A Week of Pain [Fiction]

[ShyDare]

I've been reading stories here for last couple of weeks and registered just today to write some of my own! I've already fixed the skeleton of this series and will continue to write it whenever I have enough time.

This story is completely fictitious and contains explicit descriptions of nudity and sexuality. Some of the ideas are mine and I also referred many of others here and there.

English is my 2nd language so I won't be using fancy expressions and such. Please be generous on verbal mistakes. I'm always open for critiques and suggestions so feel free to help me make a better story.

Anyway, hope you enjoy.

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Part 1. A Mishap

I'm Eric, an 18 year old high school student. I'm about 5'8" tall and weigh 124 lbs. I have a lean body with little fat, black eyes and dark brown hair. The following story of my agony happened in the last summer.

I'd been involved in online D/s relationship for a few months. I was a slave and I had a mistress though I'd never seen her even in pictures. On every weekend I logged in a messenger and followed her orders showing myself to her through webcam. She wasn't much harsh that I sometimes felt need for more intense domination. I told her my feeling a month before but nothing had really changed. She usually made me masturbate with various things, do anal fingering, be tied up naked, and stay still in an uncomfortable position for hours, and so on.

It was a Monday. My parents were going on a trip for one week. I have no siblings so the whole week was mine alone. I was very excited for such a situation had never happened in my life. I already told my mistress about this and we agreed to have a special play full week long. I turned on my laptop and logged in as soon as my parents left the front door. She was there waiting for me.

[MistressX] why are you so late, slave?
[ShyDare] i'm sorry mistress they just left
[MistressX] fine i'll not punish you for this
[ShyDare] thank you mistress
[MistressX] this week will be so much fun
[MistressX] i see from your face you too are aroused, aren't you slave?
[ShyDare] yes i am mistress
[MistressX] naughty boy......
[MistressX] you came more than 10 times yesterday
[MistressX] and you're longing already!

On the day before I was ordered to masturbate and come as many times as I could, looking at and fantasizing the girl living next door. I could see her room from the window. Her name was Alexis. She and I were in the same school and the same grade. She was very pretty and popular but we knew each other little.

My mistress said I'd be punished if I failed to come more than a dozen times in an hour. I managed to do eleven times but couldn't accomplish the last one. So the last message reminded me of the upcoming punishment she would give me.

[MistressX] first, strip naked and unlock the front door
[MistressX] it will be open till your parents come back
[MistressX] so if anybody visits your perversion will go public lol

Following her orders I first worried but then thought 'who would abruptly come without notice?' It still turned me on a bit. Then she made me to drop keys for my handcuffs and other restraints into a bottle of water and freeze it. After a while I showed her the bottle full of ice with keys in its bottom.

Next I had to bind me to the dinner table. I laid down on the table on my back and cuffed each ankle to a different table leg making my legs spread. I put on a collar and bound the leash attached to it on the other side of the table, unable to get up. I finally put a ball gag in my mouth, blindfold myself with a scarf, and cuffed my wrists together between my back and table surface, leaving me fully vulnerable. The bottle was of course in my hands so I could release myself after the ice melted. My laptop was put near the table in order that my mistress might watch my self-bondage.

Suddenly I heard a knock from the front door. I panicked. 'What if somebody comes in and finds me?' A few more knocks followed. I heard the door open. I wished I had a super power to melt the ice at once to get the keys even if I knew it was impossible. I heard someone walk into the house. 'Who the hell would it be? Oh my god, maybe mom and dad left something. Or it could be a neighbor. No way it's Alexis. She'll tell this to everybody in the school.' The footsteps were getting louder and louder, closer and closer. Then they stopped. I was sure the intruder was right before me shocked by a slim naked body bound to an altar. I gulped silently waiting for the response.

"Eric!"

I knew the voice. 'Damn, it's Alexis!' I thought could tell her I was robbed by a pervert. Perhaps she wouldn't believe it. But after all what could she do? I was gagged, however, and couldn't speak anyhow. She ran into me and pulled the gag out of my mouth. She asked.

