the hockey friend

[face]

my first storie im still working on it just the build up if its even worth continuing let me know
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"matt...matt....wake up" a womans voice says "matt its time to get up".
i sit up "what time is it?" i say in my half awake voice ,"its noon"noon? oh shit!
as i get ready ill tell you more about me,im a 15 year old male im not the hottest guy you could say.
im about 145 pounds kinda muscular.
"alright ill be there soon,when dose our game start?"
i play hockey for a city league im a right defenseman,"alright colin ill be right there my mom is driving me right now"
my best friend Colin has been my best friend...well forever,we love hockey and we love videogames but most of all we are both suckers for money.
my game is against the best team in the state,we always seem to lose.
we have been practicing all week for this game,thats probably why i slept so late.

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we won 2-1.
"WHOOO" we all celebrate in the locker room "YES! DID YOU SEE THAT SHOT AT THE END?!"
"yea that must have almost broke your stick that was so fast" Colin said.
we all shower and get dressed.
outside the locker room our familieys are waiting.
"Hey Colin am i getting a ride with you?" i ask,"i don't think so" says colin.
buzz....buzzz...im getting a call.
i pick up,my mom is on the other side "matt it seems grandpa has taken a turn for the worse".
"well how do i get home?"
"jenifer's parents said they would take you home"
jenifer is the backup goalie on my team she's the only girl on the team.
"fine what about jeff and john?"
"they are coming"
"what the heck! i have to stay home alone"
"no your staying at jenifer's house"
"fine by love you"
"love you by"
i hung up my phone and sighd to myself great.
i thought well i better find jenifer,she should be by the girls lockers.
i walked around for about an hour or so i could not find her,i know her parents never were here on time to pick her up
but come on!.

im sitting by the girls lockers for like a half hour or so and its been 3 hours since the game ended.
"damn im tired of this" i take out my phone and call hr house.
rings...once...twice....3 times and her mom picks up,her dad and mom are divorced so it has to be her mom anyway.
"hello?"
"hey its matt"
oh hey matt is your game over so i can come pick you guys up?"
"what! you haven't left yet?"
this is so ridiculous since its a hour and a half drive to this rink.
"oh no jenie said she would call when you were done in the last period"
"well i cant find her so im gonna go look for her so we can leave"
"ok i will be there in a hour"
i hung up kinda pissed off cuz i want to sleep and forget about my grandparents.


i walk for about 5 minutes and then finally see her across the hall.
"jenifer! hold on"
"oh hey matt"
jenifer is about 5'6 with brown hair and has a gorgus smile that makes me loose my breath whenever she looks at me.
"whats up?" she asks
how come you didnt call your mom earlier?"
"what! you called my mom" she looked kinda mad.
"well ya i gotta get a ride from you my parents went out of town and i am staying with you"
"oh why did your parents leave?"
"my grandfather kinda is about to kick the bucket"
"OH MY!" as the pissed look faded.
"well you can come hang with me for the little time we have left here" she said with some pitty in her voice.
"fine were are we going?"

we walk down some hallways and go through several doors,till we get to a door and jenefer stops.
she knocks on the door and it opens.
its a giant rec room. with some couches and a big screen tv with an xbox and halo 3 on the screen.
"what is this place?" i ask
"its us girl hockey players kinda well...hangout i guess i like to stay later and hang with some of the girls before i go home"
"how come i never knew of this" it was very unbelievable considering i worked here last summer for some school credits.
"we try really hard to keep it secret,its kinda the locker room for girls were we can all hang and unwind after a game"
"cool!"
we just hang there till jenie's mom gets there.
the ride back was pretty insignificant,we mostly talked about the game.



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[cheesey923]

i like how this can build up and can go many ways i think you should keep going

[face]

thanks man i think the next part will be up tonight and something will happen now

[Smile]

3 words in and already a spelling mistake "storie"?

lol

I'm just kidding, well i'm not, but i'm not trying to make a fuss....

