Fiction: january 1st

dare taker · 02-09-2013, 06:38 PM

He walked down the street with his girl. he had on a black shirt, and pants, she had short shorts on that were really tight, and a tank top. No one would know she had a vibrator in the whole time. And that he had a cock ring on.
The two bet each other that who ever cums first is a slve to the other for the rest of the year, which is torture since it is january 1st .

dare taker · 02-09-2013, 08:22 PM

Thier names are Felix, and Tatiyanna. Tatiyanna cummed first, so that means she is Felix's slave until december 31st.
"Ok Tatiyanna, lets get back home, i have plans for you."
"Ok Felix... i mean master"
When they got home, Felix stripped Tatiyanna of all of her clothing, shoved her inside thier bedroom, and tied her up. Felix tied her up so that her hands were above her head and her legs were spread apart.
"Your wet Tatiyanna, do you like this?"
"Yes, master."
Felix then walked over to the closet gabing the biggest and longest dildo they owned. Felix lubed it up, and shoved it as fast and as hard as he could into Tatiyanna's pussy. She moaned, as Felix took it out.
Felix got three vibrators and shoved them into her pussy,Tatiyanna screamed, and Felix shoved a ball gag into her mouth as her vagina was streached.

dare taker · 02-12-2013, 09:43 PM

i will keep writing if i can get some responses, and tips for writing. i would love to hear you guys' ideas.

Maleslave21 · 02-12-2013, 10:24 PM

Has lots of potential but I think you need to add more detail and slow it down a bit

dare taker · 02-14-2013, 04:42 PM

Tatiyanna woke up the next morning with Felix sitting on the bed next to her.
"Good morning, slave." Felix said to Tatiyanna.
I let you sleep in today because you will be really busy today slave. Felix then pulled Tatiyanna up out of the bed, and to the kitchen. Tatiyanna ate what Felix had fixed for her. Felix guided Tatiyanna to the garage, where he placed a collar on her, and a chain linking it to the stone walls around her.
"Strip" Felix ordered.
Tatiyanna did as she was told. Handing her clothes to Felix, she felt a little shy. Her bare body on display. Her perky breasts,and shaven pussy were on view, but she wasn't scared, she knew Felix.
Felix brought in their giant German shepard, and the first thing Tatiyanna noticed is that the dog was horny as fuck.

25rob1985 · 02-14-2013, 05:38 PM

you need to slow down and give more detail.

Slut020 · 02-16-2013, 08:43 PM

I agree more detail and slow down

krone6 · 02-19-2013, 03:31 AM

Just like the others, however it's got a ton of potential. Try breaking each idea (waking up, eating, dog part) into mini paragraphs. Thinking about it in smaller chunks should allow you to focus more on each idea in greater detail then trying to focus on everything at once, which seems to be what is happening.

dare taker · 02-20-2013, 10:32 PM

The dog walked around sniffing in different places around the garage.Felix left telling Tatiyanna that he needed to run some aaron's,and wouldn't be back till at least 8pm, which is a really long time considering its 10 am right now. Tatiyanna was at the dogs mercy. About thirty minutes after Felix left, the German shepard made its move, it pounced on Tatiyanna, fucking her pussy brutality, it felt like she was being slept apart. There was no lube, he didn't ease in. Just named it into her, and things got worst, he cummed in her. The dog had to wait for his Dick to shrink to get it out, whick made things more painfully for Tatiyanna. And to think this dog could do it whenever it wanted to for the next several hours.

HOPED YOU GUYS LIKED THIS ONE, SORRY THERE SHORT, ITS HARD TO WRITE ON A KINDLE FIRE, DAMN AUTO CORRECT ACTUALLY. SPELLS SOME STUFF WRONG.

krone6 · 02-20-2013, 11:11 PM

Loving this newest section. Excited to read some more about the dog part if you continue to write about it.

dare taker · 02-25-2013, 06:46 PM

The dog raped her at least 7 times that day.
Felix got back when he said he would, then feed Tatiyanna, but it wasnt a normal meal.
Felix made Tatiyanna get on her knees in the kitchen while he sat naked in a chair.
"suck it, now."
Tatiyanna did.
"dont spill any, this is your meal."
Felix said.
Tatiyanna sucked as Felix let 3 loads into her mouth, pushing her head don into his pubes.
Like Felix said, Tatiyanna didnt spill any.

dare taker · 04-01-2013, 06:41 PM

Felix dragged Tatiyanna into the garage, and through her to the floor.
"We have the entire night to play."
Felix dropped his pants and boxers, along with his shirt, revealing his 7 inch cock.
Felix thrusters his cock deep inside Tatiyannas pussy.
It was a good 10 minute fucking until Felix chummed right into her pussy.

