Love My Master <3

Posted 10-30-2011 at 11:18 PM by Play Toy For Life
Updated 10-30-2011 at 11:26 PM by Play Toy For Life

I will obey you my master
Everything you say I will obey and make it faster
My master you are so gentle to me,your slave
But you are also so bold and brave
You smile at me but I look away
And I do whatever you say
I blush whenever I see your face
My heart so fragile and poor starts to race
I love you my master
Please get over with it and make it faster
Tell me you don't love me back
Tell it to me like a fact
So that I again may lock my heart up in chains and tears
And that all my hopes you loving me back turn to fears
May my soul rest in the dark
Because of my frozen but shattered heart
May my tears fall with blood and bits of my shattered soul
I hate myself for not reaching my goal
Of not letting you love me back
Tell me what I lack
And I'll do anything to make myself what you think perfect
And if I am perfect to you, keep me near your heart like a jarred insect
But if you call me your one true love
I must have been blessed by the heavens above
Thank you so much...
I love you SuicideCode. You are the best master I could have!!!

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I personally find it very disrespectful to not capitalize Master.

Posted 10-31-2011 at 01:37 AM by lilysmaster

	Quote: Originally Posted by lilysmaster I personally find it very disrespectful to not capitalize Master. Well, that is you... I personally find it quite rude to come to someone's blog and criticize over something that is very optional... @Play Toy For Life: This is a really nice poem
	Posted 10-31-2011 at 09:42 AM by SubMissChievous

	I second Chloe. More disrespectful to make such a rude comment. o.o Besides, in the English language, when you add a possessive adjective in front a noun that is usually capitalized (like Mother, Father, etc. and not usually "master"), the noun is not capitalized.
	Posted 10-31-2011 at 10:08 AM by sweetsong

If its not liked then I'll remove it simple!! I dont want complaints.

Posted 10-31-2011 at 02:40 PM by Play Toy For Life

	Quote: Originally Posted by Play Toy For Life If its not liked then I'll remove it simple!! I dont want complaints. It's your blog; do what you like
	Posted 10-31-2011 at 03:50 PM by Slenderman - Doctor

<3

aawwwww that is such an awesome poem!

Posted 10-31-2011 at 06:38 PM by minimarshmellow
<3

Quote:

Originally Posted by minimarshmellow

aawwwww that is such an awesome poem!

thanks babe!!!! Your awesome!!

Posted 10-31-2011 at 06:40 PM by Play Toy For Life

	I agree don't mind my rude comment seeing as somehow in a rush the beginning of the comment was not posted. Not that it is any reason why it was not wrong. I stated that it was a very nice poem and that I liked it, in short. As stated it was truly an opinion and take it how you will, seeming as I can't have an opinion >.>
	Posted 10-31-2011 at 09:03 PM by lilysmaster

Quote:

Originally Posted by lilysmaster

I agree don't mind my rude comment seeing as somehow in a rush the beginning of the comment was not posted. Not that it is any reason why it was not wrong.

I stated that it was a very nice poem and that I liked it, in short. As stated it was truly an opinion and take it how you will, seeming as I can't have an opinion >.>

Its fine but it was rude the first comment you posted.

Posted 10-31-2011 at 10:03 PM by Play Toy For Life Play Toy For Life is offline

~*~*~ awwww this is so cute. I love you too sweetie ~*~*~

Posted 11-03-2011 at 01:36 PM by SuicideCode
Updated 12-24-2011 at 12:14 AM by SuicideCode

	awwww that's so cute!!! You two are cute together. That's one heck of a nice poem you got there you're good! Love from Sally xoxoxoxoxo
	Posted 11-08-2011 at 03:21 PM by Sally123

	I personally find it very disrespectful to not capitalize Master.
	Posted 10-31-2011 at 01:37 AM by lilysmaster

	If its not liked then I'll remove it simple!! I dont want complaints.
	Posted 10-31-2011 at 02:40 PM by Play Toy For Life

	<3 aawwwww that is such an awesome poem!
	Posted 10-31-2011 at 06:38 PM by minimarshmellow

	<3 Quote: Originally Posted by minimarshmellow aawwwww that is such an awesome poem! thanks babe!!!! Your awesome!!
	Posted 10-31-2011 at 06:40 PM by Play Toy For Life

	*~~~ awwww this is so cute. I love you too sweetie ~~~*
	Posted 11-03-2011 at 01:36 PM by SuicideCode Updated 12-24-2011 at 12:14 AM by SuicideCode

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