As Davros said, this story is let down abit by the grammer and spelling mistakes.

Other than that great story... sounds quite interesting and I will most likely continue reading

[face]

alright second part done if you dont like the story sorry,but i do take criticism to make the story better and if you have suggestions to throwout what i should do to jenie let me know
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well its been about 2 days since my parents split for the coast.
after talking to them i convinced them to let me stay at my own house.
i was hanging in my basement playing with my gamebattles team,we just beat the 3rd place team on halo 3.
"well they'll be back in a week they said" i said over my headset.
"dude i wished i didnt have to leave" Colin said kinda sad.
"ya dude we could hang,maybe even have a party with some girls" i said jokingly.
"well i gotta go pack see you next week dude"
"ya see ya"
i got up and turned off my xbox,and run upstairs to grab something to drink.
"i wonder whats on tv" i ask myself
i open the fridge and scan it for a few seconds...nothing.
i run to my garage open the fridge there....."yes!" i exclaimed and grab a mountain dew.


"and 25 people died" said the lady on the tv.
i turned off the tv its really starting to be depressing.
"what to do?" i say to myself,and pace in the living room.
"Shit its cold!" it was snowing outside and like 40 degrees in my house.
"lets see here....oh! the pilot lite is out" i say to myself
"lets see i guess ill get jenie's dad to help me" i think to myself
after i got the okay to stay at my house jenie's prents said i was always welcome to go over to there house and get stuff.
they were so intent on me depending on them they even gave me a key.

jenie's house is only like 5 mins of a walk to here house and since it was winter break i didn't have school.
"hmm no cars in the driveway" i think to myself as i get there and walk up to the door.
i knock on the door.....no one answers,i knock a few more times....still no answer.
i say to myself "well they did give me the key for emergency's, and i really dont want to stay home"
so i get the key out of my pocket and open the door.
i walk in and realize no ones home so i take off my boots and jacket and sack out on the couch.
Bleep..bleep... i got a text message,it says "hey man were are you i went to your house i need some stuff"
it was from colin i text back " its open go ahead but its like 12 degrees in there".
sigh i think ill go look for something to drink.
i hear some giggling, i decide to investigate.

i walk up the stairs still hearing the giggling.
i get outside jenie's room and her door is closed.
i crack the door open and peek in.
there are 3 girls siting on the floor they all looked younger then jenie and i didnt see her in there.
"i cant believe she is going to do it" one girl says
the second girl seemed real quiet.
i was just about to make my presence known when i heard jenie's voice.
"alright,do i have to do it?"
"yes! we all did our dares" said one of the girls
the next second i see jenie come out of the closet only wearing a thongs,"wow i never noticed her breasts before" i thought to myself.
i wip out my phone and take a video.
after about 10 seconds she goes back in the closet and i hear her getting dressed again.
i stop recording the video on my phone,BEEP!.
OH shit i forgot that my phone make that noise after every video.
i slowly and quietly run downstairs and hop on the couch trying to look like i just got there.

"what was that?" i hear from upstairs
"i dont know" says one of the girls
i hear footsteps come down the stairs.
"hello!" says jenie
"hey!" i said
"oh my god! matt what are you doing here?" jenie asks
"my house's heat went out so i came over to get your dad to fix it".
"oh" she says
"what are you guys doing" i ask
"nothing!"
they all say at the same time.
"oh really nothing?"
"mhm" they all say
"oh well okay" i say
"well were gonna go hang upstairs" jenie says
"ok you mind if i hang out too?"i ask hoping something might happen.
"sure!" says the real shy girl, she looked like she might have been in 7th grade.
so i run upstairs with them.