02-09-2013, 06:38 PM	#1
dare taker Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 24	january 1st He walked down the street with his girl. he had on a black shirt, and pants, she had short shorts on that were really tight, and a tank top. No one would know she had a vibrator in the whole time. And that he had a cock ring on. The two bet each other that who ever cums first is a slve to the other for the rest of the year, which is torture since it is january 1st .

02-09-2013, 08:22 PM	#2
dare taker Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 24	Thier names are Felix, and Tatiyanna. Tatiyanna cummed first, so that means she is Felix's slave until december 31st. "Ok Tatiyanna, lets get back home, i have plans for you." "Ok Felix... i mean master" When they got home, Felix stripped Tatiyanna of all of her clothing, shoved her inside thier bedroom, and tied her up. Felix tied her up so that her hands were above her head and her legs were spread apart. "Your wet Tatiyanna, do you like this?" "Yes, master." Felix then walked over to the closet gabing the biggest and longest dildo they owned. Felix lubed it up, and shoved it as fast and as hard as he could into Tatiyanna's pussy. She moaned, as Felix took it out. Felix got three vibrators and shoved them into her pussy,Tatiyanna screamed, and Felix shoved a ball gag into her mouth as her vagina was streached. Last edited by dare taker; 02-09-2013 at 08:25 PM.

02-12-2013, 09:43 PM	#3
dare taker Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 24	i will keep writing if i can get some responses, and tips for writing. i would love to hear you guys' ideas. __________________ likes: pussy torture,anal, wedgies, pain, and ice, spit. And alot more that isnt in my limits. limits:nipple torture, to much pain, public, xdressing,cam PM ME DARES, I WILL EXCEPT ANY WITHIN MY LIMITS. OWNED BY:blackhaze122997

02-12-2013, 10:24 PM	#4
Maleslave21 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 149	Has lots of potential but I think you need to add more detail and slow it down a bit __________________ Like: wedgies, crossdressing, orgasm denial, bondage, anal, cum eating, public, hidden public, public humiliation and sleeping dares Limits: poop, permanent Items: panties, yoga pants, mini skirt, clothespins, ball gag, o ring gag with attached nipple clamps, pink collar, slut collar, dog bowl, handcuffs, anal beads, butt plug, small didldo, massive suction cup dildo and a remote controlled vibrating plug

02-14-2013, 04:42 PM	#5
dare taker Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 24	Tatiyanna woke up the next morning with Felix sitting on the bed next to her. "Good morning, slave." Felix said to Tatiyanna. I let you sleep in today because you will be really busy today slave. Felix then pulled Tatiyanna up out of the bed, and to the kitchen. Tatiyanna ate what Felix had fixed for her. Felix guided Tatiyanna to the garage, where he placed a collar on her, and a chain linking it to the stone walls around her. "Strip" Felix ordered. Tatiyanna did as she was told. Handing her clothes to Felix, she felt a little shy. Her bare body on display. Her perky breasts,and shaven pussy were on view, but she wasn't scared, she knew Felix. Felix brought in their giant German shepard, and the first thing Tatiyanna noticed is that the dog was horny as fuck. __________________ likes: pussy torture,anal, wedgies, pain, and ice, spit. And alot more that isnt in my limits. limits:nipple torture, to much pain, public, xdressing,cam PM ME DARES, I WILL EXCEPT ANY WITHIN MY LIMITS. OWNED BY:blackhaze122997 Last edited by dare taker; 02-14-2013 at 04:43 PM. Reason: spelling

