[Fiction] Do I Know You?

[Hammarling]

It's been really quite a long time since i tried writing a proper literotica, but the concept has been rolling around my head for a while now so here's an attempt. I'll update here and there as i get time and feel like i've got a section worth posting. It might be a bit slow in parts, but stick with it!
Please give me feedback if you have any, always looking to improve my writing.

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Do I Know You?

AgentShy: 18/F Seeking play partner to help me learn more about the world of kink and experiment with new things. I have really done almost nothing before beyond masturbating and reading a few forums and watching some porn. But what i've seen and learned i really really like the look of and want to try, just that i would like a partner to help guide me.
IRL i like music and play the piano like a boss and sing pretty well. And i love comics, superheroes and the like massively. So try talking about some of that as well when you message me.

Naomie didn't feel much of a flutter posting the message, after all it was pretty basic and she wasn't exactly expecting a ton of responses. This GetDare site looked cool and busy, but she had noted most posts seemed to get little or no replies.

None the less it was already more kinky than anything she'd done before. At 18 it wasn't like she'd had much chance to experiment. Naomie grew up in Montreal which is a big city, but with a very religious family anyting sexual was shy'd away from. To the extent her birds & bees talk only happened at school, which obviously missed out on various chunks of the fun stuff.

Scrolling through Tumblr one day, scanning around for some Marvel fan-art, her world changed. A short comic. Black Widow tied to a chair, pfft she'll easily get out of that! Wait, what's that bad guy got in his hand? He's doing what with it! And she's enjoying it!
A few google's later and Naomie's world was ripped wide open. Almost every day since then was spent looking for posts on Tumblr or trying searches to find more information and more kinks. How could people be so open with their own pleasure, even crave this kind of stuff?

After a lot of self debate Naomie had decided to sign-up to one of these forums. GetDare has a large userbase. Ok most posts seemed to be from pathetic guys begging for abuse or attention, but there were a lot of really interesting bits and pieces as well, made by genuine people. That and it seemed like the only forum that didn't allow dick pics to be splattered everywhere!

Well, the post was made. I'll come back tomorrow and see if it's got any replies, she thought before logging out and sliding into bed.

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*ping*
*ping* *ping*
*ping*
*ping* *ping* *ping* *ping* *ping* *ping*

Naomie: Alright! Alrightalrightalrightalrightalright... Jeez, what's all the fuss!

Her phone was going nuts with notifications.

Naomie: I got how many replies? Wow that's cool...

Althought that excitment didn't last long once she started opening them

"Want to try something? Show me your tits!"
"Slut, strip and send me a selfie, now whore!"
"Goddess, please deny me, i'm desparate"

On and on these went. Can people not read? What is wrong with all these people?! Maybe i should just delete the post. Yes, this was a mistake. I'll just open these last few to clear the notifications then remove the whole thing. What was i thinking? Stupid girl...

Message ManInCharge: AgentShy, Firstly if you're not Team Stark we're going to have an issue. Secondly, welcome to GetDare and welcome to discovering yourself. It takes some guts to open up and give a lot of this a go.

The message went on. He introduced himself, made some more jokey references to comics and music. This is the kind of thing Naomie was looking for! She'd not even gotten dressed for the day yet and was already tapping out a reply.

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They messaged back and forth a few times a day. Naomie quite liked this ManInCharge. He was knowledable, willing and able to answer all the questions she had about bdsm and kink. Plus they could chat about movies, comics, music and life in general. She really did find him quite charming and in no time at all they were becoming very friendly, as if they had known each other for a lot longer.

Slowly ManInCharge started giving her tasks and dares. All pretty simple, but for Naomie there were first tries at anything. And each little thing gave her such a rush! This was so far outside her normal zone. Her friends were nothing like this. Nor her family. If they found out it would be the worst! And yet that just made it more fun, knowing it was wrong and secret.

A few more weeks went past. ManInCharge would now send her dares basically every day, as well as their normal chatting. She was still not blase with these things, but neither did she hesitate when told to spank, twist, touch or suck.

