John's Slavery - Page 23

Smile · 03-17-2009, 10:45 AM

Just No.

I don't want it to end.

Please.

I will do anything.

Write a sequal.

Please.

batman · 03-17-2009, 10:59 AM

youve left it on a right cliff hanger! you should right anouther one from the masters point of view.

well done by the way loved it

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Komodo Jones · 03-17-2009, 12:11 PM

Loved the story, and like everyone says you should make a sequel. However, in kind of a way I find it sad that Marie has to give up her man-bitch. I mean yeah she still has Michelle and she gets to see John when Alyssa allows her to, but still...but that's just my opinion. Well done though, I really enjoyed it.

daredaredare · 03-17-2009, 12:22 PM

Honestly, I don't plan on ever writing a sequel. I want to find a nice online slave and use my imagination on her instead. However, thats alot harder than it sounds, and I can't seem to find a good match.

If someone wants to write a sequel though, they are welcome to, but only with my permission.

coolio5 · 03-17-2009, 12:34 PM

i dont want it to end...

oh well....

i started this story the first day it was posted, and loved every single post.

please continue your talents. it does not have to be a sequel, but some other story.

i have loved every word so far, and this is possibly the best story on the site

glasssbottle174 · 03-17-2009, 01:38 PM

This was an exellent story. I am upset that you are not doing a sequel, but, this was amazing. Thank you so much and well done!

pokermaniac1122 · 03-17-2009, 03:40 PM

best story ever. i think i cried a little when i heard it was finished

daredaredare, thank you for writing this. i didn't like just one thing, and sadly that was the ending. John should either be free or stay with Marie! why a new master? Alyssa's not the answer in my opinion

. but idk, maybe i'm just mad it's over. thanks again, i'll have to read this again. wow... over already. damn.

daredaredare · 03-17-2009, 07:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokermaniac1122

best story ever. i think i cried a little when i heard it was finished

daredaredare, thank you for writing this. i didn't like just one thing, and sadly that was the ending. John should either be free or stay with Marie! why a new master? Alyssa's not the answer in my opinion

. but idk, maybe i'm just mad it's over. thanks again, i'll have to read this again. wow... over already. damn.

Theres still plenty of hope for Marie to take control again. Remember, she still has pictures, and she told John to ALWAYS remain faithful, even after ANYTHING that was said.

pokermaniac1122 · 03-17-2009, 08:26 PM

totally true. dare, i messaged you asking for permission to write a sequel. btw best of luck finding a slave.

hope i can write more to this awesome topic

youngscotsman · 03-19-2009, 03:35 PM

that is without a doubt the best story i have read on this form,,, i loved it

robot1806 · 03-20-2009, 01:45 AM

really great story

been following from the beginning i mean literally started read when was 4 posts old

i especially like the details you put into some parts good on you hope to hear more from you soon

Lemmywinks540 · 05-10-2009, 05:18 PM

dude, seriously, best story ever... why does it end?
would like to write a sequel, I got a few ideas already...hehe

daredaredare · 05-31-2009, 08:29 PM

i might write a sequel, or at least a teaser to one.

What do you guys think?

Convince me.

Coyote · 05-31-2009, 08:31 PM

Well... in my opinion a sequel would be ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC

This is probably the most successful story on GetDare at the moment. Why not write a sequel is the question? What do you have to lose?

Officelover · 06-01-2009, 04:27 AM

You absolutely should. John's Slavery was one of the finest stories on the entire site! Please! Write a sequel!

03-17-2009, 10:45 AM	#331
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03-17-2009, 10:59 AM	#332
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03-17-2009, 12:22 PM	#334
daredaredare Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 199	Honestly, I don't plan on ever writing a sequel. I want to find a nice online slave and use my imagination on her instead. However, thats alot harder than it sounds, and I can't seem to find a good match. If someone wants to write a sequel though, they are welcome to, but only with my permission. __________________ Here is my story, John's Slavery http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=23143

03-17-2009, 12:34 PM	#335
coolio5 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pennsylvania, U.S. Posts: 223 Blog Entries: 1	i dont want it to end... oh well.... i started this story the first day it was posted, and loved every single post. please continue your talents. it does not have to be a sequel, but some other story. i have loved every word so far, and this is possibly the best story on the site __________________ 16 year old male Limits: permanent, illegal, family, poo, anal, extreme pain PM me with any good dares HIGH QUALITY READING MATERIAL: FINISHED "Strip Basketball"!!!! http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11996 (3rd place in the 2008 Storyteller's Choice Awards!!!) IN PROGRESS "That crazy school trip..." http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...904#post182904

03-19-2009, 03:35 PM	#340
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03-17-2009, 12:11 PM	#333
Komodo Jones getDare Succubus Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: in your fantasies...it's ok you can admit it Posts: 1,755 Blog Entries: 97	Loved the story, and like everyone says you should make a sequel. However, in kind of a way I find it sad that Marie has to give up her man-bitch. I mean yeah she still has Michelle and she gets to see John when Alyssa allows her to, but still...but that's just my opinion. Well done though, I really enjoyed it.

03-17-2009, 01:38 PM	#336
glasssbottle174 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 263	This was an exellent story. I am upset that you are not doing a sequel, but, this was amazing. Thank you so much and well done!

03-17-2009, 03:40 PM	#337
pokermaniac1122 Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 52	best story ever. i think i cried a little when i heard it was finished daredaredare, thank you for writing this. i didn't like just one thing, and sadly that was the ending. John should either be free or stay with Marie! why a new master? Alyssa's not the answer in my opinion . but idk, maybe i'm just mad it's over. thanks again, i'll have to read this again. wow... over already. damn.

03-17-2009, 08:26 PM	#339
pokermaniac1122 Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 52	totally true. dare, i messaged you asking for permission to write a sequel. btw best of luck finding a slave. hope i can write more to this awesome topic

03-20-2009, 01:45 AM	#341
robot1806 Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 10	really great story been following from the beginning i mean literally started read when was 4 posts old i especially like the details you put into some parts good on you hope to hear more from you soon

05-10-2009, 05:18 PM	#342
Lemmywinks540 Baby Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 1	dude, seriously, best story ever... why does it end? would like to write a sequel, I got a few ideas already...hehe

05-31-2009, 08:29 PM	#343
daredaredare Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 199	i might write a sequel, or at least a teaser to one. What do you guys think? Convince me. __________________ Here is my story, John's Slavery http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=23143

05-31-2009, 08:31 PM	#344
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	Well... in my opinion a sequel would be ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC This is probably the most successful story on GetDare at the moment. Why not write a sequel is the question? What do you have to lose?

06-01-2009, 04:27 AM	#345
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	You should write more! You absolutely should. John's Slavery was one of the finest stories on the entire site! Please! Write a sequel! __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails