Sentenced to punishment - Page 4

slave_boy · 07-13-2008, 05:01 PM

great story cant wait for the rest of it

molten man · 07-13-2008, 09:25 PM

the scariest and most painful stoary read on getdare.com!!!

Keep it goin

DaveD · 09-21-2008, 06:49 PM

Would be nice if you knew how to spell or even use a spell checker.

Zeromus · 09-21-2008, 06:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DaveD

Would be nice if you knew how to spell or even use a spell checker.

Says the person whose sentence was not gramatically correct.

ramsies11 · 09-21-2008, 06:53 PM

....three things....
1) look at the dates the last post was from over 2months ago
2)please dont be mean to our other members or do u want a fast ban?
3)oh thats just a real nice first post!

Zeromus · 09-21-2008, 06:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ramsies11

....three things....
1) look at the dates the last post was from over 2months ago
2)please dont be mean to our other members or do u want a fast ban?
3)oh thats just a real nice first post!

I win, ram.

Silly people aside we should at least get back on topic.

ramsies11 · 09-21-2008, 06:57 PM

i dont think hes gonna finish the story cause all the bad rep/comments

and i should win cause i put down more!

SpikyToad · 10-01-2008, 10:53 PM

wedgies you have a serious problem you stupid gay hater

ramsies11 · 10-02-2008, 05:06 AM

oh thats a real nice first post!
just...try to be nice to the other members

Wedgie · 10-06-2008, 04:00 PM

He is correct. If I can get ten ideas in the next 72 hours I will continue the story. I'm glad some of you like it.

Zeromus · 10-06-2008, 04:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wedgie

He is correct. If I can get ten ideas in the next 72 hours I will continue the story. I'm glad some of you like it.

If YOU can get 10 ideas....? lol you are silly

Swirly · 07-07-2009, 02:16 AM

This isn't a story, it's a massacre.

Very silly.

Lovesfundares · 07-09-2009, 11:43 PM

im sorry i just read this story and i feel like if hannibal lector and the guy from saw had kinks. THEN THOSE WOULDNT BE THIS BAD. hanibal would get nightmares fro mthis. its not about TorD at all and just disturbing. like im honestly scared to go to sleep now. its a good horror story. but thats it,...

Dicedarefan666 · 07-10-2009, 02:16 AM

(I don't want to resurect this story, if there were a way for me to leave my commentary, and simultaneously banish this to the depths of the stories section, on page 17 or something, where most bad stories reside, I would.)

I like CBT, to an extent, femdom especially, I'm even ususally okay with guy on guy CBT as long as the focus isn't "hey check out the gay story, it's really gay, because i'm gay, did I mention it's gay, it's only for gay guys, that's how gay it is, and I am" of it. (Sorry, I don't want to give the wrong idea, I don't hate gay people, I don't disaprove of them, I don't really feel threatened by them, and I consider myself to be not very homophobic, that's just not my favorite type of story.) The things that turn me off from a story are usually related to the torture being too extreme, or very poor writing. Normally, a story this extreme would keep me up for about 3 days for fear of the worst nightmare of my life, however this one (thankfully?) has writing that is so filled with errors, so little detail, and so little emphasis on character development, that I can't connect with the characters at all, and so I am more involved in most newspaper comic strips than I was in this story.

So far, this is one of the worst stories I've read on getdare, and there are some doozies. (If you like this story, that's fine, it's a decent concept, see how extreme you can make a story, but it's just not for me.)

Also on the comment that wedgie hates gays, I would consider this story (and some of the other stories he has posted on this site (some of which may or may not be of his own making)) pretty gay, which in turn, leads me to suspect that he, himself, is not completely straight. (I can't say this for certain, and I don't want to sterotype him, and even if he is gay, that's not bad, that's just what I personally suspect based on what he has posted.)

dare-demon · 07-14-2009, 04:36 AM

THIS IS NOTHING BUT BULL SHIT............................................

