03-09-2009, 03:17 PM | #16 |
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I really like this story, it is one of the few i am currently following.
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03-09-2009, 03:35 PM | #17 |
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Im enjoying this, keep it up, it will be great when its done on word
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03-09-2009, 03:40 PM | #18 |
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i really like this
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03-09-2009, 06:22 PM | #19 |
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im sorry
i am so sorry guys but it seems that my microsoft word is a dick and locked itself so it might be a day or 2 before i can rewrite the whole thing it was actually a pretty long part.
again im sorry im also thinking of maybe passing the story to someone els who has more time to put into it,let me know if you would be interested in doing it. |
03-10-2009, 05:09 PM | #20 |
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this is a great story, i wouldn recommend passing it on. dont worry if you dont have a bunch of time, just write when you can, and it will be fine. it really is a great story, and smeone else may not do i justice. so i would definitely recommend to keep trying, and good luck
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03-10-2009, 09:01 PM | #22 |
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yea dont pass it to anybody else. It's your writing piece and you should finish it. Hopefully your computer will stop acting up. Cant wait to read more
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03-12-2009, 09:19 PM | #24 |
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the last love
so this is it guys im sorry if its short im just kinda messed up right now, i have surgery in a few days.
again i didnt run it through spell check or proofread im just a bit out of it yaknow. so please no comments on things like dude the spelling is shit and learn too spell,i dont have word anymore and i didnt proofread. on a good note im taking this story places this portion is done so the next time you hear one of my story's it will be a new thread but be the same characters . again comments are good it will def make me want too write another story. __________________________________________________ ________________ after my shower the rest of the day was pretty insegnificant we just hung out and watched tv,after we finished some show jenie asked me "so why am i suposed too stay tonight" "i did have somthings inmind but i dont know" "why?" "because......idont know" she just gigled i think she knows im starting to like her. "wanna get some food?" "shure, im going to go order some pizza. when it gets here let me know." "ok" so i went downstairs and played halo once again,after fraging noobs i got bored and played left 4 dead. ding.....dong..... i ran upstairs assuming the pizza guy was there, as soon as i turn the corner i see jenie handing the guy money and she was wearing a towl,thats a no no. i sit down at the table as she walks in with the pizza box in hand. "what are you wearing?" "a towel i didnt want to awnswer the door naked" "did i say you could wear a towel? no i didnt, now you will have a punishment" "what?" after i ate with jenie i went upstairs and got ready for bed,she came in and asked me what her punishment was i told her that tonight she has to sleep handcuffed to my bed and through the night ill ask things of her. once i was ready for bed i called her up,she was naked and looking very hot as ussual, i grabed my cuffs and cuffed her to one of my bed posts. i grabbed a carot from my fridge and slowly put it in her vagina,she shriked and started to breath a little hevier. "how long" she asked "till i say so, and no masterbating" she just looked at me with an intensity, i could tell she really wanted to get off. i went to sleep with her on the floor next too me. after about 2 hours my alarm went off,i woke up and so did jenie. "what now?" she asked with a tired voice. "time for you to get that carrot and eat it" she reached for the carrot and pulled it out withh all her jueces on it,it made a sucky noise. she moved it up too her mouth and chomped down on it. "how is it?" "mmmm very good master" i just watched her eat the carrot with a knowing look like "mmm i like it cuz you like it" after she was done chomping on it i went downstairs found her bag and suprisingly found some male condoms i made some quick rice and stuffed the condom full with the rice, i stuffed it so full it was as hard as my dick was right then. i ran upstairs and told her to put it up her vagina and as a punishment for bringing condoms i grabbed a couple paintballs and put about 6 up her ass,she was so full i just laghed and watched her fall asleep as i soon did later. after another 2 hours i woke up and looked at my clock it was only 4 am, i planned to get back up at 6 and jenie would eat her rice and i would shoot the paintballs at her. i looked down and saw jenie sleeping like an angel,i got those feelings again ya know the fuzzy ones. i just sat and stared at her untill