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Old 01-06-2011, 07:53 PM   #1
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Hello! I'm new to getdare and this is my first story, so bear with me.
As you probably guessed from the title, the story is about 4 boys having a sleepover. It is mostly fiction, though some parts may be based on real experiences. Please give me feedback, I am eager to hear people's opinions.

Characters:
Joe
Height: average-ish
Build: medium build, slightly muscular
Eyes: blue
Hair: brown

Mike
Height: short
Build: skinny, but still kinda muscular
Eyes: deep-blue
Hair: dirty-blonde

Sam
Height: average-ish
Build: medium build and muscular
Eyes: brown
Hair: black

Tom
Height: tall
Build: skinny, but somehow very muscular
Eyes: light-brown
Hair: dark-brown

I am specifically leaving the details vague and leaving out age so that you can create your own picture of the characters. If you really want more details let me know, and I'll be happy to provide them.
So here I go.


Part 1
A distant boom reverberated through the night and the ground shook as another plane loosed its supply of bombs. Joe crawled through the dirt and dust on his belly, his face smeared with grease and his uniform ragged and torn. He reached the crest of the hill he had was climbing and heaved a deep breath. Just beyond lay the enemy outpost, and it was critical it be destroyed. He reached down to his belt, grabbing a grenade and pulling out the pin. He raised his head up to get a better view, cocked his arm back, and...

BOOM! "OH YEEEEAH!!!" yelled Sam. "I... got... a... NO-SCOPE!!!!" and he launched into song.
"Damn it to hell!" swore Joe. "How the fuck does he keep doing that?"
"I know, that's like the tenth time tonight," said Tom, as Sam continued to sing in the background.
"Well, when you think about, playing this game is really all he ever does," replied Mike. "Well, that and wha-"
"Sam, will you please shut the fuck up?!" interrupted Tom. "My god its like hanging out with an three-year-old."

As you can see from the above paragraph, the four boys were very tight. They had known each other for years, having gone to the same school, and remained close friends, despite the occasional bouts of immaturity and death threats that followed.
Tonight they were at Joe's house, having one of their frequent sleepovers, and now it was nearly 11:00 at night. This, however, did not even remotely effect the boys, due mostly to the large amount of soda's they continued to consume as the night wore on.

"NERF FIGHT!!!" yelled Sam, tiring of boasting and instead pulling a sizable full-auto nerf gun from under a pillow.
"Shit!" The cry was echoed as the rest of the boys dived for and the air filled with darts and the sound of maniacal laughter.
The surprise did not last long as Joe and Mike grabbed their own guns and started returning fire. Tom, on the other hand, chose a more direct approach, and as Sam shifted towards the other two boys he leapt from behind a couch and slammed right into Sam, knocking him to the ground.
The two wrestled for a moment, but Tom was stronger and ended up standing behind Sam holding his arms behind his back and locking his legs together.
"Shoot him!" yelled Tom, and Joe and Mike obliged, bringing their weapons to bear on Sam at close range.

Now it would be helpful to add at this point that these nerf guns had been modified in a highly time-consuming and patent-violating manner, which basically means they hurt. A lot.

Finally, after emptying several clips, Sam surrendered. Tom released him, and he promptly fell over.
"Ah," he groaned. "That hurt." He lifted up his shirt, revealing a well toned chest covered in small red bruises. (Like I said, the darts hurt)
The others were silent for a moment, then Joe started cracking up, managing to wheeze out, "you... look like... you're covered... in poka-dots!"
Toma and Mike began laughing as well, and soon after Sam joined in, having managed to stand up and move over to a mirror.
After several minutes the boys fell silent, and as they looked around at each other they all thought the same thing.
"All right, what are we gonna do now?" asked Mike, finally speaking.
"Well," replied Joe, "we could always..."

TO BE CONTINUED


Well, that's part 1. It's just a start, but let me know what you think and I'll work on getting the next part up as soon as I can!


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Old 01-06-2011, 10:08 PM   #2
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That was a very well written opening. I loved it! Hooray for new stories!
I think that the detail you have given so far has been great, and looking forward to reading the next part of the story!
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Nice story so far Noraaz!
Haha I love nerf guns =D
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Working on the next part, hopefully will have it up by tonight.
Thanks for the feedback!

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Part 2, as promised. Already working on part 3, but as I have to go to school (unfortunately) the next part will probably not be out until next weekend.
Enjoy, and let me know what you think!

