John's Slavery

[Pikachu]

Very very good please continue

[Officelover]

One word: CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!

[Phoenix_blaze]

One of the best stories i ever read here - keep them coming!

[glasssbottle174]

This has to be the best story ever. It has bits of everything, and the description is a+

[Smile]

really really good work

My current favorite story that is still being written

[coolio5]

wow...amazing

16 characters

[daredaredare]

Originally Posted by coolio5

wow...amazing

16 characters

Yeah, I wouldn't be surprised if that was the number. But many characters have and will only appear once.

The only characters you really need to remember are

John- the slave, obviously by the title.
Marie- His main master, has full control over him.
Jamie- a slave of Marie's friend. John has a special relationship with her.
Michelle- Marie's new slave
Alyssa- well, you'll find out soon enough why she is so very, VERY important.

I should have the next piece written pretty soon.

[Smile]

Originally Posted by daredaredare

Alyssa- well, you'll find out soon enough why she is so very, VERY important.

Please dont say any more twists are going to happen things are better when they are unexpected.

The sixth sense was ruined for me because my dad said there was a big twist that i will never guess. Well, i guessed it and also got it right. Double

Great story though, and i cant wait for more

[Manbearpig]

ditto...........

[daredaredare]

Originally Posted by videotape

Please dont say any more twists are going to happen things are better when they are unexpected.

The sixth sense was ruined for me because my dad said there was a big twist that i will never guess. Well, i guessed it and also got it right. Double

Great story though, and i cant wait for more

lol point noted, but if you couldn't guess she was crucial by now, I would start to doubt your critical reading skills. =P

[coolio5]

Originally Posted by daredaredare

Yeah, I wouldn't be surprised if that was the number. But many characters have and will only appear once.

The only characters you really need to remember are

John- the slave, obviously by the title.
Marie- His main master, has full control over him.
Jamie- a slave of Marie's friend. John has a special relationship with her.
Michelle- Marie's new slave
Alyssa- well, you'll find out soon enough why she is so very, VERY important.

I should have the next piece written pretty soon.

uhh...what i meant was that a message has to have at least 16 characters for it to be posted, and my original message didnt...idk how many characters there actually are

but of course great story, my personal favorite

i am eagerly awaitng more

[youngscotsman]

Originally Posted by cheesey923

man i love this story i hope it never ends

all things must come to an end

[Smile]

Originally Posted by youngscotsman

all things must come to an end

first time for everything...

[youngscotsman]

Originally Posted by videotape

first time for everything...

doubt it,, everything created must eventulay be destroyed,, balance

[daredaredare]

Next piece! Its extremely short, but its one of those pieces that simply moves the plot along to the next part.

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Marie smiled at the sight of Michelle sucking John's dick. She didn't even stop when Marie walked in. This was good. Michelle seemed well trained. It was time to test it though.

"stop Michelle. I am your real master, John just trained you. Its time to see how well trained you, as you already know."

Michelle stopped. She was exhausted, and was happy to stop finally, but knew nothing would give her more pleasure then serving so she was eagerly awaiting her next task.

"Now John, go upstairs and get dressed, In fifteen minutes, come downstairs and be prepared to leave for the night, I am dismissing you. But make sure you wait fifteen minutes."

John went upstairs to his room and found his normal clothes and put them on. Then, with time to kill, he didn't know what to do. He looked around the room for something. Then it hit him. He quickly went to the computer, and found where all the pictures were kept. Signing onto his email, he emailed himself pictures of Jamie and him, along with a few pictures that he found with his master. He started to wish he uploaded all the pictures of Michelle so he could have some of her. But what was done was done. He looked at the clock. Two minutes left. He contemplated touching himself, but realized he only had two minutes, and his dick was just sucked for over an hour. He could still feel it, the feeling was simply incredible, so he just sat and thought about the day. The two minutes passed almost instantly. He went downstairs.

Marie was sitting on the couch, Michelle was nowhere in sight. Marie turned when she saw him coming down the stairs.

"On your knees in front of me slave."

John obeyed.

"Did you take any pictures or videos of her?"

"Yes master, all are still on the camera, and theres a video on the video camera too"

"good good, did she cause any trouble."

"None master, she is a perfect slave, better than I could ever be."

"that is precisely why i got her, you worthless slut. Now I am going to use her more. go, back home, go out, do whatever. Wear the bottom of the lingerie you put on Michelle until I tell you otherwise though. Like always, i will check."

She then threw the panties at him, and motioned for him to stand up and leave. He did just that.

At least John had pictures now.