her soft blue eyes opend. "what are you looking at?" she said in a playful tone "just looking" "pervert" "no not like that I.....I...oh never mind" i blushed and put my head back on my pillow "well to be honest i can't really sleep either. can i slipe in with you?" oh my god is she asking to sleep with me? wow i just cant say no. "shure!" she giggled and sat up she monuverd the handcuffs and got on the inside edge of my bed, she just pulled me close to her holding onto my shoulders. i can't beleive this. after I woke up at about 9 i looked at jenie just siting there holding me as she had only tighter,i just sat there hoping she would never wake up so i could hold her. "hey matt" said jenie"liking the heat?" she gigled "hey jenie" "oww why dose my ass and pussy hurt?.....oh yeah!" she gigled again and just grabbed me tighter "ready for breakfest?" "yeah" i got up and grabbed my key unlocked her and went downstairs, she fallowed me and asked what was for breakfest. "i make this breakfest its left over rice some milk and brown sugar all mixed, its like a cerial. "mmmm sounds good, ill make some for us" she walked over too the fridge looking for rice, i just sat there and laughed "did you forget?" "forget what" "let me help you there" i walked over to her and put my hand on her crotch,she cringed and wonderd what i was doing. as I shoved my hand into her pussy she cringed and shivverd again,i pulled out the rice condom and showed her. "oh yeah" she giggled she went on making our rice cireal. she sat at the table handing me a bowl we started diging in as she said "my ass hurts can i take the paintballs out?" "yeah but put em in a baggy" she did in the bathroom as to disgust me wile i ate. after we sat on the couch and whatched some tv for awhile i told her its time for her next dare. "oh yeah what is it?" i told her to go get the paintballs, as i go up to my room and grab my paintball gun. she sees my gun and instantly knows whats going on,she runs outside in the....frontyard!?! shes naked running in my frontyard. "jenie get inside!" "no i wanna do it out here" well hell if she wants to i guess so i throw her my mask and put the paintballs in the hoper, i walk about 30 yards away from her and open fire. one hits her pussy she just laughes. the next few hit her stomach, i have about 2 left and tell her too turn around as i put my gun to full fps. i fire one....it hits her lefft butt check as it giggle and she laughs i fire another, "ouch!" i hit her anes as she jumps up and down i see her sweet suckulant tits giggle and perfect small ass go up and down. we go inside she had pink paint on her pussy, stomach, and ass "can i take a shower...i mean can we take a shower?" "yeah lets catch one" we both go upstairs looking at her ass the whole way up and notice there wasnt any paint on her anes. "what happend to the last shot?" she just giggled and opend her ass, i take a closser look and notice the paintball is intact inside her ass. "will you help me get it out?" she just looks all cute we both hop in the shower and i notice im getting a boner, i grab the soap and start to wash my body jenie turns and looks at my penis and says "wow! your so big your my big boy" what is she doing is she flirting? "i think i want some of that" she continued to flirt why is she doing this? "mmm so far i have had rice, a carrot, but still no dirty boy" she bent over and started to grab my penis "oh its so big and hard" as she starts to jack me off she moves her mouth twords my penis "NO!" i pull back "what!? you dont want me to suck your dick master" "i do but not yet" "what?" "look i am starting too....ya know like......" she stops me by putting her soft finger on my lips. "i understand" "really? i mean i really like you and i have even deleted the video" "you did for me?" "yeah i did it after i felt my care for you" "so if you like me so much why cant i show my love?" "you see im afraid that if our relationship goes strait into sex that it wont last. i think we need to keep it like ya know,we cuddle and be friends like watching hockey. thats the kind of relationship i want" "i understand master" "matt" "what" "your not my slave didn't you hear me? the video is gone" "yeah but i like the dares and such, thats the kind of relationship i want" she smiled at me "okay if you want it i like it" after our shower we went downstairs and watched tv together again i just held her close and that sll i needed and somhow i kneew that what she wanted too. "so when is the next set of dares?" i just smiled and said "in time in time.......".
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03-13-2009, 09:40 AM | #25 |
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anouther good installment.
she has got skills catching a paint ball in her ass.
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03-13-2009, 12:09 PM | #26 |
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Again, another bery good installment, cant wait for more!
Oh and btw, good luck with your surgery, i know how hard it can be |
04-18-2009, 12:37 PM | #27 |
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write more please
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