Fiction: One month later - Page 2

youngdaremaaster · 05-10-2011, 05:31 PM

sorry for th alck of part 4 atm, working 9 till 9 at college on the worst version of pinnochio ever. tommorow should be the day i put part 4 up.

youngdaremaaster · 05-11-2011, 02:33 PM

Chapter 4

Joel stopped dead. He couldn’t believe what he had just seen. He closed his eyes as tight as possible. He was instantly embarrassed for ben. But at the same time was ready to burst out in laughter, and humiliate the boy that ruined his life. He stifled the laughter.

“JESUS H CHRIST BEN!” Joel screamed.

“I’m so sorry Joel. Listen I was...”

“Just f**king clean up!” Joel interrupted

Ben jumped from his bed and grabbed a nearby sock. He paused for a second. Oh well, Joel caught him in the act. He won’t mind a crusty sock in the room. He wiped his chest clean, almost forgetting about his chin.

He pulled on a pair of boxers and turned to Joel.

“Joel, listen, please don’t tell anyone about this. You’re a dude you must understand.”

Joel turned around and looked shocked that ben was still in his boxers. He made an effort not to look at the lower portion of bens body.

“I just came back to grab my wallet. Sorry.” Joel picked up his wallet from his bed side table and turned to walk out.

“Joel, sit down. We need to talk. About everything.”

Joel stopped and looked at ben.

“Fine I’ll talk. If you put some bloody clothes on.”

Ben grinned. Joel grinned back.

Chapter 4 part 2

They sat on the beds legs crossed facing each other.

“To be honest I never thought I’d be talking to you a week ago.” Joel said.

Ben smiled. “Well, to be honest neither did I, but ive changed a lot since year seven. I was a right little shit back then. But you need to know that it was just a phase. I like to think I’m a nice guy these days.”

Joel’s face no longer had a smile, but a blank expression.

“I can see that you’ve grown a lot, in more ways than one” Joel paused as ben chuckled. “and maybe iv haven’t given you a proper chance to prove it. But I’m not sure how you can now.”

Ben saw his chance. His insides were beginning to get warm and his heart was beating faster. If he ever wanted to see joel naked agin he had one option he could see.

“well… the only properly deep talk ive ever had was with a girl in the year above us, called Julia.” Ben said.

“Julia? You know Julia?” joel spluttered. “when was this?”

“last summer holidays, she was being paid to be a mock tutor so I would pass history. But we got to talking during a game of truth or dare….”

“You played truth or dare with Julia?” Joel asked, he felt a mixture of annoyance and intense longing to have seen the game.

“Well, we only did a couple of lame dares, but the truths were really deep and meaning- full. She asked if there was anything I really regretted in life, and my attack on you was the answer. Looking back I can’t think of a more disgusting thing I could have done to you. I was a little punk, who didn’t have respect for anyone. But you need to know Joel I’m more sorry than you will ever, ever know.”

Ben had been looking down, feeling intense guilt as he had told Joel his regrets. He looked up, to see tears streaming down Joel’s face. But he was smiling. Joel got up opened his arms to hug ben. Ben stood up and the pair embraced.

“Thank you.” Joel whispered.

Joel’s stomach was feeling weird, he had an amazing jittery feeling, was he beginning to like ben? He couldn’t be, he liked girls. Girls. Girls. And possibly ben?

The hug ended after about a minute, the two boys, not having a clue what either was feeling about each other.

Ben smiled at joel. “now, for a nice quiet game of truth or dare”

WowwieGoesWoof · 05-11-2011, 03:00 PM

oh noessss clifffhanggerrrrrrrr x_x need moaar <3

cant wait for next chapter!

nuditydudity · 05-11-2011, 05:00 PM

Thanks for the new chapter! I'm really starting to like this story!

katebabe21 · 05-11-2011, 07:55 PM

I really like this... Way to go!

pymani96 · 05-16-2011, 03:16 PM

Erm... Continue maybe? Just an idea,
Pymani

WowwieGoesWoof · 05-16-2011, 07:26 PM

^ Rude >.> don't complain about good stories. People DO have lives outside their computers?