Part 2

"We could always watch a movie," Suggested Joe.
"Booooo!!" yelled Sam.
"I think what Sam is trying to say is that nobody is really in the mood to watch a movie," said Mike.
"Wait, I have an idea," said Tom, running towards the stairs. "I'll be right back!" And so he was a minute later, a dvd box clutched tightly in his hands.
"I swear, Tom, if this is another Disney movie I'm gonna fucking kill you," Joe threatened jokingly."
"Very funny," replied Tom. "But it's way better than that."
He held up the container to reveal - Cheerleaders Gone Wild.
"Sweet!" shouted Sam. "I totally take back my 'Booooo,' Joe. This is the best fucking idea you've had all night."
"I know, right!" said Tom. "I nicked it from my dad's room."
"What, and you've been holding onto it so you could watch it with us?" asked a skeptical Mike.
"Mike, nobody cares," answered Sam, clearly missing the underlying question. "Can we please just watch the movie?"

Now, hearing Sam say 'please' was about as rare as spotting a yellow-bellied sap-sucker, so without any hesitation Tom loaded the movie into the dvd player and the film began playing on the 50" plasma screen TV.

According to the box, Cheerleaders Gone Wild was an adult film that strove to capture the behind-the-scenes life of a group of cheerleaders and provided numerous metaphors for the sex-crazed feelings that perpetuate much of America. Needless to say, this was lost on the boys as they watched scene after scene of cheerleaders in various stages of nudity run around, passionately making out and sucking on the dicks of any man who happened to come through.
It did not take long before all four boys had their hands down their pants, furiously pumping away at their cocks despite the limitation of movements caused by pants.
Eventually the movie reached a scene where three large football players were pounding a hot brunette with very large breasts wearing nothing but a short skirt. She was moaning loudly through the dick in her mouth, and then began to gag and couch as she was deep-throated and cum began dripping out of her mouth. At this point, Joe let out a loud moan and immediately got up and ran into the bathroom. The rest of the boys were too occupied to even chuckle, and soon after they were rushing off, one by one, to finish up.

Tom leaned over the toilet, breathing hard, having just cum and now feeling very conflicted. He had whacked off to porn before, but had always focused on the women. This time, though, he had been almost distracted by some of the men, their strong chests and large cocks. And just thinking about how his friends had been jacking themselves caused his now limp penis to twitch noticeably.
Tom had always considered himself straight, but now he was confused. He wasn’t sure if was attracted to men, and he was even less sure how his friends would react. Deciding to try and forget about for now, he pulled his pants back up and went back to join the boys.

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So as much as I hate to make excuses, here it is. I have been sick and literally confined to my bed. But I am getting better (all the time) and now have the next part of the story! Enjoy!

Part 9

Bending over, Tom slowly took Joe’s cock in his mouth. He started with the head, simply sucking and using his tongue. Although he could taste precum, Tom was surprisingly not grossed out, and what he was doing felt… right. Then he began to bob his head on his friend’s cock, his lips tightly grasping the shaft, rubbing it as Tom moved up and down. He moved his hand down to his own cock, which was throbbing non-stop, and began fiercely jacking himself.

The minute Tom’s lips touched his cock Joe was in pure ecstasy. As Tom began to suck Joe moaned and moaned and moaned, wave after wave of pleasure rolling over him in a way he had never even dreamed of. He sat there, oblivious to all else, desperately holding back the eventually climax, trying to get as much as possible out of what could be a one-time chance. As the feelings increased Joe, barely conscious of his friend whacking himself off, reached down and took Tom’s other hand, placing on his balls. Tom got the message and began to gently massage his friend’s sack, still sucking and licking hard and fast. With his balls being stimulated as well, Joe knew he only had a few seconds left. Then, when Tom began jamming his tongue down Joe’s piss hole, Joe reached the point of no return.
“I’m gonna cum!” he managed to gasp out.
With this warning, Tom pulled his head away just in time as thick globs of semen poured out of his friend’s dick and all over his chest. Falling back, Joe lay there, panting, until his climax began to subside and his balls were finally empty.
“Here,” said Tom from back beside his bed, throwing a box of tissues to Joe, who mopped up the mess.
Tom began to finish himself off, but Joe stopped him.
“Wait,” he said, “let me.” And with that he came over and began stroking Tom’s dick.
Now it was Tom’s turn to moan, and he lay back to enjoy his second hand job of the night. This time, though, Joe was going all the way. Playing with Tom’s balls as well, he slowly moved his hand from the base of his friend’s cock to the very top, then just as slowly moved back down. Soon he began to pick up speed, spitting into his hand and using his own saliva as lubricant when necessary. In a few minutes his hand was flying up and down, concentrating on the sensitive are just below the head, and Tom was getting ready to explode.
“I’m cumminggggg…” Tom moaned, but Joe didn’t stop, instead going even fast so that Tom, too, had the best climax of his life so far.
One, two, three, four burst of cum shot out of Tom’s dick, one even hitting him in the chin. Joe continued to jack until the flow stopped, then went back and got the tissues for Tom.
After they finished cleaning everything up the boys looked at each other, their cocks now flaccid. They got up and gave each other one last hug, their boners twitching back into existence, and then parted, grinning. Without another word both Tom and Joe climbed into their beds, still naked, and quickly fell asleep, exhausted from that night’s play.

