Fiction: My week as a slave

Babey · 07-16-2011, 03:39 PM

Characters

Amy: 5.3’ with blonde/brown hair and green eyes. NUTRAL
Josh: 6’ has black hair and blue eyes POPULAR
Lucy: 5.9’ Had Auburn hair and brown eyes POPULAR
Megan: 5.10’ Has Dark red hair and blue eyes POPULAR
Connor: 6.2’ Has blonde hair and blue eyes POPULAR
Michael: 6’ Has brown hair and brown eyes POPULAR
Jake: 6.1’ Has dark brown hair and blue eyes POPULAR
Sophie: 4.11’ Has Ginger hair, glasses and brown eyes GEEK

Next chapter below

Babey · 07-16-2011, 03:40 PM

I’m walking through the school and look at the populars messing around. Josh, Connor, Michael, Jake, Lucy and Megan. They start walking over to me, my heart is thumping as I’m scared of what they can do.
Josh: Hey Amy, wanna come play truth or dare with us?
Amy: Yeah I would love to, didn’t think you knew me.
Michael: Yeah we do but we have been, observing you over the past few weeks.
Amy: Ok…
Megan: You know the huts they give out every year?
Amy: Of course.
Megan: We got given one!
Amy: Cool!
The populars walk off to their group then Sophie walks over to me.
Sophie: I would be going around with them…
Amy: Well that’s you, I’m gunna take this opportunity to be popular and embrace it.
I goes to the populars hut, and knocks on the locked door, and she walks in when it opens.
Josh: I’ll start, Amy truth or dare?
Amy: Hmmm, truth.
Josh: Are you a virgin?
Amy: Y-yes…
The group start giggling.
Amy: Megan, truth or dare?
Megan: Dare, I’m not a pussy!
Amy: I dare you to let Michael wedgie you.
Michael wedgies her, and everyone does their little 1 minute dares and then its my go again.
Connor: Amy stop being a pussy and do a dare.
Amy: Ok I’ll do a dare.
Jake: And if you back out you have to be our slave!
Connor: I dare you to have sex with me, right now!
Amy: No, never!
Michael: We got ourselves a slave guys!
Everyone starts screaming and shouting WOO!

sis · 07-16-2011, 05:04 PM

try having a bit more description and detail rather than just conversation, make a setting, make your story unique

Babey · 07-17-2011, 04:08 AM

Jake: Meet us on the field at 4!

Amy: Ok!

I really wouldn’t of done it, I didn’t know what they was gunna make me do! At 4 they were waiting there.

Michael: I suppose you want this!

Amy: (I yell) YES I WANT IT NOW!

Michael: Then call your Mom and ask if you can stay the night.

Amy: Ok, Ok I’ll do it!

Amy: (On the phone with my Mom) Hey Mom can I stay over Megan’s tonight? Ok thanks, bye mom!

I walked home to collect some stuff and then walked over to Megan’s mansion, it had 7 bedrooms, it was now half term and her parents were away for 2 weeks and that was my time to be their slave. Their house was painted creamy colours, they had 2 big leather recliners, I giant plasma, and a big chandelier to top it off. I knock on the door.

Jake: Aha welcome Amy…

Lucy: Come with me Amy.

I get lead to this room, a walk in wardrobe. They take a strong hanger put my undies on that and hang wedgie me, then lock the door. I knew they were brewing up my next punishment. I wouldn’t bother yelling, but I did look around, lots and lots of clothes and shoes! I try and get my undies to tear; I kick my legs, back and forth back and forth. And I fall onto my knees.

Amy: Ouch! HELP! HEELP??!!

Babey · 07-17-2011, 04:09 AM

Sorry its a short chapter, can you give me any tips as this is my first story, thanks

Babey · 07-17-2011, 04:23 AM

They finally let me out, they know I’m in pain. I walk through the large pink bedroom to the dining room, a big wooden table, another large chandelier and leather chairs.

Jake: Lean over my knee now!

Amy: Ok sure, calm down.

Jake: Girls get it please.

Michael: Amy, here are the rules, we will call you slave, not Amy, you will address us as Master and Mistress, and you will be punished if you do not obey us.

I could see Lucy and Megan return, with a big leather whip! Jake has started spanking me HARD! I make a little yelp in pain, and tears gently fall down.

Connor: Oh come on Jake, let me and Josh help!

Jake: Oh ok!

I then lent over Connors knee, I used to fancy Connor so I’m a bit embarrassed. He is spanking me harder, now I have to lean over Josh’s knee.

Josh: Finally!

Josh is holding the big leather whip in his hand, and is whipping me hard on the ass. I scream.

Michael: Let’s gag her, shes too loud.

