Fiction: Weekend In The Woods - Page 2

Raging Rob · 10-24-2009, 03:36 PM

I'm kind of doubting this story, it says over 900 people have viewed it but I'm not getting any comments back, lemme hear from you guys!

Hot Dude · 10-25-2009, 08:29 AM

Great story, keep it going

1-up machine · 10-25-2009, 02:26 PM

Great story one of the best ones I've read

inordeng · 10-25-2009, 02:36 PM

I like it so far.
However I have heard alot of stories like this.
I'm not saying it's bad, but try and make it different that other peoples'.

dareing G · 10-26-2009, 10:16 AM

Great story keep it up

May · 10-26-2009, 11:04 AM

keep goinggg!!!!!

coolio5 · 10-26-2009, 12:52 PM

interesting story, though not ridiculously original. try to make it different, by adding more character development, unique dares, etc. The more different you make it the better.

Also, to avoid short posts type it into Word or something similar and save it if you have to.

Keep up the great work!

Raging Rob · 10-26-2009, 06:02 PM

wow thanks for all the posts guys! hmm well I'm kind of heading into a new way to play, right now it seems to be a boys vs girls version of TorD, but I haven't read many stories based around that way of gameplay, I'll try and post some more within the next hour! keep the comments coming!

Raging Rob · 11-01-2009, 08:04 PM

Ugh alright sorry for delays, lots of stuff happening in life, I'll post more this week

haxial · 11-02-2009, 03:53 PM

Rob, not having a go, but I made the same mistake.. its not always the comments that count..

Also, a slight error in one of your posts above...

Quote:

She stood there and reached to her back and undid the clasps. As, she did the straps fell to her sides. Moving her hands back to the front of her bra, she slid the straps down her arms, letting her large round boobs fall gently back against her chest. Next to go was her bra; she hooked her thumbs into the thin band of fabric that held the thong together

Shouldn't that be thong, as she just removed her bra??

erjams · 11-02-2009, 04:36 PM

I like it keep it going...

Raging Rob · 11-03-2009, 06:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by erjams

I like it keep it going...

Ahh, wow I completely missed that, I believe thats the part I had to rush on so there is some reason for it being like that. And I shall continue it just takes me awhile

Raging Rob · 11-03-2009, 07:18 PM

It'd be great if I got some ideas for dares guys! Nothing to strange, something your average teen would attempt on their weekend camp-out.

I watched as Sarah slid her way over and placed her hands on my thighs, looking up at me so innocently I couldn't help but smile back. I looked over to Sam and Tom as Julie and Jess slowly and clumsily stroked the guys' cocks. For knowing how to please themselves, the girls had no clue what they were supposed to do with the guys.

I focused my attention back on Sarah as she looked back at me again, not yet doing anything.
My mind began to race as I looked down and saw her sitting their in the nude her perky little boobs hanging down from her chest. She gripped my cock and began to stroke slowly up and down, as she got used to the motion she stroked faster and faster, I felt my legs and hands move involuntarily as my body was being hit by waves of pleasure. I managed to get a hold of myself and looked over at Sam and Tom, they were both sitting there with their heads back just enjoying what was going on, I laughed in my mind at the faces they were making from what they were feeling. I felt the pressure begin to build up within me and within a few strokes I came, most landing on her hands some falling on to the sleeping bag.

“How'd I do?” Sarah asked.

“Hmm better than I expected,” I said with a smile as Sarah smiled back at me. We sat and watched Sam and Tom as they both experienced what I had just went through. We managed to clean up most of the mess we made with the paper towels we had brought out with us on the trip.

Raging Rob · 11-04-2009, 06:15 PM

It was our turn, but how were we supposed to outdo the girls? I thought of something within a few moments.

“Girls, truth or dare?”

“Dare,” they said.

“Alright I dare all of us to go out to the lake and go skinny dipping!” I stated. They all looked shocked as tonight was a very cold night, but didn't back down from the challenge. Further out in the woods behind my yard was a small lake with a beach me and my dad had made out of sand we had bought and brought in. out in the middle was a little floating dock for jumping off and sun-bathing on. We ran back towards the lake as the night had already become chilly, dew already settled on the leaves and grass as we ran naked, except for our sneakers.

I started off at the back of the group but quickly made my way to the middle where I caught up with Sarah. My eyes wandered to her nude body in the moonlight as my eyes made her way down to her chest, nipples perked up from the cold air against her nude body. My eyes continued down her slim little stomach as we kept jogging. We came out to the clearing and watched the moons reflection off the smooth surface of the lake wondering who would be courageous enough to go into the cool water. Tom took off on a running start and dove down into the water, swimming out about ten feet or so towards the middle of the pond. I went next diving into the cold water and emerging back up a few feet away from Tom. Sam and the three girls all unwillingly walked into the water. They waded in up to just below their chests afraid to go any further but paddled their way out to where me and tom were. We swam around splashing and playing in the moonlight as I got the idea to play a prank on the girls. I dove down and would tickle their feet, making them think it was a fish or some creepy lake monster. I heard them scream up above me and bolt towards the shore as I popped back up and saw them swimming away. Standing on the shore, shivering, I swam up to the girl while covering myself. Tom and Sam didn't make the best choice and were soon laughed at for their “shrinkage”.

