[Fiction] The Shy Girl...

[sydneyyy93]

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

This is my first story so please tell me how i am doing.

Chapter 1

Charlie sat in the back of the classroom hardly paying attention to the teacher. All she wanted was for the bell to ring it would then be christmas break they would have atleast 3 weeks off this time. It was about a quater till 3:00. She sat dreaming about Luke who was on the football team and her major crush.
"Yo, Sis... you better pay attention..." Said Codi as she pointed to the board with her pencil. "I will not help you with your test nor will i let you cheat." Codi faced herself back toward the board. All Charlie could do or wanted to do was get out of school. Finally the bell rang and everyone ran out the door including Charlie and Codi. As Charlie got onto the bus to go home she went to the very back as she always did. She watched out the window waiting for Luke to come on. She watched her sister yammer on about what she was doing over christmas break. She then felt someone flop down beside her.
It was Luke.....

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Chapter 2

Charlie looked over at the guy she had a crush for years. She was stunned he had sat next to her as he has never sat with her before. "Hey Charlie, Cat got your tongue?" Luke said as he smiled at her. She smiled back and blushed a slight it not knowing exactly what to say. "Say, Me and Sam are having a party tonite.. Maybe you and your sister should come over. It will only be us four." Charlie looked out the window at her sister who was now walking onto the bus. "Sure, I guess if its alright with my parents." She got off the bus with her sister at her stop and looked back at the last seat to see Luke staring back at her. "So, Codi What you say we go over to Luke's for a party?" Said Charlie. "Well Ok I guess." Said Codie. Charlie then ran upstairs and laid on her bed dreaming of what she wanted to do tonite, trying to figure out why in the world Luke would ask her to go to his house. Finally it reached 5:00. Charlie and Codi headed down to Lukes house and knocked on the door waiting for an answer.

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Chapter 3

After about 5 minutes of waiting Luke came and answered the door. "Hey girls. Welcome." Luke said as he took the girls coats and laid them neatly on teh hooks. "We are just up in my room playing a game." Luke took the girls up to his room. "So girls would yall like to play truth or dare?" Said Sam as the 3 walked in. The girls sat down opposite each other. "Sure..." Said Codi. "I guess." Said Charlie. "There is only 1 rule. If you do not want to answer for truth or do the dare you must take a punishment that the other 3 decide on." Said Sam. They all agreed. "Then the game begins" Said Luke. Charlie spoke up softly. "Who goes first?" Codi raised her hand as if she was eager to answer a question. "Meeeee!" They laughed at her. "Ok it will be you, Sam, Charlie, then me." Said Luke. "Ok Truth or dare sam?" Codi said with a smile. "I pick truth." Sam replied. "How far have you gone with a girl??" Sam replied. "Only kissing." Codi looked over at look Luke. "My turn." Said Sam. "So Charlie truth or dare?" Charlies eyes widened a bit as she was not expecting to be asked nor invited. "Truth." She replied in a soft voice. "Hmmm, Who do you have a crush on at school?" Charlie looked up at him a bit frightened at the question. She studdered to answer. "U...u...uhhh L...l...luke." She blushed a bit. Everyone started to laugh but Charlie and Luke. Charlie had tears in her eyes. She got up and ran out. She went down stairs and out the back door and sat in teh middle of the yard crying her eyes out. A few minutes later Luke came out and sat infront of her. "You really have a crush on me?" He said wiping her eyes free of the tears. She nodded and looked at him. Luke slowly leaned in to kiss her. Her eyes widened and she leaned back as she has never really been kissed nor had a boyfriend ever. Luke looked at her then pulled her into his chest hugging her tight letting her know he was always there for her when she needed him.

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Chapter 4

Charlie slowly got up and headed for the swing set. She sat on a swing and Luke came behind her and pushed her softly. "Sorry about Sam, hes a snobby one." Luke smiled at her. "But I have to say that I like you too." He said as he stopped the swings and looked into her eyes. Charlie looked back up into his. Luke leaned in about to kiss her when she suddenly jumped at the sound of thunder clapping.They both looked up at the sky as it started to rain. Charlie got up from the swing chair and stood infront of him. She was still looking up and Luke looked down at her. She looked at him as he leaned down and kissed her. They both closed their eyes. Their clothes were soaked from the rain. They looked at each other after He pulled away. She had a slight blush on her cheeks and he giggled and kissed her cheek. They both held hands as they walked back into the house. Charlie walked into Lukes bedroom her makeup was running down her cheeks. She sat back down next to Luke. "So shall we continue?" Said Sam as he and Codi looked at Luke and Charlie.

