woods game--- mostly fiction but some is real - Page 2

soldar15 · 01-05-2011, 04:53 AM

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Originally Posted by ShinyDemon

The content of the story is very good, and the grammar / punctuation is improving more with each chapter. I also liked the way that you have left us in suspense at the end of the last chapter, and I'm looking forward to reading more very soon.

hate to admit it but the suspense is just not knowing what to say

moxie · 01-07-2011, 11:29 AM

Your dare doesn't necessarily need to be wildy sexual or outlandish to start with. Oen suggestion would be to look at the dares forum a little bit for a couple appropriate ones that might serve as a starting point for your writing.

soldar15 · 01-12-2011, 07:46 PM

Its finally here and i know ive kept you waiting far too long,... new updates tomorrow more than 1 sorry for makin yall wait so long

soldar15 · 01-13-2011, 07:01 PM

"i dare you to give Leena a zerbert" he said
"uh dude what the hell is that?" i said

"You don't know? Jeez its that thing where you like blow on someone's stomach like you're doin' one of those handfarts." He told me.

So I walked over to Leena and she lifted her shirt up and i thought i made it work but Drew wasn't convinced.

"Dude you fail like MJ"(yeah Michael Jackson....i went there)

"yeah but Drew man not all of us even know what those are so you can't expect us to be all pro" Leena said.

"So Lee Truth or Dare?" I asked.

"Eh gimme a truth," she said smiling sweetly.

Damn wasn't ready for that I thought

"OK eh, why are you going out with me?"I asked her, completely serious.

" 'Cause you're really sweet and you're not all into like just fuckin' you like to be all talky." She said with a devilish smile on her face.

soldar15 · 01-14-2011, 07:42 PM

"So RJ truth or dare?" Leena asked

"uh How about dare?" was his unexpected response, hes always been really timid.

"Okay I dare you to straddle Drew and make out with him for ten seconds" was Leena's devious response.

I watched RJ's face turn a shade of red i had only seen on people at the beach who had forgotten sunscreen. It was easy to see this was way out of his comfort zone. I kinda felt bad for him, but only for a second as he walked over to Drew.

I watched him go on top of Drew and lean in for the kiss. Drew had a face of fake disgust, I could tell he wanted this. The ten seconds must have lasted forever for Drew and RJ but in two different ways. Disgust for RJ and ecstasy for Drew.

RJ sat back down in his spot next to me and whispered "Dude, he had a boner at the end of that"

"So Jay truth or dare?" RJ asked the fateful question.

"Dare me doc" i said in a voice kind of like Bugs Bunnies.

"Sit on Leena's lap and grope her for a minute" He said giving me a wink

I walked over to her and sat on her lap facing and started to squeeze her perfect sized boobs, i found her nipples through her plain black shirt and started feeling them. It's not like it was the first time, i was just showing off my girlfriend to the other guys.....

TBC if i get comments and encouragement support criticism etc.

zac · 01-15-2011, 04:18 PM

Love....carry on....xd

soldar15 · 01-19-2011, 02:53 PM

Guys I've been busy studying for Mids but I'll be writing again on Friday since i probably won't have school

soldar15 · 01-31-2011, 03:06 PM

my greatest apologies ive been sick for a while and havent written

wihout FURTHER ado i give you the next installment

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"Okay ,so Benny boy truth or dare" i asked ben who had been silently staring at my girlfriend all this time.

"uhh..." he said nervously glancing at all of us"i guess i'll take a-a truth."

"Okay of any of us who do you must want to fuck?" i asked expecting him to say Leena since he'd been staring at her

" I'd have to say Drew" he said sheepishly

"Dude what the hell!?!?!" shouted Drew , not really angry more excited but surprised...

"uhh so Drew truth or dare" asked ben, being really timid talking to him.

"Dare me i wanna see wher you take this" he said, obviously interested in Ben

soldar15 · 02-02-2011, 07:24 PM

Dear peoples of all readers ---this is going to be lonbger to make up for Mondays short one

"Well"said Ben"I dare you to strip to your boxers run into the woods and shout 'I'm a sexy man" as loud as you can."

So Drew walked to the edge of our little clearing and started to take of his shirt, as he did his six-pack abs were exposed to the night air, and the people watching him. Then he slowly unzipped his midnight-black skinny jeans.

Then he was standing there in just his boxers, and he walked into the light woods and our eyes followed

He tilted his head back and hollered "I'M A SEXY MAN!!!!" And we all just sat there laughing as hard as we possibly could.

He walked back to his spot in our circle and didn't even bother putting his clothes back on.

"So Jay Truth or Dare?" Drew asked me, not even trying to cover up the bulge in his boxers.

"Gimme a Dare dude." I said casually.

"I dare you to Strip Leena down all the way." He said devilishly.