They stuff some material in my mouth and duct tape my mouth shut.

Megan: Now slave, you are now our little pussy cat, here’s your litter box and now you will strip.

I obey them, I strip down so I’m just standing naked. Josh places some ears on me the Lucy has a collar, she fastens it around my neck and the plaque said, slave, torture her then ring 07897867 to return her back to her owner.

Josh: You have to do your business in the litter box, you can only eat and drink from these bowls, you can only walk around on all fours, you cant talk and you have to lick yourself clean!

Amy: Meow

Stormwalker22 · 07-19-2011, 12:47 AM

MMM I like where this is going please continue!

Babey · 07-22-2011, 02:43 PM

I crawl around on all fours like the rules say, my knees are really sore already. Maybe I could escape, I would have to plan it out though…

Lucy: Here kitty kittyy kitty

I refuse to and just walk off. But Josh has my collar and is dragging me by it to Lucy.

Josh: Lucy said to go there, So You GO!

I start crawling to her; they have two bowls out, water and food. I’m desperate for the loo, but I don’t want to go in that disgusting thing, I have some of the drink, and I give in. I crawl upstairs and do my business in the litter box, cats defiantly are disgusting!

Connor: You eat all your food and you can be human again pussy.

Amy: Meow

Connor: There’s a good pussy

Connor strokes my hair, I think I still have a crush on him, but I could never go out with him now, Connor seems the nice one out of them all.
I try and crawl back down stairs, I take one look at the food and I know I can’t eat it but I have to. So I start chomping it, it wasn’t actually that bad!

Megan: Aha, now take the ears and collars off please Lucy.

Lucy Takes them off. And I feel relieved that I’m human again. I stand up.

Connor picks my up and carry’s me like a baby, they take me to a part of their house I have never seen, it’s like a giant nursery, I giant cot, a giant changing mat, a giant high chair, and all the baby toys. Yeah now I knew what was coming.

Connor places me on the changing mat. He puts a nappy on me and fastens me in the high chair, I can’t get out.

Stormwalker22 · 07-24-2011, 03:51 AM

WoW! what a twist! I never saw that coming good chapter

07-16-2011, 03:39 PM	#1
Babey Member Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 35	My week as a slave Characters Amy: 5.3’ with blonde/brown hair and green eyes. NUTRAL Josh: 6’ has black hair and blue eyes POPULAR Lucy: 5.9’ Had Auburn hair and brown eyes POPULAR Megan: 5.10’ Has Dark red hair and blue eyes POPULAR Connor: 6.2’ Has blonde hair and blue eyes POPULAR Michael: 6’ Has brown hair and brown eyes POPULAR Jake: 6.1’ Has dark brown hair and blue eyes POPULAR Sophie: 4.11’ Has Ginger hair, glasses and brown eyes GEEK Next chapter below

07-16-2011, 03:40 PM	#2
Babey Member Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 35	Chapter 1 I’m walking through the school and look at the populars messing around. Josh, Connor, Michael, Jake, Lucy and Megan. They start walking over to me, my heart is thumping as I’m scared of what they can do. Josh: Hey Amy, wanna come play truth or dare with us? Amy: Yeah I would love to, didn’t think you knew me. Michael: Yeah we do but we have been, observing you over the past few weeks. Amy: Ok… Megan: You know the huts they give out every year? Amy: Of course. Megan: We got given one! Amy: Cool! The populars walk off to their group then Sophie walks over to me. Sophie: I would be going around with them… Amy: Well that’s you, I’m gunna take this opportunity to be popular and embrace it. I goes to the populars hut, and knocks on the locked door, and she walks in when it opens. Josh: I’ll start, Amy truth or dare? Amy: Hmmm, truth. Josh: Are you a virgin? Amy: Y-yes… The group start giggling. Amy: Megan, truth or dare? Megan: Dare, I’m not a pussy! Amy: I dare you to let Michael wedgie you. Michael wedgies her, and everyone does their little 1 minute dares and then its my go again. Connor: Amy stop being a pussy and do a dare. Amy: Ok I’ll do a dare. Jake: And if you back out you have to be our slave! Connor: I dare you to have sex with me, right now! Amy: No, never! Michael: We got ourselves a slave guys! Everyone starts screaming and shouting WOO!

07-16-2011, 05:04 PM	#3
sis Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Ireland Posts: 69	try having a bit more description and detail rather than just conversation, make a setting, make your story unique __________________ Likes: XDressing Bondage Humiliation Feet/ socks/ Uggs. Fur. Ferniphilia, forced Bi, Facesitting, Light Public. Blackmail. Dislikes: Anal AB/DL Financial Domination. Heavy public. Illegal. Permanant. Family. Scat. Pain. CBT.

