11-14-2010, 01:39 PM | #16 |
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Update!
Hey, Ive decided that Im going to do an update once a week, as Im quite busy with Gcse's and stuff lately, So the next part will be up next Sunday, Any Ideas of what you want in it?
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11-26-2010, 03:08 PM | #17 |
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Sorry!!
Hey everyone I am sooo sorry for not posting a new chapter on Sunday, I've been crazy busy with homework!
I'm going to try and post one this Sunday, but if I can't then I'm apologising in advance!
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12-06-2010, 11:37 AM | #18 |
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i'm going to start writing the next installment tomorrow, so it should be up by Friday at the latest, so I was wondering what people would like to see?
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12-08-2010, 09:16 PM | #19 |
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Me! I do! THis is a great story idea
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12-16-2010, 01:59 PM | #20 |
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Chapter 3
Okay, extremely sorry for not posting for like a month, I'm just really busy with school work lately
I hope the people who read this are still interested in the story.. So here's chapter three! -------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Yeah, no point just sitting around is there.." was Elizibeths nervous reply, as she was completely naked anyway she walked over to the bar and waited for Michael and Andrew to follow. "Here let me help blindfold you" Said Michael with a cheeky grin spreading across his face. He stepped behind her and tied the blindfold over her eyes, he stood close so that she could feel his already bulging cock press against her lower back. "So let's get you into position then" Said Andrew lifting her up and placing her back down on her back underneath the bar. "I'll take the hands you take the feet" Murmered Michael, who was already starting to duct tape her hands to the bar. Once she was secured in place, Michael and Andrew began to get the things togeather that were required for what they had planned. "Okay, first we are going to see how long you can go without cumming.." Said Andrew in a teasing tone. Elizibeth knew that she wasn't going to be able to stop her self for more than five minutes, the situation its self had turned her on enough to make her want to cum so much she could scream. She heared the flick of a switch, then a light buzzing noise.. the vibrator.. then she felt the tip of the vibrator being teased up and down her lips, then onto her clit, before it was entered into her completely. "With the vibrator on this low I should be able to hold of for a bit longer" Thought Elizibeth, relieved. But before she could finish thinking it the vibrator was switched to its highest setting.. then she began to feel her orgasm wash over her, then she screamed as she came.. "Tut tut tut Elizibeth my darling" Said Michael as he softly ran his thumb over her bottom lip, "That wasn't long at all now, was it?" Elizibeth shook her head. "Well then, we have no other choice than to give you a little punishment do we?" Said Andrew "Luckily, we already have everything planned, and incase this happened, we know what your punishment is" Said Michael "So Elizibeth, your punishment is going to be...."
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12-17-2010, 04:56 AM | #21 |
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omg please continue I really wanna know what her punishment is
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12-17-2010, 05:46 AM | #22 |
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very nice, keep it going!
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12-18-2010, 04:06 PM | #23 |
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Update :)
Hey everyone,
I'm thinking up some ideas of what Elizibeths punishment should be.. But I don't know what it should be, I know this may sound sad, But I would really like some feedback, As it kinda feels like no one is interested in the story? Oh, and something I forgot to mention in my first post; The characters here are real, Michael is my history teacher, and Andrew was my geography teacher last year, I changed my name for privacy reasons
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12-18-2010, 04:44 PM | #24 |
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maybe the punishment could be like the vibe on hi in her pussy and everytime she does she gets whipped? im just giving u an idea but it would be nice to see in in the story i am interested in the story
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12-18-2010, 06:39 PM | #25 |
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Is the story real then? or is it just fiction? Because I think if it really happened you should just stick with what happened.
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12-18-2010, 06:41 PM | #26 |
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Oh I forgot to add I love your story by the way =) I check everyday to see if you added a chapter
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12-18-2010, 07:43 PM | #27 |
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I love love love this story!
People are interested... a lot of people just don't comment, don't let it put you off. Most of the popular stories on here didn't have loads of interest at the beginning, just be patient. =) <3
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12-18-2010, 08:34 PM | #28 |
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ohhh whats the punishment?
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12-19-2010, 02:15 PM | #29 |
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Hey everyone- thank you for that feedback, it is much appreciated
To Answer a question- No the story Isn't real, the characters are- this is kind of like a fantasy of mine, (My character is Elizibeth- I changed my name for privacy reasons) Michael is my current history teacher- and Michael is his name- Andrew is a former geography teacher of mine- and Andrew is his name. The next chapter should be up hopefully sometime before new year
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12-20-2010, 08:25 PM | #30 |
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Can't wait. I just found the story and I love it.
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