I stood up nervously and walked over to her, where she was sitting with her hands in back of her, probably undoing her bra strap. I put my hands at the bottom of her shirt and lifted over her head, she didn't resist, like she wanted this to happen. Her bra came off with her shirt since it was unstrapped, and her breasts were exposed to the warm air. I reached to unbutton her jeans but they were already undone and easy to slip off her thin legs. Then was her underwear. She was wearing a vibrant green thong with lollipops on it. I'd seen it many times before in her gym bag.

Then she was standing there naked, standing up in the night, surronded by me and3 other guys. She was the only girl of us all, and she was my girlfriend.

WHERE IS THIS NIGHT GOING??

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------K so it's not that long but its late and i'm tired...please tell me if you want me to continue this cuz if you dont i wont---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

zac · 02-03-2011, 02:13 PM

ahhh it was definitely worth the wait

nicknick0912 · 02-03-2011, 02:27 PM

keep going and don't stop

soldar15 · 02-03-2011, 06:40 PM

Update on Saturday wish it could be sooner but just no time tomorrow.

Memories for Life · 02-09-2011, 06:05 PM

Evidently there was no time on Saturday either because that day passed and no new chapter appeared! We wait with open minds and open pants!

soldar15 · 02-10-2011, 02:10 PM

sorry guys i left the notebook where i write in in my locker so i couldnt post...i promise two or three this weekend

Memories for Life · 02-14-2011, 03:18 PM

Promise given...promise broken. What will be the excuse? A great Valentine's Day gift precluded the opportunity to write? That's understandable!

01-07-2011, 11:29 AM	#17
moxie Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: USA Posts: 2,695	Your dare doesn't necessarily need to be wildy sexual or outlandish to start with. Oen suggestion would be to look at the dares forum a little bit for a couple appropriate ones that might serve as a starting point for your writing. __________________ "Is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? Forbid it, Almighty God! I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death" - Patrick Henry - March 23, 1775

01-12-2011, 07:46 PM	#18
soldar15 Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 62	New Parts Coming tomorrow Its finally here and i know ive kept you waiting far too long,... new updates tomorrow more than 1 sorry for makin yall wait so long __________________ is it a problem that i like singing cuz if it is then why isnt hillary clinton president as yall see im a no borders person when it comes to creativity so live live peeps pm me any truths you have and ill answer soory yall no cam no dareslave im a desert cuz im empty....and they say that maybe YOU can fill me up!!

01-13-2011, 07:01 PM	#19
soldar15 Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 62	Part 5- "i dare you to give Leena a zerbert" he said "uh dude what the hell is that?" i said "You don't know? Jeez its that thing where you like blow on someone's stomach like you're doin' one of those handfarts." He told me. So I walked over to Leena and she lifted her shirt up and i thought i made it work but Drew wasn't convinced. "Dude you fail like MJ"(yeah Michael Jackson....i went there) "yeah but Drew man not all of us even know what those are so you can't expect us to be all pro" Leena said. "So Lee Truth or Dare?" I asked. "Eh gimme a truth," she said smiling sweetly. Damn wasn't ready for that I thought "OK eh, why are you going out with me?"I asked her, completely serious. " 'Cause you're really sweet and you're not all into like just fuckin' you like to be all talky." She said with a devilish smile on her face. __________________ is it a problem that i like singing cuz if it is then why isnt hillary clinton president as yall see im a no borders person when it comes to creativity so live live peeps pm me any truths you have and ill answer soory yall no cam no dareslave im a desert cuz im empty....and they say that maybe YOU can fill me up!!

01-14-2011, 07:42 PM	#20
soldar15 Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 62	Part 6----You guys can comment---PLEASE? :( "So RJ truth or dare?" Leena asked "uh How about dare?" was his unexpected response, hes always been really timid. "Okay I dare you to straddle Drew and make out with him for ten seconds" was Leena's devious response. I watched RJ's face turn a shade of red i had only seen on people at the beach who had forgotten sunscreen. It was easy to see this was way out of his comfort zone. I kinda felt bad for him, but only for a second as he walked over to Drew. I watched him go on top of Drew and lean in for the kiss. Drew had a face of fake disgust, I could tell he wanted this. The ten seconds must have lasted forever for Drew and RJ but in two different ways. Disgust for RJ and ecstasy for Drew. RJ sat back down in his spot next to me and whispered "Dude, he had a boner at the end of that" "So Jay truth or dare?" RJ asked the fateful question. "Dare me doc" i said in a voice kind of like Bugs Bunnies. "Sit on Leena's lap and grope her for a minute" He said giving me a wink I walked over to her and sat on her lap facing and started to squeeze her perfect sized boobs, i found her nipples through her plain black shirt and started feeling them. It's not like it was the first time, i was just showing off my girlfriend to the other guys..... TBC if i get comments and encouragement support criticism etc. __________________ is it a problem that i like singing cuz if it is then why isnt hillary clinton president as yall see im a no borders person when it comes to creativity so live live peeps pm me any truths you have and ill answer soory yall no cam no dareslave im a desert cuz im empty....and they say that maybe YOU can fill me up!!

