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carlonikid101 · 05-11-2009, 08:13 PM

Today these really hotgirls came over to my house and they where wearing seethrough tops. i had invited them in. they saw my bestfriend and asked him to get naked.
My friend said, "whats in it for me"
the girls said "a crazy night"
He jumped up and gave them a stripshow.

the girls enjoyed it so i joined him. the girls weren' thrilled to see my three inch penis, so they tricked me into getting into the car(still naked) so i did. we came up to the freeway when they stopped and threw me out.

In the end i went home with a $200 dollar ticket for public nudity and the male cops phone number

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Coyote · 05-11-2009, 08:22 PM

this sounds like bad fiction but I'm not sure? What is this?

carlonikid101 · 05-11-2009, 09:05 PM

it is a true story

glue · 05-12-2009, 04:40 AM

wow that was shockingly too quick

space your next one out a little

fire · 05-12-2009, 07:45 AM

That was really really short, may I suggest you write more next time?

Komodo Jones · 05-12-2009, 07:48 AM

Going with glue and fire, I wouldn't even clasify that as a story. it's like an assignment write a paragraph about your wildest experience, of course it wouldn't be acceptable but yeah. If you want to make the story actually somewhat interesting you may want to add more details to it.

BettyBoop · 05-13-2009, 04:53 AM

sigh.
That was way too rushed, which made it sound very unrealistic. I know you say it's true but it just seems, not.
The tricked you into the car? How?
Two girls turned up? What did the look like? How old were they?
Is that all they said?
You were in the car, did you do anything in the car?
When they threw you out where were you?
Was it dark?
What happened when the police found you?
What I'm saying is you need to add a lot more information to make people want to read this, and to make it a story at all.

wicked · 05-13-2009, 07:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by carlonikid101

Today these really hotgirls came over to my house and they where wearing seethrough tops. i had invited them in. they saw my bestfriend and asked him to get naked.
My friend said, "whats in it for me"
the girls said "a crazy night"
He jumped up and gave them a stripshow.

the girls enjoyed it so i joined him. the girls weren' thrilled to see my three inch penis, so they tricked me into getting into the car(still naked) so i did. we came up to the freeway when they stopped and threw me out.

In the end i went home with a $200 dollar ticket for public nudity and the male cops phone number

More stories coming soon

That sucks.

Anyway, it was... like, really short. It doesn't really count as a story. Wrong section.

05-11-2009, 08:13 PM	#1
carlonikid101 Junior Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 3	extreme Today these really hotgirls came over to my house and they where wearing seethrough tops. i had invited them in. they saw my bestfriend and asked him to get naked. My friend said, "whats in it for me" the girls said "a crazy night" He jumped up and gave them a stripshow. the girls enjoyed it so i joined him. the girls weren' thrilled to see my three inch penis, so they tricked me into getting into the car(still naked) so i did. we came up to the freeway when they stopped and threw me out. In the end i went home with a $200 dollar ticket for public nudity and the male cops phone number More stories coming soon

05-12-2009, 04:40 AM	#4
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	wow that was shockingly too quick space your next one out a little __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!

05-12-2009, 07:45 AM	#5
fire Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 151	That was really really short, may I suggest you write more next time? __________________ Likes: Humiliation, slight pain, anal, orgasm denial, general (strict) control. Dislikes: Long-term Limits: Public, family/friends, poo/pee, cum eating, webcam/pictures.

05-12-2009, 07:48 AM	#6
Komodo Jones getDare Succubus Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: in your fantasies...it's ok you can admit it Posts: 1,755 Blog Entries: 97	Going with glue and fire, I wouldn't even clasify that as a story. it's like an assignment write a paragraph about your wildest experience, of course it wouldn't be acceptable but yeah. If you want to make the story actually somewhat interesting you may want to add more details to it. __________________ KJ 38/male/partially bi/switch D/s Status: Protector, Dom and Daddy of pixie.dust I love meeting new, nice, smart people. I communicate through Discord mainly. What are my limits/likes/supplies? Click here! Check Out my Literary Works Targeting the Ignored [Fiction] Some Stuff I've Done (Non-Fiction)

05-13-2009, 04:53 AM	#7
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	sigh. That was way too rushed, which made it sound very unrealistic. I know you say it's true but it just seems, not. The tricked you into the car? How? Two girls turned up? What did the look like? How old were they? Is that all they said? You were in the car, did you do anything in the car? When they threw you out where were you? Was it dark? What happened when the police found you? What I'm saying is you need to add a lot more information to make people want to read this, and to make it a story at all. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

05-11-2009, 08:22 PM	#2
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	this sounds like bad fiction but I'm not sure? What is this?

05-11-2009, 09:05 PM	#3
carlonikid101 Junior Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 3	it is a true story