May · 05-16-2011, 07:53 PM

Epic! Please continue!

youngdaremaaster · 05-17-2011, 08:02 AM

chapter 5 will be up tonight. could pynami96 stop complaining. the parts will arrive, but i have a job, college and a music venture to concentrate on.

daremaster 1 · 05-17-2011, 09:35 AM

I love this dude! I finally got to read it and I love it ! I cant wait tell tonight!

pymani96 · 05-17-2011, 01:46 PM

Yes, i can stop complaining, but i'm an argumentative little sod, so i won't. There! I said it!
Pymani

youngdaremaaster · 05-17-2011, 01:51 PM

Chapter 5

Joel started sweating. They were both sitting on the bad again facing each other. Joel had only ever played truth or dare at the age of 8. And as you can imagine it was pretty tame. He imagined that ben had played quite a few in his time. And was nervous about how intimate it could get.

Ben interrupted his train of thought with a chirpy voice.

“Ok ready to get started?”

“um, ok” Joel replied

“ok then. Truth or dare?”

Joel looked at ben. his eyes were staring back, so deep it felt as though he was trying to push a thought into Joel’s mind. He was so nervous it was making him nauscious.

“I’ll do a dare, but if we set some limits.” He rushed out.

Ben looked surprised.

“well ok, to be honest I didn’t think you would pick dare straight off.”

Joel smiled, glad he had surprised ben.

Ben started with the rules

“Ok, limits, Nothing that will hurt us, nothing that ruin clothes or belongings. Nothing too crazy.”

Joel nodded and smiled.

“OK then. What will I pick Joel?” ben said as he rubbed his hands

With every rub Joel’s chest got tighter. The tension was unbearable.

“I Dare you, to wear a pair of underwear on your head” ben giggled out.

Joel’s nerves left his body as he breathed a sigh of relief as he pulled a pair of briefs out of his drawer. He pulled them over his head and turned to ben who was nearly on the floor with laughter

Joel smiled widely. Seeing ben happy was making him fill with joy. Another weird moment. In the back of his head he knew what it meant but he didn’t want to admit it.

“OK ben your go.”

Ben didn’t hesitate.

“A dare please. And make it super hard.” He said holding back the laughs from Joel’s new headgear.

“Hard you say? Maybe I should make you pay back for everything.” Joel said.

Time to put his thought to the test.

The laughs soon stopped for ben as an cute evil smirk spread over Joel’s face.

“How would I do that?”

“Well, lets do it in 3 steps.”

“ok then, what’s the first step?” ben queried

“ok step one, stand up, and take off your top and trousers.”

Bens eyes widened as he stood up and removed both items of clothing, leaving him standing in his bright green boxers.

“step two, you stand in the hall way.” Joel said with as little emotion as possible.

“But……” ben started

“there’s nothing about the room in the rules.” Joel interrupted

“oh for gods sake!” ben said in a raised voice.

Ben opened the door, his heart pounding, it was 6 pm and the hotel was quiet but there was still a risk.

He walked into the hall way.

Ben let out a small nervous chuckle, before bursting into song.

pymani96 · 05-17-2011, 02:35 PM

I love it. Carry on like this and you've got a winner!
Pymanananazonanana

Tylerr · 05-17-2011, 04:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WoWaddict

Esta MOI MOI Bueno! Hehe only spanish I know. Incredible! Please keep writing! <3

muy* hehe<3 just saying

Tylerr · 05-17-2011, 04:38 PM

Your story leaves me speechless....
DUDE I'M NEVER SPEECHLESS........

x14353525254

05-10-2011, 05:31 PM	#16
youngdaremaaster Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 102	update. sorry for th alck of part 4 atm, working 9 till 9 at college on the worst version of pinnochio ever. tommorow should be the day i put part 4 up.

