01-31-2012, 08:14 PM | #16 |
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Great! Very talented!
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02-03-2012, 02:20 PM | #17 |
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Ive never gotten a very talented on my story!!
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02-05-2012, 05:38 PM | #18 |
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love love love love!!!!!!
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02-08-2012, 02:36 PM | #19 |
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omg you are very talented. continue writing and i will continue reading!!
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03-28-2012, 06:11 PM | #20 |
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~♥~Third Part~♥~
We walk in slowly seeing restraints’ lying on the bed, and then it all becomes dark. Realizing that I have been blindfolded. I started to get scared and worried, unsure what was happening. I whimpered and didn’t move a step. It was all quiet no sound and no movement. My body started to shake as I herd people getting closer. I get a smack on the ass and I jumped wondering if it was Sir behind me. Who could it be? A man started talking behind me. “What do you think we should do with this little bitch?” As footsteps coming closer to me and gave a tug from the nipple clamps. “No movement...... Impressive.” I didn’t know the voice. It was deep, with a small accent of an Australian. I feel this soft smooth hand rub down my body to my ass. The warmth of the hand on my ass, as I get a hard smack on each ass cheek. “Get moving bitch. We don’t have time for stalling.” I start getting lead by the leash in the dark. I start whimpering. I ended up with a smack on my ass every movement. Feeling around with my hands, the wooden floor led to carpet. “Put your hands out, in a fist” the mysterious voice said. I started hesitating, and get’s a smack on the ass. “Now!” I slowly sat up and put my hands into a fist shape. My hand’s got pulled away from my body, with rough man’s hands. I feel cold leather moving over my fisted hands. I wasn’t sure what it was. They went on one by one and were tight keeping my hands as fist. As I tried to open my hand but there was not movement that could be made. Trying to paw at my other fist to get the leather off, it didn’t work. Then I tried biting at the leather, but faster then I knew it, got a hard smack on the ass. “Bad girl! No biting at leather paws.” When I herd “leather paws” My head slowly started to tilt. I started pawing at the blindfold to see what “leather paws’’ looked like. I get pulled by the collar and led around. Wasn’t sure where I was going or if I was in same room. “Stay.” I laid down staying in one spot as the man lightly patted my head. “Good girl.”
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03-29-2012, 01:10 AM | #21 |
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Very nice! Even though its not the smoothest writing style I've ever read, your story literally drips passion, lust and pure, raw horniness. :-) More!
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04-01-2012, 12:09 PM | #22 |
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good story again! =) hope you get more good reviews! =3
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