A slave too young - Page 4

tilly07 · 10-26-2008, 03:02 PM

Going great? Going great... How can you tell if it's going great atm when I don't see what people think. They just want me to post but don't even show support for almost 1 week! I take great disrespect from this.

georgiadog23 · 10-28-2008, 05:30 PM

this is a great story dont get discureged some poeple read but dont comment

Take It Easy · 10-28-2008, 06:38 PM

Please finish this story! I found this site by chance, and your story has been a great read! I made a account so I could comment on it, and root you on to finish it!

tilly07 · 10-29-2008, 12:03 AM

Ok umm first off Steelers SUCK! JK

DA BEARS =).

I'll continue if I get 5 comments that actually mean something instead of

"Please continue this story is great"

applebooty · 10-29-2008, 04:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tilly07

I'll continue if I get 5 comments that actually mean something instead of: "Please continue this story is great."

Would you really feel better if you received X number of comments knowing you had to force it out of people? I love feedback as much as the next author, and knowing people read what you take time to put out is beautiful, but it is rude to force your audience into kissing your arse in the hopes that you'll finish what you've started.

This comment is more than please continue this story is great.

interesting · 10-29-2008, 04:49 AM

Speaking from personal experience, sometimes I post several installments in line and get no comments at all. Just look at my current storyline 'Trials of Friends'. Only Dravien has posted so far but that doesn't mean people aren't enjoying it. From the thread count, I know people are reading it.

It can be frustrating not to get a comment on your work, but as a writer, your first audience should be yourself. If you don't like what you're writing, you're doing something wrong. And if you do like it, well, then post it.

You can be your own fan and post your own comments on your story, as you did a few times in this. This can create dialogue around the story.

I think you have a good story here, with nice plot points and and a steady narrative. I recommend you keep going, if you'd like to start this story (and us with it) further.

TillyII · 03-08-2009, 05:11 PM

Hey this is tilly.. I just made a new account. So I read over the story again and decided to probably revive it now. So maybe soon enough, you will see chapter 6

cheesey923 · 03-08-2009, 07:26 PM

please keep going i was depressed when your were banned keep going

TillyII · 03-08-2009, 08:15 PM

If they unbanned my original tilly07 that would be great.

cheesey923 · 03-08-2009, 09:57 PM

what did you get banned for

TillyII · 03-08-2009, 10:46 PM

I asked to get banned lol. It's a long long story, maybe we can have a petition to unban me lol.

robot1806 · 03-08-2009, 11:31 PM

yeh continue continue great story loving it all the way through

i dont if people will think im wierd but this story is like wat a dream would be for me lol

cheesey923 · 03-08-2009, 11:44 PM

no one will think your weird thats the great thing about get dare you can release your inner fantasy

TillyII · 03-09-2009, 12:42 AM

Cheesey, not to be rude or anything but your really grinding my gears by pissing me off with your continuous posts everwere on these forums........

Glad, I got that off my chest lol. I'm kidding man so don't take it so hard. Still though relax with the posting lol.

TillyII · 03-09-2009, 01:26 AM

Well, I decided to continue, so I present you all with the next part. Mods can I have Tilly07 back now? please. Besides that I hope you all like it.