after a few minutes of listening to music one girl says "do you guys want to finish our game?"
"what game" i ask
"truth or dare" says another girl
"mind if i play?" i ask
"no" the say
so we all sit in a circle on the floor,"who's turn was it again?" sayd the shy girl.
"its jenie's turn" i say realizing what i said
oh shit i hope they dont think its me who was making that noise.
they didn't seem to notice.
"alright cindy truth or dare?" says jenie
"truth"says the girl cindy
"alright have you ever seen a guy naked before?"
"uhm no"
"alright matt truth or dare" says the girl cindy
"uhhh dare"i say being all daring
"i dare you to strip to your underwear"
wow i didnt think it would be this fast i get naked.
"ok" i slowly pull off my shirt all the girls eyes on me,i then start to unzip my jeans and pull them down.
i was wearing boxers and only had a slight boner left from seeing jenie.
"do i have to stay this way the rest of the game?" i ask
"yes"
alright my turn wonder what ill dare them to do?
"lets see,jenie truth or dare?"
"dare" she said with confidence
"i dare you to strip to your underwear and stay in it for the rest of the game"
she looked around kinda nervous.
she starts by unzipping her jeans and starts to pull them down as i saw her thong again,i was starting to get a small boner.
then she goes for her shirt she pull it over her head and looks at me,damn! im starting to get a boner
she then sits down and says " abby truth or dare" abby i guess was the shy girl she was kinda short and had red long hair.
"truth" she says
"would you suck a dick?" jenie asks.
"yes i would"
everyone kinda chuckles except me i wish she would have been dared that im starting to get hard
abby then asks cindy "truth or dare?"
cindy looked like she could have been in 8th grade she was kinda tall had blond hair down to her shoulders,she reminded me of the girl form bridge to terabithia.
after that thought my boner went down some.
"dare" she replies
"i dare you to strip to your underwear and run outside" ouch! i really dont want that dare.
"no i call for a new one"
so abby and jenie kinda huddle up and start to whisper.
"ok for your punishment you must strip completely naked" says abby
"fine" she replies with disappointment

she starts by taking off her shirt she was wearing a hello kitty pink training bra,she had started to develop i noticed.
she then starts to unzip her pants and slides them on wearing some black panties.
she then takes off her bra and she had started to develop,then takes off her panties and throws them to the side.
i noticed she had a shaved pussy, i was getting really hard staring at her and it started to show itself.
"alright matt truth or dare?"
"ddddaaarrreee" i said trembling from her body.
they all laughed and noticed my boner.
"i dare you too take off your boxers and wank off"
"what! no way" i screamed
"fine then you can take the punishment"
after i thought about it i would rather wank then go outside naked or something.
"fine" i said
i stood up and took off my boxers my boner was full size and all the girls were looking at me.
"i might need some help girls" i said in a knowing voice.
cindy stood up and said"i can help" and started to rub her nipples.
i started moving my hand up and down my 6 inch penis,untill after about 30 seconds i came all over the place.
laughter filled the room as all the girls stared at my penis.



after we cleaned the seman off the floor,i sat back down and it was my turn.
then cindy said "im done how about you girls?"
they all agreed and left the room.
i screamed "what the hell its my turn i just did that and dont even get a turn?"
"nope" said jenie sitting on the couch in her underwear.
"jenie come here i have to show you something"
"what?" she then walked over to me.
i pulled out my phone and showed her the video,"what do you want?" she asked
"your gonna be my slave untill break is over" i said with a smile.

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sorry to double post but ya im trying to get my grammer right its just somthing im not focusing on cuz the story is inportent to me.
ill try harder with the grammer

[coolio5]

good story, its really interesting

for grammar, type your story into Word or somthing similar first, it will automatically correct grammar and spelling and capitalization. Then just copy and paste it here.

but im looking forward to more, continue

[cheesey923]

i like this story keep going

[Smile]

I quite liked it

If you used better punctuation then this story would be great

Although I didn't like the little twist at the end, I think it would be a much better story if it had a different story line rarther than another blackmailed slave story.

Ah well, thats just my opinion, do what you want. I enjoyed the last part, but I would have prefered a longer TORD game

[Nick]

yes, please keep going. Very good story so far.

[blaise1]

its a good story but yeh don't like twist at the end (blackmail) oh and nick are you going to finish double trio ?

