Fiction: World of Femdom

MyNameIsHi · 05-06-2010, 02:31 PM

Warning: This story will most likely feature teens as young as thirteen years of age engaging in sexual activities.

Another note: This is my very first story, so it may not be as good as most others.

A final note: If I ever stop posting for a prolonged amount of time, then please, somebody continue the story for me.

Introduction:

Nick looked at Lucy for as long as he dared. She was the hottest girl he had ever seen, she was a bit short, had black hair, and was very talkative. She was also very popular, and was way out of Nick's league. That isn't to say that Nick was ugly, stupid, or strange in any way. If Nick was talkative then he would probably be way up there, maby higher then Lucy. But as it was Nick kept to himself.

Memories for Life · 05-07-2010, 03:58 AM

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Originally Posted by MyNameIsHi

A final note: If I ever stop posting for a prolonged amount of time, then please, somebody continue the story for me.

I suspect this author may write a few installments but ultimately just leave it hanging...for someone else to finish!

Playstation · 05-07-2010, 08:01 AM

Interesting start, do go on.

Slenderman - Doctor · 05-08-2010, 02:43 PM

Not much to go on at the minute but I will be reading as, for one thing, the title has captured my attention. Always a good sign.

Rawk Hawk · 08-15-2011, 08:54 PM

If anyone would care, I could take a shot at this. I've never written a story before, but I've read most of the good stories on here. Maybe I'd leave, and then we'd have a switching thing. Also, no need to worry about spelling or grammar. If you'd like, just comment.

Silvercola · 08-15-2011, 10:00 PM

Erm could we change the ages to at least 16 lol 13 years olD

Rawk Hawk · 08-16-2011, 08:20 AM

Sure, I'll change the ages to 16/17. Anyone interested, though?

idlersdream · 08-16-2011, 12:28 PM

please give it a shot

Rawk Hawk · 08-16-2011, 01:26 PM

Eventually Nick realized that staring would get him nowhere. he wanted to be with this girl, and decided to break out of his shell, if only for a moment, to attempt this.
"H-Hello Lucy."
"Hey there, umm... Nick, is it?"
"Yes, that's right. I was wondering if... if you'd like to come over sometime?"
"Sure, how about Friday?"
"Absolutely! My parents are leaving town, so we'll have the place to ourselves," Nick said, trying to avoid letting his severe attraction show through.Lucy thought about this, realizing he was attracted to him almost instantly, and considering the possibilities. "I'll be there at 6:30, be ready for me!" Lucy winked mischieviously, walking away and already texting friends to help with her... ideas.

Rawk Hawk · 08-16-2011, 01:27 PM

Sorry it's short, just a start to get into writing. Basically a further intro. I knoow it's stereotypical, but id like tips.

daremaster 1 · 08-16-2011, 01:53 PM

Sounds great! But not much yet

Rawk Hawk · 08-16-2011, 07:12 PM

I know, sorry. it was a spur of the moment thing. I hope to update every 3/4 days, with long chapters.

05-06-2010, 02:31 PM	#1
MyNameIsHi Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 4	World of Femdom Warning: This story will most likely feature teens as young as thirteen years of age engaging in sexual activities. Another note: This is my very first story, so it may not be as good as most others. A final note: If I ever stop posting for a prolonged amount of time, then please, somebody continue the story for me. Introduction: Nick looked at Lucy for as long as he dared. She was the hottest girl he had ever seen, she was a bit short, had black hair, and was very talkative. She was also very popular, and was way out of Nick's league. That isn't to say that Nick was ugly, stupid, or strange in any way. If Nick was talkative then he would probably be way up there, maby higher then Lucy. But as it was Nick kept to himself.

05-07-2010, 08:01 AM	#3
Playstation Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 224	Interesting start, do go on. __________________

08-15-2011, 08:54 PM	#5
Rawk Hawk Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Texas Posts: 41	If anyone would care, I could take a shot at this. I've never written a story before, but I've read most of the good stories on here. Maybe I'd leave, and then we'd have a switching thing. Also, no need to worry about spelling or grammar. If you'd like, just comment. __________________ A lurker on the story board, but a very thorough one. If you tell me about it on the story board, odds are I've read it.

08-16-2011, 08:20 AM	#7
Rawk Hawk Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Texas Posts: 41	Sure, I'll change the ages to 16/17. Anyone interested, though? __________________ A lurker on the story board, but a very thorough one. If you tell me about it on the story board, odds are I've read it.

08-16-2011, 12:28 PM	#8
idlersdream Member Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 90	please give it a shot __________________ Likes: Humiliation, crossdressing, embarrassment, wedgies, underwear dares, spanking, Limits: anal, poo, piss, public, extreme pain, permanent, blood, social suicide

05-08-2010, 02:43 PM	#4
Slenderman - Doctor Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6,760	Not much to go on at the minute but I will be reading as, for one thing, the title has captured my attention. Always a good sign.

08-15-2011, 10:00 PM	#6
Silvercola Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 169	Erm could we change the ages to at least 16 lol 13 years olD

08-16-2011, 01:26 PM	#9
Rawk Hawk Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Texas Posts: 41	Eventually Nick realized that staring would get him nowhere. he wanted to be with this girl, and decided to break out of his shell, if only for a moment, to attempt this. "H-Hello Lucy." "Hey there, umm... Nick, is it?" "Yes, that's right. I was wondering if... if you'd like to come over sometime?" "Sure, how about Friday?" "Absolutely! My parents are leaving town, so we'll have the place to ourselves," Nick said, trying to avoid letting his severe attraction show through.Lucy thought about this, realizing he was attracted to him almost instantly, and considering the possibilities. "I'll be there at 6:30, be ready for me!" Lucy winked mischieviously, walking away and already texting friends to help with her... ideas.

08-16-2011, 01:27 PM	#10
Rawk Hawk Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Texas Posts: 41	Sorry it's short, just a start to get into writing. Basically a further intro. I knoow it's stereotypical, but id like tips. __________________ A lurker on the story board, but a very thorough one. If you tell me about it on the story board, odds are I've read it.

08-16-2011, 01:53 PM	#11
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	Sounds great! But not much yet

08-16-2011, 07:12 PM	#12
Rawk Hawk Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Texas Posts: 41	I know, sorry. it was a spur of the moment thing. I hope to update every 3/4 days, with long chapters. __________________ A lurker on the story board, but a very thorough one. If you tell me about it on the story board, odds are I've read it.