Alex dazed for a moment still in complete shock of what had just happened to him. Looking up at the 2 figures, Alex gazed upon each of their faces with fear and stood there lifeless.
“Well let’s get move on, we are going to my house one of the girls said.”
Each girl grabbed one of Nick’s hands and went to her car. They reached the car, hopped in, and began to drive.
“So how did this all happen, one of the girls asked in a surprised manner?”
“Well, I have a fetish for cross dressing and so on, so I decided to go on the website get dare, to find a mistress.”
“I see, so how did you start in the first place.”
“Well…. To be honest, I really have no clue it just happened.”
“How long have you been doing this for and whose clothes were you using?”
“Uh… well about 2 years and I was using my sisters and mothers clothes, looking down is shame.”
The girls giggled with excitement and began to tease Nick that he was a girl for the next 5 minutes until they had came upon a nice small looking house in a neighborhood.
“Well here we are, one of the girls said.”
They all got out of the car and entered the house. Nick began to look around and saw that it was surprisingly neat as well and comforting. He walked around for a few minutes sighting 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms, a kitchen, a pool, and a huge family room.
“Well, how do you like our house one of the girls asked in a childish way?”
“…Wait, you both own this house?”
“Yep, well in a way.”
“Our parents own this house but had left for a vacation for a few months and let us stay here while they are gone.”
“Wow nice said in surprise, this house is amazing.”
“Glad you like it, because you will be staying here for a few days.”
Nick’s jaw dropped right there;
“WHAT, you are kidding me nick said starting to panic.”
“You heard us, one of the girls said smiling.”
Nick sighed for a moment and agreed to stay, saying that his parents had as well gone for a vacation leaving him alone for a few months.
“Oh yah, we forgot to introduce ourselves, my name is Amy and I’m 18, and this is Emily, she is 15 ½.”
“We’ll show you to your room you will being staying in, please follow us, Amy said.”
Nick followed Amy and Emily upstairs and began walking down a hall before coming to the 3rd door on the left. As Amy opened the door, Nick saw that the room was all pink and contained all the thing a girl would have in her room. He walked inside and immediately smelt the fragrance of perfume flourishing around the room. He then opened the closet and saw that it was filled with girl clothes ranging from cute to slutty. He then turned to the 2 girls and took a deep breath.
“Well, what can I say?”
“Giggling, Amy said me and Emily will be doing all the talking but for now let us give you a welcoming gift.”
Surprised, Nick asked what it was.
“Well come to my room and you will find out, Amy winked.”
As they reached Amy’s room, Nick took a seat on her bed waiting for what was next. Amy and Emily walked in front of Nick and slowly began to dance, grinding on Nick every few seconds. All of a sudden, Amy left the room, leaving Nick and Emily together. Moments later, Amy came back with a bag that she laid on the table. Emily then sat on the chair nearby and waited to see what Amy was going to do. Moments later Amy rose and walked up to Nick and began to slowly kiss him, each time more sensually until they were making out. Nick then lifted up Amy’s top exposing her C cup breasts for him to see. Amy briefly rose winking at Nick and began to kiss him again. Nick started to play with her breasts, fondling them, each time making Amy moan louder until she reached down and moved his hands out of the way. She stood up and slowly tugged at her mini skirt which revealed her cute red thong with pink lace. She began to sway side to side wiggling her butt for Nick to see. Reaching down, Amy unbuttoned nicks skirt and slowly pulled it down revealing his pink thong as well as a little white string persuading from his butt. Amy giggled and pulled the string to the side to hear a dim vibrating sound. She slowly tugged at it until finally she pulled the whole egg out of Nick. The vibrating sound began to disperse throughout the room until Amy shut it off. Amy then looked at nick, still holding the egg and began to smile.
“I see, you also like being a slut, but we will save that for later, she giggled.”

10-26-2008, 03:02 PM	#46
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Going great? Going great... How can you tell if it's going great atm when I don't see what people think. They just want me to post but don't even show support for almost 1 week! I take great disrespect from this. __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

10-28-2008, 05:30 PM	#47
georgiadog23 Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: were you dont Posts: 21	this is a great story dont get discureged some poeple read but dont comment __________________ because i can limits: not too painful or messy no eating/drinking poop or pee, and toothpaste i like: some fun/hard dares...nothing that my parents will find out about though

10-29-2008, 12:03 AM	#49
tilly07 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Currently lost.. Posts: 204 Blog Entries: 1	Ok umm first off Steelers SUCK! JK DA BEARS =). I'll continue if I get 5 comments that actually mean something instead of "Please continue this story is great" __________________ “I know it seems hard sometimes but remember one thing. Through every dark night, theres a bright day after that. So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out, keep ya head up.... and handle it.”-Tupac Shakur

03-08-2009, 07:26 PM	#53
cheesey923 Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 539 Blog Entries: 2	please keep going i was depressed when your were banned keep going __________________ it aint easy being cheesey Revamped with a new outlook on this website! Loves: cross dressing, wedgies, anal, oral, bi, feminization, sissy, cum eating. Likes: anything that's not in my limits. Open to just about anything. Limits. Extreme public(guaranteed caught by people I know) blood, scat. Hoping to stay around for awhile now.

03-08-2009, 09:57 PM	#55
cheesey923 Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 539 Blog Entries: 2	what did you get banned for __________________ it aint easy being cheesey Revamped with a new outlook on this website! Loves: cross dressing, wedgies, anal, oral, bi, feminization, sissy, cum eating. Likes: anything that's not in my limits. Open to just about anything. Limits. Extreme public(guaranteed caught by people I know) blood, scat. Hoping to stay around for awhile now.

10-28-2008, 06:38 PM	#48
Take It Easy Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Washington, D.C. Posts: 2	Please finish this story! I found this site by chance, and your story has been a great read! I made a account so I could comment on it, and root you on to finish it!

10-29-2008, 04:49 AM	#51
interesting getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Somewhere between here and there, in Quebec, Canada... Posts: 1,662 Blog Entries: 27	Speaking from personal experience, sometimes I post several installments in line and get no comments at all. Just look at my current storyline 'Trials of Friends'. Only Dravien has posted so far but that doesn't mean people aren't enjoying it. From the thread count, I know people are reading it. It can be frustrating not to get a comment on your work, but as a writer, your first audience should be yourself. If you don't like what you're writing, you're doing something wrong. And if you do like it, well, then post it. You can be your own fan and post your own comments on your story, as you did a few times in this. This can create dialogue around the story. I think you have a good story here, with nice plot points and and a steady narrative. I recommend you keep going, if you'd like to start this story (and us with it) further.

03-08-2009, 05:11 PM	#52
TillyII Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 29	Hey this is tilly.. I just made a new account. So I read over the story again and decided to probably revive it now. So maybe soon enough, you will see chapter 6

03-08-2009, 08:15 PM	#54
TillyII Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 29	If they unbanned my original tilly07 that would be great.