07-17-2011, 04:08 AM	#4
Babey Member Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 35	Chapter 2 Jake: Meet us on the field at 4! Amy: Ok! I really wouldn’t of done it, I didn’t know what they was gunna make me do! At 4 they were waiting there. Michael: I suppose you want this! Amy: (I yell) YES I WANT IT NOW! Michael: Then call your Mom and ask if you can stay the night. Amy: Ok, Ok I’ll do it! Amy: (On the phone with my Mom) Hey Mom can I stay over Megan’s tonight? Ok thanks, bye mom! I walked home to collect some stuff and then walked over to Megan’s mansion, it had 7 bedrooms, it was now half term and her parents were away for 2 weeks and that was my time to be their slave. Their house was painted creamy colours, they had 2 big leather recliners, I giant plasma, and a big chandelier to top it off. I knock on the door. Jake: Aha welcome Amy… Lucy: Come with me Amy. I get lead to this room, a walk in wardrobe. They take a strong hanger put my undies on that and hang wedgie me, then lock the door. I knew they were brewing up my next punishment. I wouldn’t bother yelling, but I did look around, lots and lots of clothes and shoes! I try and get my undies to tear; I kick my legs, back and forth back and forth. And I fall onto my knees. Amy: Ouch! HELP! HEELP??!!

07-17-2011, 04:09 AM	#5
Babey Member Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 35	Sorry Sorry its a short chapter, can you give me any tips as this is my first story, thanks

07-17-2011, 04:23 AM	#6
Babey Member Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 35	Chapter 3 They finally let me out, they know I’m in pain. I walk through the large pink bedroom to the dining room, a big wooden table, another large chandelier and leather chairs. Jake: Lean over my knee now! Amy: Ok sure, calm down. Jake: Girls get it please. Michael: Amy, here are the rules, we will call you slave, not Amy, you will address us as Master and Mistress, and you will be punished if you do not obey us. I could see Lucy and Megan return, with a big leather whip! Jake has started spanking me HARD! I make a little yelp in pain, and tears gently fall down. Connor: Oh come on Jake, let me and Josh help! Jake: Oh ok! I then lent over Connors knee, I used to fancy Connor so I’m a bit embarrassed. He is spanking me harder, now I have to lean over Josh’s knee. Josh: Finally! Josh is holding the big leather whip in his hand, and is whipping me hard on the ass. I scream. Michael: Let’s gag her, shes too loud. They stuff some material in my mouth and duct tape my mouth shut. Megan: Now slave, you are now our little pussy cat, here’s your litter box and now you will strip. I obey them, I strip down so I’m just standing naked. Josh places some ears on me the Lucy has a collar, she fastens it around my neck and the plaque said, slave, torture her then ring 07897867 to return her back to her owner. Josh: You have to do your business in the litter box, you can only eat and drink from these bowls, you can only walk around on all fours, you cant talk and you have to lick yourself clean! Amy: Meow

07-19-2011, 12:47 AM	#7
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	MMM I like where this is going please continue! __________________ My Friends Betrayal http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...179#post391179

07-22-2011, 02:43 PM	#8
Babey Member Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 35	Chapter 4 I crawl around on all fours like the rules say, my knees are really sore already. Maybe I could escape, I would have to plan it out though… Lucy: Here kitty kittyy kitty I refuse to and just walk off. But Josh has my collar and is dragging me by it to Lucy. Josh: Lucy said to go there, So You GO! I start crawling to her; they have two bowls out, water and food. I’m desperate for the loo, but I don’t want to go in that disgusting thing, I have some of the drink, and I give in. I crawl upstairs and do my business in the litter box, cats defiantly are disgusting! Connor: You eat all your food and you can be human again pussy. Amy: Meow Connor: There’s a good pussy Connor strokes my hair, I think I still have a crush on him, but I could never go out with him now, Connor seems the nice one out of them all. I try and crawl back down stairs, I take one look at the food and I know I can’t eat it but I have to. So I start chomping it, it wasn’t actually that bad! Megan: Aha, now take the ears and collars off please Lucy. Lucy Takes them off. And I feel relieved that I’m human again. I stand up. Connor picks my up and carry’s me like a baby, they take me to a part of their house I have never seen, it’s like a giant nursery, I giant cot, a giant changing mat, a giant high chair, and all the baby toys. Yeah now I knew what was coming. Connor places me on the changing mat. He puts a nappy on me and fastens me in the high chair, I can’t get out.

07-24-2011, 03:51 AM	#9
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	WoW! what a twist! I never saw that coming good chapter __________________ My Friends Betrayal http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...179#post391179