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ManInCharge: You know how we've been talking and playing around for over a month now...
AgentShy: Yes, and it's been really good!
ManInCharge: Well i was thinking, what do you think to taking this up a level. To you becoming my sub?

Sub? Naomie hadn't really thought about being someone's sub before. But... ManInCharge was a nice guy. They got on. He was sensible, caring, knowledgable. If she was going to be a Sub, then he seemed like the right person to try it with.

AgentShy: Ok... I've never done it before, as you know. But yes! I will be your Sub.
ManInCharge: Brilliant! I just feel we get on so well, and it will really help you learn and develop your kink side.
AgentShy: Does this mean i should call you Sir?
ManInCharge: Normally yes, or you could me Master.
AgentShy: Sir is easier to type, sir.
ManInCharge: And what should i call you, AgentShy?
AgentShy: My name's Naomie.
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ManInCharge: I meant like Sub or Pet or something...
AgentShy: Oh... woops...
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ManInCharge: Hang on a moment. Naomie?
AgentShy: Yes... that's right... what?
ManInCharge: You... Your not... Naomie Chase?
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AgentShy: How... how do you... Do i know you?

[new and willing]

Great start. I’m looking forward to reading more

[Hammarling]

Naomie's heart was pounding! Is he just trying to mess with me? But how could he, he knows my full name! Does he actually know me, or is he just some creepy stalker type with no life and too much Google? Oh god... if he knows my name what else does he know...

ManInCharge: Yes, you do know me. Although, i doubt i'd be the first person that springs to your mind. We didn't know each other for too long.

Ok. So we do know each other, but only briefly. A schoolmate i didn't hang out with? An old volleyball teammate? A neighbour?

AgentShy: Who are you? Tell me, now!
ManInCharge: Unlike you i'm not quite naiive enough to spurt my full life all over the place.
AgentShy: Don't be a dick about it, who the fuck are you?! What the fuck do you want?!

Naomie wasn't having fun anymore. Whilst it most definitely wasn't an interest of hers, she had come across blackmail in her reading and searching. If this idiot was going to try something she was ready for a fight! Besides, she had been smart enough to never send him any photos. Really, he had nothing but a few messages she could easily say were faked.

ManInCharge: Ok ok, that was a bit harsh of me. I'll give you a few hints and a couple of guesses, but i don't feel like telling you straight out. Thats no fun.
AgentShy: Uuuugggghhhhh.... fine...
ManInCharge: I'm not Canadian.

That's not helpful! Naomie must know at least a hundred people that arn't Canadian. Either from University with international students, or her various trips abroad.

AgentShy: Come on man! Don't be like this. Just tell me please, i'm freaking the fuck out...

And she was. Naomie couldn't take the stress. She just wanted to know who he was and what was going to happen to her!

AgentShy: Just tell me who you are, PLEASE! Or what you want! I'm begging you!!!
ManInCharge: You really want to know?
AgentShy: YES! FUCK!
ManInChage: Ok, but first i have to ask. If you know who i am, would you still want to be my sub? I'm not going to blackmail you, "be my sub or i'll tell your friends". I genuinely want to know. For the last few weeks we've really gotten on and even knowing who you are doesn't change anything for me.
AgentShy: What?! Thats...! Your....! What?!
ManInCharge: Would knowing who i am change the last couple of weeks?
AgentShy: ........ yes... no... i don't know.... not really

What was she typing?! Naomie couldn't believe her own thoughts. Was she seriously considering this, subbing to a real person?
But... he was always real. And he has only been sweet, funny and kind to her so far. Would it be so weird, so bad?

ManInChage: If it doesn't work, we call it quits and no harm is done. Because i really like you.

Naomie had to take several deep breaths. Her heart felt like it was going to explode out of her chest. Her mind was racing through a thousand possibilities. And yet... her curiosity was driving her forwards, she had to know... had to discover both who this person was.... and discover herself and her kink....

AgentShy: ... yes, i'd still try being your sub...