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Chapter 5

Charlie and Luke looked at them as if they really didnt want to continue but just hang out. "Well.... I dont want to really." Said Charlie. "Ok me and Sam can go down stairs and hang out and leave you two alone." Codi smiled she then got up with Sam and went down stairs then sat down on the couch and watched a movie. Charlie got up and sat on Lukes bed. Luke got up and sat next to her and held her hand. "So... I know why you dont wanna play..." She looked away embarrassed. "Maybe I just wanna watch a scary movie." She smiled at him as he got up turning his t.v. on he put 'House Of Wax' on. She had never seen this movie but heard it was scary. She sat up near the pillow as Luke sat down he put his arm over her as the movie started. As soon as a scary part came on she screamed and hid her eyes into his shirt. Luke laughed and held her tight. "Its ok, its just a movie. Nothing to be scared of." She kept her head on his chest holding the covers up to her face getting ready to cover her eyes on a scary part. Charlie started to fall asleep on him aswell as him.

The next morning Luke slowly got out of bed letting Charlie sleep a bit before waking her. A few minutes later Luke came and woke her up. "Hey sleepyhead, its time to wake up." She turned over not wanting to get up she groaned at him. "1 more hour!" She closed her eyes. Luke giggled and took the covers from her to his surprise she wasnt wearing any pants only panties and a tanktop no bra. She covered herself a bit embarrassed. "Hey! Give me the covers!!!" She snatched for them to her luck Luke pulled them away. "No need to cover up." He giggled throwing the covers to the floor he climbed onto the bed, She laid down as he crawled ontop of her. She looked into his eyes as he looked into hers. Suddenly the door opened, they both looked over to see Codi and Sam standing there their mouths dropped open.

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Chapter 6

They both jumped up as soon as they seen Codi and Sam they rushed to put there clothes on blushing a bit as Codi and Sam walked off giggling. Charlie sat on the bed as she packed her things up getting ready to go back home. Luke sat next to her and kissed her on the side of the head. "Hey, I had fun with you while you were here." She smiled looking up at him. "Really? I did to." He grabbed her bag and walked down to the door with her. He hugged her and kissed her goodbye. Her and Codi walked back to their house talking the whole way back. "So what did you do with Luke Charlie?" Charlie blushed a bit. "Nothing just watch movies and fell asleep in his bed with him." As they kept talking it must have been hours of walking as soon as they got home Charlie ran up to her room and closed and locked her door. She sat on her bed thinking about everything that had happened today and the nite before.

The next day at school Charlie held her books close to her chest. Soon she felt someone behind her hold their hands over her eyes. She turned around to find Luke standing there smiling at her. She smiled back and hugged him. "Morning. How'd you sleep last nite?" She said as she looked up at him. Returning the hug "Fairly well." He took her books and walked with her to her first class. As the bell rung to go to class he kissed her and handed her books to her. He hugged her at the same time slipping a note into her jacket pocket. As she sat down taking her pen out of her jacket pocket she found the note and opened it and started to read what it said.

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Chapter 7

After she opened the note she slowly read it. 'Hey Char, Meet me behind the gym today after school. The old gym in the far back behind the school. ♥ Luke'. After she read it she smiled up at the sky thinking about what he wanted and why behind the gym. The old gym was abandoned years ago before she even started school. Rumors said that there is a little girl who was raped and murdered in there and she haunts it. Charlie never step foot near it but she knew that Luke would most likely keep her safe. At about 2:15 the bell rang and school was over. She stood just a few feet from the gym she was so scared to go up to it. She held the note that Luke wrote her close to her as she slowly walked up shaking a bit. She went behind the gym and seen Luke waiting for her. "Luke can we go this place gives me the creeps." She said to him in a scared tone. He smiled at her and hugged her. "Its ok." She looked up at him. "No i wanna go its scary he..." She was inturupted by him kissing her. "Like I said before its ok youll be fine." He said holding her tightly to him. She smiled lightly feeling a bit better at knowing how much he cared about her. She looked at him. "So, why'd you want me to meet you back here?" He smiled as he went behind her and placed a necklace on her neck. "Will you be mine?" He said kissing her cheek. She blushed a bit and felt the necklace it was shapped in a heart with her and his initials in it. She looked at him....

Chapter 8

"It.....It's beautiful." She smiled hugging him. "You like it Char?" He said as he kissed her neck. "Yes I do and Yes I will be yours." She smiled and giggled abit as he kissed her neck. "Luke that tickles....." He giggled and nibbled on her neck. "I know." She smiled and looked into his eyes. "Luke did you know this whole time before you invited me and Codi to your party that i had a crush on you?" She asked. "Well I have noticed you staring at me a couple times in the hallway and at assemblies." He hugged her tight. "But thats ok I have always liked you aswell." She closed her eyes as she laid her head on his chest. "Why didnt you tell me Luke?".....

(Sorry Its short I have a big headache.)

[Matt Uk]

Better and better with every post
I love the romance of it it's sweet, cute and gives it a happy, positive vibe

Get better soon

[Star Shadows]

Originally Posted by Matt Uk

Better and better with every post
I love the romance of it it's sweet, cute and gives it a happy, positive vibe

Get better soon

I do second this opinion

[Mackay-]

First comment on the forums for me and this story is worth the comment, Love it !!