We dashed back to the tents and hopped inside and sat there as everyone reached for their clothes trying to pull them on.

“Tisk tisk tisk, I think you all forgot the dare was to stay naked for the rest of the night.” Tom said as he sat shivering. The girls huddled up quickly shivering in a tight little group as they thought of what to dare us.

“Alright we dare each of you to pick one of us and get in a sleeping bag with us, but heres the catch, you can't get hard at all,and if you do and you cum, then the consequences will be severe.”

We all managed to raise our shivering bodies up from where I was, I planned on heading towards Jess or Julie, as I had already been with Sarah, but as I hobbled towards the girls I felt Sarah pull me over towards her bag.

“You're mine.” Sarah said with a big smile on her face and I didn't deny being her partner. She slide forward and I hopped into the bag behind us as she zipped it back up. I rolled over to see what Sam and Tom were up to as Sam slipped into a bag with Julie, and Tom with Jess both laying awkwardly in the bag trying not to touch the girls. I casually draped my arms over the edge of the bag and was about to speak as almost in unison the three girls moved back towards us in the bag. I felt Sarah's tiny tight little butt rub up against my limp cock.

“Hey! What're you doing?!” I said.

“Oh, nothing,” she responded with a smile I could feel my pulse in my lower stomach as my cock started to grow.

'Baseball, baseball, baseball. Granny in a bikini, granny in a bikini' I kept saying over and over again in my head, but it only had a slight effect as her as grinded against my growing cock. I tried to turn away but she grabbed my side and kept me facing towards her. I felt her hand over mind as she guided it from the top of the sleeping bag, draping it over her stomach with her hand still on top. Within a few seconds I felt my hand being pulled down lower and lower on her stomach until I felt something unfamiliar. She moved my hand back and forth along her pussy as she moaned with pleasure. Not only the fact that she was moaning, but that my hand was moving back and forth over her pussy, made my cock grow stiff and get pressed between my thighs and her cute little butt.

firenight · 11-04-2009, 07:20 PM

go on sweet story

10-26-2009, 10:16 AM	#20
dareing G Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: England Posts: 13	great story Great story keep it up

10-26-2009, 11:04 AM	#21
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10-26-2009, 12:52 PM	#22
coolio5 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pennsylvania, U.S. Posts: 223 Blog Entries: 1	interesting story, though not ridiculously original. try to make it different, by adding more character development, unique dares, etc. The more different you make it the better. Also, to avoid short posts type it into Word or something similar and save it if you have to. Keep up the great work! __________________ 16 year old male Limits: permanent, illegal, family, poo, anal, extreme pain PM me with any good dares HIGH QUALITY READING MATERIAL: FINISHED "Strip Basketball"!!!! http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11996 (3rd place in the 2008 Storyteller's Choice Awards!!!) IN PROGRESS "That crazy school trip..." http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...904#post182904

11-02-2009, 04:36 PM	#26
erjams Account Banned Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: minnesota Posts: 43	I like it keep it going... __________________ My email is [email protected].

10-24-2009, 03:36 PM	#16
Raging Rob Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 93	I'm kind of doubting this story, it says over 900 people have viewed it but I'm not getting any comments back, lemme hear from you guys!

10-25-2009, 08:29 AM	#17
Hot Dude Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 9	Great story, keep it going

10-25-2009, 02:26 PM	#18
1-up machine Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 12	Great story one of the best ones I've read

10-25-2009, 02:36 PM	#19
inordeng Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 24	I like it so far. However I have heard alot of stories like this. I'm not saying it's bad, but try and make it different that other peoples'.

10-26-2009, 06:02 PM	#23
Raging Rob Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 93	wow thanks for all the posts guys! hmm well I'm kind of heading into a new way to play, right now it seems to be a boys vs girls version of TorD, but I haven't read many stories based around that way of gameplay, I'll try and post some more within the next hour! keep the comments coming!