[face]

okay so here is the third part i have already started on part 4 but i dont know if you guys want it ill wait for a while,im starting to proofread part 4 this part I proofread for like 20 mins.
enjoi

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after the other girls left jenie asked me “you wouldn’t really show that to my parents would you?"
"no I would show it to the hockey team, now I got some rules for you" I said
"first off you will refer to me as master, you will always be in your underwear unless otherwise stated. last you will be my bitch so get used to it"
she looked at me and in her eyes I could see some regret it made me kind of feel like a jerk.
"when will your parents be home?" I ask
"in about an hour" she says with a sad voice
"in an hour, what?" I said
"in an hour master"
"good you get a freebie this time but next time I will punish"
she just looked at me, am I being mean it was just a harmless game of truth or dare....but I’m still pissed.
"Since your parents will be home soon you should probably get dressed “I said with some pity in my voice
"OKAY" she said
and she ran upstairs.


that night after Jenie’s dad came to fix my heat I called her and told her to be here in 3 minuits.
I heard the doorbell and ran downstairs, “hello slave"
"hello master" she said with a little more perk in her voice.
"well"
"well what?"
"you got here in 5"
“what’s my punishment?"
"first you must make me dinner.."
"well that’s not bad" she interrupted
"naked" I finished
she left the doorway to go make me dinner, as she walked away I saw more perk in her step then before.

"dinner is ready master" she yelled to me
I came downstairs and smelt the delicious.....grilled cheese?
"what did you make me?"
"grilled cheese" she said with some worry in her voice.
"that’s fine for tonight but next time I want something better"
that’s when I turned the corner and saw her naked, my pants kind of twitched a little.
she had nice perky boobs that seem to be not all that big when I play hockey with her but now they show.
I look a little lower to her pussy it had a small bush of hair, and her legs seemed so perfect.
"master...master!!" she said as I was stuck in a trance.
"uhhh ya?"
"what do you want to drink?"
"uhm boobs...I mean dr.pepper"
she giggled and went to the fridge, she looked around and could not find any.
"uh master there is none"
"I know"
"well then how do I get you...."
"go to your house” interrupt
"alright I’ll be right back"
"Okay"
She walked over to the pile of cloths on the chair.
"Did I say get dressed?"I say with a mouth full of cheese.
"Well no but it’s cold out"
"Come here"
She walks up to me and I grab the pepper cracker, and shoved it up her pussy which was real tight.
She cringes and says "what do you want me to do master?"
"You will go to your house you may wear your panties and jacket and that’s it"
She moves her hand toward her pussy,i quickly say "NO!"
She gets the message and walks over and grabs her panties and jacket and runs out the door.
Later I call her house...... she answers "hello?"
"Hey are you getting me my dr.pepper?"
"Yeah"
"Good also bring a bag with, a short skirt your smallest white tube top or shirt, last bring some money."
"Okay master"
"And be back in 5 minuets’ I’m parched"
She hangs up the phone, maybe I’ll watch some TV.
About 6 minutes later she comes in the front door.
"Master! She yells out"
"Your late" I say
"I know I’m sorry master"
"don’t be...yet"
"What?"
"Come here in what your wearing"
She walks in wearing exactly what she left in and still had the small bulge in her panties from the pepper cracker.
"Are you cold?"
"Yes master"
"go get warm and then you will get your punishment"
she walks over to the extra heater I had on and we watch the rest of the hockey game together.


it was time for her to leave she asks"what am I too wear home?"
"no underwear that stays here,and you still have your punishment" I reply
"and what is that master?"
"while at your house you must strip and sleep naked,make sure your her at 8"
"Okay good bye"
She leaves.