[hookedondares]

i love it best bit is that its not just another story it has romance instead. though, not wanting to be negative, i think you should stop quoting everything you have already posted and spell and tense check. other than that good job

[sydneyyy93]

Originally Posted by hookedondares

i love it best bit is that its not just another story it has romance instead. though, not wanting to be negative, i think you should stop quoting everything you have already posted and spell and tense check. other than that good job

I quote it for people who havent read it so they dont have to read and read and read just to get to the next post

[Matt Uk]

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

I quote it for people who havent read it so they dont have to read and read and read just to get to the next post

That's actually a good idea
cos then when you read it and it's like 25 pages (hopefully ), you dont have to go from 1 and work your way forward

[sydneyyy93]

Chapter 9

He held her hand and started to walk away from the gym on the sidewalk. "Well I wasnt sure on how you liked me as a friend or more... But when you said it at the party it surprised me.... I didnt mean for Sam to hurt you hes a snob though."He said as he wrapped her arm around her shoulder. "Its ok... I just get emotional sometimes..." She sat on a swing as they entered the park. "No need to cry though... I know you havent had a boyfriend and thats ok..." He pushed her on the swing. "Well I am glad you found out about me liking you." She looked at him as she came back to him. He stopped her with his arm around her stomach. He kissed her deeply. "You wanna go to my place it will just be us and it is friday....." She smiled. "Well I guess I have no plans for the weekend...." She got off the swing and held his hand as they both walked to his place. As soon as they got there he unlocked the door and went inside with her. "My parents wont be home all weekend as its there anniversary and want to get away." "what do you want to do then?" She said turning to him. "Well...."

[Matt Uk]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
I wonder what they'll do

Brilliant still
please do keep it up for like.. ermm..... EVER hehe

[Star Shadows]

this story is brill, so much better than many of the stories on here, its good you take time to develop what is going on.

[sydneyyy93]

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 9

He held her hand and started to walk away from the gym on the sidewalk. "Well I wasnt sure on how you liked me as a friend or more... But when you said it at the party it surprised me.... I didnt mean for Sam to hurt you hes a snob though."He said as he wrapped her arm around her shoulder. "Its ok... I just get emotional sometimes..." She sat on a swing as they entered the park. "No need to cry though... I know you havent had a boyfriend and thats ok..." He pushed her on the swing. "Well I am glad you found out about me liking you." She looked at him as she came back to him. He stopped her with his arm around her stomach. He kissed her deeply. "You wanna go to my place it will just be us and it is friday....." She smiled. "Well I guess I have no plans for the weekend...." She got off the swing and held his hand as they both walked to his place. As soon as they got there he unlocked the door and went inside with her. "My parents wont be home all weekend as its there anniversary and want to get away." "what do you want to do then?" She said turning to him. "Well...."

Chapter 10

Charlie looked at him a bit confused. "Well what?" Luke wrapped his arms around her pulling her into him. "Well.. I dunno what do you want to do your the guest." She felt a bulge in his pants. She stepped back and ran for the door. He stopped her by grabbing her by her wrist. He pulled her to him. "Why you leaving?" "Because your dick is hard and I know what your gonna try to do......." She pulled away from him and stood facing away from him. "You think I'm gonna force you into sex????" He stood behind her and wrapped his arms around her hugging her. "I wouldnt do that.... I love you Char." She looked at him. "I sure hope not I'm only sixteen I dont wanna risk getting pregnant..." She turned around and hugged him tightly. "Do you mind if I spend the nite?" She pulled her cell phone out. "No not at all.." She dialed her moms number. "Hey mom do you mind if I spend the weekend at a friends? Ill be home sunday...." She hung the cell phone up and placed it in her bag. "She said I could.... So what do you wanna do tonite through Sunday?" He smiled at her and sat on the couch patting the side next to him as he grabbed the remote and turned on 'Saw' She sat next to him. "Luke this movie terrifies me....." She grabbed the blanket next to her and held it up close to her eyes to hide when a scary part came up. Luke wrapped his arm around her and laughed. "Char.... Its just a movie nothing to be scared of."[/FONT]

[chubbsman7]

I'm going to have to congratulate you on creating not only an interesting piece of literature, but something which is always about sex.

Amazing. Keep it up.

I'm a grammar freak (of course), so of course I could criticize you on improper grammar, but I'm not going to do that!

Great story! Keep it up!

[Matt Uk]

Originally Posted by chubbsman7

I'm going to have to congratulate you on creating not only an interesting piece of literature, but something which is always about sex.

Amazing. Keep it up.

I'm a grammar freak (of course), so of course I could criticize you on improper grammar, but I'm not going to do that!

Great story! Keep it up!

For somebody who is a grammar freak, you should have noticed you put
"But something which is always about sex" when you should have put "but something which ISN'T always about sex"

lol just saying

But yeah very good story
Keep it up lol

[eire]

Love it, more please

[Devilstar]

Lol I agree this story is amazing because it's not just sex and blackmail... I know people have already said that, but Its an awesome story