07-13-2008, 05:01 PM	#46
slave_boy Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 18	cool story great story cant wait for the rest of it

07-13-2008, 09:25 PM	#47
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	the scariest and most painful stoary read on getdare.com!!! Keep it goin __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

07-09-2009, 11:43 PM	#58
Lovesfundares Account Banned Join Date: May 2009 Location: indiana Posts: 263	im sorry i just read this story and i feel like if hannibal lector and the guy from saw had kinks. THEN THOSE WOULDNT BE THIS BAD. hanibal would get nightmares fro mthis. its not about TorD at all and just disturbing. like im honestly scared to go to sleep now. its a good horror story. but thats it,... __________________ just bein me =) http://lfd-brodytunis.tumblr.com/

07-10-2009, 02:16 AM	#59
Dicedarefan666 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 403	horrible (I don't want to resurect this story, if there were a way for me to leave my commentary, and simultaneously banish this to the depths of the stories section, on page 17 or something, where most bad stories reside, I would.) I like CBT, to an extent, femdom especially, I'm even ususally okay with guy on guy CBT as long as the focus isn't "hey check out the gay story, it's really gay, because i'm gay, did I mention it's gay, it's only for gay guys, that's how gay it is, and I am" of it. (Sorry, I don't want to give the wrong idea, I don't hate gay people, I don't disaprove of them, I don't really feel threatened by them, and I consider myself to be not very homophobic, that's just not my favorite type of story.) The things that turn me off from a story are usually related to the torture being too extreme, or very poor writing. Normally, a story this extreme would keep me up for about 3 days for fear of the worst nightmare of my life, however this one (thankfully?) has writing that is so filled with errors, so little detail, and so little emphasis on character development, that I can't connect with the characters at all, and so I am more involved in most newspaper comic strips than I was in this story. So far, this is one of the worst stories I've read on getdare, and there are some doozies. (If you like this story, that's fine, it's a decent concept, see how extreme you can make a story, but it's just not for me.) Also on the comment that wedgie hates gays, I would consider this story (and some of the other stories he has posted on this site (some of which may or may not be of his own making)) pretty gay, which in turn, leads me to suspect that he, himself, is not completely straight. (I can't say this for certain, and I don't want to sterotype him, and even if he is gay, that's not bad, that's just what I personally suspect based on what he has posted.) Last edited by Dicedarefan666; 07-10-2009 at 03:59 AM. Reason: first bit in the ()

09-21-2008, 06:49 PM	#48
DaveD Baby Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 1	Would be nice if you knew how to spell or even use a spell checker.

09-21-2008, 06:53 PM	#50
ramsies11 Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: in the little blue box circleing the earth Posts: 724 Blog Entries: 1	....three things.... 1) look at the dates the last post was from over 2months ago 2)please dont be mean to our other members or do u want a fast ban? 3)oh thats just a real nice first post!

09-21-2008, 06:57 PM	#52
ramsies11 Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: in the little blue box circleing the earth Posts: 724 Blog Entries: 1	i dont think hes gonna finish the story cause all the bad rep/comments and i should win cause i put down more!

10-01-2008, 10:53 PM	#53
SpikyToad Account Banned Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 27	wedgies you have a serious problem you stupid gay hater

10-02-2008, 05:06 AM	#54
ramsies11 Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: in the little blue box circleing the earth Posts: 724 Blog Entries: 1	oh thats a real nice first post! just...try to be nice to the other members

10-06-2008, 04:00 PM	#55
Wedgie Account Banned Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 185	He is correct. If I can get ten ideas in the next 72 hours I will continue the story. I'm glad some of you like it.

07-07-2009, 02:16 AM	#57
Swirly Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: London Posts: 43	This isn't a story, it's a massacre. Very silly.

07-14-2009, 04:36 AM	#60
dare-demon Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: India Posts: 145 Blog Entries: 3	THIS IS NOTHING BUT BULL SHIT............................................