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[Okiidokii]

My apologies if thing Aren't spelled right or this is in the wrong sections.
Here it goes:


Kennedy was on her way home from
Work walked down a rode which Boone ever
Bothered to go down but it was the fastest route to her house.
Being 20, she lived alone and attended collage on Thursday's.
Her parents and family all lived in a different state.
She was kinda a social bug. She
Ran a little more. If she was lost or something bad happened on this rode she would be screwed. A bird started to chirp and she looked for the birdie and her nest. A ball gag got put in her mouth, aching her jaw and handcuffs of her hands soon followed. She was shoved into a car.
She couldn't scream or see or even feel anything. In about 45 minutes they were at their destination. She could see again. It was a HUGE house. Miles from anything. They took her
And threw her in an bathroom
With no lock. They waited till she took a shower and grabbed her clothes
And there wasn't any towels. All the people gathered to the long table So the head couple could explain whats going on. The head person explain "I am the master of the master and this here is mistress. You call us that or else. This Is a camp we choose you for. *pointing at the 6 Boys and 5 girls* some of you actually 2 of you have been here for 2 weeks and you
Know the process. Slave go get the girl."

KENNEDYS POV
He came in when I was naked. I was scared. He led me to my clothes
And dragged me to the table.

OTHER POV
" Thank you slave" Your welcome master". Mistress continued "We have rules.
Unless
We
Give you close you wear no close. Boys you may wear what you want.
Boys are the masters. Girls are
The slaves. No protesting. Girls do what we say and then in a 2 weeks girls
Will become mistress. Let's assign partners. The person across from you."
Master continued mistress's speech.
Reach under your chair boys. You will find a bag, a gag, handcuffs, a Leash and a collar.
Girls put clothes I'm bag and put all this on.
KENNEDY POV
I was forced to strip by the cutesy guy ever and he bound me and I couldn't talk.
I got put a
Collar and leash on and
He held on to it.

MISTRESS POV
"Let's go. Boys give the girls-" master broke in "Slaves" "Yes, gove them a
Good tug so we can show you the couple floors.
Boys you'll be sleeping in room
Upstairs. Sinse we can't trust the girls yet the first night they'll be sleeping in the check-up rooms. Surprisingly this house is customized so that's what were doing tonight. There's instructions there. Go to the rooms.

KENNEDY
The rooms had a table, weird things, bed post and under bed retraint system. There was a sheet of paper. It read:
Doctor time:
1. Enema bag filled with solution. Put plug and hold it for 20 minutes.
2. 30 spankings while holding it.
3. If slave fails to hold. Press the intercom and tell us your room number.
4. Let her go to bath room
5. Blindfold her
6. Leave the room and go to your room
This didn't sound good. He didn't seem worried. I was strapped on my stomach
And he filled me up. Thes cramps started quickly.
He shoved the plug
In. Then he pound a paddle and slapped each cheeck 15 times.
I couldn't hold it any longer. I leaked. He buzzed. "room 3".
Mistress came in the
Room. She unbound me. She then whipped me 30 times on each breast, cheek, cheeks, back and my clit. It was so painful and nice that I came. "BAD SLAVE!" she screamed.
She grabbed my leash and pulled me onto the bed and put a vibe in my pp
And
One in my arse. I was gonna pass out. She bound me up(I already got rid of the enema on the bed) and put a blindfold on. She started whipping me and whipping me then she closed the door and left. I was all alone in the dark.
NEXT DAY:
My master came in a explained mistress was gonna come get me and left.
She came In to my messy bed. I was so sore. She unblind folded me. She grabbed my leash and pulled me.
OTHER POV:
"Breakfast"
There was 2 bowls per girl. One had oatmeal and one had water.
I ate and drank everything. She took everyone into the basement. Just seeing it made the girls shake. Toys, machines, mats, ropes, bed an everything else.
The boys smiled.

Should I countinue?

[CuddleRainbowz]

I think this is good? But I am confused. Almost confusizzled. But not quite. Go on. But with only one persons point of view per chapter. Or carry on with one persons pov for the whole thing. If you carry on, start again please. I am really confused.

[Okiidokii]

Tonight I'll re-do it all. From an other persons POV with better words.

[Okiidokii]

Re-did it differently. It's called something else now! Kennedy and Kody! Same theme