07-21-2010, 11:19 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: colorado
Posts: 84
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Awesome story
dude, u got really good writing talents, it is way better than my failed story i cant believe how much i like this story
and only 1 thing when u write down the time if you are going for military time don't put in the : for example u wrote 23:00 u should have wrote 2300 but that is the only thing i can find wrong
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