Essay as punnishment.

Star Shadows · 04-05-2010, 06:12 AM

If you have a sub that is difficult to find punishments for, (like pain or cold or denial or w/e you would usually use) you could try this.

What happens if you're naughty in school? (normally)... you get an essay.

make it the same for your sub, tell them to write x number of words on how naughty they have been and how they will try to never be naughty again. get them to show you it and then leave it somewhere it could get seen for (Xx days [Xx being dice roll or similar])

This way the essay will be the main punishment and the worry from the risk of someone seeing/ reading it will be a reminder not to do it again.

You can add as many adjustments to this as you need to get it to work, like adding additional elements, stimulation while writing, not to use strong hand ect..

xx Shadow

sekai · 04-05-2010, 06:35 AM

I like that, I use it

softeyes · 04-05-2010, 06:49 AM

Yep, this would definetely be a good punishment.

God I hate essays. >.>

+1 Shadow.

Mere · 04-05-2010, 07:38 AM

Heehee!! I love to write!! I can write a million word essay on anything!! So this won't work as a punishment for me!! But yea, I've found most people HATE to write..so may be for them, it works well!!
Thanks!!

dared to perfection · 04-05-2010, 09:01 AM

i really would HATE this to happen to me, i rarely do the work i should for college yet alone extra for a mistress!

SlutPuppy · 04-05-2010, 12:50 PM

I agree, I hate writing. xD Espically actually writing. With a pen/pencil.

softeyes · 04-05-2010, 12:53 PM

LOL (or rather snort-chuckle) Puppy.

I lost it.

SlutPuppy · 04-05-2010, 01:05 PM

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Originally Posted by softeyes

LOL (or rather snort-chuckle) Puppy.

I lost it.

You're welcome, Softy. Heh.

Stix · 04-05-2010, 01:10 PM

Yeah good punishment!

I can think of a certain someone who I may have to give this to if they were naughty

Merlin · 04-08-2010, 12:36 AM

funny i just used the idea of an essay as example in the "Punishment? But I've been a good slave!!!" thread. And i have to agree it is one of the few punishments in the whole forum really transferring the deeper meaning of a punishment. Especially for intended misbehaving.

SubMissChievous · 04-08-2010, 10:47 AM

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Originally Posted by Mere

Heehee!! I love to write!! I can write a million word essay on anything!! So this won't work as a punishment for me!!

I understand what you mean but I think here the purpose behind a punishment such as this one is not really the act of writing itself but forcing the sub to think about what they did wrong, why it was wrong, what they should or will do to improve the situation etc. I also love to write and used to blog and although I enjoyed writing I can remember how hard and sometimes even painful it was to write about my failures. Of course, I acknowledge that this would be even harsher on someone who hates writing as it would combine something that the sub doesn't enjoy with the fact that they have to reflect on what they did wrong.

And that's why I also find that this idea is one of the best and most effective I've seen posted here in a long time

I often find that most punishments's focus is the act itself and not so much the purpose behind it.

Excellent post

Merlin · 04-09-2010, 12:33 AM

exactly, like chloé said the point is not to write something but what you write. You have to think of what you did wrong, you have to think of the fact that you disobeyed and made your master disappointed, you have to think about why you did it, you have to think about how to not do it again... the writing is only a side effect and not really the punishment.

The meaning of a punishment is to make the sub clear that she did something wrong, why she did it wrong and how to correct her behavior. Any punishment not delivering these 3 things is almost pointless

Leopard · 04-09-2010, 03:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Merlin

The meaning of a punishment is to make the sub clear that she did something wrong, why she did it wrong and how to correct her behavior. Any punishment not delivering these 3 things is almost pointless

This exactly. If these aren't the things being carried to the sub then any so called punishment is a complete waste of time.

masterrobert · 04-10-2010, 06:28 PM

This is an excellent punishment, and I have used it many times in the past. I often make them not only write about what they did wrong and why it was wrong, but make them write about what they should have done if they had the chance to do it over.

maddy09 · 04-12-2010, 04:48 PM

That is a really good punishment i hate writing i hope my master doesn't do that when im naughty!