03-08-2009, 10:46 PM	#56
TillyII Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 29	I asked to get banned lol. It's a long long story, maybe we can have a petition to unban me lol.

03-08-2009, 11:31 PM	#57
robot1806 Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 10	yeh continue continue great story loving it all the way through i dont if people will think im wierd but this story is like wat a dream would be for me lol

03-08-2009, 11:44 PM	#58
cheesey923 Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 539 Blog Entries: 2	no one will think your weird thats the great thing about get dare you can release your inner fantasy __________________ it aint easy being cheesey Revamped with a new outlook on this website! Loves: cross dressing, wedgies, anal, oral, bi, feminization, sissy, cum eating. Likes: anything that's not in my limits. Open to just about anything. Limits. Extreme public(guaranteed caught by people I know) blood, scat. Hoping to stay around for awhile now.

03-09-2009, 12:42 AM	#59
TillyII Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 29	Cheesey, not to be rude or anything but your really grinding my gears by pissing me off with your continuous posts everwere on these forums........ Glad, I got that off my chest lol. I'm kidding man so don't take it so hard. Still though relax with the posting lol.

03-09-2009, 01:26 AM	#60
TillyII Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: U.S Posts: 29	Well, I decided to continue, so I present you all with the next part. Mods can I have Tilly07 back now? please. Besides that I hope you all like it. Alex dazed for a moment still in complete shock of what had just happened to him. Looking up at the 2 figures, Alex gazed upon each of their faces with fear and stood there lifeless. “Well let’s get move on, we are going to my house one of the girls said.” Each girl grabbed one of Nick’s hands and went to her car. They reached the car, hopped in, and began to drive. “So how did this all happen, one of the girls asked in a surprised manner?” “Well, I have a fetish for cross dressing and so on, so I decided to go on the website get dare, to find a mistress.” “I see, so how did you start in the first place.” “Well…. To be honest, I really have no clue it just happened.” “How long have you been doing this for and whose clothes were you using?” “Uh… well about 2 years and I was using my sisters and mothers clothes, looking down is shame.” The girls giggled with excitement and began to tease Nick that he was a girl for the next 5 minutes until they had came upon a nice small looking house in a neighborhood. “Well here we are, one of the girls said.” They all got out of the car and entered the house. Nick began to look around and saw that it was surprisingly neat as well and comforting. He walked around for a few minutes sighting 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms, a kitchen, a pool, and a huge family room. “Well, how do you like our house one of the girls asked in a childish way?” “…Wait, you both own this house?” “Yep, well in a way.” “Our parents own this house but had left for a vacation for a few months and let us stay here while they are gone.” “Wow nice said in surprise, this house is amazing.” “Glad you like it, because you will be staying here for a few days.” Nick’s jaw dropped right there; “WHAT, you are kidding me nick said starting to panic.” “You heard us, one of the girls said smiling.” Nick sighed for a moment and agreed to stay, saying that his parents had as well gone for a vacation leaving him alone for a few months. “Oh yah, we forgot to introduce ourselves, my name is Amy and I’m 18, and this is Emily, she is 15 ½.” “We’ll show you to your room you will being staying in, please follow us, Amy said.” Nick followed Amy and Emily upstairs and began walking down a hall before coming to the 3rd door on the left. As Amy opened the door, Nick saw that the room was all pink and contained all the thing a girl would have in her room. He walked inside and immediately smelt the fragrance of perfume flourishing around the room. He then opened the closet and saw that it was filled with girl clothes ranging from cute to slutty. He then turned to the 2 girls and took a deep breath. “Well, what can I say?” “Giggling, Amy said me and Emily will be doing all the talking but for now let us give you a welcoming gift.” Surprised, Nick asked what it was. “Well come to my room and you will find out, Amy winked.” As they reached Amy’s room, Nick took a seat on her bed waiting for what was next. Amy and Emily walked in front of Nick and slowly began to dance, grinding on Nick every few seconds. All of a sudden, Amy left the room, leaving Nick and Emily together. Moments later, Amy came back with a bag that she laid on the table. Emily then sat on the chair nearby and waited to see what Amy was going to do. Moments later Amy rose and walked up to Nick and began to slowly kiss him, each time more sensually until they were making out. Nick then lifted up Amy’s top exposing her C cup breasts for him to see. Amy briefly rose winking at Nick and began to kiss him again. Nick started to play with her breasts, fondling them, each time making Amy moan louder until she reached down and moved his hands out of the way. She stood up and slowly tugged at her mini skirt which revealed her cute red thong with pink lace. She began to sway side to side wiggling her butt for Nick to see. Reaching down, Amy unbuttoned nicks skirt and slowly pulled it down revealing his pink thong as well as a little white string persuading from his butt. Amy giggled and pulled the string to the side to hear a dim vibrating sound. She slowly tugged at it until finally she pulled the whole egg out of Nick. The vibrating sound began to disperse throughout the room until Amy shut it off. Amy then looked at nick, still holding the egg and began to smile. “I see, you also like being a slut, but we will save that for later, she giggled.”