11-01-2009, 08:04 PM	#24
Raging Rob Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 93	Ugh alright sorry for delays, lots of stuff happening in life, I'll post more this week

11-03-2009, 07:18 PM	#28
Raging Rob Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 93	It'd be great if I got some ideas for dares guys! Nothing to strange, something your average teen would attempt on their weekend camp-out. I watched as Sarah slid her way over and placed her hands on my thighs, looking up at me so innocently I couldn't help but smile back. I looked over to Sam and Tom as Julie and Jess slowly and clumsily stroked the guys' cocks. For knowing how to please themselves, the girls had no clue what they were supposed to do with the guys. I focused my attention back on Sarah as she looked back at me again, not yet doing anything. My mind began to race as I looked down and saw her sitting their in the nude her perky little boobs hanging down from her chest. She gripped my cock and began to stroke slowly up and down, as she got used to the motion she stroked faster and faster, I felt my legs and hands move involuntarily as my body was being hit by waves of pleasure. I managed to get a hold of myself and looked over at Sam and Tom, they were both sitting there with their heads back just enjoying what was going on, I laughed in my mind at the faces they were making from what they were feeling. I felt the pressure begin to build up within me and within a few strokes I came, most landing on her hands some falling on to the sleeping bag. “How'd I do?” Sarah asked. “Hmm better than I expected,” I said with a smile as Sarah smiled back at me. We sat and watched Sam and Tom as they both experienced what I had just went through. We managed to clean up most of the mess we made with the paper towels we had brought out with us on the trip.

11-04-2009, 06:15 PM	#29
Raging Rob Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 93	It was our turn, but how were we supposed to outdo the girls? I thought of something within a few moments. “Girls, truth or dare?” “Dare,” they said. “Alright I dare all of us to go out to the lake and go skinny dipping!” I stated. They all looked shocked as tonight was a very cold night, but didn't back down from the challenge. Further out in the woods behind my yard was a small lake with a beach me and my dad had made out of sand we had bought and brought in. out in the middle was a little floating dock for jumping off and sun-bathing on. We ran back towards the lake as the night had already become chilly, dew already settled on the leaves and grass as we ran naked, except for our sneakers. I started off at the back of the group but quickly made my way to the middle where I caught up with Sarah. My eyes wandered to her nude body in the moonlight as my eyes made her way down to her chest, nipples perked up from the cold air against her nude body. My eyes continued down her slim little stomach as we kept jogging. We came out to the clearing and watched the moons reflection off the smooth surface of the lake wondering who would be courageous enough to go into the cool water. Tom took off on a running start and dove down into the water, swimming out about ten feet or so towards the middle of the pond. I went next diving into the cold water and emerging back up a few feet away from Tom. Sam and the three girls all unwillingly walked into the water. They waded in up to just below their chests afraid to go any further but paddled their way out to where me and tom were. We swam around splashing and playing in the moonlight as I got the idea to play a prank on the girls. I dove down and would tickle their feet, making them think it was a fish or some creepy lake monster. I heard them scream up above me and bolt towards the shore as I popped back up and saw them swimming away. Standing on the shore, shivering, I swam up to the girl while covering myself. Tom and Sam didn't make the best choice and were soon laughed at for their “shrinkage”. We dashed back to the tents and hopped inside and sat there as everyone reached for their clothes trying to pull them on. “Tisk tisk tisk, I think you all forgot the dare was to stay naked for the rest of the night.” Tom said as he sat shivering. The girls huddled up quickly shivering in a tight little group as they thought of what to dare us. “Alright we dare each of you to pick one of us and get in a sleeping bag with us, but heres the catch, you can't get hard at all,and if you do and you cum, then the consequences will be severe.” We all managed to raise our shivering bodies up from where I was, I planned on heading towards Jess or Julie, as I had already been with Sarah, but as I hobbled towards the girls I felt Sarah pull me over towards her bag. “You're mine.” Sarah said with a big smile on her face and I didn't deny being her partner. She slide forward and I hopped into the bag behind us as she zipped it back up. I rolled over to see what Sam and Tom were up to as Sam slipped into a bag with Julie, and Tom with Jess both laying awkwardly in the bag trying not to touch the girls. I casually draped my arms over the edge of the bag and was about to speak as almost in unison the three girls moved back towards us in the bag. I felt Sarah's tiny tight little butt rub up against my limp cock. “Hey! What're you doing?!” I said. “Oh, nothing,” she responded with a smile I could feel my pulse in my lower stomach as my cock started to grow. 'Baseball, baseball, baseball. Granny in a bikini, granny in a bikini' I kept saying over and over again in my head, but it only had a slight effect as her as grinded against my growing cock. I tried to turn away but she grabbed my side and kept me facing towards her. I felt her hand over mind as she guided it from the top of the sleeping bag, draping it over her stomach with her hand still on top. Within a few seconds I felt my hand being pulled down lower and lower on her stomach until I felt something unfamiliar. She moved my hand back and forth along her pussy as she moaned with pleasure. Not only the fact that she was moaning, but that my hand was moving back and forth over her pussy, made my cock grow stiff and get pressed between my thighs and her cute little butt.

11-04-2009, 07:20 PM	#30
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	go on sweet story