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07-15-2008, 11:11 AM
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getDare Sweetheart
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I'm really likeing this, it kind of reminds me of a period erotic novel with the purple prose. Really good so far keep going
 The only negative thing, which is a tiny thing is maybe when describing use a a few different words you seem to use the same ones a fair bit. But honestly so good!
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Have fun all! Love you my smooch! Last edited by Bandit|Queen; 07-15-2008 at 11:14 AM. |
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