That crazy school trip... (Fiction) - Page 2

molten man · 09-08-2009, 03:23 AM

Great writing.

You story is getting interesting!

Star Shadows · 09-08-2009, 09:09 AM

dam no more left

crying

maxim · 09-08-2009, 02:56 PM

Please write more

MikeRU · 09-09-2009, 12:53 AM

You ae the best story writter around here...CONTINUE...

splasher · 09-09-2009, 04:07 AM

First time i've commented on a story. I liked how you developed the characters and how the first couple of chapters didn't have any action but set the scene nicely. Also good punctuation and grammar and your story flowed nicely. (i sound a bit like an English teacher haha)

Keep it coming

Good stuff

Xrider · 09-09-2009, 07:04 AM

I wish my school trips would have been so good !

coolio5 · 09-12-2009, 08:57 AM

CHAPTER 6

We were about to continue the game, but we noticed it was getting late. Not wanting a repeat of last night’s close call we decided to stop for the night. The girls went back to their room and we got ready for bed.

I was exhausted and the second my head hit the pillow, I was out like a light.

The next day, on our venture into the city, I wound up sitting with Lindsey. This was a little weird since we hadn’t really talked after our “episode” two nights ago. I was listening to my ipod when she tapped me on the leg.

“Yeah?” I asked.

“I know this is weird, but I just have to ask. What were you thinking about the other night, when we were…you know…together?”

Wow, I really didn’t know what to say—I mean I barely knew this chick.

“Well…” I started, “I was…thinking about you obviously. But I mean…I’m not sure what I was exactly thinking. It was really hot, and I liked that…” I trailed off not knowing what else to say.

“Ok, I mean that’s kinda how I felt. I mean you’re cute and a great kisser.” (I blushed a little when she said that) “But also, I’ve never really been a girl to just hook up with guys, I always was dating someone when I made out and stuff. So I’ve been really confused the past couple days.”

“Yeah totally, I understand.” I said. “So…”

“But I was also wondering…if…just maybe… we could play Truth or Dare today, but just us you know…while we were like in the city?”

Whoa, this caught me totally off guard. This was crazy! Here was this girl who I barely knew three days ago, but now I had hooked up with her, and she was asking to play a one-on-one game of Truth or Dare.

“Uhh…Sure,” I replied, even though I had no idea what she had in mind.

“Ok then, T or D?”

“Truth,” I asked.

“Ok. How many girls have you kissed?”

I started thinking. There was my first kiss at church camp when I was 12. And the girl at Colin’s birthday party. And two other quick ones. Plus Jill, and the girl at camp last summer, and then Lindsey and Maggie, of course.

“Well, eight including you.”

“Ok that’s cool.” We asked each other a couple other questions like that, and soon it was time to get off the bus. As we got off, I started thinking of all the crazy things that could happen to the two of us, playing Truth or Dare, in one of the liveliest cities in the world…

To be Continued...

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Hey everybody, sorry about the long wait and the short post

. But school just kicked into high gear and i've had a lot going on. But hopefully you enjoyed this chapter, and i'll try to have the next one up ASAP!

Please give me some feed back, and if you have any ideas for dares or plot elements shoot me a PM and i'll try to incorporate those in! I'll even give you credit for your ideas if i use them!

Hope you liked it!
-Coolio5

P.S. Please rate at the top of the thread

Visionary · 09-12-2009, 03:32 PM

I really love this story. Great quality and keep it up

blueboy · 09-15-2009, 12:06 PM

This story is soo good. Please keep going.

Mr Very Daring · 09-16-2009, 10:51 AM

Love it- great
best story jet

coolio5 · 09-20-2009, 07:54 AM

CHAPTER 7

Our first stop that morning was the Guggenheim Museum. It’s near Central Park and it’s a weird shaped building that has all this weird modern art in it.

Lindsey and I walked through the museum together, still asking each other Truths. Finally I decided it was time to spice things up.

“Dare,” I answered the next time she asked me. I could tell she was a little surprised, as she searched her brain for a good idea.

“Hmmm…how about….you see that statue there? Go grab its boob!”

I glanced over, and sure enough there was a statue of a completely naked woman in the middle of the gallery. I laughed, and pointed out the museum staff guy standing in the corner watching every move we made.

“I’ll take care of him. Just wait until the right moment then go for it,” she said.

I casually walked past the statue, not wanting to seem like some kind of messed-up pervert for staring at it. I saw her walk up to the worker.