Meanwhile, Jess had made it back to her room without incident and was lying on top of her bed, also still completely naked. She was in a similar position to when she had been caught by Joe: one hand massaging her breast and the other deep in her pussy. Her eyes were closed, the image of her brother sucking on Joe’s cock burned deep into her brain. She was not sure why it turned her on so much, this act of homosexuality, but it did. A lot. She played the scene over and over again in her head, her fingers thrusting in and out of her wet cunt, her hand pinching and rolling her rock-hard tit. Although Jess had not seen the end of that erotic encounter, she created one for herself. As Joe began to tremble in the ecstasy of his orgasm, his hands grabbed Tom’s head, pulling it down hard on his cock. He came deep in Tom’s throat, and though he gagged and choked he continued to bob up and down with assistance from Joe’s hands. Jess envisioned the cum dripping from her brother’s mouth and down Joe’s cock, and more oozed out as he pulled away and gazed at Joe with those big, light-brown eyes. He climbed on top of Joe, who reached down to continue jacking Tom’s dick as he was pushed onto his back. As her dream-vision focused on Tom’s dick thrusting in and out of Joe’s hand and the hot streams of cum that soon came pouring out all over the their naked bodies, her brother and his friend, Jess gave a final moan and climaxed hard, erupting all over her hand, still deep inside her, and her bed sheets. As her stream of cum finished, two thoughts entered Jess’s head: first, that she had the two most amazing climaxes of her whole life (so far, wink wink) in a single day, and second, that one of said amazing climaxes had involved her thinking almost entirely about her brother. As she cleaned up her mess Jess focused on this second thought the most, and though it rather troubled her she was really too exhausted to think about it much. So she just crawled into her bed and, after having that glorious orgasm, slept like a baby.

The events of the next morning went as such:
Tom and Joe woke up to the call of “Breakfast’s ready!” and, after checking to make sure they were alone downstairs, got up and got dressed.
The two boys quickly threw the rest of Tom’s “special clothes” back into the duffel bag, which was then shoved under one of the beds, and ran upstairs to a delicious meal of bagels with all the fixin’s.
Jess also woke up, got dressed and went downstairs to eat, avoiding her brother and Joe until she could figure out how to handle what she had seen (and subsequently whacked off to) the previous night.
After eating, while Joe called his parents to get picked up, Tom sneakily brought the duffel bag back upstairs and returned all items of clothing to their proper places.
Joe and Tom hung out for a little longer, ignoring what had happened the night before, except at one point when they awkwardly agreed not to tell any of the other guys.
Jess sat in her room (fully clothed this time) and eventually decided to see how with minimal interference on her part she could use what had happened to her advantage.
Joe got picked up and went home.
Jess masturbated to orgasm.
Tom went to his room and found, to his great surprise, his sister’s pair off orange and white polka dotted panties sitting on his bed, although he could have sworn he had returned them to Jess’s room while she had been eating.
Tom picked up the panties, which interestingly enough looked like they had been recently cum in, and returned them to his sister’s room when it was empty.

To be Continued


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So she just crawled into her bed and, after having that glorious orgasm, slept like a baby.
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So I actually have part 10 now. Unfortunately, it's all plot development and the like, so if you really want to you can skip it (I take no responsibility for any later confusion, though). Enjoy!

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Height: average-ish
Build: pretty much perfect, large (but not too big) breasts
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Part 10

Time/boring stuff skip, it is now Friday again (Wouldn’t it be great if life was like this?)
Sam was walking home from school (alone, boo-hoo) after a hard day of tests and other difficult school-type things. His head was down, hands in his pockets, thinking whatever it is that goes on in his head (no one actually knows, not even him). As he trudged along he heard footsteps in his direction and, looking up, he saw Amy coming towards him.