05-11-2011, 02:33 PM	#17
youngdaremaaster Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 102	Chapter 4 (part one and two) *Chapter 4* Joel stopped dead. He couldn’t believe what he had just seen. He closed his eyes as tight as possible. He was instantly embarrassed for ben. But at the same time was ready to burst out in laughter, and humiliate the boy that ruined his life. He stifled the laughter. “JESUS H CHRIST BEN!” Joel screamed. “I’m so sorry Joel. Listen I was...” “Just fking clean up!” Joel interrupted Ben jumped from his bed and grabbed a nearby sock. He paused for a second. Oh well, Joel caught him in the act. He won’t mind a crusty sock in the room. He wiped his chest clean, almost forgetting about his chin. He pulled on a pair of boxers and turned to Joel. “Joel, listen, please don’t tell anyone about this. You’re a dude you must understand.” Joel turned around and looked shocked that ben was still in his boxers. He made an effort not to look at the lower portion of bens body. “I just came back to grab my wallet. Sorry.” Joel picked up his wallet from his bed side table and turned to walk out. “Joel, sit down. We need to talk. About everything.” Joel stopped and looked at ben. “Fine I’ll talk. If you put some bloody clothes on.” Ben grinned. Joel grinned back. Chapter 4 part 2** They sat on the beds legs crossed facing each other. “To be honest I never thought I’d be talking to you a week ago.” Joel said. Ben smiled. “Well, to be honest neither did I, but ive changed a lot since year seven. I was a right little shit back then. But you need to know that it was just a phase. I like to think I’m a nice guy these days.” Joel’s face no longer had a smile, but a blank expression. “I can see that you’ve grown a lot, in more ways than one” Joel paused as ben chuckled. “and maybe iv haven’t given you a proper chance to prove it. But I’m not sure how you can now.” Ben saw his chance. His insides were beginning to get warm and his heart was beating faster. If he ever wanted to see joel naked agin he had one option he could see. “well… the only properly deep talk ive ever had was with a girl in the year above us, called Julia.” Ben said. “Julia? You know Julia?” joel spluttered. “when was this?” “last summer holidays, she was being paid to be a mock tutor so I would pass history. But we got to talking during a game of truth or dare….” “You played truth or dare with Julia?” Joel asked, he felt a mixture of annoyance and intense longing to have seen the game. “Well, we only did a couple of lame dares, but the truths were really deep and meaning- full. She asked if there was anything I really regretted in life, and my attack on you was the answer. Looking back I can’t think of a more disgusting thing I could have done to you. I was a little punk, who didn’t have respect for anyone. But you need to know Joel I’m more sorry than you will ever, ever know.” Ben had been looking down, feeling intense guilt as he had told Joel his regrets. He looked up, to see tears streaming down Joel’s face. But he was smiling. Joel got up opened his arms to hug ben. Ben stood up and the pair embraced. “Thank you.” Joel whispered. Joel’s stomach was feeling weird, he had an amazing jittery feeling, was he beginning to like ben? He couldn’t be, he liked girls. Girls. Girls. And possibly ben? The hug ended after about a minute, the two boys, not having a clue what either was feeling about each other. Ben smiled at joel. “now, for a nice quiet game of truth or dare”

05-11-2011, 05:00 PM	#19
nuditydudity Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: USA Posts: 573	Thanks for the new chapter! I'm really starting to like this story! __________________ 9 Years on getDare!! Sing like you know the lyrics Dance like no one is watching Live like you were dying Love like you've never been hurt before

05-16-2011, 07:53 PM	#23
May Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Iowa Posts: 172	Epic! Please continue! __________________ }Fiction{ .Angel. ~Fetlife~ ~Blog~ I swear we cannot wake up from this hell that we live in. But when the sun finally hits our face, we see that we were only reflections of reflections left by our predecessors. This is what it feels like. This is disintegration. This is what it feels like. This is isolation. [11:58:01] raziel1988: ‹@May› the getdare radio mascot. (unofficially)

05-17-2011, 04:38 PM	#30
Tylerr Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Narnia Posts: 108	Your story leaves me speechless.... DUDE I'M NEVER SPEECHLESS........ x14353525254 __________________ All have been alive, but only few have lived Tyler [: Lets play Truth or Dare! PM me or Email me! Email me @ [email protected]

05-11-2011, 03:00 PM	#18
WowwieGoesWoof getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 415	oh noessss clifffhanggerrrrrrrr x_x need moaar <3 cant wait for next chapter!