"Eric, are you okay?"
"Alexis, it that you? Help me release myself!"

It was humiliating to ask a girl to release me from bondage but I had no other choices. Yet what made me despair the most was her next word.

"Bad boy. You'd better call be 'mistress' Alexis...... Surprised, ShyDare?"





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[youngscotsman]

lol nice begining , classics always work

[ShyDare]

Part 2. Getting started

"What! You are Mistress X?" I asked in surprise.

"This is my final warning. Watch your language."

Realizing my mistake, I asked again. "Mistress Alexis, are you mistress X?"

She lowered her head, nibbled my left ear, and whispered. "Yes, as you see."

I was totally confused. "So wh.. what are you gonna do to me..... mistress?"

"As we discussed before you have to do whatever I want you to do. For the whole week. And remember what you said last month? I'm sure it will satisfy you this time. I mean it will be extreme..."

She didn't forget at all.

"You will be moved to somewhere else, not here. I know a dom who I met from an internet community. His place is full of kinky toys and devices and he let me use them exclusively throughout this week!"

I gulped. Before I decided what to say, she continued.

"Before we go. I'll give you the punishment for last night's failure. I'm sure this will be stronger than any other punishments you've ever had. But it will be much easier than those you will get when you make mistakes for the next seven days. So, you'd better be obedient, slave."

She gagged me again and I was still blindfolded. I felt something stuck to my stomach. Followed by cock, nipples, inner thighs, upper arms, and so forth. Unexpected, they tickled me a bit.

"Those are electrodes and they will shock you. But you don't know where and when the electricity will go. It will flow to a random place, at a random time. I won't stop this till you free yourself. You should hold firm that iced bottle in your hands or the torment may last the whole week! Enjoy!"

Suddenly I sensed a sharp stab on my left nipple. My scream muffled by gag, I almost dropped the bottle but managed to hold it. After a few second, it struck my right inner thigh. This continued all over my body. I squeezed the bottle in the hope of melting it faster. One time three shocks hit my cock consecutively. The other time it was calm for about a half minute then ambushed me taking a brief relaxation. She was chuckling while I was suffering, squirming, and howling helplessly.

I got the keys after about 20 minutes though it felt like hours. Yet it wasn't easy to find the one I needed, for my hands were behind my back and I couldn't see anything. After getting ten more strokes, I finally uncuffed my wrists and swept everything off my body immediately.

"Good job, slave. Liked it?" said Alexis removing gag and blindfold.

I panted. I looked up to her. She grinned at me. She was wearing a black miniskirt and a red tanktop. My eyes stopped at her breasts for a while and I noticed I should answer her question.

"No.... mistress... It was...... too... painful."
"Perfect. It was a punishment, not a reward. Now you know how you should behave. Next time I punish you, it will be worse. I bet you."

I nodded, still panting, stark-naked save collar on the neck and cuffs on ankles, bound to a dinner table.

"Time to move." said she.


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[Rhys]

Great start to the story.Please continue.

[Maha12347]

Yeah, totally good. Who would of thought that it would be his neighbor?

[Coyote]

i like this story. nice twist. it reminds me of one of my favorite authors by the name of O.Henry

[daremenow]

When are you going to post more?

[ShyDare]

Thanks for compliments. Sorry for delay.

I tried to rename the previous part to 'Before Getting Started' but I guess I can't.

This part is a bit cliched so I'll try to make the next part compensate it.

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Part 3. The Initiation Ceremony

Alexis drove her car to the place. I was seating naked on the assistant seat, bending myself over her, and pleasuring her with my mouth so I couldn't see where we were going. By the time we arrived, she'd orgasmed more than five times and my mouth and tongue felt blistered from licking too long.