Now, Amy was one of the “popular girls.” She and Sam were the same age and had known each other since pre-school, where they used to be friends. As they got older, though, they stopped hanging out (Amy became very attractive and “popular” and Sam became, well… read the first chapter, you’ll get it). After they stopped being friends they mostly ignored each other, except for the occasional passing greeting (usually from Amy). So it was to his great surprise when she slowed down to walk next to him.

“Hi Sam!” said Amy cheerfully. “How’s it going?”
What Sam thought: Holy shit a girl is talking to me! A popular girl! A hot popular girl!
What Sam said: “Uh, hi! I’m fine, uh, how are you?”
“I’m good,” Amy replied, not seeming to notice Sam’s awkwardness. “Where are you going?”
What Sam thought: “Oh my god she’s not even asking about homework or anything!
What Sam said: “Uh, home. What about you?”
“Oh, nowhere. I’m just BORED,” said Amy, as though this was the worst thing in the world.
Sam’s heart fell.
“So I was thinking,” Amy said, “that maybe you might wanna hang out with me?”
Sam’s heart rose.
“I’m free tonight, actually,” she continued. “There’s this awesome new movie I want to see and we could even get a bite to eat before at this great little place I know.”
Sam’s voice finally caught up with his brain. “Uh, Amy?” he asked nervously.
“Uh, Sam?” she replied, grinning.
“Amy, are you asking me out on a date?”
There was a moment of silence.
“Well…” Amy paused. “Yeah, pretty much.”
What Sam thought: Am I dreaming?
What Sam said: “Am I dreaming? Oh, shit! I mean, uh…”
Amy laughed, “It’s okay Sam, it is kind of sudden. So is that a yes?”
“Yeah, of course!”
“Great!” Amy’s grin got bigger, if that’s possible. “Stop by my house at around 6:00 tonight, we can walk from there. Do you know where I live?”
What Sam thought: No.
What Sam said: “Yes.”
“Cool, I’ll see you then, Sam!” And with that she ran off to do whatever it is girls do before a date.
Sam continued on his way home, much happier and slightly more confused, his mind moving in ways he had only dreamed it someday might.

Meanwhile, Mike, Joe and Tom were also walking to their respective homes.
“Hey, so you guys wanna sleep over at my house tonight?” asked Mike.
“Yeah, sure,” replied Joe.
“Yeah, me too,” echoed Tom.
“Awesome!” said Mike enthusiastically. “That just leaves Sam? Where is he, anyway?”
“He had to stay after to talk with a teacher or something,” answered Joe. “I’ll call him.”
Joe pulled out his cell and dialed Sam’s number. It rang for about a minute, then…”
“Hello?” Sam’s voice came over the phone.
“Sam, it’s Joe. I’m here with Tom and Mike and…”
“Yeah, I know,” interrupted Sam, “I can see you guys.”
Joe turned around, which prompted the other two boys to do the same, and they saw Sam jogging to catch up with them.
“Haha, nice timing,” laughed Sam. “What were you saying?”
“Joe and Tom are coming over to my place tonight, you want in?” asked Mike.
“Nope,” said Sam, grinning hugely. “I have a date.”
There was a long pause.
“Okay, nice one Sam,” said Joe, grinning at last. “You almost got me, but then I actually thought about and realized, of course not.”
“No, I’m serious!” Sam said, still happy. “Amy asked me to dinner and a movie.”
“Amy, that popular chick you used to be friends with way back when?” inquired Tom.
“The same,” answered Sam.
“Wow, I think he’s telling the truth, guys,” said an astounded Mike.
“This is unbelievable!” gasped Joe. “And the sun hasn’t gone out or anything!”
“And if Sam can get a date, that means there’s hope for all the other idiots out there!” added Tom.
“Quick, call the papers, call the news, call the president!” continued Mike.
“You know, what you guys aren’t gonna bring me down, not tonight,” said Sam.
And with that he strutted off, shining with joy.
The other boys continued on too, still laughing and cracking jokes at Sam’s expense.
It would be a night for all to remember…

To be Continued


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AMAZING chapters! Loved the rest of the sleepover...hopefully the next one will be just as entertaining!!
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Haha! gotdared, it's only been four days since the last part! But the next one is almost done, hopefully it'll be up in the next couple days. Glad to see you like it, though!
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