02-14-2013, 05:38 PM	#6
25rob1985 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 265	you need to slow down and give more detail. __________________ Everytime I receive a PM saying "PINCH" I will pinch and hold on to both my nipples for 5 mins Everytime I receive a PM saying "RED" I will spank my ass until both cheeks are red Everytime I receive a PM saying "FLICK" I will flick my balls 10 times. Everytime I receive a PM saying "ABOVE" I will post in the first person above dare thread in the person above section. Everytime I receive a PM saying "QUICK STRIP" I have 30 seconds to strip of all my clothes

02-16-2013, 08:43 PM	#7
Slut020 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 13	Slow down I agree more detail and slow down

02-19-2013, 03:31 AM	#8
krone6 Distinguished Member Join Date: Oct 2012 Location: Earth Posts: 526	Just like the others, however it's got a ton of potential. Try breaking each idea (waking up, eating, dog part) into mini paragraphs. Thinking about it in smaller chunks should allow you to focus more on each idea in greater detail then trying to focus on everything at once, which seems to be what is happening. __________________ Likes: Diapers, anal, orgasm denial/forced, Shower Dares, Some Ice Play, Cum Eating Dislikes: Crossdressing, Pee Play, messy, poop, Urine Drinking Limits: illegal, public, family, friends, severe pain, vids/cam ---------------------------

02-20-2013, 10:32 PM	#9
dare taker Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 24	January 1st The dog walked around sniffing in different places around the garage.Felix left telling Tatiyanna that he needed to run some aaron's,and wouldn't be back till at least 8pm, which is a really long time considering its 10 am right now. Tatiyanna was at the dogs mercy. About thirty minutes after Felix left, the German shepard made its move, it pounced on Tatiyanna, fucking her pussy brutality, it felt like she was being slept apart. There was no lube, he didn't ease in. Just named it into her, and things got worst, he cummed in her. The dog had to wait for his Dick to shrink to get it out, whick made things more painfully for Tatiyanna. And to think this dog could do it whenever it wanted to for the next several hours. HOPED YOU GUYS LIKED THIS ONE, SORRY THERE SHORT, ITS HARD TO WRITE ON A KINDLE FIRE, DAMN AUTO CORRECT ACTUALLY. SPELLS SOME STUFF WRONG. __________________ likes: pussy torture,anal, wedgies, pain, and ice, spit. And alot more that isnt in my limits. limits:nipple torture, to much pain, public, xdressing,cam PM ME DARES, I WILL EXCEPT ANY WITHIN MY LIMITS. OWNED BY:blackhaze122997

02-20-2013, 11:11 PM	#10
krone6 Distinguished Member Join Date: Oct 2012 Location: Earth Posts: 526	Loving this newest section. Excited to read some more about the dog part if you continue to write about it. __________________ Likes: Diapers, anal, orgasm denial/forced, Shower Dares, Some Ice Play, Cum Eating Dislikes: Crossdressing, Pee Play, messy, poop, Urine Drinking Limits: illegal, public, family, friends, severe pain, vids/cam ---------------------------

02-25-2013, 06:46 PM	#11
dare taker Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 24	The dog raped her at least 7 times that day. Felix got back when he said he would, then feed Tatiyanna, but it wasnt a normal meal. Felix made Tatiyanna get on her knees in the kitchen while he sat naked in a chair. "suck it, now." Tatiyanna did. "dont spill any, this is your meal." Felix said. Tatiyanna sucked as Felix let 3 loads into her mouth, pushing her head don into his pubes. Like Felix said, Tatiyanna didnt spill any. __________________ likes: pussy torture,anal, wedgies, pain, and ice, spit. And alot more that isnt in my limits. limits:nipple torture, to much pain, public, xdressing,cam PM ME DARES, I WILL EXCEPT ANY WITHIN MY LIMITS. OWNED BY:blackhaze122997

04-01-2013, 06:41 PM	#12
dare taker Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 24	Felix dragged Tatiyanna into the garage, and through her to the floor. "We have the entire night to play." Felix dropped his pants and boxers, along with his shirt, revealing his 7 inch cock. Felix thrusters his cock deep inside Tatiyannas pussy. It was a good 10 minute fucking until Felix chummed right into her pussy. __________________ likes: pussy torture,anal, wedgies, pain, and ice, spit. And alot more that isnt in my limits. limits:nipple torture, to much pain, public, xdressing,cam PM ME DARES, I WILL EXCEPT ANY WITHIN MY LIMITS. OWNED BY:blackhaze122997