The next morning I’m woken up by the doorbell run downstairs and open the door.
Jenie is just standing there giggling, what is she laughing about?
She points down look and I had a boner on not realizing that I’m still in my boxers and t-shirt.
"shut up"i turn and run upstairs, "woah that was kind of hot" I think to myself
I take my nice steamy shower and run downstairs in my towel.
"hey" I say
"hey"
jenie was making me some eggs and bacon.
"well did you do your punishment?"
"yeah, I even took a picture"
she pulled out her phone and showed me.
"nice did you get caught?"
"my little sister came in cuz she had a nightmare but that’s it"
"well you have a nice day ahead of you"
"oh really master?"
"yep is your mom still going to drive us to the open hockey?"
"yea in 2 hours"
"okay do you want to know what you’re going to do there?"
"sure"
"when you put your gear on today you’re not going to wear anything under your pads"
"ooh sounds dangerous"
this comment kind of took me back it seemed like she was excited to do some more slave stuff, or maybe she is just falling for me.
"yep"



"hang on ill get my bag"
"okay"
jenie's mom just got here ready to take us to the rink.
I made sure jeanie didn’t have underwear on she didn’t.
as we got there I was walking to the men’s locker rooms and she was going to the woman’s.
I gave her a look like "remember what you have to do”; she gave me a knowing smile back, my heart kind of melted.
after I got on the ice I looked around for her, i saw her in the corner taking shots from some guy.
"hey man I got it from here"
"so master I did as you asked"
"oh yeah how does it feel?"
"I feel real free but my boobs are very uncomfortable without my bra"
I just laughed and kept shooting shots at her.
we both went over to the bench and I said “well it is time for another challenge"
"oh yeah?what?"
"after everyone leaves you are going to skate without clothes"
"ooh sounds dangerous"
I swear she is starting to like this.


after everyone leaves I go into the woman’s lockers and see her sitting there naked.
"you ready?" I ask
"yeah I hope I don’t fall “she smiles
there it is again...ya know my heart.
we walk out to the ice and start to skate,she looked so hot skating around I even noticed her butt checks kind of shake as she pumps her skates.
I skate up to her and say “so how is this?"
"very free"
"well we better get back to the lockers and get home"
"naw I want to stay a little longer matt"she looks at me knowing what she had just done.
we leave the ice her head down the whole time, we walk to the woman’s locker rooms.
she sits down and starts to take off her skate and so do i,"ya know you have a big punishment coming right?"
"yes master"



after we both get dressed and pack up our gear I tell her to stay naked.
I walk over to the zambonie and take a big ice sickle, “what are you doing?" she asks
"bend over"
she dose and I take the ice sickle and put it up her asshole I grab another and put it up her pussy.
she makes a small scream.
I say" do you like that?"
"yes...master..."
"go get dressed and call your mom"
her mom shows up and we get in the car, the whole ride home I can tell the cold is getting to her.
we get to my house about 1 and I tell her to make me lunch and you have to do it naked.
after about ten minutes in the shower I hear a knock at the bathroom door.
"yes?"
"I really need to shower,im all sweaty"
"come in"
the door opens she walks in and I feel my penis jump to attention.
"can I get in with you?"
"I guess"
she hopes into the shower and just stares at my penis,she then begins to start washing right in front of me.
"damn this is so hot I’m in the shower with a hot naked girl" I think to myself.
she reaches back and grabs my penis and stars to pull, she looks back and says"shit I meant to grab the soap master".
"it's okay"
she then goes back to washing herself.
"master?"
"yeah?"
"I don’t know what to do?"
"about"
"you"
"me?"
"yeah,i don’t know weather your serious about setting that video out"
"well so far I don’t have plans too"
"Good I think we got a good thing going"
she then backs up and my penis goes into her.
"woops"
I knew she did it on purpose,is she falling for me?

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alright...i just read comments and ready to adress
first off dont worry the story is def going in a different direction,its not just "and i told her too fuck me and we did".

as for punctuation im working on it im doing word now the first couple of parts were done completely in word pad,again if you guys wanna keep reading after reading the last line let me know.

[Coyote]

Good installmentt keep it up

[coolio5]

very very good

im really enjoying this story so far