05-11-2011, 07:55 PM	#20
katebabe21 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 194	I really like this... Way to go!

05-16-2011, 03:16 PM	#21
pymani96 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: - Posts: 354	Erm... Continue maybe? Just an idea, Pymani

05-16-2011, 07:26 PM	#22
WowwieGoesWoof getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 415	^ Rude >.> don't complain about good stories. People DO have lives outside their computers?

05-17-2011, 08:02 AM	#24
youngdaremaaster Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 102	chapter 5 will be up tonight. could pynami96 stop complaining. the parts will arrive, but i have a job, college and a music venture to concentrate on.

05-17-2011, 09:35 AM	#25
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	I love this dude! I finally got to read it and I love it ! I cant wait tell tonight!

05-17-2011, 01:46 PM	#26
pymani96 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: - Posts: 354	Yes, i can stop complaining, but i'm an argumentative little sod, so i won't. There! I said it! Pymani

05-17-2011, 01:51 PM	#27
youngdaremaaster Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 102	*Chapter 5* Joel started sweating. They were both sitting on the bad again facing each other. Joel had only ever played truth or dare at the age of 8. And as you can imagine it was pretty tame. He imagined that ben had played quite a few in his time. And was nervous about how intimate it could get. Ben interrupted his train of thought with a chirpy voice. “Ok ready to get started?” “um, ok” Joel replied “ok then. Truth or dare?” Joel looked at ben. his eyes were staring back, so deep it felt as though he was trying to push a thought into Joel’s mind. He was so nervous it was making him nauscious. “I’ll do a dare, but if we set some limits.” He rushed out. Ben looked surprised. “well ok, to be honest I didn’t think you would pick dare straight off.” Joel smiled, glad he had surprised ben. Ben started with the rules “Ok, limits, Nothing that will hurt us, nothing that ruin clothes or belongings. Nothing too crazy.” Joel nodded and smiled. “OK then. What will I pick Joel?” ben said as he rubbed his hands With every rub Joel’s chest got tighter. The tension was unbearable. “I Dare you, to wear a pair of underwear on your head” ben giggled out. Joel’s nerves left his body as he breathed a sigh of relief as he pulled a pair of briefs out of his drawer. He pulled them over his head and turned to ben who was nearly on the floor with laughter Joel smiled widely. Seeing ben happy was making him fill with joy. Another weird moment. In the back of his head he knew what it meant but he didn’t want to admit it. “OK ben your go.” Ben didn’t hesitate. “A dare please. And make it super hard.” He said holding back the laughs from Joel’s new headgear. “Hard you say? Maybe I should make you pay back for everything.” Joel said. Time to put his thought to the test. The laughs soon stopped for ben as an cute evil smirk spread over Joel’s face. “How would I do that?” “Well, lets do it in 3 steps.” “ok then, what’s the first step?” ben queried “ok step one, stand up, and take off your top and trousers.” Bens eyes widened as he stood up and removed both items of clothing, leaving him standing in his bright green boxers. “step two, you stand in the hall way.” Joel said with as little emotion as possible. “But……” ben started “there’s nothing about the room in the rules.” Joel interrupted “oh for gods sake!” ben said in a raised voice. Ben opened the door, his heart pounding, it was 6 pm and the hotel was quiet but there was still a risk. He walked into the hall way. Ben let out a small nervous chuckle, before bursting into song.

05-17-2011, 02:35 PM	#28
pymani96 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: - Posts: 354	I love it. Carry on like this and you've got a winner! Pymanananazonanana