Fiction: Kristy’s new school – you choose her fate - Page 16

sm_limb · 10-25-2011, 02:48 AM

i vote for him to touch. Maybe mom or dad wakes up or both lol

Memories for Life · 10-25-2011, 03:31 AM

I vote that he plays with her, inserting fingers front AND back!

A bonus would be if she screamed during an orgasm and the parents knock on the door asking if Sean is "OK". He tells them it was just a nightmare and he is fine. After they leave, he gags Kristy then spanks her hard as punishment!

zac · 10-25-2011, 06:20 AM

LOVE IT...let him play with her

xx

abby40 · 10-25-2011, 06:44 AM

let him play with her

Siren · 10-25-2011, 07:47 AM

Definitely number 2.

Komodo Jones · 10-25-2011, 09:24 AM

Wanting to see who more of my character acutally is, I would have to go with Sean "me" playing with her. There is a logical though process behind that not just of what I would do in real life, as I would probably do the opposite. Glad to see you back shyness and also glad to see you quality of your entries haven't diminshed any. Hope that all personal problems come to a full close soon.

slutjuice · 10-25-2011, 11:54 AM

Let him touch her! He has been kind, though not too kind

and he should get it!

shypilot · 10-25-2011, 02:12 PM

I agree with most of the other posters - Let him touch her.

EvilBunny · 10-25-2011, 07:53 PM

I would definitely say let him do it, and it looks like that is where it is going, but she might be in danger of coming which she isn't allowed to do...but, yeah, let him do it.

john87 · 10-25-2011, 10:51 PM

i vote she goes for the plunge and lets him do it, cant wait to see how it turns out.

shynessincarnate · 10-26-2011, 03:18 AM

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Originally Posted by hadesnyberg

hey shynesscatherine whenever people write a story they usually put a charecter like themself in it. So i was just wondering are you a charecter in this story and if so which one

I think that most writers write about what they know, as it is easier to make the writing more credible. With regards to my story, I can tell you that Kristy's character is loosely based on me.

Memories for Life · 10-26-2011, 01:53 PM

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Originally Posted by shynessincarnate

I think that most writers write about what they know, as it is easier to make the writing more credible. With regards to my story, I can tell you that Kristy's character is loosely based on me.

How "loosely" based are you compared to Kristy in the story?

Have you done, in real life, any of the "actions" that Kristy has performed in the story?

hadesnyberg · 10-26-2011, 03:14 PM

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Originally Posted by shynessincarnate

I think that most writers write about what they know, as it is easier to make the writing more credible. With regards to my story, I can tell you that Kristy's character is loosely based on me.

I guessed that because whenever I write a story for fun the main character is based completely off me based on the bit i know about you i think that Kristy is more like your letting us know but then again what do i know i barely know you and thats based off what i do so its not exactly a scientific test

submissiver · 10-26-2011, 04:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Desril

Second best book series ever. The third best, Codex Alera, is also written by Jim Butcher, you should check it out.

Whats the first?

em52388 · 10-26-2011, 05:20 PM

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Originally Posted by submissiver

Whats the first?

I asked the same thing via PM and was told that it was A Song of Fire and Ice.

View Poll Results: Which ending should I keep for this story?
Suggested ending #1	24	53.33%
Suggested ending #2	21	46.67%
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10-25-2011, 02:48 AM	#226
sm_limb Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: netherlands Posts: 2,980 Blog Entries: 1	i vote for him to touch. Maybe mom or dad wakes up or both lol __________________ F/netherlands like: public, dressing, humiliation limits: poop/pee, pain, family, pict, cam HTML Code: https://dirtycode.io/E0FEH

10-25-2011, 06:44 AM	#229
abby40 Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: out of this planet Posts: 24	let him play with her __________________ for right my only limits will be pics cam and illegal more to come....

10-25-2011, 07:47 AM	#230
Siren getDare Succubus Join Date: May 2011 Location: the sea Posts: 1,566 Blog Entries: 6	Definitely number 2. __________________ f/25/bi ama / discord / likes & limits not looking to play with anyone likes: dad jokes, pretty people, vodka. dislikes: granny panties, sloths, tea. however much you use me baby come on use me more

10-25-2011, 09:24 AM	#231
Komodo Jones getDare Succubus Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: in your fantasies...it's ok you can admit it Posts: 1,755 Blog Entries: 97	Wanting to see who more of my character acutally is, I would have to go with Sean "me" playing with her. There is a logical though process behind that not just of what I would do in real life, as I would probably do the opposite. Glad to see you back shyness and also glad to see you quality of your entries haven't diminshed any. Hope that all personal problems come to a full close soon. __________________ KJ 38/male/partially bi/switch D/s Status: Protector, Dom and Daddy of pixie.dust I love meeting new, nice, smart people. I communicate through Discord mainly. What are my limits/likes/supplies? Click here! Check Out my Literary Works Targeting the Ignored [Fiction] Some Stuff I've Done (Non-Fiction)

10-25-2011, 03:31 AM	#227
Memories for Life getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Jacksonville, FL Posts: 1,012	I vote that he plays with her, inserting fingers front AND back! A bonus would be if she screamed during an orgasm and the parents knock on the door asking if Sean is "OK". He tells them it was just a nightmare and he is fine. After they leave, he gags Kristy then spanks her hard as punishment!

10-25-2011, 06:20 AM	#228
zac getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: under your bed. Posts: 265	LOVE IT...let him play with her xx

10-25-2011, 11:54 AM	#232
slutjuice Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: USA Posts: 523	Let him touch her! He has been kind, though not too kind and he should get it! __________________ FAVORITE!: lesbian stuff (I have lovely female roommate to help) Likes: pain, friends, public, holding items, long term, ruined orgasms, bondage. Limits: illegal, some permanent, pics, cam. PM me anything you want me to write with sharpie on my body.

10-25-2011, 02:12 PM	#233
shypilot Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 115	I agree with most of the other posters - Let him touch her.

10-25-2011, 07:53 PM	#234
EvilBunny Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Posts: 45	I would definitely say let him do it, and it looks like that is where it is going, but she might be in danger of coming which she isn't allowed to do...but, yeah, let him do it.

10-25-2011, 10:51 PM	#235
john87 Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: usa Posts: 12	i vote she goes for the plunge and lets him do it, cant wait to see how it turns out.