01-19-2011, 02:53 PM	#22
soldar15 Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 62	Two Days Until Update Guys I've been busy studying for Mids but I'll be writing again on Friday since i probably won't have school __________________ is it a problem that i like singing cuz if it is then why isnt hillary clinton president as yall see im a no borders person when it comes to creativity so live live peeps pm me any truths you have and ill answer soory yall no cam no dareslave im a desert cuz im empty....and they say that maybe YOU can fill me up!!

01-15-2011, 04:18 PM	#21
zac getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: under your bed. Posts: 265	Love....carry on....xd

01-31-2011, 03:06 PM	#23
soldar15 Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 62	Apologies my greatest apologies ive been sick for a while and havent written wihout FURTHER ado i give you the next installment -------------------------------------- "Okay ,so Benny boy truth or dare" i asked ben who had been silently staring at my girlfriend all this time. "uhh..." he said nervously glancing at all of us"i guess i'll take a-a truth." "Okay of any of us who do you must want to fuck?" i asked expecting him to say Leena since he'd been staring at her " I'd have to say Drew" he said sheepishly "Dude what the hell!?!?!" shouted Drew , not really angry more excited but surprised... "uhh so Drew truth or dare" asked ben, being really timid talking to him. "Dare me i wanna see wher you take this" he said, obviously interested in Ben __________________ is it a problem that i like singing cuz if it is then why isnt hillary clinton president as yall see im a no borders person when it comes to creativity so live live peeps pm me any truths you have and ill answer soory yall no cam no dareslave im a desert cuz im empty....and they say that maybe YOU can fill me up!!

02-02-2011, 07:24 PM	#24
soldar15 Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 62	Part---#---Heating Up Dear peoples of all readers ---this is going to be lonbger to make up for Mondays short one "Well"said Ben"I dare you to strip to your boxers run into the woods and shout 'I'm a sexy man" as loud as you can." So Drew walked to the edge of our little clearing and started to take of his shirt, as he did his six-pack abs were exposed to the night air, and the people watching him. Then he slowly unzipped his midnight-black skinny jeans. Then he was standing there in just his boxers, and he walked into the light woods and our eyes followed He tilted his head back and hollered "I'M A SEXY MAN!!!!" And we all just sat there laughing as hard as we possibly could. He walked back to his spot in our circle and didn't even bother putting his clothes back on. "So Jay Truth or Dare?" Drew asked me, not even trying to cover up the bulge in his boxers. "Gimme a Dare dude." I said casually. "I dare you to Strip Leena down all the way." He said devilishly. I stood up nervously and walked over to her, where she was sitting with her hands in back of her, probably undoing her bra strap. I put my hands at the bottom of her shirt and lifted over her head, she didn't resist, like she wanted this to happen. Her bra came off with her shirt since it was unstrapped, and her breasts were exposed to the warm air. I reached to unbutton her jeans but they were already undone and easy to slip off her thin legs. Then was her underwear. She was wearing a vibrant green thong with lollipops on it. I'd seen it many times before in her gym bag. Then she was standing there naked, standing up in the night, surronded by me and3 other guys. She was the only girl of us all, and she was my girlfriend. WHERE IS THIS NIGHT GOING?? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------K so it's not that long but its late and i'm tired...please tell me if you want me to continue this cuz if you dont i wont--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- __________________ is it a problem that i like singing cuz if it is then why isnt hillary clinton president as yall see im a no borders person when it comes to creativity so live live peeps pm me any truths you have and ill answer soory yall no cam no dareslave im a desert cuz im empty....and they say that maybe YOU can fill me up!!

02-03-2011, 02:13 PM	#25
zac getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: under your bed. Posts: 265	ahhh it was definitely worth the wait

02-03-2011, 02:27 PM	#26
nicknick0912 Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: versalles kentucky (us) Posts: 593	keep going and don't stop

02-03-2011, 06:40 PM	#27
soldar15 Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 62	Upcoming Update on Saturday wish it could be sooner but just no time tomorrow. __________________ is it a problem that i like singing cuz if it is then why isnt hillary clinton president as yall see im a no borders person when it comes to creativity so live live peeps pm me any truths you have and ill answer soory yall no cam no dareslave im a desert cuz im empty....and they say that maybe YOU can fill me up!!

02-09-2011, 06:05 PM	#28
Memories for Life getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Jacksonville, FL Posts: 1,012	Evidently there was no time on Saturday either because that day passed and no new chapter appeared! We wait with open minds and open pants!

02-10-2011, 02:10 PM	#29
soldar15 Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 62	sorry guys i left the notebook where i write in in my locker so i couldnt post...i promise two or three this weekend __________________ is it a problem that i like singing cuz if it is then why isnt hillary clinton president as yall see im a no borders person when it comes to creativity so live live peeps pm me any truths you have and ill answer soory yall no cam no dareslave im a desert cuz im empty....and they say that maybe YOU can fill me up!!

02-14-2011, 03:18 PM	#30
Memories for Life getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Jacksonville, FL Posts: 1,012	Promise given...promise broken. What will be the excuse? A great Valentine's Day gift precluded the opportunity to write? That's understandable!