04-05-2010, 06:12 AM	#1
Star Shadows Prodigy Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Uk Posts: 4,707 Blog Entries: 13	Essay as punnishment. If you have a sub that is difficult to find punishments for, (like pain or cold or denial or w/e you would usually use) you could try this. What happens if you're naughty in school? (normally)... you get an essay. make it the same for your sub, tell them to write x number of words on how naughty they have been and how they will try to never be naughty again. get them to show you it and then leave it somewhere it could get seen for (Xx days [Xx being dice roll or similar]) This way the essay will be the main punishment and the worry from the risk of someone seeing/ reading it will be a reminder not to do it again. You can add as many adjustments to this as you need to get it to work, like adding additional elements, stimulation while writing, not to use strong hand ect.. xx Shadow __________________ Do not ask me for to be your slave, your mistress, or to give you truths or dares. You're wasting your time. Informative threads: Anonymous S/M advice service Threads of note PM MEGET S/M ADVICE WORSHIPS RACHIE**

04-05-2010, 06:49 AM	#3
softeyes Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In a land far, far, away.. Posts: 1,930 Blog Entries: 44	Yep, this would definetely be a good punishment. God I hate essays. >.> +1 Shadow. __________________ \| 22 \| Clueless sub \| Owned \| Ask a monster \| Tumblr \| Dedicated and Honored kitty/internet mall security officer. =^,.,^=!! =): fingerless gloves, biting, pain, collars, Bulbasaur and SKITTLES. [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] A vampire, it's like a walrus, but awesome. I am NOT a fairy \| I'm a kitty, yo \|

04-05-2010, 07:38 AM	#4
Mere Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: On her throne.. Posts: 1,221 Blog Entries: 74	Heehee!! I love to write!! I can write a million word essay on anything!! So this won't work as a punishment for me!! But yea, I've found most people HATE to write..so may be for them, it works well!! Thanks!! __________________ Chloe's Threads of Note! I dominate. ♔ .. [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]♔

04-05-2010, 09:01 AM	#5
dared to perfection getDare Devil Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: the best parts of the UK Posts: 1,090 Blog Entries: 1	i really would HATE this to happen to me, i rarely do the work i should for college yet alone extra for a mistress! __________________ If I receive a PM saying 'frustrate' I will wear my chastity belt for a duration of their choice. OR if no duration is stated, just for the remainder of that day. I'm on FetLife too - ask and I will tell!

04-05-2010, 12:50 PM	#6
SlutPuppy getDare Succubus Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Plut hole Posts: 1,811 Blog Entries: 97	I agree, I hate writing. xD Espically actually writing. With a pen/pencil. __________________ I'll be your bad girl... booty booty booty booty rockin' everywhere Sex Map HERE Likes/Dislikes/Limits

04-05-2010, 06:35 AM	#2
sekai Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Poland Posts: 251 Blog Entries: 4	I like that, I use it

04-05-2010, 12:53 PM	#7
softeyes Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In a land far, far, away.. Posts: 1,930 Blog Entries: 44	LOL (or rather snort-chuckle) Puppy. I lost it. __________________ \| 22 \| Clueless sub \| Owned \| Ask a monster \| Tumblr \| Dedicated and Honored kitty/internet mall security officer. =^,.,^=!! =): fingerless gloves, biting, pain, collars, Bulbasaur and SKITTLES. [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] A vampire, it's like a walrus, but awesome. I am NOT a fairy \| I'm a kitty, yo \|

04-05-2010, 01:10 PM	#9
Stix getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 1,018	Yeah good punishment! I can think of a certain someone who I may have to give this to if they were naughty

04-08-2010, 12:36 AM	#10
Merlin Misschievous's Authority Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany Posts: 1,552	funny i just used the idea of an essay as example in the "Punishment? But I've been a good slave!!!" thread. And i have to agree it is one of the few punishments in the whole forum really transferring the deeper meaning of a punishment. Especially for intended misbehaving. Last edited by Merlin; 04-09-2010 at 12:27 AM. Reason: Because a way to small devil disguised as angl cant understand the deep meaning of my perfect merlinish

04-09-2010, 12:33 AM	#12
Merlin Misschievous's Authority Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany Posts: 1,552	exactly, like chloé said the point is not to write something but what you write. You have to think of what you did wrong, you have to think of the fact that you disobeyed and made your master disappointed, you have to think about why you did it, you have to think about how to not do it again... the writing is only a side effect and not really the punishment. The meaning of a punishment is to make the sub clear that she did something wrong, why she did it wrong and how to correct her behavior. Any punishment not delivering these 3 things is almost pointless

04-10-2010, 06:28 PM	#14
masterrobert Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: PA Posts: 17	This is an excellent punishment, and I have used it many times in the past. I often make them not only write about what they did wrong and why it was wrong, but make them write about what they should have done if they had the chance to do it over.

04-12-2010, 04:48 PM	#15
maddy09 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Probably somewhere I'm not supposed to be. Posts: 240 Blog Entries: 28	That is a really good punishment i hate writing i hope my master doesn't do that when im naughty! __________________ 18/Female/Bi Likes:Light pain, orgasm control, Ice, Semi Public Limits: Family and friends, permanent, extremely messy, sending pic/videos,