The Game With The Girl Next Door (Non Fiction) - Page 2

interesting · 01-16-2009, 11:29 PM

Personnally, I had no problem with the time frame. At first, it was somewhat confusing, but then I realized she was retelling a memory.

Anyway, that's it. I'll do like everyone else now.

This is good, please continue, I can't wait for the next part

(Satire is the sincerest form of flattery.)

rpUral · 01-17-2009, 05:21 AM

Don't cut things out just because some of us are more dense than others, and the italics did really help me get the context in the end.

And now I want to hear the winter story as well.

mixdfet · 01-19-2009, 09:26 AM

Love it.
Wish I'd been in Jason's shoes ...
... maybe I am in a similar position ...

01-16-2009, 11:29 PM	#16
interesting getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Somewhere between here and there, in Quebec, Canada... Posts: 1,662 Blog Entries: 27	Personnally, I had no problem with the time frame. At first, it was somewhat confusing, but then I realized she was retelling a memory. Anyway, that's it. I'll do like everyone else now. This is good, please continue, I can't wait for the next part (Satire is the sincerest form of flattery.) __________________ You can visit my erotic stories website at: interestinglifestories.weebly.com This link can get you to all of my stories on this site as well: *Blog for my GD stories*

01-17-2009, 05:21 AM	#17
rpUral Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Minnesota, USA Posts: 255	Don't cut things out just because some of us are more dense than others, and the italics did really help me get the context in the end. And now I want to hear the winter story as well. __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] Looking for something to read? Try these: "Rising Sun" - "The Dinner Party" - "A Day on the Beach" - "The Trap"

01-19-2009, 09:26 AM	#18
mixdfet Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Yorkshire, England Posts: 5	Love it. Wish I'd been in Jason's shoes ... ... maybe I am in a similar position ...