09-25-2010, 04:06 PM | #511 |
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Shiny!!!
Holy Shit... OMG
Oh Shiny, You've done it again sir! *bows* I loved this part, for obvious reasons. The main one being that I don't like Kelly, and while I would love to see her spanked/whipped or something for what she has done, this was excellent! I like the fact that you have removed most of the inhibitions between Steve and Sarah, and that Ed continues to be more of a good friend! Thanks for this! |
09-25-2010, 06:54 PM | #513 |
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This update is definately worth the wait.
keep it up |
09-25-2010, 08:55 PM | #514 |
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i so cant wait for the new instalment........
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09-25-2010, 09:11 PM | #515 |
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MMMhmmm
Shiny, you are talented. Wow.
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09-26-2010, 06:29 AM | #516 |
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Amazing as always Shiny! As much as I would've loved to see Kelly physically punished, you provided something far better, and more satisfying to Steve and Sarah I'm sure lol! Keep up the awesome work, I'm looking forward to more.
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Kelly finally gets her due although she was wasn't humiliated since she eagerly accepted the task. Although her belly must be bulging from the cum of 40 blowjobs, I hope the punishment will leave a "permanent" mark to identify the slut she truly is. Maybe having the cadets "work" her other end would be more fitting! I hope the gD mods have this story burned in a backup, it would a literary tragedy for it to be lost in a system crash! |
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09-26-2010, 09:23 PM | #518 |
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I have to say that was probably one of the best chapters to wait for [not that it was the best or it could have been not sure atm]. I'm sure Shiny has this stored on his comp in a file for backup. I can't wait for the next installments as I know this is so good. The punishment should be a cum enema. That would be the best punishment for not swallowing a lot of cum. Or at least, that's what I would do to her in Ed's position.
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more please soon. luv it.
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09-27-2010, 06:56 AM | #520 |
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I eagerly wait for more. Nice job.
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09-27-2010, 01:21 PM | #521 |
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i have just read both stories and it made me orgasm tice. this is such a great story cant wait for more
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Wow, this chapter has been very well received, which I am very pleased about. I must admit that this part of the story very nearly never was, as I was concerned about pushing the limits too far.
Again, I thought along Ed and his friends own ethics, in that no one is made to do anything that a) they don't want to do or b) will cause intense pain or danger, and by giving the 'contest' that competitive edge I was hoping I'd achieve that and from the feedback it looks as though I succeeded. Quote:
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Sadly no update today, but I'm already working on the next chapter. There are some interesting ideas for Kelly's punishment, and whilst I don't accept requests (as it can distract me from the way I see the story heading), a couple of you who have commented or PM'd me may have 'hit the nail on the head' or got very close to what I have planned !!
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09-28-2010, 04:43 AM | #523 |
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Sorry if i have disapointed you shiny but i am a fast reader and a slow masturbater.
Also can i have a copy of the original story? [email protected] thanks xxx
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:O still only twice i've orgasmed at least 6 times between the two.
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