“Excuse me sir, I was wondering, could you tell me more about this painting? The colors are amazing!” She pointed to one on the far wall, so he had to turn away from me to look at one. Lindsey could still see me though.

“Of course! This was painted in 1939 by…”

As the guy droned on I took advantage of the opportunity. None of the teachers and only three other students were in that room so I simply reached up and grabbed it. Easy as pie.

Lindsey saw that I had accomplished my mission, thanked the guy, and the two of us went down into the lobby. We were strolling through the gift shop when I asked her the obvious question.

“Dare,” she replied confidently.

“Go into the restroom and stuff your bra with toilet paper.”

Lindsey laughed and said ok, then disappeared behind the “Women” door.

A couple minutes later she emerged and started walking back to me, her boobs definitely looking bigger. One other kid, named Todd, noticed and looked at her kinda funny. She pretended not to notice and continued on.

“How long do I have to stay like this? It’s really uncomfortable cuz its that scratchy public restroom toilet paper,” she informed me.

“Just until we get back onto the bus, then you can take it off.”

“Ok. Now its my turn. Truth or Dare?”

“Dare.”

“Buy that little figurine.” She pointed to a little statue, a miniature version of the statue upstairs whose boob I’d grabbed!

“Fine whatever.”

I paid for it and the guy behind the register looked at me kinda weird. Then when we were getting on the bus Mr. Franklin asked, “Ben, what in the world are you doing with that?”

“Oh, uh, well Mr. Franklin, I just really admired the artistic quality of this work. It inspires me!”

Mr. Franklin just rolled his eyes and we continued to the back row. When we got there Lindsey started unstuffing her bra and I laughed. But now I wanted revenge. She took dare and then I said, “Put your hand down my pants!”

Lindsey seemed a little shocked at first, but then got a little smile on her face. I put my sweatshirt over my lap so no one else would be able to see, and I slowly undid my belt buckle. She put her hand on my stomach then slowly slid it down into my jeans and boxers. Needless to say I was already hard as a rock.
“Wow,” she whispered as she wrapped her hand around my dick.

“What?”

“Its just bigger then what I expected.” I took that as a compliment.

Then slowly, very slowly, she started to move her hand up and down the shaft. She got more confident, and did it with more conviction. I was trying to remain calm and not draw attention to us, but this was hard because I knew I was close to orgasm. Then it happened. She pulled her hand out of my pants right as I ejaculated, and I felt my boxers become warm and moist and sticky.

She giggled I just kinda smiled, breathing heavily, wondering where this game was heading next…

To be continued...

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Hey sorry for the wait, but i hoped you liked it. I'll try to have the next chapter up in the next couple days, but i can't promise because of school and work and other stuff.

As always, please send me a PM or leave a comment here for any thing you'd like to see in the story or comments on how i could do better. Or comments on if im doing well

.

THANKS!!

Caliboy · 09-20-2009, 06:40 PM

This one is sorta reminicent of a school trip i had once. I love your style of writing. I love this one and Strip Basketball is the best story ive read on here. Keep it up!

packrat · 09-20-2009, 11:09 PM

Best School Trip Ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

molten man · 09-24-2009, 04:07 PM

amazing story!!

Just great

coolio5 · 09-28-2009, 12:01 PM

ACK!! Jeez guys im so sorry its been so long since ive posted, but ive had WAAYYY to much work to do

. I'm really sorry but the last week just got away from me. I'm swamped with school work and other stuff right now, but i'll try to have the next part up ASAP!!!

Also, i wouldnt mind if anybody gave me some story or dare ideas, because i have the next couple chapters planned out, but after that idk...
So if you have any PLEASE send me a PM!

Thanks for your patience, and i'll try to have a new chapter soon!

09-08-2009, 03:23 AM	#16
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Great writing. You story is getting interesting! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

