Fiction: A young mans missunderstanding

potter1harry · 06-15-2011, 10:51 AM

They were on the bus in the way home from school on Friday.

Okay Jen truth or dare. Well I pick dare. Ok I dare you to be my slave for the rest of the year. Fine, Jen said. Ok Nate truth or dare. Dare. I dare you to take your shirt off. Okay Jen truth or dare. Dare. I dare you to lift up your skirt and show me your panties. Jen complied (her panties were white) with some resistance.
It was then time for Nate to get off the bus.

On Saturday Nate called Jen and told her ok slave were no underwear today. Also since today is my birthday (turning 18) come over ok.
Jen showed up at 11 am Nate then said pull down your pants she did and she had on no underwear. Ok now you must……..

Okay sorry for any mistakes I am new at this. Please post comments.

fire blade · 06-15-2011, 11:25 AM

This is okay but its very rushed. Take your time and make the parts longer.

Memories for Life · 06-15-2011, 12:56 PM

Ok the title of this story is "A young mans misunderstanding". Ok I don't see anything in the brief first posting that suggests the young man misunderstand anything. Ok Jen takes a dare from Nate to be his slave for the rest of the year. Ok game over! Ok slave can't dare Master on anything. Ok sorry Im knew at this so comments read but ignored.

06-15-2011, 10:51 AM	#1
potter1harry Account Banned Join Date: May 2011 Location: on earth Posts: 298	A young mans missunderstanding They were on the bus in the way home from school on Friday. Okay Jen truth or dare. Well I pick dare. Ok I dare you to be my slave for the rest of the year. Fine, Jen said. Ok Nate truth or dare. Dare. I dare you to take your shirt off. Okay Jen truth or dare. Dare. I dare you to lift up your skirt and show me your panties. Jen complied (her panties were white) with some resistance. It was then time for Nate to get off the bus. On Saturday Nate called Jen and told her ok slave were no underwear today. Also since today is my birthday (turning 18) come over ok. Jen showed up at 11 am Nate then said pull down your pants she did and she had on no underwear. Ok now you must…….. Okay sorry for any mistakes I am new at this. Please post comments.

06-15-2011, 11:25 AM	#2
fire blade Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Why do you need to know Posts: 106 Blog Entries: 4	This is okay but its very rushed. Take your time and make the parts longer. __________________ 20/bi/male Likes : Crossdressing, anal, mild pain, humiliation, BDSM, bondage, sissyfaction, and babyfaction. Limits : scat public illegal extrem pain permanant marks blood freinds/family messy I am a unowned slave looking for a master. My ad: www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?p=480083

06-15-2011, 12:56 PM	#3
Memories for Life getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Jacksonville, FL Posts: 1,012	Ok the title of this story is "A young mans misunderstanding". Ok I don't see anything in the brief first posting that suggests the young man misunderstand anything. Ok Jen takes a dare from Nate to be his slave for the rest of the year. Ok game over! Ok slave can't dare Master on anything. Ok sorry Im knew at this so comments read but ignored.