[Consensus]

Your pace is sound, the plot decent.

Have you considered writing on Wattpad?

[Hammarling]

@Consensus - Never use Wattpad, or even heard of it. Looked it up now though, but don't think i'll use it.

Still taking it one step a time so far, introducing and developing our characters. The good stuff will come soon, i promise.

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What were the odds? That of all the people in the world, you could at random find one specific person, online. Not just online, but specifically on a kink forum! I all honesty winning the Lottery, twice, whilst being struck by lightning, would make more sense than this.

Unless... unless you knew it wasn't going to be random. This was part of a plan that had been months in the mind, but even them relied on more than a heavy does of luck. Although no plan truly accounted for what happens after contact was made. From here he was improvising, no more plan, just trying to do his best with the situation.

Jake first met Naomie just over 5 months ago. They both worked for a summer camp, running activities and looking after the kids. Totally not a kinky place! And their relationship was never kinky back then. The two hit it off well from the beginning, sharing an interest in movies and comics. For two months of summer they hung out nigh on every minute of every day, albeit often as part of a larger friend group.

Jake knew pretty quickly he had fallen for this gorgeous Canadian girl. It took a bit of time but they formed some sort of couple for the summer. Although there was no doubt it wouldn't last, Naomie was always going to leave and go back to Canada from the UK. So how did he get from there to here? It was all about luck!

He caught a glimpse of her phone one day. Obviously Naomie didn't know he could see the screen, he was just trying to watch tv over her shoulder. But that orange detailing and cream/blue background, a very distinctive and unique color scheme, only used by one very specific forum... Still, he could be wrong. So Jake offer a few probing questions here and there, trying to tease out a username or some acknowledgment of GD. And, after a few drinks, she let it slip.
Naomie: "Damn GD, c'mon let me log in... AgentShy, not Sky... grrr"
Whispered under her breath, but that was enough. A search on the site returned the username. Now just to keep an eye on it and wait for an opportunity to message, be friendly, try and recreate some of that spark they shared.

ManInCharge: Naomie, i'm Jake...

[Hammarling]

Bit of a time skip here. I don't like using these in my writing but it does save on a few more parts of ordinary chat and ott relationship creation, which wouldn't be too fun to read. I can write anything to make that kind of character work, this is more about the kink!

Plus i'm trying to keep these updates fairly short and concise. Makes them far easier to write in my spare time and perfect before sharing.

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AgentShy: Good morning, Sir Jake.
ManInCharge: Just 'Sir' is fine, don't add the Jake to everything.
Agent Shy: Yes Sir, sorry Sir.

The two had spent the rest of the night talking, catching up a bit and going over some fundamentals of their trial relationship. There was a timezone difference to cover, so some days Jake would stay up late and others Naomie would get up early. Jake worked shifts 5-days a week, Naomie had classes and essays to keep up with.
But they had agreed the basic principles and rules. That was a week ago, and it was safe to say Naomie had a lot to learn.

ManInCharge: Do your morning routine yet?
AgentShy: Not fully Sir. I've complete my morning edge, but i need to shower and practice on my dildo. I've not forgotten the routine yet, Sir.

This kind of planning made up most of their play so far. Jake would lay out sets of rules to follow for the day, or in general, so that Naomie would always have a little something to keep in mind or be doing.

ManInCharge: Your extra daily task for today is as follows - Everytime you need to toilet roll a dice. Evens you can go, Odds you have to ask my permission or wait half an hour to re-roll.
AgentShy: !! But... Sir, that's going to be reall annoying!
ManInCharge: And it will be a constant little reminder that even basic aspects are now mine to control.
AgentShy: I know Sir. I'll do my best!
ManInCharge: And you're still good for Friday night?
AgentShy: Yes Sir! I'll have all my work out the way so we can do a proper play session then, all night long. And my weekend is quiet as well for extra tasks.

If Saturday night's alright for fighting, Friday night's alright for bdsm.

[Narnia]

Damn, this is really good, thanks for the entertainment!