09-08-2009, 09:09 AM	#17
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09-08-2009, 02:56 PM	#18
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09-12-2009, 08:57 AM	#22
coolio5 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pennsylvania, U.S. Posts: 223 Blog Entries: 1	CHAPTER 6 We were about to continue the game, but we noticed it was getting late. Not wanting a repeat of last night’s close call we decided to stop for the night. The girls went back to their room and we got ready for bed. I was exhausted and the second my head hit the pillow, I was out like a light. The next day, on our venture into the city, I wound up sitting with Lindsey. This was a little weird since we hadn’t really talked after our “episode” two nights ago. I was listening to my ipod when she tapped me on the leg. “Yeah?” I asked. “I know this is weird, but I just have to ask. What were you thinking about the other night, when we were…you know…together?” Wow, I really didn’t know what to say—I mean I barely knew this chick. “Well…” I started, “I was…thinking about you obviously. But I mean…I’m not sure what I was exactly thinking. It was really hot, and I liked that…” I trailed off not knowing what else to say. “Ok, I mean that’s kinda how I felt. I mean you’re cute and a great kisser.” (I blushed a little when she said that) “But also, I’ve never really been a girl to just hook up with guys, I always was dating someone when I made out and stuff. So I’ve been really confused the past couple days.” “Yeah totally, I understand.” I said. “So…” “But I was also wondering…if…just maybe… we could play Truth or Dare today, but just us you know…while we were like in the city?” Whoa, this caught me totally off guard. This was crazy! Here was this girl who I barely knew three days ago, but now I had hooked up with her, and she was asking to play a one-on-one game of Truth or Dare. “Uhh…Sure,” I replied, even though I had no idea what she had in mind. “Ok then, T or D?” “Truth,” I asked. “Ok. How many girls have you kissed?” I started thinking. There was my first kiss at church camp when I was 12. And the girl at Colin’s birthday party. And two other quick ones. Plus Jill, and the girl at camp last summer, and then Lindsey and Maggie, of course. “Well, eight including you.” “Ok that’s cool.” We asked each other a couple other questions like that, and soon it was time to get off the bus. As we got off, I started thinking of all the crazy things that could happen to the two of us, playing Truth or Dare, in one of the liveliest cities in the world… To be Continued... --------------- Hey everybody, sorry about the long wait and the short post . But school just kicked into high gear and i've had a lot going on. But hopefully you enjoyed this chapter, and i'll try to have the next one up ASAP! Please give me some feed back, and if you have any ideas for dares or plot elements shoot me a PM and i'll try to incorporate those in! I'll even give you credit for your ideas if i use them! Hope you liked it! -Coolio5 P.S. Please rate at the top of the thread __________________ 16 year old male Limits: permanent, illegal, family, poo, anal, extreme pain PM me with any good dares HIGH QUALITY READING MATERIAL: FINISHED "Strip Basketball"!!!! http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11996 (3rd place in the 2008 Storyteller's Choice Awards!!!) IN PROGRESS "That crazy school trip..." http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...904#post182904

09-20-2009, 07:54 AM	#26
coolio5 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pennsylvania, U.S. Posts: 223 Blog Entries: 1	CHAPTER 7 Our first stop that morning was the Guggenheim Museum. It’s near Central Park and it’s a weird shaped building that has all this weird modern art in it. Lindsey and I walked through the museum together, still asking each other Truths. Finally I decided it was time to spice things up. “Dare,” I answered the next time she asked me. I could tell she was a little surprised, as she searched her brain for a good idea. “Hmmm…how about….you see that statue there? Go grab its boob!” I glanced over, and sure enough there was a statue of a completely naked woman in the middle of the gallery. I laughed, and pointed out the museum staff guy standing in the corner watching every move we made. “I’ll take care of him. Just wait until the right moment then go for it,” she said. I casually walked past the statue, not wanting to seem like some kind of messed-up pervert for staring at it. I saw her walk up to the worker. “Excuse me sir, I was wondering, could you tell me more about this painting? The colors are amazing!” She pointed to one on the far wall, so he had to turn away from me to look at one. Lindsey could still see me though. “Of course! This was painted in 1939 by…” As the guy droned on I took advantage of the opportunity. None of the teachers and only three other students were in that room so I simply reached up and grabbed it. Easy as pie. Lindsey saw that I had accomplished my mission, thanked the guy, and the two of us went down into the lobby. We were strolling through the gift shop when I asked her the obvious question. “Dare,” she replied confidently. “Go into the restroom and stuff your bra with toilet paper.” Lindsey laughed and said ok, then disappeared behind the “Women” door. A couple minutes later she emerged and started walking back to me, her boobs definitely looking bigger. One other kid, named Todd, noticed and looked at her kinda funny. She pretended not to notice and continued on. “How long do I have to stay like this? It’s really uncomfortable cuz its that scratchy public restroom toilet paper,” she informed me. “Just until we get back onto the bus, then you can take it off.” “Ok. Now its my turn. Truth or Dare?” “Dare.” “Buy that little figurine.” She pointed to a little statue, a miniature version of the statue upstairs whose boob I’d grabbed! “Fine whatever.” I paid for it and the guy behind the register looked at me kinda weird. Then when we were getting on the bus Mr. Franklin asked, “Ben, what in the world are you doing with that?” “Oh, uh, well Mr. Franklin, I just really admired the artistic quality of this work. It inspires me!” Mr. Franklin just rolled his eyes and we continued to the back row. When we got there Lindsey started unstuffing her bra and I laughed. But now I wanted revenge. She took dare and then I said, “Put your hand down my pants!” Lindsey seemed a little shocked at first, but then got a little smile on her face. I put my sweatshirt over my lap so no one else would be able to see, and I slowly undid my belt buckle. She put her hand on my stomach then slowly slid it down into my jeans and boxers. Needless to say I was already hard as a rock. “Wow,” she whispered as she wrapped her hand around my dick. “What?” “Its just bigger then what I expected.” I took that as a compliment. Then slowly, very slowly, she started to move her hand up and down the shaft. She got more confident, and did it with more conviction. I was trying to remain calm and not draw attention to us, but this was hard because I knew I was close to orgasm. Then it happened. She pulled her hand out of my pants right as I ejaculated, and I felt my boxers become warm and moist and sticky. She giggled I just kinda smiled, breathing heavily, wondering where this game was heading next… To be continued... ------------- Hey sorry for the wait, but i hoped you liked it. I'll try to have the next chapter up in the next couple days, but i can't promise because of school and work and other stuff. As always, please send me a PM or leave a comment here for any thing you'd like to see in the story or comments on how i could do better. Or comments on if im doing well . THANKS!! __________________ 16 year old male Limits: permanent, illegal, family, poo, anal, extreme pain PM me with any good dares HIGH QUALITY READING MATERIAL: FINISHED "Strip Basketball"!!!! http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11996 (3rd place in the 2008 Storyteller's Choice Awards!!!) IN PROGRESS "That crazy school trip..." http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...904#post182904

