009, 03:35 AM

Well the actual reason i stopped the stopwatch (no puns intended) was because recently i've had exams and at my last post i had began my preparation for exams. The reason i did not continue the stopwatch was because the thread was sort of dead and I didn't feel like reviving it. I may in the near future revive the stopwatch and finish it. But i will not do this until i have finished my current story

05-25-2009, 08:39 PM	#1
wicked getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 287	My theory I've noticed that some stories that go unfinished after sexual things happen. You know, like 'The stopwatch' for example. The main character stopped time, stripped some girls and had sex with them. it ended after that. 'The best english lesson ever'. it ended after the main character played truth or dare in the middle of the school library! They saw each other naked rather fast, and the next part two other girls came into the story, played truth or dare, they got naked. 'The babysitter' ended with everyone naked, and fell asleep. Two fell asleep nude on each other. My point is, it sounds like these are stories were merely just fantasies. Fantasies that were turned into stories. After the fantasies were over, the writers completely lost interest and never finished Who agrees with me? __________________ Camping Trip Last updated 9/12/09 The sequel to This Babysitting Job Isn't Working Out is here http://getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=30537 The first part is done and will not be updated, despite how I said I would write more on it. http://getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=19550 Nude Punishment Enforced By Law Will be finished in the near future http://getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=23122

05-25-2009, 08:53 PM	#2
Lolly getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Nowhere in particular Posts: 456 Blog Entries: 11	I agrees But then sometimes the author just disappears for awhile for unknown reasons. Then they reappear later on to finish the story. But isn't that very unlikely to happen? __________________ Peanut butter jelly time! Do you want fries with that?

05-25-2009, 09:13 PM	#3
interesting getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Somewhere between here and there, in Quebec, Canada... Posts: 1,662 Blog Entries: 27	I agree. And I disagree. Every situation is different. You would have to check every story to see if there is actually a pattern, and you'd have to check with each writer. People sometimes lose interest in the stories they are writing too. Here's my take on the situation: a story is worth finishing all the time; it is even more important to finish it when you have readers committed to it, if only for their sake; I strive to take all my stories to their logical end. __________________ You can visit my erotic stories website at: interestinglifestories.weebly.com This link can get you to all of my stories on this site as well: *Blog for my GD stories*

05-26-2009, 07:11 AM	#4
Komodo Jones getDare Succubus Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: in your fantasies...it's ok you can admit it Posts: 1,755 Blog Entries: 97	Along with that fact, and I've only read one of the stories you've listed above sometimes writers have very long breaks or writer's block. For example my story seems unfinished but I have been totally busy with schoolwork and writing a story for someobdy else, and I still do plan to continue my story. Along the same line as interesting said, you would have to check EVERY story and check with EVERY author. __________________ KJ 38/male/partially bi/switch D/s Status: Protector, Dom and Daddy of pixie.dust I love meeting new, nice, smart people. I communicate through Discord mainly. What are my limits/likes/supplies? Click here! Check Out my Literary Works Targeting the Ignored [Fiction] Some Stuff I've Done (Non-Fiction)

05-26-2009, 07:58 AM	#5
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	What about my story? Yeah, with a few exceptions, I've noticed this in many stories, as well. __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

05-29-2009, 02:12 AM	#6
LilAngel getDare Addict Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 2,171 Blog Entries: 44	Yes, I've noticed this a bit too. However.... for example, mines. Yes, I have stopped writing it a bit, but that's because of school work, music practice, etc. I do plan on finishing it. I also have another theory. After the sex part, normally this would be one of the hardest part to write right, mainly because fantasies may only fit yourself. Then, if they don't get enough replies and comments, the writer loses inspiration, or motivation. __________________ With love, from your favourite administrator. ♥ 8==========)~~~~~~~~ WORSHIPS KANGAROOS

06-02-2009, 12:05 PM	#7
Budlightkiller558 Account Banned Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 15	I agree I am writing a story right now and I am going to wait till I finish the story so that I know it is waiting. __________________ limits: family, public nudity, a lot of pain, older then 16 years old. I do have webcam but not always used. Love: solo dares in my room. Boy/13/USA looking for slaves that r 12-14. Not big things already have couple. I have slaves I want to give away for free.

06-02-2009, 03:37 PM	#8
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	I've noticed this happen a few times. Though there are still a few stories out there that aren't. I've seen a suggestion for that "Completed Stories" sections. Is that possible, because it would be excellent. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

06-06-2009, 07:54 PM	#10
chubbsman7 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Kingdom of Talossa Territory, Antarctica. Posts: 231	True that, I stopped my first story because... 1. I don't like it. 2. It got gay. Just because people liked it doesn't mean the auther is always going to like it. In this case this was the case.

06-06-2009, 09:26 PM	#11
Komodo Jones getDare Succubus Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: in your fantasies...it's ok you can admit it Posts: 1,755 Blog Entries: 97	Very true what Lil' Angel said, because of a lot of authors and myself included really want feedback but we usually don't get enough. That's why Molten Man is so awesome! I have only gotten feedback from three users and it's been positive. And no offense but I find jess_i_kka's idea a little weird. I would actually be surprised if someone stopped it because they came. That's almost like saying I've thought about my slave sexually, came to the thought of her and now I'm never going to think about her again. Although, she may be right I don't really know as I'm still a novice author, as I have only written two chapters of my first story. But I think out of common courtesy it would be nice if the person said they were going to discontinue the story or go on a hiatus. For example daredaredare is writing a sequel to his popular story "John's Slavery" but he clearly said up front that it is a teaser and may not be completed. A main theory I have as to why people stop their stories is that they run out of ideas and don't know where to go from where they stopped. Instead of racking their brains looking for where to go they just give up. __________________ KJ 38/male/partially bi/switch D/s Status: Protector, Dom and Daddy of pixie.dust I love meeting new, nice, smart people. I communicate through Discord mainly. What are my limits/likes/supplies? Click here! Check Out my Literary Works Targeting the Ignored [Fiction] Some Stuff I've Done (Non-Fiction)

06-07-2009, 03:35 AM	#12
Tony12 Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Why do you care :S? Posts: 154 Blog Entries: 1	Well the actual reason i stopped the stopwatch (no puns intended) was because recently i've had exams and at my last post i had began my preparation for exams. The reason i did not continue the stopwatch was because the thread was sort of dead and I didn't feel like reviving it. I may in the near future revive the stopwatch and finish it. But i will not do this until i have finished my current story __________________ It is far more difficult to be simple than to be complicated.