It was a house of two stories deep in the woods. Its black roof and wall without any window looked creepy from the outside. Entering into the gate, I realized the interior was even more so. Inside was a single large room illuminated by dim lamps with coarse concrete floor. It made me think it was still under construction. There were a few strange-looking apparatus such as a man-sized transparent tube, a number of wooden boxes big and small, chains and ropes all over the floor, and a staircase leading to the second floor.

She said it would be my room for the week. I would have to do everything on its cold floor. Sleeping, eating, pissing, pooping, namely everything. The second floor was mistress’ place. I would have to keep myself away from there. Since there were no clocks windows, I would never know time and date. I just had to do what she told me to do. Sleep when she told me to sleep, eat when she told me to eat, piss when she told me to piss, poop when she told me to poop, and so on.

Then I was to be cleaned up. My ankles and wrists were shackled to some kind of giant metal ring. The chain fixed to each limb was pulled tight making me upright, spreadeagled, looking like an 'X' inside a circle. She opened a box and I could see shaving tools. While I was begging, she roughly trimmed my body hairs with an electric razor.

Perhaps thinking I was distracting, she gagged me and started to cover the whole body with shaving cream. A safe razor gently shaved my cock, balls, ass, armpits, arms, legs, and torso front and back, literally everywhere below neck, clean and smooth. In the mirror in front of me was a skinny body that would be suitable for a preteen, with a hairless hard-on that I could have only seen in porns and a boyish face blushed up to the roots of his only remaining hair. She opened her mouth after a long silence during shaving.

"Sorry, I forgot to bring aftershave so I'm gonna use something else."

She went upstairs and came back with ten bottles of vodka. Before I realized what was going to happen, she opened a bottle and started to pour it over my head. The alcohol ran down my face and as soon as it reached my chest I sensed a sharp pain. The ache then spread all over the body. It was far much stronger than ordinary aftershaves. My cock and balls were suffering the most because their skin was particularly delicate and even more it was the first time to be shaved. I was squirming and screaming through the gag but she didn't mind and emptied all of them to the last drop. The tortured body was now gleaming as if it is oiled. It was embarrassing and painful but at the same time I was somewhat horny.

Next she rotated the ring so I was turned upside-down. She opened another box and there were a syringe and a bottle of enema. Each time she pushed the nozzle down into my ass, the fluid was injected and my craving for excretion increased but I was not allowed to do so without her permission. The coldness from evaporating alcohol made me shiver and intensified my need even more. She put more than two pints in my ass over dozens of times. It felt like holding diarrhea.

She giggled looking at my wry face and fingered my swollen belly. I couldn't control myself anymore. My anus finally exploded, penis bursting simultaneously. It spouted out foul muddy liquid several times like a volcano and the flow ran down my inverted body to the head. Some of it flew into my nose and even into the gap between my mouth and the gag. I couldn't but taste it and drink it. I threw up. The puke mostly gushed out from the nose. The scene in the mirror was a total mess. I wasn't excited anymore. My cock had become flaccid.

"You broke my word, slave. I know it wasn't purposed but rules are rules. After washing this, you will be punished." said she with a strict voice.


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[Pikachu]

Very nice keep it up

[Officelover]

It's a good start. I wan't sure about how the master is the neighbor though. That seems to come up too often. But, I think it's getting better as it goes on. Kudos!

[daremenow]

is there gonna be more?

[ShyDare]

It's getting hardcore. Should it be move to the mature section? Not that I know how to do that.

I hope the "picture" I'm trying to show you was well depicted in the writing.

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Part 4. Dual pain

She washed my body clean with a water hose and rotated the wheel. I was upright again. The gag was removed. I quickly spat out the stenchful fluid in the mouth. She started to talk.

"You should know this. When I PLAY with you, it may be disgusting, humiliating or mentally unbearable but it won't be painful. But when it comes to punishments, you will experience a severe physical pain. I see you're submissive and like kinky things but you're not a fucking masochist. You don't like pain, do you?"

I shook my head. Suddenly she grabbed my balls, squeezed them hard, and shouted.

