A slave too young - Page 6

cdslut · 04-30-2009, 03:29 PM

Completely love it! I think you should move further back into the slave aspect of it though. I think he needs punishing by the girls, and definatel his mistress...

Keep it up. I love it

Greggs · 04-30-2009, 04:33 PM

the first post was just funny lol "RING and school was over" xD

sorry, i think its very good.

soldier8998 · 04-30-2009, 07:50 PM

i am hooked please keep going or take a few weeks and just finish in a giant post. thanks for all ur inginuitive writing.

Elin0553 · 04-30-2009, 08:41 PM

wow that was sommeee goood writing!!!

manateesrule42 · 05-03-2009, 02:04 PM

wow this is a great story!

TillyII · 06-12-2009, 02:19 AM

Heres the update: Reason I'm on my other account.... Tilly07 got suspended for a week..

Emily, still with her hand down her panties began to buck and moan until she finally collapsed onto the chair heaving for air. Amy, still drained from the experience, got up and walked to the kitchen while Nick stared at Emily who had just came from watching them. Nick then rose from the bed and walked up to Emily who he lightly kissed on the on the lips before walking into the shower.
10 minutes late….
“Nick, are you almost done?” Amy shouted from the kitchen.
"Almost done!" Nick shouted from the bathroom.
Moments later Nick came out of the bathroom wrapped only in a towel. As he walked into the bedroom, he saw that there were some clothes laid out for him on the bed and his heart immediately dropped. As he reached the bed he saw that there was a small white thong with pink lace, white stocking with suspenders, a large black bra, a slutty looking maid’s outfit, high heeled stilettos, and a small bullet dildo. Nick was almost done dressing when Amy walked into the room and smiled at what she had just seen.
I and Emily are going out for a while, so I left you a paper with a bunch of information you’re going to need while we are gone.” Emily said with a small smile.

Yossarian42 · 06-12-2009, 08:31 AM

The name of the charecter is still changed from Alex to Nick, but other then that it is a good story. Some puncuation problems, but as long as the reader is not a grammer nazi, people should be able to ignore them.

TillyII · 06-12-2009, 02:31 PM

Hehe sorry, which do you want it to be Alex or Nick? Next post decide.

JJT · 06-15-2009, 05:26 PM

We want nick xD I don't know why but we are going with nick since I'm next poster.. BTW great story... keep it up once you're back.

04-30-2009, 03:29 PM	#76
cdslut Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: UK Posts: 115	Completely love it! I think you should move further back into the slave aspect of it though. I think he needs punishing by the girls, and definatel his mistress... Keep it up. I love it __________________ Limits: Full Public, Shit, Extreme pain, Friends/family, perminant. Prefers: Crossdress, anal, underware dares, pantie dares, masturbation, urine, toilet, private public (underware ect...), Mild pain, Mild penis torture, anal then eat. Got a dare? PM me....... I love shoving random things in my gapping ass hole PLEASE PM ME THINGS THAT I HAVE TO SHOVE UP MY ASSHOLE! I'm a little sissy slut PUNISHMENTS: CEI, Prostate Milking, CBT PLEASE PM ME

04-30-2009, 07:50 PM	#78
soldier8998 Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: acworth ga Posts: 39	i am hooked please keep going or take a few weeks and just finish in a giant post. thanks for all ur inginuitive writing. __________________ no poo,pee,family,friends,heavypain,nothing illegal. likes:crossdressing,anal,water,bondage,light pain, more to come.

04-30-2009, 08:41 PM	#79
Elin0553 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: My home is so impossibly long, no ammount of words or letters could comprehend the legth and th Posts: 103 Blog Entries: 7	wow that was sommeee goood writing!!! __________________ Owned Rainbow Slut

06-15-2009, 05:26 PM	#84
JJT Baby Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1	We want nick xD I don't know why but we are going with nick since I'm next poster.. BTW great story... keep it up once you're back. __________________ 15/m/..... That's all you need to know..

04-30-2009, 04:33 PM	#77
Greggs Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 3	the first post was just funny lol "RING and school was over" xD sorry, i think its very good.

05-03-2009, 02:04 PM	#80
manateesrule42 Baby Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 1	wow this is a great story!

06-12-2009, 02:19 AM	#81
TillyII Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 29	Heres the update: Reason I'm on my other account.... Tilly07 got suspended for a week.. Emily, still with her hand down her panties began to buck and moan until she finally collapsed onto the chair heaving for air. Amy, still drained from the experience, got up and walked to the kitchen while Nick stared at Emily who had just came from watching them. Nick then rose from the bed and walked up to Emily who he lightly kissed on the on the lips before walking into the shower. 10 minutes late…. “Nick, are you almost done?” Amy shouted from the kitchen. "Almost done!" Nick shouted from the bathroom. Moments later Nick came out of the bathroom wrapped only in a towel. As he walked into the bedroom, he saw that there were some clothes laid out for him on the bed and his heart immediately dropped. As he reached the bed he saw that there was a small white thong with pink lace, white stocking with suspenders, a large black bra, a slutty looking maid’s outfit, high heeled stilettos, and a small bullet dildo. Nick was almost done dressing when Amy walked into the room and smiled at what she had just seen. I and Emily are going out for a while, so I left you a paper with a bunch of information you’re going to need while we are gone.” Emily said with a small smile.

06-12-2009, 08:31 AM	#82
Yossarian42 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 8	The name of the charecter is still changed from Alex to Nick, but other then that it is a good story. Some puncuation problems, but as long as the reader is not a grammer nazi, people should be able to ignore them.

06-12-2009, 02:31 PM	#83
TillyII Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 29	Hehe sorry, which do you want it to be Alex or Nick? Next post decide.