07-22-2009, 02:12 AM | #16 |
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This is an amazing story, can't wait for some more
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07-22-2009, 12:22 PM | #17 |
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No cliffhanger this time but it still holds the hook that would make a reader continue to follow the story. I kind of figured that something along those lines was going to be in the ice chest. I am interested to see what is in the backpack though. I am interested to see what happens next.
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07-26-2009, 12:02 AM | #18 |
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I'll be posting the next part probably today or tomorrow. Remember, if you would like me to write more, let me know! Encouragement helps motivation a lot
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07-30-2009, 11:42 AM | #20 |
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whoa truly spectacular, ur writing is technically almost perfect and the story has such a great plotline, excellent, please continue.
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