"Put your answer into WORDS!!!!! You should ALWAYS do so unless you are gagged!! Understood?"

"Yes, mistress... please stop squeezing...." said I, whimpering.

My balls were relieved from pressure.

"Both play and punishment turn me on so I don't care. It's entirely up to you, your behavior. Each punishment will teach you a valuable lesson though. Never disobey your mistress."

"Mistress Alexis, I'll be obedient. Can you look over it just once? Please..."

"No. Your dick and ass disobeyed my order. So they have to suffer. This will be fun. For me only, of course."

I was gagged again. The wheel turned but into the front this time. I was suspended by chains on limbs, face down ass up. A moment later something was stuffed into the ass. Something ice-cold, metallic, roughly an inch thick. Pushed through as far as possible, its end was located deep inside me. I moaned from pain. The pressure soon disappeared.

"Hold it. Don't let it out."

I concentrated on my ass to hold it from slipping out.

"Okay, what's in your ass... I call it a trident... Ever heard of smart metal? I guess you haven't because you are a stupid whore. It's some sort of alloy that can memorize its shape. And that's why it is called smart."

I was confused by random things she was talking about.

"It changes its shape as temperature changes. At a low temperature like now, it's just a dildo. But as it's heated up its one end splits into three parts. Each part bends outward and by the end they'll together look like an anchor with hooks. That's why it is a trident."

Before I got what was going on, I felt strange feelings inside me. My anal unconsciously got loose and the trident slipped out a little.

"YOU STUPID BITCH!! WHAT DID I TELL YOU?" She roared. "You are so disobedient so I'll do it myself. I'll push it down till it completely changes its shape."

The "trident" was immediately placed back deep in my ass. After a few minutes she laid it down. I tried to push it out but it was quite stuck because of the shape. Yet not much painful. The wheel turned round again, face up ass down. I sensed sudden pulling from the ass.

'Oh my god, she is weighing!!!"

It was very uncomfortable. She weighed more and more. Finally it felt like ripping the ass from inside out. And it continued indefinitely. I squirmed but it was absolutely of no use. I knew it could never be removed until it was cooled down like ice.

"I'll give you the privilege to see the second part." said she, removing the blindfold.

I saw a metal rod as thick as a pen in her hand. I desperately shook my head whimpering like a little girl. She made a devilish grin and shoved it into the cock with one hand, stretching the pee hole with the other hand. I screamed out loud. The rod was freezing but the pain was burning. She licked my cock as if soothing it. As it got harder the part of metal rod shoved in it lengthened since her finger was pressing the outer end.

When the cock was fully erect a rubber cock ring was placed at its bottom, sustaining the condition. Like the one in my ass, the metal rod slowly changed its shape. In the end the protrusion was evident, like three wires trying to penetrate the stiff shaft from the inside. Every second was excruciating although she wasn't touching me at all just looking at me pleasingly. I sobbed.


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[CleverGirl]

I just have to say, excellent post. The vocabulary is great. The grammer is nearly perfect. The descriptions are top notch. The vast majority of stories posted on the site are a grammatical nightmare. Sentences go on and on without punctuation. There is no description. Texting Language is used. *Involuntary Shudder* I usually can't bare to read these. Just can't get through them. And its really a shame, since there are some good ideas. But alas, a good idea poorly executed doesn't do so well. But this is excellent. I can actually read through it and get caught up in the story. I'm glad there is a story here I can actually stand to read and one where I can look forward to reading more. This is especially impressive considering English is your secound language. It sure doesn't seem like it, especailly in comparison to so many other writers here who don't seem to know that periods were invented for a reason (sorry for the inserted rant, I can't stand it when people rip the English language to shreads). Keep on writting, and I 'll keep on reading. Excellent plot too, by the way.

[x.Emma.x]

Yes, I agree. It's a phenomenal story with excellent additions. I'm loving this; please do continue.

CleverGirl, it's funny how you compliment ShyDare's grammar, though you can't spell the word "grammar" correctly yourself.