Fiction: The Surprise - Page 4

Memories for Life · 04-02-2012, 05:06 AM

Will Lily kiss Dillon?
Lily is completely naked but Dillion had dared her to run naked during a previous TorD game?

I think she "jumps" at the chance to impress her crush!

Will she give up a back-out? No.

Please post a recap of the story so far!

slutpup · 04-09-2012, 04:20 PM

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Originally Posted by cassaddee604

Just found this today& I must say its very well written, and I'm really diggin' this storyline!

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by Rachie

Lovely ending, look forward to reading if she is going to kiss him or not.

Lovely story line leaving me wanting more after each part

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Slutpup, I really love this story! Can't wait for more.

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by slutjuice

Haha, moving pretty fast, but I still like it alot! I doubt it will die.

Yes, it wont's die! It just might be hard to come up with more parts!

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Originally Posted by Memories for Life

Will Lily kiss Dillon?
Lily is completely naked but Dillion had dared her to run naked during a previous TorD game?

I think she "jumps" at the chance to impress her crush!

Will she give up a back-out? No.

Please post a recap of the story so far!

Sure! I'll post one really soon!

slutpup · 04-09-2012, 04:40 PM

Sorry guys!!! I'm trying to get the next part and a recap of the story up but I have so much going on and I have stitches in my ear so I get really dizzy from that so I can't be on much! If someone would help me and get a story recap for me I'll be so thankful!!!!!!!!

zac · 04-10-2012, 03:37 PM

i just found this...and it's awesome! please continue when you can

xxxxxx

slutpup · 06-01-2012, 02:36 PM

I'm am so so so so so so so so so so so sorry but I can't finish the story. I just don't have any inspiration or ideas left. I have complete writer's block. I'm sorry but I just can't. If someone else wants to continue the story that would be cool but otherwise Mods, you can trash or close this.

PerfectlyImperfect · 06-01-2012, 04:16 PM

you better be really sorry. is all I have to say.

slutpup · 06-01-2012, 07:45 PM

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Originally Posted by PerfectlyImperfect

you better be really sorry. is all I have to say.

I am sorry. I want to continue it but I have absoultley no inspiration...

slutpup · 06-11-2012, 02:26 PM

Hey, I can finish the story if you guys can help me a little. I need more truth and dares. I have absoultely no ideas left but if you can P.M. me with some ideas I WILL finish the story! I just need a little help, that's all.

slutpup · 01-20-2013, 09:47 AM

So I have a quick question, would you guys still read if I continued the story?

Difficulty_10 · 01-20-2013, 09:57 AM

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Originally Posted by slutpup

So I have a quick question, would you guys still read if I continued the story?

I would!

And I type some things to make my message long enough...

kmacroxs · 01-20-2013, 08:14 PM

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Originally Posted by slutpup

so i have a quick question, would you guys still read if i continued the story?

I WOULD!

This story is amazing, please continue writing this.

slutpup · 01-21-2013, 09:23 PM

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Originally Posted by zac

i just found this...and it's awesome! please continue when you can

xxxxxx

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Originally Posted by Difficulty_10

I would!

And I type some things to make my message long enough...

Okay

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Originally Posted by kmacroxs

I WOULD!

This story is amazing, please continue writing this.

I will. I'm working on the next part now

slutpup · 01-21-2013, 10:41 PM

I just wanted to let y'all know that the next part is almost done!

It should be up in the next few days!

Kk22riffle · 01-21-2013, 10:55 PM

I would!I would!
U can do it!!!

slutpup · 01-25-2013, 05:25 PM

Okay, so I had the next part all typed up and ready and before I could save it my computer shut off.......

So I'm retyping it now and it should hopefully be finished tonight and I'll send it to my editor tonight/tomorrow.

Just wanted to let y'all know so you wouldn't think I was lying about restarting this story up.

The next part should hopefully be up in the next few days. Expect a PM when it's up!

04-09-2012, 04:40 PM	#48
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Sorry guys!!! I'm trying to get the next part and a recap of the story up but I have so much going on and I have stitches in my ear so I get really dizzy from that so I can't be on much! If someone would help me and get a story recap for me I'll be so thankful!!!!!!!! __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

06-01-2012, 02:36 PM	#50
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	I'm soooooooooooo sorry!!! I'm am so so so so so so so so so so so sorry but I can't finish the story. I just don't have any inspiration or ideas left. I have complete writer's block. I'm sorry but I just can't. If someone else wants to continue the story that would be cool but otherwise Mods, you can trash or close this. __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

06-01-2012, 04:16 PM	#51
PerfectlyImperfect Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: In the mountains, Above the clouds. Posts: 623	you better be really sorry. is all I have to say. __________________ 27/M/ -8 hrs Limits: Family/Friends, Permanent, Blood, Public, Too painful, vomit, scat, pee, too messy, male, Hand Writing, Tooth Paste. I have Mad Respect for Ice20 The boy who came up with "Loser has to.." All other variations are Fake as all Hell. Ice20 I got your back. "Looking for a female to care about" http://bdsmtest.org/r/7551050

06-11-2012, 02:26 PM	#53
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Hey, I can finish the story if you guys can help me a little. I need more truth and dares. I have absoultely no ideas left but if you can P.M. me with some ideas I WILL finish the story! I just need a little help, that's all. __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

01-20-2013, 09:47 AM	#54
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	:) So I have a quick question, would you guys still read if I continued the story? __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

04-02-2012, 05:06 AM	#46
Memories for Life getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Jacksonville, FL Posts: 1,012	Will Lily kiss Dillon? Lily is completely naked but Dillion had dared her to run naked during a previous TorD game? I think she "jumps" at the chance to impress her crush! Will she give up a back-out? No. Please post a recap of the story so far!

04-10-2012, 03:37 PM	#49
zac getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: under your bed. Posts: 265	i just found this...and it's awesome! please continue when you can xxxxxx

01-21-2013, 10:41 PM	#58
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	I just wanted to let y'all know that the next part is almost done! It should be up in the next few days! __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

01-21-2013, 10:55 PM	#59
Kk22riffle Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 11	I would!I would! U can do it!!! __________________ Yes, I am the original Kk22rifle... I lost my password tho Female, no cam or vid! Loves: Diaper, X dress, Wedgies!, pee poo(not eating tho!), humping, bondage, pant stuffing, mild online humiliation, Wedgies! Likes: Kinda painful, a little public, etc Limits: anal, eating, public, illegal, Xtreme pain, public nudity, blood, family, permanent, really messy Spoiler: I.am.kk22rifle!!! Hey guys!

01-25-2013, 05:25 PM	#60
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Okay, so I had the next part all typed up and ready and before I could save it my computer shut off....... So I'm retyping it now and it should hopefully be finished tonight and I'll send it to my editor tonight/tomorrow. Just wanted to let y'all know so you wouldn't think I was lying about restarting this story up. The next part should hopefully be up in the next few days. Expect a PM when it's up! __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.