09-09-2009, 12:53 AM	#19
MikeRU Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: @Moscow Posts: 9	You ae the best story writter around here...CONTINUE...

09-09-2009, 04:07 AM	#20
splasher Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 146	First time i've commented on a story. I liked how you developed the characters and how the first couple of chapters didn't have any action but set the scene nicely. Also good punctuation and grammar and your story flowed nicely. (i sound a bit like an English teacher haha) Keep it coming Good stuff

09-09-2009, 07:04 AM	#21
Xrider Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 155	I wish my school trips would have been so good !

09-12-2009, 03:32 PM	#23
Visionary Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: London Posts: 31	I really love this story. Great quality and keep it up

09-15-2009, 12:06 PM	#24
blueboy Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Edmonton, Alberta Posts: 55 Blog Entries: 2	This story is soo good. Please keep going.

09-16-2009, 10:51 AM	#25
Mr Very Daring getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 255	Love it- great best story jet

09-20-2009, 06:40 PM	#27
Caliboy Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: St. Petersburg, FL Posts: 45	This one is sorta reminicent of a school trip i had once. I love your style of writing. I love this one and Strip Basketball is the best story ive read on here. Keep it up! __________________ Im actually not from California, but from Florida. But my nickname is Cali cuz of my last name. I was on a baseball team and there were two people with the same name, myself and another person. So people started calling me by my last name, and eventually it became Cali. Just explaining the username.

09-20-2009, 11:09 PM	#28
packrat Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 20	Best School Trip Ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

09-24-2009, 04:07 PM	#29
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	amazing story!! Just great __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

09-28-2009, 12:01 PM	#30
coolio5 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pennsylvania, U.S. Posts: 223 Blog Entries: 1	ACK!! Jeez guys im so sorry its been so long since ive posted, but ive had WAAYYY to much work to do. I'm really sorry but the last week just got away from me. I'm swamped with school work and other stuff right now, but i'll try to have the next part up ASAP!!! Also, i wouldnt mind if anybody gave me some story or dare ideas, because i have the next couple chapters planned out, but after that idk... So if you have any PLEASE send me a PM! Thanks for your patience, and i'll try to have a new chapter soon! __________________ 16 year old male Limits: permanent, illegal, family, poo, anal, extreme pain PM me with any good dares HIGH QUALITY READING MATERIAL: FINISHED "Strip Basketball"!!!! http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11996 (3rd place in the 2008 Storyteller's Choice Awards!!!) IN PROGRESS "That crazy school trip..." http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...904#post182904